Poems About Love Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about love seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Today 2:17am
Today 2:17am
shadow soul
In your depths, I am a shadow soul
licking at a flame I can't fathom
Fate is cruel and did not allow
My passion quelled out of necessity
Provocation denied and repressed
You graze my sexual soul
provoking my lust
building it until bare, I squirm
My confession, I am bound
my secret is I've never been free
it is for other Mistresses of Midnight to amaze
commanding a room, Dominate
My need puts me at odds within
At best, I am awkwardly attractive
arousing passions with my magic
...
licking at a flame I can't fathom
Fate is cruel and did not allow
My passion quelled out of necessity
Provocation denied and repressed
You graze my sexual soul
provoking my lust
building it until bare, I squirm
My confession, I am bound
my secret is I've never been free
it is for other Mistresses of Midnight to amaze
commanding a room, Dominate
My need puts me at odds within
At best, I am awkwardly attractive
arousing passions with my magic
...
#love
#sadness
39 reads
2 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
Today 1:04am
Today 1:04am
The art of a proper kiss
You pecked my
cheek on your
way to another
grueling day
and I was in that
domestic conflict where
a smooch is cool.
You know.
You thought of me.
That’s sweet.
But you stopped
at the door
and I could almost see
the static in your mind
when you decided
to make me think of you
me think of you
All fucking day.
Your hand tangled
in the back of my head
as you searched my eyes,
then stared at my...
cheek on your
way to another
grueling day
and I was in that
domestic conflict where
a smooch is cool.
You know.
You thought of me.
That’s sweet.
But you stopped
at the door
and I could almost see
the static in your mind
when you decided
to make me think of you
me think of you
All fucking day.
Your hand tangled
in the back of my head
as you searched my eyes,
then stared at my...
#erotic
#love
#lust
#obsession
#passion
67 reads
17 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:17pm
Yesterday 9:17pm
the dying in us all
i realise too late
(for youth and childhood)
the hardest emotion to feel
the thing i always fought against
and that which kept out all
was love, forgiveness.
how i imagined killing you
so many times
of making you afraid
as you made me
when round your own son’s neck
you placed your hands
and held him fast across the bath
the tap running, running.
i thought of stabbing you to death
of breaking your skull with a chair
and feeling pleasure on
the consummation of that act
approaching sensuality. ...
(for youth and childhood)
the hardest emotion to feel
the thing i always fought against
and that which kept out all
was love, forgiveness.
how i imagined killing you
so many times
of making you afraid
as you made me
when round your own son’s neck
you placed your hands
and held him fast across the bath
the tap running, running.
i thought of stabbing you to death
of breaking your skull with a chair
and feeling pleasure on
the consummation of that act
approaching sensuality. ...
#abuse
#childhood
#forgiveness #love
#forgiveness #love
27 reads
1 Comment
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:18pm
Yesterday 2:18pm
metallic
feelings bare to the touch
causes my soul to ache
bleeding, hurt, stuffed with pain
Let it all bleed out
erase the guilt
wash away the inky stains
In your starstruck state
Revelling in madness, you fly
to crash to the ground
hateful, cunning tricking out your mind
Reading clouds, you envision another life
a nightmare of mockingbirds
people scorn, your secrets sewn into dreams
hideous jealousy no one knows like I do
What it is to be disliked
a misfit from the houses of none ...
causes my soul to ache
bleeding, hurt, stuffed with pain
Let it all bleed out
erase the guilt
wash away the inky stains
In your starstruck state
Revelling in madness, you fly
to crash to the ground
hateful, cunning tricking out your mind
Reading clouds, you envision another life
a nightmare of mockingbirds
people scorn, your secrets sewn into dreams
hideous jealousy no one knows like I do
What it is to be disliked
a misfit from the houses of none ...
#dark
#love
52 reads
4 Comments
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 11:11pm
28th Apr 2025 11:11pm
Set Ablazed
I’ve been doused
with your teary rain
and set ablaze.
Not ablazed with sorrow,
but with anticipation.
Of your wet touch.
with your teary rain
and set ablaze.
Not ablazed with sorrow,
but with anticipation.
Of your wet touch.
#FallingInLove
#love
#romantic
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0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 10:20pm
28th Apr 2025 10:20pm
Silent Passage of Love
They say that in every day of ever moment, a connection is born out of love and desire, like a shadow that reflects off the walls, 🧱 shutting the doors, 🚪 cutting off any chance of escaping, from the deepness of the darkness. For sure sometimes some things, are forbidden and sometimes they aren't but yet, we find ourselves drawn, within the mist of lust of forbidden attraction. It's like the feel of a strong magnet 🧲 attractive to the very deepness of your soul. Yet still we don't pay attention, to all of the signs just thinking it's nothing, but fear of the darkness....
#dark
#emotions
#hope
#love
#TimeHeals
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0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 9:18pm
28th Apr 2025 9:18pm
~the second homecoming (#2)(collab with Uma)
that…
powers another golden chance…
a second... a finale... homecoming
in a decelerating downfall
as a tiny pithy gravity stone...
drowning unto deep oceans
wholly absorptive of the noisy
jet of rocketing down sounds...
in a muted sagacious silence
the earthen grounds in touch now…
from where… he gazes intense
into his much bonded & beatific
constellations of her...
he searches for long... with
a paining ache towards her
earthen absence... his heaving
heart melts away to tears
of...
powers another golden chance…
a second... a finale... homecoming
in a decelerating downfall
as a tiny pithy gravity stone...
drowning unto deep oceans
wholly absorptive of the noisy
jet of rocketing down sounds...
in a muted sagacious silence
the earthen grounds in touch now…
from where… he gazes intense
into his much bonded & beatific
constellations of her...
he searches for long... with
a paining ache towards her
earthen absence... his heaving
heart melts away to tears
of...
#love
#romantic
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
77 reads
13 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 8:56pm
28th Apr 2025 8:56pm
~the second homecoming (#2) (collab with Keith, Vision_of_insanity)
that…
powers another golden chance…
a second... a finale... homecoming
in a decelerating downfall
as a tiny pithy gravity stone...
drowning unto deep oceans
wholly absorptive of the noisy
jet of rocketing down sounds...
in a muted sagacious silence
the earthen grounds in touch now…
from where… he gazes intense
into his much bonded & beatific
constellations of her...
he searches for long... with
a paining ache towards her
earthen absence... his heaving
heart melts...
powers another golden chance…
a second... a finale... homecoming
in a decelerating downfall
as a tiny pithy gravity stone...
drowning unto deep oceans
wholly absorptive of the noisy
jet of rocketing down sounds...
in a muted sagacious silence
the earthen grounds in touch now…
from where… he gazes intense
into his much bonded & beatific
constellations of her...
he searches for long... with
a paining ache towards her
earthen absence... his heaving
heart melts...
#love
#romantic
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
73 reads
5 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 6:32pm
28th Apr 2025 6:32pm
chastized
The dwindling day rebukes me
My incessant need, brutal
It would not relent
Crestfallen, I silently lament
listening to our creator chastise me
Some people aren't good for you
Yes, Father, but aren't they all your people
My heart sank
Being a misfit, I long to be accepted
With a warm feeling, I did
sulking under a dark sun
As I stomp along, the wind whispers to me
pouting as I go
arguing inside me
wrestling with my Father
But listening intently
My gut said he was right
Adversity comes...
My incessant need, brutal
It would not relent
Crestfallen, I silently lament
listening to our creator chastise me
Some people aren't good for you
Yes, Father, but aren't they all your people
My heart sank
Being a misfit, I long to be accepted
With a warm feeling, I did
sulking under a dark sun
As I stomp along, the wind whispers to me
pouting as I go
arguing inside me
wrestling with my Father
But listening intently
My gut said he was right
Adversity comes...
#honesty
#love
52 reads
6 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 5:44pm
28th Apr 2025 5:44pm
U R
before i die
i just want to tell you
you are
the one i share my love with
the most
the one i cherish the most
you are
the one i think of every morning
when i wake
every night
when i try to sleep
you are
the one who brings me joy
makes me smile
helps me move, helps me groove...
you are the reason my soul is on fire
you are the one
i love always and forever ♥
i just want to tell you
you are
the one i share my love with
the most
the one i cherish the most
you are
the one i think of every morning
when i wake
every night
when i try to sleep
you are
the one who brings me joy
makes me smile
helps me move, helps me groove...
you are the reason my soul is on fire
you are the one
i love always and forever ♥
#happiness
#love
#strength
46 reads
2 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 5:36pm
28th Apr 2025 5:36pm
Like the tell-tale heart but actually crazy
#erotic
#love
#lust
#obsession
#sex
94 reads
12 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 4:30pm
28th Apr 2025 4:30pm
I AM HERE...
I am eager to wonder...
willing to learn new ways
I am ready for growth
chasing tomorrow with today
open eyes,open mind,open heart
want to learn
want to grow
want to B
I am here ♥
willing to learn new ways
I am ready for growth
chasing tomorrow with today
open eyes,open mind,open heart
want to learn
want to grow
want to B
I am here ♥
#courage
#love
#strength
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0 Comments
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