Poems About Happiness by Top Critiquers
#happiness
Poems about happiness by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
YOU DON'T KNOW
You are my sweet
baby, for I would die,
I'd pick the stars for
you from the sky.
I want to hold you
within my arms,
To keep you safe from
all type of harms.
My love is pure
eternal and true,
Inside my heart is
a place for only you.
It's you I love and
have given my heart,
To live entire life
and not jast a part.
You are gorgeous,
sexy and so very fine,
You don't know what
I'd do to make you mine
baby, for I would die,
I'd pick the stars for
you from the sky.
I want to hold you
within my arms,
To keep you safe from
all type of harms.
My love is pure
eternal and true,
Inside my heart is
a place for only you.
It's you I love and
have given my heart,
To live entire life
and not jast a part.
You are gorgeous,
sexy and so very fine,
You don't know what
I'd do to make you mine
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
#respect
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2 Comments
Champagne, anyone?
a vessel standing proudly elegant
created fashionably to embrace delight
sweetness of celebratory champagne
sparkling with fizz of sweet refrain
golden bubbles delicate fizzes
it's stem caressed with delicate touches
the crystal curves a work of art,
celebrations celebrated piece of heart
bubbling with sipped ardour
lips touching rim with candour
tongue tasting the passion
of bubbly champagne
raise the glass let merriment overflow
in jubilation let the champagne flow.
created fashionably to embrace delight
sweetness of celebratory champagne
sparkling with fizz of sweet refrain
golden bubbles delicate fizzes
it's stem caressed with delicate touches
the crystal curves a work of art,
celebrations celebrated piece of heart
bubbling with sipped ardour
lips touching rim with candour
tongue tasting the passion
of bubbly champagne
raise the glass let merriment overflow
in jubilation let the champagne flow.
#happiness
#alcohol
88 reads
9 Comments
My Heart's Future
Still my heart beats for you my love
while the sun rises each day and I
am awake to see it I know my life
has meaning. If you read this you
will know our love continues as
time moves on and every day it
grows.
Nothing makes me hungrier for
you than to see you lying next to
me waking in the light of a new
day with our future to be written.
If I wake with this future waiting
for me I know I have to enjoy this
day and every other to the full and
show you how much you mean to
me.
while the sun rises each day and I
am awake to see it I know my life
has meaning. If you read this you
will know our love continues as
time moves on and every day it
grows.
Nothing makes me hungrier for
you than to see you lying next to
me waking in the light of a new
day with our future to be written.
If I wake with this future waiting
for me I know I have to enjoy this
day and every other to the full and
show you how much you mean to
me.
#happiness
#love
#hope #emotions
#hope #emotions
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5 Comments
A sample of love
The sound of your voice brings me peace in my core
Pulls me back from the edge and Im lonely no more
Your eyes are like windows to the beauty i adore
Your heart has a tender kindness I have never felt before
You have a smile that can chase away the doubt and fear
The brightness of your essence makes me want you always near
The completeness of your love makes my insecurities disappear
The stormy clouds roll back and your love makes my skies clear
A simple touch from you sends a tingle from head to toe
A hug feels like home, I never...
Pulls me back from the edge and Im lonely no more
Your eyes are like windows to the beauty i adore
Your heart has a tender kindness I have never felt before
You have a smile that can chase away the doubt and fear
The brightness of your essence makes me want you always near
The completeness of your love makes my insecurities disappear
The stormy clouds roll back and your love makes my skies clear
A simple touch from you sends a tingle from head to toe
A hug feels like home, I never...
#beauty
#happiness
#hope #love
#hope #love
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4 Comments
Then and Now
Neath horizon
Turning still
Belted distance
Whence gravity
Casting time
As matters align
Forming planes
Energy exchange
Before the sun
Crescent bestowing
Of the night
Polar invert
Relative posing
The atmospheric
Where resolute
Below here
While the moon
Eons ago
Befallen traverses
Rising upon
Once image
Day beckoning
As near away
Existing sight
What light drew
Amazing amassing
Spinning softly
Waves...
Turning still
Belted distance
Whence gravity
Casting time
As matters align
Forming planes
Energy exchange
Before the sun
Crescent bestowing
Of the night
Polar invert
Relative posing
The atmospheric
Where resolute
Below here
While the moon
Eons ago
Befallen traverses
Rising upon
Once image
Day beckoning
As near away
Existing sight
What light drew
Amazing amassing
Spinning softly
Waves...
#happiness
#hope
#motivational
#inspirational
#uplifting
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2 Comments
Crazy Happiness
Be the person you
want to be
By doing what
makes you happy
Be crazy sometimes
Have some fun
But always remember
Treat the Ladies
With Kindness and Respect
While being there
for them when
they need you
to comfort them
So don't worry
Be Happy
want to be
By doing what
makes you happy
Be crazy sometimes
Have some fun
But always remember
Treat the Ladies
With Kindness and Respect
While being there
for them when
they need you
to comfort them
So don't worry
Be Happy
#happiness
#kindness
#hope
#women
#respect
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11 Comments
Feel Something
You make me feel something, feel something
I just can't describe it, I'm all excited
It's like in the middle of winter, Mother Nature gives me a little bit of spring
I just can't describe it, let me climb on and ride it
The tears that I wept was just the icecaps of my heart melting
Just being in your vicinity, and the heat is sweltering
I'm lifted into the atmosphere among charged particles of air
Lightning flashes and thunder rumbles warning me I'm not supposed to be there
But strength appears in a vessel that had none
I'm so...
I just can't describe it, I'm all excited
It's like in the middle of winter, Mother Nature gives me a little bit of spring
I just can't describe it, let me climb on and ride it
The tears that I wept was just the icecaps of my heart melting
Just being in your vicinity, and the heat is sweltering
I'm lifted into the atmosphere among charged particles of air
Lightning flashes and thunder rumbles warning me I'm not supposed to be there
But strength appears in a vessel that had none
I'm so...
#happiness
#love
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2 Comments
This Revolution will not be televised
Been there and back
from the cruelty of various cultures
mocking a different stride of life—
color, accent, hairstyle, nationality—
dining on the doubt and insecurity
of a vulnerable crowd
—wore that mantle for years
almost believed what they said. . .
until realization hatched
Fastforward:
Now, I eat bullies for breakfast—
feed gossip mongers to pigeons;
machete paths with their razor tongues
to reveal jungles of doubt and insecurity
they attempted to camouflage
all with...
from the cruelty of various cultures
mocking a different stride of life—
color, accent, hairstyle, nationality—
dining on the doubt and insecurity
of a vulnerable crowd
—wore that mantle for years
almost believed what they said. . .
until realization hatched
Fastforward:
Now, I eat bullies for breakfast—
feed gossip mongers to pigeons;
machete paths with their razor tongues
to reveal jungles of doubt and insecurity
they attempted to camouflage
all with...
#happiness
#love
#LifeAsAWriter #WritingPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter #WritingPoetry
1019 reads
31 Comments
A Plum Position!
All poets need a poet tree;
mine gives a golden plum,
in late July heat guarantee
and stoma flux therefrom.
In spring, of course, it blossoms white
like newly driven snow,
and often in the lunar light
it gives a golden glow!
In autumn it turns gold again
when leaves begin to spill...
their hot and humid mise-en-scene
delivered chlorophyll.
But anytime the year around
I'll sit beneath the limb
that grew itself out to the ground
to arch upon a whim... ...
mine gives a golden plum,
in late July heat guarantee
and stoma flux therefrom.
In spring, of course, it blossoms white
like newly driven snow,
and often in the lunar light
it gives a golden glow!
In autumn it turns gold again
when leaves begin to spill...
their hot and humid mise-en-scene
delivered chlorophyll.
But anytime the year around
I'll sit beneath the limb
that grew itself out to the ground
to arch upon a whim... ...
#happiness
#inspirational
#gratitude
116 reads
8 Comments
Laughter
The other day I made my son read a tricky tongue twister of a poem
And he laughed like he hadn’t laughed in such a long time
He struggled and spat and tried and spat some more all over the phone
It was a verse full of elaborate alliteration and constant rhyme
In the mornings my wife and I have interesting conversations
I wake her up with quips and gags saying things that are kind of…improper
I even make myself the butt of the joke and walk into them
As she laughs I’m left I wondering why I’m not such a panty dropper
Everyday I send...
And he laughed like he hadn’t laughed in such a long time
He struggled and spat and tried and spat some more all over the phone
It was a verse full of elaborate alliteration and constant rhyme
In the mornings my wife and I have interesting conversations
I wake her up with quips and gags saying things that are kind of…improper
I even make myself the butt of the joke and walk into them
As she laughs I’m left I wondering why I’m not such a panty dropper
Everyday I send...
#happiness
#love
#children
#family
#uplifting
137 reads
4 Comments
Glitter
She flung glitter
across my nights sky
so they were a little lighter . . .
Then she did the same with my heart.
across my nights sky
so they were a little lighter . . .
Then she did the same with my heart.
#happiness
#love
#hope
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1 Comment
I Have Ran With The Wind
I can now lay my weary soul to rest
Hear the thunder of my feet as my tears in remembrance, eyes have silently wept
I was one with the wind my trail of glory in every breath living my passion with a smile
My sweat, my thrive in every accumulating mile
I soared in freedom as my heart and mind to Mother Earth I once beautifully commend
My blood spillage unto gun fire, tears unto those left behind, whereas, my absence I can never blend into humanity again
At peace in the cradle of God’s plan, the will to choose thy path given to every man
I go now, justice for...
Hear the thunder of my feet as my tears in remembrance, eyes have silently wept
I was one with the wind my trail of glory in every breath living my passion with a smile
My sweat, my thrive in every accumulating mile
I soared in freedom as my heart and mind to Mother Earth I once beautifully commend
My blood spillage unto gun fire, tears unto those left behind, whereas, my absence I can never blend into humanity again
At peace in the cradle of God’s plan, the will to choose thy path given to every man
I go now, justice for...
#happiness
#morality
#passion
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14 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Happiness by Top Critiquers