Poems About Deception Seeking Honest Critique
#deception
Poems about deception seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
drone
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 11:16am
2nd Oct 2024 11:16am
Vengeance
It is said
History between people's
By it's very nature
Can and does
Become corrupted
By the ghosts
Within the the Darkness
In the minds of those
Who listen
To the Shadows
That demand
The circle of Pain
Should never be broken
History between people's
By it's very nature
Can and does
Become corrupted
By the ghosts
Within the the Darkness
In the minds of those
Who listen
To the Shadows
That demand
The circle of Pain
Should never be broken
#anger
#betrayal
#conflict
#deception
#revenge
73 reads
0 Comments
Poetryman
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 7:20pm
22nd Sep 2024 7:20pm
Finding Out About You
Peering through the Lens
I spotted the real you
The lie you portrayed
Displayed your disguise
Just one more dark curse
Placed on my already fading eyes
behind exhaled strings of vapor rings
A beautiful Siren of the sea (blink)
The ancient sea hag now Gazing up at me
Just another witch spelling the death of me
As your mysterious dark fog clouds my lonely path
Always hiding behind your nicotine stained glass
Where only shades of Gray Hyde Dorian's true face
Time to make this apparition vanish without a trace
I spotted the real you
The lie you portrayed
Displayed your disguise
Just one more dark curse
Placed on my already fading eyes
behind exhaled strings of vapor rings
A beautiful Siren of the sea (blink)
The ancient sea hag now Gazing up at me
Just another witch spelling the death of me
As your mysterious dark fog clouds my lonely path
Always hiding behind your nicotine stained glass
Where only shades of Gray Hyde Dorian's true face
Time to make this apparition vanish without a trace
#betrayal
#deception
#lies #seductive
#lies #seductive
162 reads
3 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 2:54pm
22nd Sep 2024 2:54pm
Government is a Scam
Government is a sanctioned shell game that lets contributing and controlling businesses make gobs of money out the wazoo while sticking "it" deep into me and you
Well Damn It's a Scam
Whether by truck, plane, or tram
Do crime against Big Business
And with Fed Tyme you'll be slammed
Reagan "fired" striking air traffic controllers
Canada's Prime Minister "intervened" against the railroad workers
Biden "took an interest" and "offered assistance" for Teamsters and rail workers to find resolution...
Well Damn It's a Scam
Whether by truck, plane, or tram
Do crime against Big Business
And with Fed Tyme you'll be slammed
Reagan "fired" striking air traffic controllers
Canada's Prime Minister "intervened" against the railroad workers
Biden "took an interest" and "offered assistance" for Teamsters and rail workers to find resolution...
#corruption
#deception
#politics #power
#politics #power
81 reads
3 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2024 11:42am
22nd Sep 2024 11:42am
You're Fired
Folks hot and eager to deport
will be no friends of mine
since disenfranchisement, for sport,
is evil by design.
By and large their rage is the same
as those who call for war
or play the game wherein they blame
the destitute and more.
It's always downward that they punch
like Nazis did to Jews;
divide and conquer by the bunch
then up spin in the news.
The bullies don't want us to know
how angry they can be
like when there's ketchup that they throw...
when someone won't agree.
will be no friends of mine
since disenfranchisement, for sport,
is evil by design.
By and large their rage is the same
as those who call for war
or play the game wherein they blame
the destitute and more.
It's always downward that they punch
like Nazis did to Jews;
divide and conquer by the bunch
then up spin in the news.
The bullies don't want us to know
how angry they can be
like when there's ketchup that they throw...
when someone won't agree.
#addiction
#deception
#oppression
#racism
#vulnerability
91 reads
7 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Sep 2024 10:11pm
19th Sep 2024 10:11pm
A Tragic Misfortune
The longest year,
sheds new light,
into the shade
onward into battle
the demigods inherit,
the new night,
into the light
forsake the liberation
promising to all
an ambush of deception
sheds new light,
into the shade
onward into battle
the demigods inherit,
the new night,
into the light
forsake the liberation
promising to all
an ambush of deception
#betrayal
#deception
#lies
#manipulation
#war
68 reads
6 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
18th Sep 2024 8:07pm
18th Sep 2024 8:07pm
Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
We did that
It was messy but that's where the lust lay
When the guilt bit hard
You wanted to be friends
We all know that's bullshit
Crash and burn lullaby
Nobody survives that unscathed
Then finally we became nothing
I don't hate you
I don't feel nothing
I don't even want to grudge fuck ya
Remember the old days
Bending you over my work desk
On overtime no less
Getting paid for our sins
That was something
We are a zero sum babe
I don't know if you cheated on me
We were already cheating on...
It was messy but that's where the lust lay
When the guilt bit hard
You wanted to be friends
We all know that's bullshit
Crash and burn lullaby
Nobody survives that unscathed
Then finally we became nothing
I don't hate you
I don't feel nothing
I don't even want to grudge fuck ya
Remember the old days
Bending you over my work desk
On overtime no less
Getting paid for our sins
That was something
We are a zero sum babe
I don't know if you cheated on me
We were already cheating on...
#betrayal
#deception
#dirty
#lies
#lust
190 reads
22 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 9:40pm
17th Sep 2024 9:40pm
You've been a scumbag from day one
Tell me something, how did you score so high on your Aptitude test?
Did you know the answers or did you just guess?
Goddamn, This is some really good ice cream!
Would you like some of it?
Oh, I forgot, You're lactose intolerant
Makes you fart, you scared all the chicks away
The only friends you have, are the ones you're able to pay
Careful what you say Beefy
Do you think it comes that easy?
Do you think that dreams come true?
No one in the sky can hear you
Take a deep breath and count to 50
Always a liar, guzzling down bottles of...
Did you know the answers or did you just guess?
Goddamn, This is some really good ice cream!
Would you like some of it?
Oh, I forgot, You're lactose intolerant
Makes you fart, you scared all the chicks away
The only friends you have, are the ones you're able to pay
Careful what you say Beefy
Do you think it comes that easy?
Do you think that dreams come true?
No one in the sky can hear you
Take a deep breath and count to 50
Always a liar, guzzling down bottles of...
#anger
#CallToAction
#deception
#hate
#rhyming
101 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 3:12pm
17th Sep 2024 3:12pm
gulible
vicious invitation black is the way morbid spirits
they can see your intentions
already in line to rectify the wrongs
growing tired of being amis
letting go of my need
the Grigori watch carefully
i've intervened on their behalf
turn time's attention forward
be kind to my heart
suffering the red walls of denial
a maze I'm lost in
ultimately growing is the point
won't you grow a thousand poppies
so I can sleep my mind veiled
I'm frightened, a soul so cold is on the hunt
devastating the way my...
they can see your intentions
already in line to rectify the wrongs
growing tired of being amis
letting go of my need
the Grigori watch carefully
i've intervened on their behalf
turn time's attention forward
be kind to my heart
suffering the red walls of denial
a maze I'm lost in
ultimately growing is the point
won't you grow a thousand poppies
so I can sleep my mind veiled
I'm frightened, a soul so cold is on the hunt
devastating the way my...
#betrayal
#deception
58 reads
0 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 11:21am
15th Sep 2024 11:21am
Public relations
You need a piano room.
Key players lucky strike.
As smoke and mirrors plume.
Illusions left and Reich.
Tune your minds to ivory bars.
In high C up and floats about.
Freudian slip on bananas.
Throw your torch of freedom out.
Key players lucky strike.
As smoke and mirrors plume.
Illusions left and Reich.
Tune your minds to ivory bars.
In high C up and floats about.
Freudian slip on bananas.
Throw your torch of freedom out.
#corruption
#deception
#ignorance #politics
#ignorance #politics
86 reads
6 Comments
TimWombles
Poem Published
11th Sep 2024 00:03am
11th Sep 2024 00:03am
Rise Above
I used to see that sparkle in your eyes
But now the light seems dim
Buried under a mountain of lies
Only because you believed in him
I used to see your wonderful smile
But now that smile has disappeared
Sit down next to me for awhile
Things aren't as bad as you feared
Just because you were fooled by someone
Someone you thought loved you
Nothing you did wrong, could have been anyone
There was nothing you could do
Just because the one you loved was a fool
Just because you took a chance on love
No way you could...
But now the light seems dim
Buried under a mountain of lies
Only because you believed in him
I used to see your wonderful smile
But now that smile has disappeared
Sit down next to me for awhile
Things aren't as bad as you feared
Just because you were fooled by someone
Someone you thought loved you
Nothing you did wrong, could have been anyone
There was nothing you could do
Just because the one you loved was a fool
Just because you took a chance on love
No way you could...
#betrayal
#breakup
#deception #MovingOn
#deception #MovingOn
110 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 11:18am
6th Sep 2024 11:18am
Sweet Talk
She hates guys
She says they have brains in their cocks
She says that she can tell that I'm different
I'm going over to her house tonight to get in her pants and sell her the Brooklyn Bridge
She says they have brains in their cocks
She says that she can tell that I'm different
I'm going over to her house tonight to get in her pants and sell her the Brooklyn Bridge
#deception
#friendship
#lies
#manipulation
#sex
115 reads
10 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
4th Sep 2024 9:44pm
4th Sep 2024 9:44pm
Evangelicals
Knowing nothing significant
they can't think for themselves
amid their Bible verse and rant
with logic left on shelves.
So overcome with fear are they...
they shit themselves a bit
then offer thoughts when they all pray
with half a rural wit.
Point this out and they get bent
within their pale skin,
which never once was heaven sent
since all they do is sin.
And why not cheat since Jesus saves
in tacit sin support
so Jesus freaks can go to raves...
or bribe a Supreme Court.
they can't think for themselves
amid their Bible verse and rant
with logic left on shelves.
So overcome with fear are they...
they shit themselves a bit
then offer thoughts when they all pray
with half a rural wit.
Point this out and they get bent
within their pale skin,
which never once was heaven sent
since all they do is sin.
And why not cheat since Jesus saves
in tacit sin support
so Jesus freaks can go to raves...
or bribe a Supreme Court.
#corruption
#deception
#ignorance #politics
#ignorance #politics
191 reads
17 Comments
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