Poems About Hope Seeking Honest Critique
#hope
Poems about hope seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 00:57am
21st Apr 2024 00:57am
SPIRIT OF THE ELDERS
They say that the elderly are the most wise ones in the world, as they can reach you in ways you will never truly understand 🤔 For it's a very inspiring and uplifting, perspective of how the moment of absence, can remain intact after so long ago 🤨 For we all have our own personal moments, that we have to reach back in time and remember, the unspoken words said in the dark of the silent of the night, for they say when it rains it pours ☔ changing feelings sometimes dying is better than living but know that it's not over when you lose it's over when you QUITE...
#courage
#hope
#inspirational
#love
#strength
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cabcool
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 11:36pm
19th Apr 2024 11:36pm
april songs: journey of life 8
april song 08—conferment
preferent the sacrifices
when the age of reason flow’rs,
for to rise above each crisis
opens new redemption doors.
in the giving and receiving,
hearts are touched and soles are healed,
as beholding is believing
and new confidence is sealed.
let the strife be no deterrent
to the questing of your dreams;
in the end, the sweet conferment
of the stimme of living streams.
though the odyssey be trying,
you shall find recurrent pause
to the weary soul relying
on the...
preferent the sacrifices
when the age of reason flow’rs,
for to rise above each crisis
opens new redemption doors.
in the giving and receiving,
hearts are touched and soles are healed,
as beholding is believing
and new confidence is sealed.
let the strife be no deterrent
to the questing of your dreams;
in the end, the sweet conferment
of the stimme of living streams.
though the odyssey be trying,
you shall find recurrent pause
to the weary soul relying
on the...
#courage
#hope
#NaPoWriMo2024
#sacrifice
#strength
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The_Darkness_Insid
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 12:41pm
19th Apr 2024 12:41pm
A sample of love
The sound of your voice brings me peace in my core
Pulls me back from the edge and Im lonely no more
Your eyes are like windows to the beauty i adore
Your heart has a tender kindness I have never felt before
You have a smile that can chase away the doubt and fear
The brightness of your essence makes me want you always near
The completeness of your love makes my insecurities disappear
The stormy clouds roll back and your love makes my skies clear
A simple touch from you sends a tingle from head to toe
A hug feels like home, I never...
Pulls me back from the edge and Im lonely no more
Your eyes are like windows to the beauty i adore
Your heart has a tender kindness I have never felt before
You have a smile that can chase away the doubt and fear
The brightness of your essence makes me want you always near
The completeness of your love makes my insecurities disappear
The stormy clouds roll back and your love makes my skies clear
A simple touch from you sends a tingle from head to toe
A hug feels like home, I never...
#beauty
#happiness
#hope #love
#hope #love
98 reads
4 Comments
BatPowers
Bat Powers
Bat Powers
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 6:01pm
18th Apr 2024 6:01pm
Seven Times
Some say
we are heading in a very bad direction
time to pack up
need to be moving on
close my eyes
the sun warms my face with reflection
this anger inside
i've got to get it gone
down again
like the other times before
little slower, little grayer
age has no cure
i'm gonna put an application on the other side of that gate
been down seven times
i'll get up eight
our little girl
got sick with the onset of winter ...
we are heading in a very bad direction
time to pack up
need to be moving on
close my eyes
the sun warms my face with reflection
this anger inside
i've got to get it gone
down again
like the other times before
little slower, little grayer
age has no cure
i'm gonna put an application on the other side of that gate
been down seven times
i'll get up eight
our little girl
got sick with the onset of winter ...
#anger
#death
#despair
#hope
#redemption
60 reads
16 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 11:18am
18th Apr 2024 11:18am
Rose Vines
I was looking in my gold mirror.
Vines around it,rose bushes nearby.
With thorns,I did not know how or why.
The roses on the bushes are red.
Maybe if I had a prettier stem or better leaves.
And my needs feel like they haven't been read properly.
I always thought of myself as a flower.
But if I could be a red rose,I would have so much power.
Maybe if I did not have any thorns.
Or if I could remove my differences and horns.
Maybe if I dyed my petals red.
Would that make things better?
Alas,I hope...
Vines around it,rose bushes nearby.
With thorns,I did not know how or why.
The roses on the bushes are red.
Maybe if I had a prettier stem or better leaves.
And my needs feel like they haven't been read properly.
I always thought of myself as a flower.
But if I could be a red rose,I would have so much power.
Maybe if I did not have any thorns.
Or if I could remove my differences and horns.
Maybe if I dyed my petals red.
Would that make things better?
Alas,I hope...
#hope
#sadness
#uplifting
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Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 5:50am
18th Apr 2024 5:50am
They Will Be My Rhyme, My Reason
For a glimpse
of a glorious,
genuine smile,
that convey's acceptance without
scintilla of guile
for such a sight
I'm good and ready
I'd walk a country Summer's mile,
in the Mojave dessert
to bask in such a welcome grin
and when I arrive
we'd connect our smiles
and fall into an embrace
and they wouldn't
even hesitate
even though
I'm awfully sweaty.
Certainly they'd have
captivating eyes
that bid me come hither.
And beg don't dither,
never again go thither,
but stay right by my...
of a glorious,
genuine smile,
that convey's acceptance without
scintilla of guile
for such a sight
I'm good and ready
I'd walk a country Summer's mile,
in the Mojave dessert
to bask in such a welcome grin
and when I arrive
we'd connect our smiles
and fall into an embrace
and they wouldn't
even hesitate
even though
I'm awfully sweaty.
Certainly they'd have
captivating eyes
that bid me come hither.
And beg don't dither,
never again go thither,
but stay right by my...
#dreams
#funny
#happiness
#hope
#love
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monovox128
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 5:26am
18th Apr 2024 5:26am
THE LONELY ONE
The lonely person often walks unnoticed
with unsteady step and eyes unfocused,
failing to keep pace within the crowd.
An approach of reluctance to everything,
like a crutch under the arm that stings,
maintaining balance amidst turbulence.
Seeing, yet, did not recognize nor care,
as if that person was as normal as you,
beneath the shrouded cloak they wear.
Loneliness can feed on pure isolation,
depression its friend, little is noticed,
there's signals, a lack of communication.
Loneliness has its very own...
with unsteady step and eyes unfocused,
failing to keep pace within the crowd.
An approach of reluctance to everything,
like a crutch under the arm that stings,
maintaining balance amidst turbulence.
Seeing, yet, did not recognize nor care,
as if that person was as normal as you,
beneath the shrouded cloak they wear.
Loneliness can feed on pure isolation,
depression its friend, little is noticed,
there's signals, a lack of communication.
Loneliness has its very own...
#bittersweet
#emptiness
#hope
#loneliness
#rejection
68 reads
11 Comments
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 1:53am
18th Apr 2024 1:53am
I Am Redemption
You've hit rock bottom
You need to be saved
Seven deadly sins have devoured your soul
You still fell further
Mother nature warned you
You still haven't listened
I can deliver you from your sins
I can give you salvation
Atonement
But do not take me lightly
Do not test my patience
I am your second chance
A chance to change the course of your life
Your journey
Do not lie to me
Or yourself
I can see your true intentions
I am redemption
You must earn my respect
You must believe in me
And have...
You need to be saved
Seven deadly sins have devoured your soul
You still fell further
Mother nature warned you
You still haven't listened
I can deliver you from your sins
I can give you salvation
Atonement
But do not take me lightly
Do not test my patience
I am your second chance
A chance to change the course of your life
Your journey
Do not lie to me
Or yourself
I can see your true intentions
I am redemption
You must earn my respect
You must believe in me
And have...
#forgiveness
#hope
47 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 10:43pm
16th Apr 2024 10:43pm
Hereditary
I'm destined to fail
Both parents unsuccessful
Can I make a change?
Both parents unsuccessful
Can I make a change?
#hope
#motivational
#uplifting
#choices
#risk
48 reads
6 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 3:59pm
16th Apr 2024 3:59pm
IF I'D WALK AWAY
If the time has come
For me to walk away
To leave you my love
Will you not save
The tears that flow
I have on display
When I turn to leave
On this darkest day
When the sun won't rise
And the winter comes
As a river still flows
From the saddest eyes
If the time has come
For me to walk away
Will you leave a smile
Could you pause awhile
In the setting sun
And I leave you a kiss
For now there is none
As I leave you with this
Knowing you warmed the heart
Of a very troubled fool
Who's lost...
For me to walk away
To leave you my love
Will you not save
The tears that flow
I have on display
When I turn to leave
On this darkest day
When the sun won't rise
And the winter comes
As a river still flows
From the saddest eyes
If the time has come
For me to walk away
Will you leave a smile
Could you pause awhile
In the setting sun
And I leave you a kiss
For now there is none
As I leave you with this
Knowing you warmed the heart
Of a very troubled fool
Who's lost...
#love
#hope
#heartbroken
#disappointment
#bittersweet
63 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
16th Apr 2024 2:37am
16th Apr 2024 2:37am
I GOT KIDS TO FEED
Ooh that chronograph would look good on my wrist
Though I like it, it’s really a want and not a need
I know I could walk around the office and flaunt it
I have the money for it but dang it I got kids to feed!
I’ve been a hankering to go on a long vacation
Go to Pamplona and run with the bulls in the stampede
But I’m getting a little too old for these shenanigans
I’ve been dreaming of skydiving but I got kids to feed!
Though I’m in a good place as far as income is concerned
There was a point when my family had some tough times
I had...
Though I like it, it’s really a want and not a need
I know I could walk around the office and flaunt it
I have the money for it but dang it I got kids to feed!
I’ve been a hankering to go on a long vacation
Go to Pamplona and run with the bulls in the stampede
But I’m getting a little too old for these shenanigans
I’ve been dreaming of skydiving but I got kids to feed!
Though I’m in a good place as far as income is concerned
There was a point when my family had some tough times
I had...
#hope
#family
#LifeStruggles
#food
#humankind
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1 Comment
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 1:08pm
14th Apr 2024 1:08pm
The Universe
The universe is wide.
With stars,sparkly and bright.
That illuminates the night.
And erases all of our fright.
No matter the length or height.
We always look at it as an incredible sight.
Blue,purple,black.
There isn't anything the universe does lack.
Now,let me loud and clear.
The universe is the reason we are here.
With stars,planets,space.
The galaxies dance in grace.
Like dark,magical lace.
That puts a smile on your face.
With nightlights far away.
In our memory and existence,it does...
With stars,sparkly and bright.
That illuminates the night.
And erases all of our fright.
No matter the length or height.
We always look at it as an incredible sight.
Blue,purple,black.
There isn't anything the universe does lack.
Now,let me loud and clear.
The universe is the reason we are here.
With stars,planets,space.
The galaxies dance in grace.
Like dark,magical lace.
That puts a smile on your face.
With nightlights far away.
In our memory and existence,it does...
#hope
#universe
#uplifting #astronomy
#uplifting #astronomy
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