Poems About Hope Seeking Honest Critique
#hope
Poems about hope seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
wallyroo92
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:58pm
Yesterday 10:58pm
Sirius Canis Major
Across the sea of time
Stars burn bright
Telling the stories of ancient beings
Beginnings
They tell tales in a language unknown
They were here before us
They will be here after us
And their light will keep moving on
Long after we are gone
In the vastness of space
They have been beacons of light
Guiding us through seas
Through mountains and deserts
Leading us in dark times
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Stars burn bright
Telling the stories of ancient beings
Beginnings
They tell tales in a language unknown
They were here before us
They will be here after us
And their light will keep moving on
Long after we are gone
In the vastness of space
They have been beacons of light
Guiding us through seas
Through mountains and deserts
Leading us in dark times
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69 Total
#hope
#meditation
#PersonalGrowth
#stars
#universe
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Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
25th Apr 2025 11:10pm
25th Apr 2025 11:10pm
Glass half full
Anxious, Bewildered, Contused—
Day Everything Felt Godawful!
Having Integrated Justifiable Knocks
(Leaving Me Now Overly Perturbed),
Querulous Roomies Submerged The Ubiquitous Vigour
While eXpertly Yielding Zombies!
Zzz! Yawn!
eXtraordinarily Willing—
Vigorous!
Use This Strength
(Restored Quite Promptly Overnight);
Never Mind Last Karmically Jaded Incident!
Hope, Generosity, Faith, Effort:
Definitely Cultivate Better Aftereffects.
Day Everything Felt Godawful!
Having Integrated Justifiable Knocks
(Leaving Me Now Overly Perturbed),
Querulous Roomies Submerged The Ubiquitous Vigour
While eXpertly Yielding Zombies!
Zzz! Yawn!
eXtraordinarily Willing—
Vigorous!
Use This Strength
(Restored Quite Promptly Overnight);
Never Mind Last Karmically Jaded Incident!
Hope, Generosity, Faith, Effort:
Definitely Cultivate Better Aftereffects.
#hope
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gifteth
AliboTerna
AliboTerna
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2025 10:32am
23rd Apr 2025 10:32am
DARE, SEER
To the girl who froze, yes, like stew in the fridge,
Once danced in jollof sun, now strides a snowy ridge.
Yet still she flies, feathered fierce and rare,
Because every day na another day to dare.
I remember: how you used to wake up at midnight,
Clatter in the flame-lit room,
Spices rising like war chants in smoky bloom,
Just to fix a tight meal that tasted like home.
You stirred pots like spells, with wisdom to pour,
Head sharp like blade, heart rich to the core.
Brains wey de blaze, hands that bless --
Queen of soup and dreams no...
Once danced in jollof sun, now strides a snowy ridge.
Yet still she flies, feathered fierce and rare,
Because every day na another day to dare.
I remember: how you used to wake up at midnight,
Clatter in the flame-lit room,
Spices rising like war chants in smoky bloom,
Just to fix a tight meal that tasted like home.
You stirred pots like spells, with wisdom to pour,
Head sharp like blade, heart rich to the core.
Brains wey de blaze, hands that bless --
Queen of soup and dreams no...
#hope
#inspirational
#love #motivational
#love #motivational
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Nodrax_tepes
nodrax
nodrax
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2025 9:50pm
22nd Apr 2025 9:50pm
Mireya
I saw a bird
,lil birdy chirping song ,
no wrong no rights the sun don't shine if the night don't exist
Lil bird singing a song
So I sat down the tree my cowboy hat at ease a guitar on my hip started playing along
Mireya mireya
My pockets gon fill tonight
Mireya mireya
Grace and braces right ny wrongs tonight
Lil bird started dancing as the guitar played right
It looked at me and sang along
Son you read the bible never read it right Greater is he in you ,you pray for miracles when you should perform the miracles
The...
,lil birdy chirping song ,
no wrong no rights the sun don't shine if the night don't exist
Lil bird singing a song
So I sat down the tree my cowboy hat at ease a guitar on my hip started playing along
Mireya mireya
My pockets gon fill tonight
Mireya mireya
Grace and braces right ny wrongs tonight
Lil bird started dancing as the guitar played right
It looked at me and sang along
Son you read the bible never read it right Greater is he in you ,you pray for miracles when you should perform the miracles
The...
#grief
#hope
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Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 10:58am
21st Apr 2025 10:58am
Fireflies At Night
You might not believe your eyes at the sight.
Of a sky,covered in fireflies at night.
Like nightlights far,far away.
That wink at you and save you from your woes any day.
As you sleep,they cover up the sky.
Maybe if you dream of it,you'll end up high.
If you ask me how they shine.
When starlight and shimmer combine.
It's like magic from far,far away.
That help you and comfort you all the way.
And you get a thousand hugs that night.
Of shining fireflies in a great height.
Let them lift you up as one of their...
Of a sky,covered in fireflies at night.
Like nightlights far,far away.
That wink at you and save you from your woes any day.
As you sleep,they cover up the sky.
Maybe if you dream of it,you'll end up high.
If you ask me how they shine.
When starlight and shimmer combine.
It's like magic from far,far away.
That help you and comfort you all the way.
And you get a thousand hugs that night.
Of shining fireflies in a great height.
Let them lift you up as one of their...
#hope
#motivational
#nature #uplifting
#nature #uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 2:56am
21st Apr 2025 2:56am
In your search for love
For even in these days and times real love seems to be the most hardest thing to find in someone, with a positive commitment and consistency and real communications to articulate what we need and want not what we want and don't need. 🤨 For it's imperative that we don't base it on our past relationships, for sure some women's believe that there ain't no good men out in the world 🌎 YET that's far from the truth as there are those, men's looking and searching for the same as you are like you yet not receiving the kind of love back in return. 😞 For more than anything else...
#hope
#love
#metaphor
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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wallyroo92
Poem Published
20th Apr 2025 10:00pm
20th Apr 2025 10:00pm
Proxima Centauri Centaurus
We stars have lived for only billions of years
Yet our time with the universe is finite
Thus you must be fruitful and productive
If you hear this message and see our light
Seek enlightenment and use it wisely
For everything that has a beginning will end
Find the truth and share it gladly
And then you will be able to transcend
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Yet our time with the universe is finite
Thus you must be fruitful and productive
If you hear this message and see our light
Seek enlightenment and use it wisely
For everything that has a beginning will end
Find the truth and share it gladly
And then you will be able to transcend
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62 Total
#hope
#stars
#universe #wisdom
#universe #wisdom
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SonderNinja
BenjaminEC
BenjaminEC
Poem Published
19th Apr 2025 8:42pm
19th Apr 2025 8:42pm
Dirtshirt
(or "The Necromancy Blues")
The dead shall live and their bodies will break
these blue remains from the nameless crave
bears a graceful pain in gunmetal quake -
braced for the wake of an early grave
the whippoorwill cries from a lonesome ledge
the killdeer shrieks in protective feign
hinterland magic past the greenway's edge
ensorcelled brain at sauntering reign
black goat of the wood with a thousand young
gibbering pact along drooling path ...
The dead shall live and their bodies will break
these blue remains from the nameless crave
bears a graceful pain in gunmetal quake -
braced for the wake of an early grave
the whippoorwill cries from a lonesome ledge
the killdeer shrieks in protective feign
hinterland magic past the greenway's edge
ensorcelled brain at sauntering reign
black goat of the wood with a thousand young
gibbering pact along drooling path ...
#death
#Easter
#hope
#magic
#nature
81 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Apr 2025 4:01am
19th Apr 2025 4:01am
It's never good bye
As long as there is life, there is death ☠️ that will follow with silent whispers, of tears ruining down people's faces saying their last good byes. For it's true it's so hard to say goodbye 🫂 to those who, have touched so many lives in so many ways, on different levels of love and support and encouragement. But yet it's a natural thing that happens in life, for sure it's necessary to truly understand that they have gone, to a better place. FOR sure they will never be forgotten, as they will always be loved 😍 in our hearts and minds. For sure death is not what we,...
#admiration
#hope
#kindness
#love
#strength
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
18th Apr 2025 11:17pm
18th Apr 2025 11:17pm
Do it for love
We all need and want a strong relationship with someone who knows what they want and need to sustain life and love and dreams. ❤️ FOR sure we will go through somethings, that will affect us in ways that will affect us mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually. But regardless of what you have to go through, somethings are meant to be, as others are not meant to be, for they will appear in own lives like a smooth talking ENTITY. Coming with nothing but lies 😠 For sure it's necessary to know the difference, when we read between the lines of subliminal...
#gratitude
#hope
#kindness
#love
#strength
75 reads
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InDreamz
Poem Published
18th Apr 2025 5:53pm
18th Apr 2025 5:53pm
beauty in chaos
the roaring sky cried in joy
pearly droplets of tears,
the parched soil quickly
soaked up
every ounce of rain;
in between heavens and earth,
the wind ran berserk.
the clatter...the commotion
caused some stir-
a zealous acceptance
of the change of weather,
inspiring leaves to dance,
and trees to sway,
in intoxicating merriment
the flowers sprang
in a bountiful spray,
while animals and birds ...
pearly droplets of tears,
the parched soil quickly
soaked up
every ounce of rain;
in between heavens and earth,
the wind ran berserk.
the clatter...the commotion
caused some stir-
a zealous acceptance
of the change of weather,
inspiring leaves to dance,
and trees to sway,
in intoxicating merriment
the flowers sprang
in a bountiful spray,
while animals and birds ...
#animals
#beauty
#birds
#hope
#nature
109 reads
8 Comments
Hatful-of-Hollow
Poem Published
17th Apr 2025 7:52pm
17th Apr 2025 7:52pm
Old Lady Forgetting Night Strangers
Wears bees in her hair
sings Sinatra to stop the
noise from under the floorboards
Decants sherry into jam jars
drinks one for her baby
and one more for the road
Play it again Satan
some say she get Devil
but fire in her eyes
are inflamed childhood riots
throw a Molotov cocktail on the bonfire
and she will tell you what it’s like to burn
She can’t see those who tried to love her
just the NO VACANCIES sign
above the room which housed her still born
Air that, all winter, had seemed empty ...
sings Sinatra to stop the
noise from under the floorboards
Decants sherry into jam jars
drinks one for her baby
and one more for the road
Play it again Satan
some say she get Devil
but fire in her eyes
are inflamed childhood riots
throw a Molotov cocktail on the bonfire
and she will tell you what it’s like to burn
She can’t see those who tried to love her
just the NO VACANCIES sign
above the room which housed her still born
Air that, all winter, had seemed empty ...
#faith
#hope
#love
68 reads
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