Poems About Happiness by Top Critiquers
#happiness
Poems about happiness by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
A New Beginning
Unwind the clock
the world's on fire
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
strawberries mean love
rainy day
wash the hate away
birds in my tree
sing a song
mushroom clouds dissipate
a new beginning
the world's on fire
passing the time with song
humming happy thoughts
strawberries mean love
rainy day
wash the hate away
birds in my tree
sing a song
mushroom clouds dissipate
a new beginning
#happiness
#hope
#war
#nature
#uplifting
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Laughter
The other day I made my son read a tricky tongue twister of a poem
And he laughed like he hadn’t laughed in such a long time
He struggled and spat and tried and spat some more all over the phone
It was a verse full of elaborate alliteration and constant rhyme
In the mornings my wife and I have interesting conversations
I wake her up with quips and gags saying things that are kind of…improper
I even make myself the butt of the joke and walk into them
As she laughs I’m left I wondering why I’m not such a panty dropper
Everyday I send...
And he laughed like he hadn’t laughed in such a long time
He struggled and spat and tried and spat some more all over the phone
It was a verse full of elaborate alliteration and constant rhyme
In the mornings my wife and I have interesting conversations
I wake her up with quips and gags saying things that are kind of…improper
I even make myself the butt of the joke and walk into them
As she laughs I’m left I wondering why I’m not such a panty dropper
Everyday I send...
#happiness
#love
#children
#family
#uplifting
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4 Comments
This boot was made for walking…
Bone graft from my heel
Plates and screws
All so my midfoot can fuse
Don’t let that fool you
I still get around
I’m the sexiest bitch on wheels
And this boot
Seven weeks on my ass
Is over
It’s time to move!
Still got that strut
Not in stilettos
Yet
Plates and screws
All so my midfoot can fuse
Don’t let that fool you
I still get around
I’m the sexiest bitch on wheels
And this boot
Seven weeks on my ass
Is over
It’s time to move!
Still got that strut
Not in stilettos
Yet
#happiness
#hope
#illness
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14 Comments
natural things
I was desolate in the black ink
my mind wander to you
and the blue of things began to bleed from soul
I was corrupted thoughts inside
I ache in the moment
seeking a way out
your pull on me was all consuming
my void too great
I sulk among the sunflowers
speaking in tongues to the natural things
secrets not to be troubled by humanity
I watered my heart there
where blue meets green
I was whole in the red of things
and I could go on again
my mind wander to you
and the blue of things began to bleed from soul
I was corrupted thoughts inside
I ache in the moment
seeking a way out
your pull on me was all consuming
my void too great
I sulk among the sunflowers
speaking in tongues to the natural things
secrets not to be troubled by humanity
I watered my heart there
where blue meets green
I was whole in the red of things
and I could go on again
#happiness
#sadness
#nature
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6 Comments
LISTENING TO THE RAIN
SITTING
in my car relaxing
for a moment watching
and listening to the rain
tap dancing beautiful
music and messages
FROM YOU.
The weather is cold,
but a warmth flows over
me as I think of you,
feel you in my heart beat.
I see your beauty in
the patterns on the windshield;
your body dances in the
memories of my mind.
MY
body is totally possessed
from my forehead to my soles.
As I listen and watch
you in the movie in my mind
my hand slowly moves to
the expansion you are creating
in my...
in my car relaxing
for a moment watching
and listening to the rain
tap dancing beautiful
music and messages
FROM YOU.
The weather is cold,
but a warmth flows over
me as I think of you,
feel you in my heart beat.
I see your beauty in
the patterns on the windshield;
your body dances in the
memories of my mind.
MY
body is totally possessed
from my forehead to my soles.
As I listen and watch
you in the movie in my mind
my hand slowly moves to
the expansion you are creating
in my...
#happiness
#love
#motivational
#inspirational
#emotions
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8 Comments
Proof of Life
In the westward sky is a crow's clear caw.
A visceral proof of life.
That there joyously exists more than just our strife.
It soared mystically deep into the baby blue
and fluffy white blissful unknown.
In the north sky
gathers a small murder of crows,
with their chaotic excitable moan.
A folktale goes that the crows congregate
to hover and decide another crow's fate.
Place a scavenger of death in a vast cheerful sky.
You realize a great many days are void of a why
They are just proof of life.
So feel alive!
A visceral proof of life.
That there joyously exists more than just our strife.
It soared mystically deep into the baby blue
and fluffy white blissful unknown.
In the north sky
gathers a small murder of crows,
with their chaotic excitable moan.
A folktale goes that the crows congregate
to hover and decide another crow's fate.
Place a scavenger of death in a vast cheerful sky.
You realize a great many days are void of a why
They are just proof of life.
So feel alive!
#happiness
#birds
#sky #fate
#sky #fate
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The Ritual
Early morning solitude
Awakens with bird songs
And fading cricket sonatas
Rising dayspring mist resembles
Steam emanating from the kettle
On the brink of a whistle
Sugar and cream float patiently
As the teabag sits primly still
Civilized in its order
Anticipation of the first sip
Matched by the alluring aroma
Of steeping English Breakfast
Not another portion of the day
Will equal these moments
Meant just for me
Alone and quiet
At peace and grateful
Embraced by...
Awakens with bird songs
And fading cricket sonatas
Rising dayspring mist resembles
Steam emanating from the kettle
On the brink of a whistle
Sugar and cream float patiently
As the teabag sits primly still
Civilized in its order
Anticipation of the first sip
Matched by the alluring aroma
Of steeping English Breakfast
Not another portion of the day
Will equal these moments
Meant just for me
Alone and quiet
At peace and grateful
Embraced by...
#happiness
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29 Comments
MY BLOSSOMING HEART
Your soft arms sweetly hold it
And strong hands gently mold it
You've taken it from very lonely
To make it your one and only
Beating faster with each touch
Its thumping now, so very much.
So very more than it has ever been
You have brought it to life again
Bringing the rhythm back slowly
Like a planted seed you grow me.
Into a flower that is in full bloom
Out from my darkened ugly doom
Is now gone and proudly showing
The love inside that keeps growing
All from your tender loving care
Now I'm giving with much to share....
And strong hands gently mold it
You've taken it from very lonely
To make it your one and only
Beating faster with each touch
Its thumping now, so very much.
So very more than it has ever been
You have brought it to life again
Bringing the rhythm back slowly
Like a planted seed you grow me.
Into a flower that is in full bloom
Out from my darkened ugly doom
Is now gone and proudly showing
The love inside that keeps growing
All from your tender loving care
Now I'm giving with much to share....
#happiness
#kindness
#gratitude
#admiration
#emotions
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full moon *
full moon,
desperate
for attention,
your
celestial light
is a
majestic
presence,
and
the one
i love,
those
soft charms,
i will
gladly accept
your poet's
rhymes,
desperate
for attention,
your
celestial light
is a
majestic
presence,
and
the one
i love,
those
soft charms,
i will
gladly accept
your poet's
rhymes,
#happiness
#inspirational
#moon
#admiration
#emotions
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enough autumn and upbeat crap
Upbeat autumn is nice
Foliage
Burnt orange leaves
Pumpkin spice coffee
How much happiness ?
Tell me that friend
It's just a matter of time
I'll need the usual
Bdsm lullabies
Cold Dungeons
Your welts and bruises
Bringing me pleasure
Foliage
Burnt orange leaves
Pumpkin spice coffee
How much happiness ?
Tell me that friend
It's just a matter of time
I'll need the usual
Bdsm lullabies
Cold Dungeons
Your welts and bruises
Bringing me pleasure
#happiness
#inspirational
#fall #DeepUndergroundPoetry
#fall #DeepUndergroundPoetry
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This Revolution will not be televised
Been there and back
from the cruelty of various cultures
mocking a different stride of life—
color, accent, hairstyle, nationality—
dining on the doubt and insecurity
of a vulnerable crowd
—wore that mantle for years
almost believed what they said. . .
until realization hatched
Fastforward:
Now, I eat bullies for breakfast—
feed gossip mongers to pigeons;
machete paths with their razor tongues
to reveal jungles of doubt and insecurity
they attempted to camouflage
all with...
from the cruelty of various cultures
mocking a different stride of life—
color, accent, hairstyle, nationality—
dining on the doubt and insecurity
of a vulnerable crowd
—wore that mantle for years
almost believed what they said. . .
until realization hatched
Fastforward:
Now, I eat bullies for breakfast—
feed gossip mongers to pigeons;
machete paths with their razor tongues
to reveal jungles of doubt and insecurity
they attempted to camouflage
all with...
#happiness
#love
#LifeAsAWriter #WritingPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter #WritingPoetry
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31 Comments
ONE OF THE THIRD
I'm one of 'the third'
who go to bed nuuhd,
not donning PJ's
at the end of days
but hit the sack peeled,
as survey revealed.
Go into the night
with bits out of sight
under the covers
(lone or with lovers),
tasting the freedom
from clothes. (Who needs 'em?)
who go to bed nuuhd,
not donning PJ's
at the end of days
but hit the sack peeled,
as survey revealed.
Go into the night
with bits out of sight
under the covers
(lone or with lovers),
tasting the freedom
from clothes. (Who needs 'em?)
#happiness
#night
#sleep
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4 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Happiness by Top Critiquers