Poems About Deception Seeking Honest Critique
#deception
Poems about deception seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
26th Feb 2025 1:27am
26th Feb 2025 1:27am
Scars
Scars
The scars of Satan
Can only be seen when I’m naked
The blood in my eyes tells me I’m jaded
I desecrate those who I come into
Jesus what’s your latest sin now
Who’d you sacrifice to be your disciple
Wings of Icarus here comes your son now
Now I step into my clothes again
They hide the sins I want to hide from you
The scars of Satan
Can only be used when I’m naked
The blood in my eyes tells me I’m faded
I desecrate those who I come into
Jesus what’s your...
The scars of Satan
Can only be seen when I’m naked
The blood in my eyes tells me I’m jaded
I desecrate those who I come into
Jesus what’s your latest sin now
Who’d you sacrifice to be your disciple
Wings of Icarus here comes your son now
Now I step into my clothes again
They hide the sins I want to hide from you
The scars of Satan
Can only be used when I’m naked
The blood in my eyes tells me I’m faded
I desecrate those who I come into
Jesus what’s your...
#betrayal
#deception
#devil #God
#devil #God
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 3:25am
24th Feb 2025 3:25am
The Boogeyman
The story teller of words ✍️ do you know who is the Boogeyman, for sure do you believe that someone is pulling the strings, of the puppet Master. (DROP THE MIC 🎤🔥🔥🔥) For as the new administration is finally in full force to uncovering, things that the dusted government didn't, want us to know, 🤨 as American citizens of the United States of America. 🤔. For sure now that they are uncovered the deepness and power of the Democrats party, to much funds are being funded by chance going into someone else's account. 😕 But yet all...
#corruption
#deception
#murder
#politics
#war
60 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 9:24am
19th Feb 2025 9:24am
Parasick Mind Virus
Why do you find it
So fucking Hard
To Believe it's True
Why Think about it
When it's all over the net
Even Gp chat wikapedia Google
And most podcasts
All say it's True
But No
You have to Think about it
What can I say
When it's Something
That could well Affect us All
I drag out my Commonsense
Logical Reasoning
Kicking and Screaming
And make them
Do some work
Its a Real Bitch sometimes
But for people like you
Its easy to believe
You Have
What i...
So fucking Hard
To Believe it's True
Why Think about it
When it's all over the net
Even Gp chat wikapedia Google
And most podcasts
All say it's True
But No
You have to Think about it
What can I say
When it's Something
That could well Affect us All
I drag out my Commonsense
Logical Reasoning
Kicking and Screaming
And make them
Do some work
Its a Real Bitch sometimes
But for people like you
Its easy to believe
You Have
What i...
#betrayal
#deception
#honesty
#lies
#TruthOfLife
58 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 1:17am
19th Feb 2025 1:17am
fact is (and always will be ..)
don’t do new musicians or authors
or films much
as I read the reviews
I prefer the old stuff like
the beatles trad jazz louis mcniece
old black and white
cinematography anything that doesn’t confuse
truth with lies
or films much
as I read the reviews
I prefer the old stuff like
the beatles trad jazz louis mcniece
old black and white
cinematography anything that doesn’t confuse
truth with lies
#betrayal
#deception
#lies #manipulation
#lies #manipulation
87 reads
6 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
12th Feb 2025 7:37am
12th Feb 2025 7:37am
Last Stand in Honky Land: 1945 style
No kraut could make a baby fast enough
once the world caught on to their sick plan
where they thought their "master race" was so tough
that they'd win all of the fights they began...
and now, eighty years on, their curse is back,
where paleface thinks they own the world
and will not share it with the brown and black
or have their blood be by nature swirled
and by that spin a worthy future make
where turpitude no longer serves to pay,
for sabotage, or any news that's fake,
just for the worst of us to have their way...
the...
once the world caught on to their sick plan
where they thought their "master race" was so tough
that they'd win all of the fights they began...
and now, eighty years on, their curse is back,
where paleface thinks they own the world
and will not share it with the brown and black
or have their blood be by nature swirled
and by that spin a worthy future make
where turpitude no longer serves to pay,
for sabotage, or any news that's fake,
just for the worst of us to have their way...
the...
#Christian
#deception
#ignorance
#politics
#racism
73 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 11:27pm
6th Feb 2025 11:27pm
In search of inner peace
Through this subject of the course of our lives, when we have to learn to make real life decisions. FOR sure it's gonna be hard, yet it's necessary to understand what it will take to be able to achieve, that what is necessary to have that kind of life. THAT you crave and want and need, to sustain a beautiful quality of life. For sure there will be moments in your life, that you yourself will have to question yourself to realize, that there will be things outside of your own control, as you have to be able to understand the realistically. WHAT you will have to do to correct your own...
#betrayal
#deception
#ForbiddenLove
#regret
#relationships
74 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 2:47pm
5th Feb 2025 2:47pm
How will you know
They say that through this passage of life, we will go through somethings in order, to get the full true understanding of how life truly works, whether for you are against you in search of what you want and need. How will you know that the next person, 🤔 that tries to walk into your life and world. YOU have to learn to listen, not to only what they say, but what they came to do, for if they ain't coming in your life with a positive attitude with real communications skills. TO articulate to you and show you there honestly and truth and trust, just stop and look and listen not to your...
#betrayal
#conflict
#deception
#manipulation
#separation
61 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 8:42am
5th Feb 2025 8:42am
Lizard Minded. Capitalism
It is said
It is only
Moral Capitalism
That can save
Our way of life
That we know
Or we will be
Forever Chained
To the Lizard Minded
Capitalism
We Suffer From
Today
It is only
Moral Capitalism
That can save
Our way of life
That we know
Or we will be
Forever Chained
To the Lizard Minded
Capitalism
We Suffer From
Today
#betrayal
#deception
#honesty
#lies
#TruthOfLife
70 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 11:19pm
4th Feb 2025 11:19pm
Pandora's box
Here we are in a new wave of massive execution of the wrong, doing of all these government agents mind games, to fool the Americans people's in to believing that they have our best interest at heart. Yet beneath the spider 🕸️ webs lays corruption and greed for MONEY 💰 AND POWER. FOR SURE A CHANGE is happening within the deep SOUTH of the government, for it's true as you see and hear mass lay off told to the workers not to return back to work. But yet we see the resistance of those who were supposed to be in charge. For sure we as Americans deserve to know, where is the...
#corruption
#deception
#HumanRights
#politics
#power
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 10:47am
31st Jan 2025 10:47am
The Life Of A Rockstar
Love call for Rockstars:
Define
Confine
Enshrine
Then:
Dethrone
Disown
Bemoan
After ten years:
Exhume
Resume
Consume
Baby, you're gonna be ok.
Define
Confine
Enshrine
Then:
Dethrone
Disown
Bemoan
After ten years:
Exhume
Resume
Consume
Baby, you're gonna be ok.
#deception
#manipulation
#minimalist
#music
#PopCulture
108 reads
16 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 4:56am
30th Jan 2025 4:56am
Toxic Crazy Baby
I have happened upon
A whirlpool of blue in your eyes.
Behold, I am spellbound—
Suspended as a porcelain doll
Hung in a windstorm.
It is doomsday in wonderland.
The awe of you has left me cuckoo
As all reason abandons me,
And I am sucked into the black hole
Where your heart should be.
Only grippy socks and origami
Can save me now.
A whirlpool of blue in your eyes.
Behold, I am spellbound—
Suspended as a porcelain doll
Hung in a windstorm.
It is doomsday in wonderland.
The awe of you has left me cuckoo
As all reason abandons me,
And I am sucked into the black hole
Where your heart should be.
Only grippy socks and origami
Can save me now.
#betrayal
#curse
#deception
#lies
#love
86 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 11:12pm
28th Jan 2025 11:12pm
Deepseek
Buddy fucker MAGA rules
but not for very long
cuz A.I. went to Chinese schools
to sing a public song.
Now buddy fucker Wall Street bros
can't scoop the public dough,
since tech lords took a techno doze
as Cathay stole the show.
But maybe Duolingo stock
is where we should invest,
as we learn how the Chinese talk
before we take the test...
that gets more workers to pitch in
where paychecks will be cashed,
in Hanyu and old Mandarin...
as Hegseth just gets smashed.
but not for very long
cuz A.I. went to Chinese schools
to sing a public song.
Now buddy fucker Wall Street bros
can't scoop the public dough,
since tech lords took a techno doze
as Cathay stole the show.
But maybe Duolingo stock
is where we should invest,
as we learn how the Chinese talk
before we take the test...
that gets more workers to pitch in
where paychecks will be cashed,
in Hanyu and old Mandarin...
as Hegseth just gets smashed.
#deception
#ignorance
114 reads
10 Comments
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