Poems About Happiness by Top Critiquers
#happiness
Poems about happiness by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
ONE OF THE THIRD
I'm one of 'the third'
who go to bed nuuhd,
not donning PJ's
at the end of days
but hit the sack peeled,
as survey revealed.
Go into the night
with bits out of sight
under the covers
(lone or with lovers),
tasting the freedom
from clothes. (Who needs 'em?)
who go to bed nuuhd,
not donning PJ's
at the end of days
but hit the sack peeled,
as survey revealed.
Go into the night
with bits out of sight
under the covers
(lone or with lovers),
tasting the freedom
from clothes. (Who needs 'em?)
#happiness
#night
#sleep
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4 Comments
enough autumn and upbeat crap
Upbeat autumn is nice
Foliage
Burnt orange leaves
Pumpkin spice coffee
How much happiness ?
Tell me that friend
It's just a matter of time
I'll need the usual
Bdsm lullabies
Cold Dungeons
Your welts and bruises
Bringing me pleasure
Foliage
Burnt orange leaves
Pumpkin spice coffee
How much happiness ?
Tell me that friend
It's just a matter of time
I'll need the usual
Bdsm lullabies
Cold Dungeons
Your welts and bruises
Bringing me pleasure
#happiness
#inspirational
#fall #DeepUndergroundPoetry
#fall #DeepUndergroundPoetry
383 reads
14 Comments
Do You Still Believe ? (NoPoo 44)
santa clause has been
merry christmas everyone
hope your wish came true
merry christmas everyone
hope your wish came true
#happiness
#kindness
#hope
#senryu
#Christmas
452 reads
4 Comments
The Ritual
Early morning solitude
Awakens with bird songs
And fading cricket sonatas
Rising dayspring mist resembles
Steam emanating from the kettle
On the brink of a whistle
Sugar and cream float patiently
As the teabag sits primly still
Civilized in its order
Anticipation of the first sip
Matched by the alluring aroma
Of steeping English Breakfast
Not another portion of the day
Will equal these moments
Meant just for me
Alone and quiet
At peace and grateful
Embraced by...
Awakens with bird songs
And fading cricket sonatas
Rising dayspring mist resembles
Steam emanating from the kettle
On the brink of a whistle
Sugar and cream float patiently
As the teabag sits primly still
Civilized in its order
Anticipation of the first sip
Matched by the alluring aroma
Of steeping English Breakfast
Not another portion of the day
Will equal these moments
Meant just for me
Alone and quiet
At peace and grateful
Embraced by...
#happiness
689 reads
29 Comments
The Dreamtime
I'll be making more room for them;
all those twilit hours
percolating my next poem
in the gloaming that empowers...
where night and day both conspire
to set the mind at ease
for the coaxing of desire
by gentle lumen tease.
There the blooms of thought come to mind
like a greenhouse flower
or fruit with a consenting rind
from a teeming bower!
It's a slice of heaven to see,
like a willing lady
who in a frolic will agree...
with a bard who's shady.
all those twilit hours
percolating my next poem
in the gloaming that empowers...
where night and day both conspire
to set the mind at ease
for the coaxing of desire
by gentle lumen tease.
There the blooms of thought come to mind
like a greenhouse flower
or fruit with a consenting rind
from a teeming bower!
It's a slice of heaven to see,
like a willing lady
who in a frolic will agree...
with a bard who's shady.
#happiness
#hope
#love
109 reads
4 Comments
lilac kisses
spring is a flirtatious vixen
eager to sow her precious seeds
& experience a world barely awakening
she dares burst forth
...so full of life...
while snow still blankets the earth
coy little crocuses shoving impatiently through
splashes of purples...yellows...& blues
exuberant & anxious to show her potential
she flaunts her prominent belly
glowing with her fertile beauty
as she births flora & fauna alike
a new year has been born
with all her children gathered at her feet
decadently spawning every color...
eager to sow her precious seeds
& experience a world barely awakening
she dares burst forth
...so full of life...
while snow still blankets the earth
coy little crocuses shoving impatiently through
splashes of purples...yellows...& blues
exuberant & anxious to show her potential
she flaunts her prominent belly
glowing with her fertile beauty
as she births flora & fauna alike
a new year has been born
with all her children gathered at her feet
decadently spawning every color...
#happiness
#nature
#spring
115 reads
10 Comments
Luring Twilight
Embracing the luring twilight
where light and obsidian blend
In the horizon painting the sky
whispering silently by and by
A moonlight serenade
its melody of chandelier
As stars twinkle
embracing the luring twilight
where light and obsidian blend
In the horizon painting the sky
whispering silently by and by
A moonlight serenade
its melody of chandelier
As stars twinkle
embracing the luring twilight
#happiness
#inspirational
#philosophical
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The Touch Of Infinity (Shapeshifter- Desert Warrior)
Two hearts that beat as one
Tender words spoken, easier said than done
Caution thrown to the wind
Emotions and feelings surrendered, a touch of love when our Chi's slowly blend
Euphoric rush, once my soft purrs and his throaty groans to ether we send
Holding tightly and steadfast this is our beginning, infinity has no end
He allows me to silently animate in my suspend, and emotionally recommend
In the cradle of our stolen moments
Words mingled, whispered, entwined
Eight, creeping to a celestial nine ...
Tender words spoken, easier said than done
Caution thrown to the wind
Emotions and feelings surrendered, a touch of love when our Chi's slowly blend
Euphoric rush, once my soft purrs and his throaty groans to ether we send
Holding tightly and steadfast this is our beginning, infinity has no end
He allows me to silently animate in my suspend, and emotionally recommend
In the cradle of our stolen moments
Words mingled, whispered, entwined
Eight, creeping to a celestial nine ...
#lover
#passion
#happiness
#relationships
#fate
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1 Comment
Wayward Poets
Someone goes out early, every morning
to make sure that the welcome mat
is free of leaves
Or during winter, of snow
There's a key, under the mat, but
the door has never been locked
There's always someone
coming or going
To this old, white concrete house
atop the edge of a cliff
-Looks like a fingernail at the end
of a crackled finger
of the old man mountain
Pointing down towards the valley
Those that look up, thinking
is it choosing me
But it's not a path
for the weak hearted
...
to make sure that the welcome mat
is free of leaves
Or during winter, of snow
There's a key, under the mat, but
the door has never been locked
There's always someone
coming or going
To this old, white concrete house
atop the edge of a cliff
-Looks like a fingernail at the end
of a crackled finger
of the old man mountain
Pointing down towards the valley
Those that look up, thinking
is it choosing me
But it's not a path
for the weak hearted
...
#admiration
#happiness
#motivational
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16 Comments
On The Way Down
It was
Supposed to be just for the weekend
But we went off the deep end
And now we meet in different venues
Reading new menus with rare delicacies
In exotic countries overseas
Spending down time in cozy cottages
Log cabins and bamboo huts
This wasn't supposed to be but....
We fell off the deep end...
And went well beyond the weekend
Now we sleep in the same bed
Living in the same house
11 years you've been my spouse...
Supposed to be just for the weekend
But we went off the deep end
And now we meet in different venues
Reading new menus with rare delicacies
In exotic countries overseas
Spending down time in cozy cottages
Log cabins and bamboo huts
This wasn't supposed to be but....
We fell off the deep end...
And went well beyond the weekend
Now we sleep in the same bed
Living in the same house
11 years you've been my spouse...
#happiness
#love
#marriage
#family
#travel
501 reads
6 Comments
Feel Something
You make me feel something, feel something
I just can't describe it, I'm all excited
It's like in the middle of winter, Mother Nature gives me a little bit of spring
I just can't describe it, let me climb on and ride it
The tears that I wept was just the icecaps of my heart melting
Just being in your vicinity, and the heat is sweltering
I'm lifted into the atmosphere among charged particles of air
Lightning flashes and thunder rumbles warning me I'm not supposed to be there
But strength appears in a vessel that had none
I'm so...
I just can't describe it, I'm all excited
It's like in the middle of winter, Mother Nature gives me a little bit of spring
I just can't describe it, let me climb on and ride it
The tears that I wept was just the icecaps of my heart melting
Just being in your vicinity, and the heat is sweltering
I'm lifted into the atmosphere among charged particles of air
Lightning flashes and thunder rumbles warning me I'm not supposed to be there
But strength appears in a vessel that had none
I'm so...
#happiness
#love
311 reads
2 Comments
Fatal Beauty
I am blessed with finest beauty,
I am imprisoned in my own beauty,
I am on the path of the ascetic,
I decide to renunciate the world,
I walk out in the dark of night,
I am oblivious in the quiet night,
I shall be a mystery of the night.
My beauty is my greatest enemy,
My beauty is evil to be my curse,
My beauty becomes my fatal death.
*****
I am imprisoned in my own beauty,
I am on the path of the ascetic,
I decide to renunciate the world,
I walk out in the dark of night,
I am oblivious in the quiet night,
I shall be a mystery of the night.
My beauty is my greatest enemy,
My beauty is evil to be my curse,
My beauty becomes my fatal death.
*****
#happiness
#courage
#redemption #emotions
#redemption #emotions
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DU Poetry : Poems About Happiness by Top Critiquers