Poems About Happiness Seeking Honest Critique
#happiness
Poems about happiness seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
A sample of love
The sound of your voice brings me peace in my core
Pulls me back from the edge and Im lonely no more
Your eyes are like windows to the beauty i adore
Your heart has a tender kindness I have never felt before
You have a smile that can chase away the doubt and fear
The brightness of your essence makes me want you always near
The completeness of your love makes my insecurities disappear
The stormy clouds roll back and your love makes my skies clear
A simple touch from you sends a tingle from head to toe
A hug feels like home, I never...
Pulls me back from the edge and Im lonely no more
Your eyes are like windows to the beauty i adore
Your heart has a tender kindness I have never felt before
You have a smile that can chase away the doubt and fear
The brightness of your essence makes me want you always near
The completeness of your love makes my insecurities disappear
The stormy clouds roll back and your love makes my skies clear
A simple touch from you sends a tingle from head to toe
A hug feels like home, I never...
#beauty
#happiness
#hope #love
#hope #love
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They Will Be My Rhyme, My Reason
For a glimpse
of a glorious,
genuine smile,
that convey's acceptance without
scintilla of guile
for such a sight
I'm good and ready
I'd walk a country Summer's mile,
in the Mojave dessert
to bask in such a welcome grin
and when I arrive
we'd connect our smiles
and fall into an embrace
and they wouldn't
even hesitate
even though
I'm awfully sweaty.
Certainly they'd have
captivating eyes
that bid me come hither.
And beg don't dither,
never again go thither,
but stay right by my...
of a glorious,
genuine smile,
that convey's acceptance without
scintilla of guile
for such a sight
I'm good and ready
I'd walk a country Summer's mile,
in the Mojave dessert
to bask in such a welcome grin
and when I arrive
we'd connect our smiles
and fall into an embrace
and they wouldn't
even hesitate
even though
I'm awfully sweaty.
Certainly they'd have
captivating eyes
that bid me come hither.
And beg don't dither,
never again go thither,
but stay right by my...
#dreams
#funny
#happiness
#hope
#love
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Bonding With My Chief
Long Bow was dad's name
and mine, Straight Arrow
At least once a week
when we'd meet
with our tribe
of YMCA Indian Guides.
Fathers and sons
seated in a circle
all in dark yellow
headband arrayed
each with a real feather displayed
from the tail
of a synthetic bird of prey.
Also, a tan suede vest
with our names burned in
And covered in
primary colored, ironed on badges.
Around our necks
hung an articulated breastplate
we made of genuine bleached bones
with no marrow
from slaughtered ...
and mine, Straight Arrow
At least once a week
when we'd meet
with our tribe
of YMCA Indian Guides.
Fathers and sons
seated in a circle
all in dark yellow
headband arrayed
each with a real feather displayed
from the tail
of a synthetic bird of prey.
Also, a tan suede vest
with our names burned in
And covered in
primary colored, ironed on badges.
Around our necks
hung an articulated breastplate
we made of genuine bleached bones
with no marrow
from slaughtered ...
#family
#father
#happiness
#love
#memories
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2 Comments
Euphoric
Enraptured by the twinkling stars
and their glimmer in his galaxy.
Umbra, release me from the trauma
and deliver me into the light.
Purple ices over the midnight hues,
and the reflection adds the silver lining.
Hanging on to the edge of the sickled moon,
hoping to see far beyond the expanse
orbiting and interwoven by speckles
that accompany me along the way.
Rotating planets foretell my fate
then tuck me away in a dream.
Inspiration returns and struts
alongside my rhythm and flow.
Cosmically lost...
and their glimmer in his galaxy.
Umbra, release me from the trauma
and deliver me into the light.
Purple ices over the midnight hues,
and the reflection adds the silver lining.
Hanging on to the edge of the sickled moon,
hoping to see far beyond the expanse
orbiting and interwoven by speckles
that accompany me along the way.
Rotating planets foretell my fate
then tuck me away in a dream.
Inspiration returns and struts
alongside my rhythm and flow.
Cosmically lost...
#happiness
#love
#NaPoWriMo2024
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16 Comments
Redemption!
By Stanley Collymore
The ultimate realization that
what you were essentially
happily doing all along
and not giving a real damn about the
consequences which your distinctly
selfish actions were simply having
on others was literally wrong; had
to stop; rather genuine apologies
made; and, quite unquestionably
also, new actually crucially clear
irrefutably, behavioural patterns
which sensibly really undertake
necessary remedial courses of
action constructively and quite
permanently, then undertaken! ...
The ultimate realization that
what you were essentially
happily doing all along
and not giving a real damn about the
consequences which your distinctly
selfish actions were simply having
on others was literally wrong; had
to stop; rather genuine apologies
made; and, quite unquestionably
also, new actually crucially clear
irrefutably, behavioural patterns
which sensibly really undertake
necessary remedial courses of
action constructively and quite
permanently, then undertaken! ...
#happiness
#strength
#forgiveness
#motivational
#respect
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Homage to Modern Minstrel Philosophers - First Teacher
Carole, like a benevolent big sister,
entered my young life
as a clarion of joy
after black clouds prefaced the twister
tearing all tender
notions of happiness asunder
with the death of mother.
Important wise truths
taught in mornings
before walking to school.
From a red, portable,
borrowed phonograph
Ms. King taught me
about the seismic power
of loving desire;
the sacrifices
made for love;
the longing for
permanence and
pain of absence
and dissolution.
That a smile
an...
entered my young life
as a clarion of joy
after black clouds prefaced the twister
tearing all tender
notions of happiness asunder
with the death of mother.
Important wise truths
taught in mornings
before walking to school.
From a red, portable,
borrowed phonograph
Ms. King taught me
about the seismic power
of loving desire;
the sacrifices
made for love;
the longing for
permanence and
pain of absence
and dissolution.
That a smile
an...
#happiness
#love
#grief #music
#grief #music
45 reads
4 Comments
Musical Upbringing
When I am most down,
doubting my purpose,
my worth, my utility;
the missing salve
for my wounded heart
is the sound of
a familiar melody
the words and music
long since
tattooed on my brain.
That when played,
with me singing along,
transports me to
the place and time
when first I heard
it's happy, sometimes
melancholy refrain.
My path, is much smoother
when paved
with measures
of soul satisfying notes
songs that give voice
to my innermost thoughts.
And give wings
to my...
doubting my purpose,
my worth, my utility;
the missing salve
for my wounded heart
is the sound of
a familiar melody
the words and music
long since
tattooed on my brain.
That when played,
with me singing along,
transports me to
the place and time
when first I heard
it's happy, sometimes
melancholy refrain.
My path, is much smoother
when paved
with measures
of soul satisfying notes
songs that give voice
to my innermost thoughts.
And give wings
to my...
#happiness
#sadness
#love
#beauty
#music
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2 Comments
Email to David about My Baby Shower
Hi David,
I hope this email finds you well. First, I wanted to express my heartfelt gratitude for your ongoing financial support during this time. Your kindness and generosity mean the world to me, and I truly appreciate it.
Regarding your earlier email about Susan, I haven't seen her in several weeks. I’ll check on her and see if we can visit again. Please let me know if there's anything I can do to help heal your relationship with her. I understand it might seem absurd after everything we've been through, but if there's a chance to mend things and make both of you happier,...
I hope this email finds you well. First, I wanted to express my heartfelt gratitude for your ongoing financial support during this time. Your kindness and generosity mean the world to me, and I truly appreciate it.
Regarding your earlier email about Susan, I haven't seen her in several weeks. I’ll check on her and see if we can visit again. Please let me know if there's anything I can do to help heal your relationship with her. I understand it might seem absurd after everything we've been through, but if there's a chance to mend things and make both of you happier,...
#happiness
#pregnancy
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2 Comments
She's the one
Times were slow,
they could be changing
My life could use some arranging
Now's the time to have some fun
Falling for that special someone
You could open a hidden world
To reveal that hidden pearl
Life it has it's unknown joys
Hidden deep by little girls and boys
Reaching deep into hazy minds
Amazing wonders you may find
Life is a one way street
If by chance, baby we should meet
If I needed a helping hand
To lie, to steal, to take the stand
I know it's you babe, I know it's you
Guide my ship through...
they could be changing
My life could use some arranging
Now's the time to have some fun
Falling for that special someone
You could open a hidden world
To reveal that hidden pearl
Life it has it's unknown joys
Hidden deep by little girls and boys
Reaching deep into hazy minds
Amazing wonders you may find
Life is a one way street
If by chance, baby we should meet
If I needed a helping hand
To lie, to steal, to take the stand
I know it's you babe, I know it's you
Guide my ship through...
#happiness
#love
#relationships
#motivational
#uplifting
71 reads
9 Comments
Be Happy, with respect
I see you get a rush
when you make your girlfriend cry
Is this the only way
that provides you you're high
Stop playing the field
She adored you from the start
You're her true love
Quit tearing out her heart
You'll regret
that day will soon come
She'll leave you once and for all
You'll feel broken, you'll become a chump
when you make your girlfriend cry
Is this the only way
that provides you you're high
Stop playing the field
She adored you from the start
You're her true love
Quit tearing out her heart
You'll regret
that day will soon come
She'll leave you once and for all
You'll feel broken, you'll become a chump
#happiness
#love
#girlfriend
#rhyming
#respect
48 reads
6 Comments
I Call It Happiness
Nature astounds
Filled with many
Possibilities
Filled with many
Possibilities
#happiness
#flowers
#nature
61 reads
11 Comments
Sweet Bay
Petals opening
Sweet magnolia scent
Exhilarating
Sweet magnolia scent
Exhilarating
#happiness
#flowers
#nature
50 reads
9 Comments
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