Poems About Love Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Today 10:06am
Today 10:06am
Do you believe in your faith
For sure in this life we all will go through somethings, that will be out of our own control, but it doesn't mean that, you give up on hope and stop ignoring the power of prayers. For sure it might be a crippling disease like cancer, or it maybe a broken heart filled with hurt and pain, or it could be a illness that affects you mentally and emotionally and physically. For it could be tears for a love one that have gone away. But regardless what ever you do don't stop believing in your faith and beliefs, for sure he will never leave you nor forsake you, as you are one of GOD ALMIGHTY CHILDREN....
#courage
#hope
#kindness
#love
#redemption
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Today 3:39am
Today 3:39am
In your hands I give to you
Here we are still not really truly understanding, that it's true that no one is sent, to you by chance or accident. For I give to you my love and support and affection. For I give to you my love and support and encouragement, just because we have a connection that we can build, together a special bond. For I give to you my commitment and show you my consistency and strength of my perseverance to you. For I give to you from my hands to yours my undying love with respect and honor and trust with happiness. For sure we have history of time well spent, just getting to know each other đź’•...
#emotions
#gratitude
#hope
#kindness
#love
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summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:00pm
Yesterday 7:00pm
~a letter of love...
(an inspired love lyrical from the fav ever #ActorVijay song link below .. from 1995 Tamil film Deva)
https://youtu.be/hxMKi90d7V8?feature=shared
1.
a letter had i written
& sent my soul in it…
in those shape of words
had sent myself to you…
my love… love me
my love… love me
a letter had i written
& sent my soul in it…
2.
my dear, the soil you walk
your path of foot… i will
revere...
https://youtu.be/hxMKi90d7V8?feature=shared
1.
a letter had i written
& sent my soul in it…
in those shape of words
had sent myself to you…
my love… love me
my love… love me
a letter had i written
& sent my soul in it…
2.
my dear, the soil you walk
your path of foot… i will
revere...
#admiration
#inspirational
#love
#music
#spiritual
50 reads
3 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:41pm
Yesterday 6:41pm
~ OESHO- OMMO
celestial naked
duskiness.. dotted fleshy in bloodied
red clotted erected buds ..
touched with golden tips
& blackened craving lips..
her powering in
sensualising form
Ommo~ Uma
spatially densing~dancing
asteroidal lighted Shakthi.. She
in search of
her other half her love .. in
mystically peacockish blueing hue
of the mountainous Kailash
earthen peaking form, in His
Himalayan abode
Oesho~ Ishwar
Him the Shiva.. ...
duskiness.. dotted fleshy in bloodied
red clotted erected buds ..
touched with golden tips
& blackened craving lips..
her powering in
sensualising form
Ommo~ Uma
spatially densing~dancing
asteroidal lighted Shakthi.. She
in search of
her other half her love .. in
mystically peacockish blueing hue
of the mountainous Kailash
earthen peaking form, in His
Himalayan abode
Oesho~ Ishwar
Him the Shiva.. ...
#love
#nature
#power
#spiritual
#universe
54 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:39pm
Yesterday 2:39pm
accountable
invariably, I am what I am not
an empath struck by what is
channeling the pain of the verses
It affects me at a deep level
sometimes intertwining with my thoughts
a soul so complex with its art
metaphors and philosophies
that are not all mine
are just my way of coping with what is
flooded with visions that disturb
My first thought is to shove them down deep
but they cause me great anxiety
so I free them on the page
at what toll I don't know
They say kindness covers a multitude of sins
I hope...
an empath struck by what is
channeling the pain of the verses
It affects me at a deep level
sometimes intertwining with my thoughts
a soul so complex with its art
metaphors and philosophies
that are not all mine
are just my way of coping with what is
flooded with visions that disturb
My first thought is to shove them down deep
but they cause me great anxiety
so I free them on the page
at what toll I don't know
They say kindness covers a multitude of sins
I hope...
#love
#spiritual
51 reads
7 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:16pm
Yesterday 1:16pm
Birds Fly In The Rain
We know not the tinder of the moment
When match is struck
Suspended between spark and flame
What is right? What is wrong?
No one lives forever
Then needs come the night
Why do we keep deep diving for everything on our wishlist
Always chasing some neurotically ordained checklist
Why cant we be satisfied in the here and now
Who am I
Some random guy
A random
Unique
An outlier in your world
A shooting star outside your orbit
*
...
When match is struck
Suspended between spark and flame
What is right? What is wrong?
No one lives forever
Then needs come the night
Why do we keep deep diving for everything on our wishlist
Always chasing some neurotically ordained checklist
Why cant we be satisfied in the here and now
Who am I
Some random guy
A random
Unique
An outlier in your world
A shooting star outside your orbit
*
...
#identity
#love
#nature
54 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:49am
Yesterday 11:49am
Touch the love she brings
Let the desire grow in your pants
That's why she loves you
That's why she loves you
#erotic
#love
#minimalist
107 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:47am
Yesterday 11:47am
Touch the love he brings
Let love dampen your panties
That's why he loves you
That's why he loves you
#erotic
#love
#minimalist
71 reads
10 Comments
Poetryman
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:51am
Yesterday 6:51am
Lovely Artisan
Your lovey hands dance on canvas
As your gentle feet caress the floor
In artistry in each movement you move me
Inspiring my heart with beats of thunder
Wishing to claim you my muse for-ever
To dance within each sensual expression
Holding close then letting go in synchronization
As two lovers Who collapse in a duet of passion
Would that I may be worthy of such beauty
Life itself would finally achieve blissful satisfaction
How long have I reached, longing for a fanciful myth
To come into existence in a sparkling ✨️ vaporous...
As your gentle feet caress the floor
In artistry in each movement you move me
Inspiring my heart with beats of thunder
Wishing to claim you my muse for-ever
To dance within each sensual expression
Holding close then letting go in synchronization
As two lovers Who collapse in a duet of passion
Would that I may be worthy of such beauty
Life itself would finally achieve blissful satisfaction
How long have I reached, longing for a fanciful myth
To come into existence in a sparkling ✨️ vaporous...
#art
#love
#WritingPoetry
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 7:08pm
5th Apr 2025 7:08pm
the color of feelings
my ache is in color, full of feeling
stormy blues
grainy grey
red light district lust
fuck me if I'm green
I'm too experienced
Please leave me alone, black
you comfort me but in coming close
my insecurity weighs in
self-esteem issues will get in the way
with a melancholy feeling
my thoughts turn inward, knowing I will always be lonely
emptiness of emotion it isn't that I don't feel
It's that I feel too much
Sacred heart, you are beautiful to me
in the dusky dawn I am rose crimson
reaching...
stormy blues
grainy grey
red light district lust
fuck me if I'm green
I'm too experienced
Please leave me alone, black
you comfort me but in coming close
my insecurity weighs in
self-esteem issues will get in the way
with a melancholy feeling
my thoughts turn inward, knowing I will always be lonely
emptiness of emotion it isn't that I don't feel
It's that I feel too much
Sacred heart, you are beautiful to me
in the dusky dawn I am rose crimson
reaching...
#love
65 reads
9 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 6:47pm
5th Apr 2025 6:47pm
The Wrinkles of Time
Like a star from the past she regaled us with stories
A lesson in each and every one of them
With love and patience she guided us
Even when we didn’t want to listen or understand
But after so many laps around the sun
I began to appreciate more of what she done
For all the sacrifices she made
All the sufferings she must’ve endured
I saw more of her light
Now at ninety-five
She only whispers
A fog has come over memory
Hands that once worked so hard
Show the wrinkles of time
Her faces lights up
Like a...
A lesson in each and every one of them
With love and patience she guided us
Even when we didn’t want to listen or understand
But after so many laps around the sun
I began to appreciate more of what she done
For all the sacrifices she made
All the sufferings she must’ve endured
I saw more of her light
Now at ninety-five
She only whispers
A fog has come over memory
Hands that once worked so hard
Show the wrinkles of time
Her faces lights up
Like a...
#family
#hope
#love
#mother
#stars
38 reads
3 Comments
BeautifulNothing2
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 6:54am
5th Apr 2025 6:54am
Light
Lift me up,
Just to break me down,
Wipe my tears,
Only to push me to the ground
Soulless eyes,
Bleeding into my life,
Web of words,
Spun into a beautiful lie,
You don't love me,
You said you wished I would die,
You lift me up,
Only to slam me down,
Back to reality,
You've taken my crown,
How can I get over this?
Your love is like a bottomless lake,
And I can't swim,
You laugh at me while I drown,
Broken promises,
Empty words,
Constantly questioning my self worth,
You mock...
Just to break me down,
Wipe my tears,
Only to push me to the ground
Soulless eyes,
Bleeding into my life,
Web of words,
Spun into a beautiful lie,
You don't love me,
You said you wished I would die,
You lift me up,
Only to slam me down,
Back to reality,
You've taken my crown,
How can I get over this?
Your love is like a bottomless lake,
And I can't swim,
You laugh at me while I drown,
Broken promises,
Empty words,
Constantly questioning my self worth,
You mock...
#abuse
#forgiveness
#love #suffering
#love #suffering
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