Poems About Love Seeking Honest Critique
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#breakup
#family
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#friendship
#girlfriend
#heartbroken
#husband
#ILoveYou
#LookingForLove
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#romantic
#wife
Poems about love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PerfumeandTaffy
Poem Published
Today 4:56am
Today 4:56am
To All my Fuk Boys and Charles
#FeelingLost
#loneliness
#love
17 reads
1 Comment
mdagedman
Poem Published
Today 3:52am
Today 3:52am
Shed
A man is strong
A man is self reliant
A man is dutiful
Torn with pride in their comfort
He fights scarcity and darkness that surround them.
Alone and vigilant
While they peacefully slumber
Judging his own contempt
Longing for tenderness
A man is self reliant
A man is dutiful
Torn with pride in their comfort
He fights scarcity and darkness that surround them.
Alone and vigilant
While they peacefully slumber
Judging his own contempt
Longing for tenderness
#anger
#loneliness
#love
#masculinity
#responsibility
24 reads
0 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
Today 1:27am
Today 1:27am
God...
Everything is a miracle
you,me,us,them
the world
the sky
the ocean
mountains,valleys,hills and rivers
dogs,cats,mices and ants
"Lions and tigers and bears...oh my!"
children,babies,women and man
moms and dads...
dirt,sand,rocks
flowers,trees,grass and weed
music,sound...air and the stars and the wind
touch-smell-ears -eyes
your heart
your soul
stardust
rain,snow,the sun and the moon
take a second,a minute,an hour
take all the time you...
you,me,us,them
the world
the sky
the ocean
mountains,valleys,hills and rivers
dogs,cats,mices and ants
"Lions and tigers and bears...oh my!"
children,babies,women and man
moms and dads...
dirt,sand,rocks
flowers,trees,grass and weed
music,sound...air and the stars and the wind
touch-smell-ears -eyes
your heart
your soul
stardust
rain,snow,the sun and the moon
take a second,a minute,an hour
take all the time you...
#courage
#inspirational
#kindness #love
#kindness #love
31 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Today 00:53am
Today 00:53am
reckoning
Sadness sings to me, in need of recognition
a quiet melody of pain
all the things I ignore, well up in her
a malady of depression
my thoughts seek my soul
my soul is detached
it can't connect with the day today
the rain comes and the skies darken
and I get confused in the clouds
my darkness stutters
an aimless wanderer
going where the wind blows
lonely feeling, empty
there is a shadow over my spirit
it is a fascination
my mind delves into its deepness
black as night it utters enchantments ...
a quiet melody of pain
all the things I ignore, well up in her
a malady of depression
my thoughts seek my soul
my soul is detached
it can't connect with the day today
the rain comes and the skies darken
and I get confused in the clouds
my darkness stutters
an aimless wanderer
going where the wind blows
lonely feeling, empty
there is a shadow over my spirit
it is a fascination
my mind delves into its deepness
black as night it utters enchantments ...
#love
#sadness
38 reads
4 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:25pm
Yesterday 6:25pm
~of this elongating ever life… dotted in differential deltaic deaths
this young midnight’s chilling air
in a weirdly turning on groovy beat
mixing in your smoking touchy heat
-tastes a warm spice of musky mace
I crave for
a metallic blood flower rapturous
I bleed and bloom in a pleasantly~
pungent addictive blossom.. that
even this waiting nocturne animal
in your plunging deep purplish trysts..
pierces sharp unto this seductive
self digging hell in an unreturning
pathway spiral..
hitting red & black as sky~ high
cranial kicks..
this unbearably...
in a weirdly turning on groovy beat
mixing in your smoking touchy heat
-tastes a warm spice of musky mace
I crave for
a metallic blood flower rapturous
I bleed and bloom in a pleasantly~
pungent addictive blossom.. that
even this waiting nocturne animal
in your plunging deep purplish trysts..
pierces sharp unto this seductive
self digging hell in an unreturning
pathway spiral..
hitting red & black as sky~ high
cranial kicks..
this unbearably...
#death
#love
#night #sensual
#night #sensual
69 reads
4 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:11pm
Yesterday 4:11pm
FRAGMENTS
I try to recall your voice, but it's a whisper,
Fading like mist in the cold dawn air.
Your face dissolves in the ripples of memory,
A reflection trembling on water’s skin.
I reach for the past, but my hands grasp shadows,
And love lingers only as an aching ghost.
How cruel that time turns love into a ghost,
A presence that lingers but speaks in whispers.
I search for your warmth, find only shadows,
Moments unravel like dust in the air.
I chase the outline of your touch on my skin,
But the years have stolen my memory.
Or...
Fading like mist in the cold dawn air.
Your face dissolves in the ripples of memory,
A reflection trembling on water’s skin.
I reach for the past, but my hands grasp shadows,
And love lingers only as an aching ghost.
How cruel that time turns love into a ghost,
A presence that lingers but speaks in whispers.
I search for your warmth, find only shadows,
Moments unravel like dust in the air.
I chase the outline of your touch on my skin,
But the years have stolen my memory.
Or...
#FeelingLost
#love
17 reads
0 Comments
Damselinhandcuffs
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:47am
Yesterday 6:47am
Silent Peak
How much is left for you to feel?
Isn't this lonesomeness killing you with patience my love?
Eating away the molten layers
The pretty walls within your skin
How can you ever feel satisfaction still laying next to him?
Touching yourself
Keeping company to the growing empty spaces
That used to be so full-
Full of love
The deep taste of a shared future
The sweet pallet of its laughter
How much is left to feel?
As he lays sleeping...
Isn't this lonesomeness killing you with patience my love?
Eating away the molten layers
The pretty walls within your skin
How can you ever feel satisfaction still laying next to him?
Touching yourself
Keeping company to the growing empty spaces
That used to be so full-
Full of love
The deep taste of a shared future
The sweet pallet of its laughter
How much is left to feel?
As he lays sleeping...
#love
#MovingOn
#rejection
#relationships
#UnrequitedLove
61 reads
2 Comments
rksingh
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:37am
Yesterday 4:37am
WINTER'S HEAT
Sometimes in winter
in the snow of your body
there simmered a heat
in a vivacious spring
fell a sweet calamity
as love began to jell
don't you remember
my dream's river stirred
and the nemesis in summer?
wedged between me and you
was jinx that rains
to remind of age and passion
the growing jungles and the blues
empaling warmth and vigor
an end we always detest
-R K Singh
in the snow of your body
there simmered a heat
in a vivacious spring
fell a sweet calamity
as love began to jell
don't you remember
my dream's river stirred
and the nemesis in summer?
wedged between me and you
was jinx that rains
to remind of age and passion
the growing jungles and the blues
empaling warmth and vigor
an end we always detest
-R K Singh
#emotions
#happiness
#love
60 reads
0 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:27am
Yesterday 2:27am
The Color of Love
the color of love
red
blue
green
yellow
white
black
orange
purple
grey
pink
on and on and on
the color of love
let it rain...
red
blue
green
yellow
white
black
orange
purple
grey
pink
on and on and on
the color of love
let it rain...
#love
59 reads
6 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:41am
Yesterday 1:41am
FOR U
Love
is everything...
Love
is all,
Love
is 4 letters,
Just
for u
L-O-V-E
is everything...
Love
is all,
Love
is 4 letters,
Just
for u
L-O-V-E
#love
50 reads
2 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 4:56am
30th Jan 2025 4:56am
Toxic Crazy Baby
I have happened upon
A whirlpool of blue in your eyes.
Behold, I am spellbound—
Suspended as a porcelain doll
Hung in a windstorm.
It is doomsday in wonderland.
The awe of you has left me cuckoo
As all reason abandons me,
And I am sucked into the black hole
Where your heart should be.
Only grippy socks and origami
Can save me now.
A whirlpool of blue in your eyes.
Behold, I am spellbound—
Suspended as a porcelain doll
Hung in a windstorm.
It is doomsday in wonderland.
The awe of you has left me cuckoo
As all reason abandons me,
And I am sucked into the black hole
Where your heart should be.
Only grippy socks and origami
Can save me now.
#betrayal
#curse
#deception
#lies
#love
51 reads
0 Comments
NoQuarter
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 3:54am
30th Jan 2025 3:54am
When Summer Comes Around
She looks at me, like i want to eat the heart
from her chest.
I dont, that wasn't my first option from the menu.
Though i often wondered what she'd taste like.
Beneath her flowing red hair,
i could see the pulse on her neck, abnormally beating as she attempted to read the thoughts filling my head.
Summer, a beauty i wanted to consume every
inch of,
devour her pale flesh,
an intoxication not meant for me.
But there she was.
She smelled of sun ripened peaches,
of something deeper,
of...
from her chest.
I dont, that wasn't my first option from the menu.
Though i often wondered what she'd taste like.
Beneath her flowing red hair,
i could see the pulse on her neck, abnormally beating as she attempted to read the thoughts filling my head.
Summer, a beauty i wanted to consume every
inch of,
devour her pale flesh,
an intoxication not meant for me.
But there she was.
She smelled of sun ripened peaches,
of something deeper,
of...
#friendship
#heartbroken
#love
75 reads
2 Comments
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