Poems About Love Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Today 4:22am
Today 4:22am
relic
drawing from the energy I expand my sights
viewing the darkness with tunnel vision
maddening thoughts assault
but I must face it it's going nowhere
dealing in deadly blows
it comes at me with force
I balk under the pressure
retreating for a moment
the sound is deafening
my thoughts scream
inside myself I rise
to stand against the giant
immortal power, thwarted passage
it won't get by me without notice
evil demeanor, wicked justice
scrying the damned
fickle fate I keen in the bleak ...
viewing the darkness with tunnel vision
maddening thoughts assault
but I must face it it's going nowhere
dealing in deadly blows
it comes at me with force
I balk under the pressure
retreating for a moment
the sound is deafening
my thoughts scream
inside myself I rise
to stand against the giant
immortal power, thwarted passage
it won't get by me without notice
evil demeanor, wicked justice
scrying the damned
fickle fate I keen in the bleak ...
#dark
#love
#magic #pagan
#magic #pagan
30 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Today 3:29am
Today 3:29am
Do you want better
As we exchange thoughts and insight and imagination, from your own thoughts and dreams, more than anything that you continue to have in your life and world. 🌍 For sure you have the ability and power to eliminate, the negativity and drama from your life what would you, like to be able to remove that which you don't need or want. TO be apart of your existence as it bought nothing to your life. For sure we have to learn that sometimes, we have to let go of some situations that has slowly began, to break your heart ❤️ leaving behind scars of unbelievable pain, that will...
#courage
#hope
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
21 reads
0 Comments
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:28pm
Yesterday 11:28pm
From Lust To Frost
From lust to frost,
romance to regret,
from fall to winter.
Our passions have wintered.
Yielding to loneliness -
this season of surrender!
Shared wintry breaths chilled our spirits.
Our fleeting emotions wintering our love.
Our passing trusts, now only wintery words.
This crestfallen experience with you!
We wilted, then can the silence of tears
which froze as visible memories on our cheeks.
romance to regret,
from fall to winter.
Our passions have wintered.
Yielding to loneliness -
this season of surrender!
Shared wintry breaths chilled our spirits.
Our fleeting emotions wintering our love.
Our passing trusts, now only wintery words.
This crestfallen experience with you!
We wilted, then can the silence of tears
which froze as visible memories on our cheeks.
#breakup
#depression
#love
#MentalHealth
#rejection
35 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:26pm
Yesterday 11:26pm
Another stupid poem
I miss you
I wish you never left me
Sadness follows me
A new year, with the same old sorrows
Screw this!
I'm too old for this shit
My feelings and this poem were pathetic
I'm gonna blast some Deicide, cook some burgers and later on watch some Stallone, Schwarzenegger or Lundgren films
By tomorrow morning, she'll be a distant memory.
I wish you never left me
Sadness follows me
A new year, with the same old sorrows
Screw this!
I'm too old for this shit
My feelings and this poem were pathetic
I'm gonna blast some Deicide, cook some burgers and later on watch some Stallone, Schwarzenegger or Lundgren films
By tomorrow morning, she'll be a distant memory.
#love
#MovingOn
#WritingPoetry #fiction
#WritingPoetry #fiction
50 reads
10 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:17pm
Yesterday 11:17pm
String of Pearls, I
"And that that which sings and contemplates in you is still dwelling within the bounds of that first moment which scattered the stars into space."
Kahlil Gibran
***
Why do stars fall
And comets have tails
Why are there meteor showers
How vast the array of the sidereal heavens
Set for times, and signs, and seasons
How measures the sweep
And the breadth of it all
Who can answer the timeless questions
Canst thou bind the sweet influences of Pleiades,
Or loose the bands of Orion
Canst thou bring...
Kahlil Gibran
***
Why do stars fall
And comets have tails
Why are there meteor showers
How vast the array of the sidereal heavens
Set for times, and signs, and seasons
How measures the sweep
And the breadth of it all
Who can answer the timeless questions
Canst thou bind the sweet influences of Pleiades,
Or loose the bands of Orion
Canst thou bring...
#love
32 reads
2 Comments
NP_NP
NP
NP
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:50pm
Yesterday 8:50pm
Vibe Check
Will you pass the vibe check?
Are you the Blue Moon song—classic yet distinct.
Remember, I like plants, not flowers.
I’ll connect to you on a deeper plane, more than anyone has.
Two planets circling, locked in orbit.
Slide close to me, and I'll slide to you.
Don’t forget to open my door when I step out of the car;
I love a man who proves chivalry isn’t dead.
I want a teacher and a student.
I’ll show you my darkness
If you reveal what truly haunts you.
Forever dancing, side by side,
Traveling partners, in sync,...
Are you the Blue Moon song—classic yet distinct.
Remember, I like plants, not flowers.
I’ll connect to you on a deeper plane, more than anyone has.
Two planets circling, locked in orbit.
Slide close to me, and I'll slide to you.
Don’t forget to open my door when I step out of the car;
I love a man who proves chivalry isn’t dead.
I want a teacher and a student.
I’ll show you my darkness
If you reveal what truly haunts you.
Forever dancing, side by side,
Traveling partners, in sync,...
#FallingInLove
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
#romantic
26 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:13pm
Yesterday 5:13pm
Just Watched Jesus
Just watched Jesus die on the Cross
Gathering up my sins
Putting em on some splinters
Feels like a new day
Turn this life around
Our sins are on display
But tomorrow is another day
Live like you love
Love like it’s judgement day
Every breath you take
Every bird you see
Every flower you taste
Anything you touch
Grows from your love
Gathering up my sins
Putting em on some splinters
Feels like a new day
Turn this life around
Our sins are on display
But tomorrow is another day
Live like you love
Love like it’s judgement day
Every breath you take
Every bird you see
Every flower you taste
Anything you touch
Grows from your love
#God
#love
30 reads
2 Comments
LunaGreyhawk
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:06pm
Yesterday 1:06pm
Arcadia
beneath his skilled
and ravishing fingers,
her curves melt into
rainy Sunday mornings
spent helplessly
entangled,
limbs ensconced
in concupiscent poses;
beneath his
luscious weight
she comes untethered,
rising up to taste
the lips of rapture
and ravishing fingers,
her curves melt into
rainy Sunday mornings
spent helplessly
entangled,
limbs ensconced
in concupiscent poses;
beneath his
luscious weight
she comes untethered,
rising up to taste
the lips of rapture
#erotic
#love
#lust
#romantic
#sensual
105 reads
12 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:53am
Yesterday 11:53am
SHALL I COMPARE THEE....
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day,
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
#admiration
#beauty
#love
#relationships
#romantic
60 reads
2 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:57am
Yesterday 10:57am
i babble on and on
happy days
joy and laughter
understanding and kindness
wisdom to do good
compassion and acceptance
to walk together
courage to care...
be the one
give strength
luv true
me and you ♥
joy and laughter
understanding and kindness
wisdom to do good
compassion and acceptance
to walk together
courage to care...
be the one
give strength
luv true
me and you ♥
#love
#strength
28 reads
2 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:48am
Yesterday 10:48am
Starfilled Shore
It was a serene night.
And stars were in sight.
You began to walk down the shore.
On the sand filled,ground floor.
You began to walk as you got out of the door.
The stars were twinkling in the sky.
Like nightlights far away.
Maybe you seek peace.
Or a place to collect your thoughts.
Maybe you wanted silence.
And to drown out the negative thoughts.
Out on the shore,sat a girl as pretty as can be.
She had bright,blue siren eyes.
She had red hair,love symbolize.
Her lips were a share of red.
...
And stars were in sight.
You began to walk down the shore.
On the sand filled,ground floor.
You began to walk as you got out of the door.
The stars were twinkling in the sky.
Like nightlights far away.
Maybe you seek peace.
Or a place to collect your thoughts.
Maybe you wanted silence.
And to drown out the negative thoughts.
Out on the shore,sat a girl as pretty as can be.
She had bright,blue siren eyes.
She had red hair,love symbolize.
Her lips were a share of red.
...
#dreams
#kindness
#love
#mermaids
#redemption
18 reads
0 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:49am
Yesterday 6:49am
2025
Be humble; but don’t let your spirit be dimmed
Wear pride like a crown when the odds have been skimmed
Be clever; yet know when to play the fool
Break a few rules, but don’t forget the school
Be righteous; but wickedness too has its day
When kindness wanes; let boldness lead the way
Be the shepherd; but sometimes join the flock
Walk with the crowd; yet let your dreams unlock.
Be hopeful; but learn when to let dreams go
Fight for what's right; yet embrace the ebb and flow
Be kind-hearted; but guard your soul’s embrace
Give no...
Wear pride like a crown when the odds have been skimmed
Be clever; yet know when to play the fool
Break a few rules, but don’t forget the school
Be righteous; but wickedness too has its day
When kindness wanes; let boldness lead the way
Be the shepherd; but sometimes join the flock
Walk with the crowd; yet let your dreams unlock.
Be hopeful; but learn when to let dreams go
Fight for what's right; yet embrace the ebb and flow
Be kind-hearted; but guard your soul’s embrace
Give no...
#happiness
#hope
#love #NewYear
#love #NewYear
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