Poems About Deception Seeking Honest Critique
#deception
Poems about deception seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 3:34am
5th Nov 2024 3:34am
WHEN IT'S OVER
Here we are going through the process of voting, for what we believe is in our best interest of our lives. But yet it's here and now that, we shall be face with the unknown of haunted, memories of the last few years of voting. 🤨 For sure as our votes are being counted we can't help, but wonder about the true outcome of this election, of good verse evil that never has been proven to be fair. 😠 For as we wait for the results of this election, let's keep in mind one party always finds it's necessary to cheat. 🤨 LIKE children's in the park having a race to see who, will be...
#corruption
#deception
#politics
#power
#StreamOfConsciousness
29 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 10:11pm
3rd Nov 2024 10:11pm
Orange Kool Aid
Orange Kool Aid
Tension starts building
Something Orange in the water of some
Talks about bringing back jobs
That were stolen by China and others
Tariff on goods from them are
These goods bought by Americans
Sitting on billions of fake news money
Tells you he’ll build a wall 100 feet tall
Keep them dirty Mexicans out and whoever else
Says he’s a businessman he’ll get them wetbacks
To pay for the wall that falls down time n time again
Minions grifting...
Tension starts building
Something Orange in the water of some
Talks about bringing back jobs
That were stolen by China and others
Tariff on goods from them are
These goods bought by Americans
Sitting on billions of fake news money
Tells you he’ll build a wall 100 feet tall
Keep them dirty Mexicans out and whoever else
Says he’s a businessman he’ll get them wetbacks
To pay for the wall that falls down time n time again
Minions grifting...
#corruption
#deception
#lies #politics
#lies #politics
34 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
31st Oct 2024 1:47am
31st Oct 2024 1:47am
The sheep pay for my sins
The sheep pay for my sins
I make a call to you all
I’m being persecuted like an Orange Jesus
Won’t you get up and scream out or
Better yet open up your pocketbook
So you don’t have to suffer like me
Guilty of everything accused of
You don’t care about such nonsense
To busy chasing immigrants
Or the latest culture wars book burning being cancelled or trans bathrooms
You’re behind on your rent
Electricity being cut off
Need new tires on a shit pickup
But all I...
I make a call to you all
I’m being persecuted like an Orange Jesus
Won’t you get up and scream out or
Better yet open up your pocketbook
So you don’t have to suffer like me
Guilty of everything accused of
You don’t care about such nonsense
To busy chasing immigrants
Or the latest culture wars book burning being cancelled or trans bathrooms
You’re behind on your rent
Electricity being cut off
Need new tires on a shit pickup
But all I...
#deception
#emptiness
#greed
#manipulation
#money
50 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 10:42am
29th Oct 2024 10:42am
She Told Me That Her Name Is Vanessa
Mark went to Japan in
order to forget about
the disappearance of
his fiancé Vanessa
only to see her dressed
up like a geisha at his
best friend's house.
order to forget about
the disappearance of
his fiancé Vanessa
only to see her dressed
up like a geisha at his
best friend's house.
#culture
#deception
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#lover
66 reads
0 Comments
da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 11:23pm
26th Oct 2024 11:23pm
French Kissed By Ignorance
Your ignorance precedes you entering a room
Somebody tell the Sandman to bring a few brooms
For the brides and grooms whom consume propaganda
Divided and conquered by those who gerrymander
Somebody tell the Sandman to bring a few brooms
For the brides and grooms whom consume propaganda
Divided and conquered by those who gerrymander
#deception
#ignorance
#politics
69 reads
1 Comment
da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 8:00am
26th Oct 2024 8:00am
Penny's Plot
Is a penny with a hole in it any less worthy?
Is it universally accepted to devalue brownies?
Is it irony that they're bearing the face of Lincoln?
Would a caged bird still sing if it were a falcon?
Asking for a friend and them with inquiring minds
Those holding AK's everyday while looking outta blinds
The ties that bind want us blind, deaf and dumb
Inebriated by clouds of smoke, pills, and or some rum
Acting chummy but in reality are really enemies
Wanting us to suffer quietly while kneeling on our knees
Praying, "Lord...
Is it universally accepted to devalue brownies?
Is it irony that they're bearing the face of Lincoln?
Would a caged bird still sing if it were a falcon?
Asking for a friend and them with inquiring minds
Those holding AK's everyday while looking outta blinds
The ties that bind want us blind, deaf and dumb
Inebriated by clouds of smoke, pills, and or some rum
Acting chummy but in reality are really enemies
Wanting us to suffer quietly while kneeling on our knees
Praying, "Lord...
#deception
#lies
46 reads
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teestando
Poem Published
24th Oct 2024 5:40am
24th Oct 2024 5:40am
Pyramid Scheme of our Societal Beings
I started at the bottom of the high tower
I climbed up the ladder to see the real power
Peeked the curtain and I found true cowards
I dont want to live with the false shouters
Moved to the dark but I spout louder
I was forced to a state of a deep flounder
Pyramids wiped, I represent a strong founder
I was free, once I broke the band of the structured browsers
Captured by the judges, held their standards to the wronged bowser
I was caught quickly, trapped among the trap of their sticky chowder
I was the one laughed at inside school...
I climbed up the ladder to see the real power
Peeked the curtain and I found true cowards
I dont want to live with the false shouters
Moved to the dark but I spout louder
I was forced to a state of a deep flounder
Pyramids wiped, I represent a strong founder
I was free, once I broke the band of the structured browsers
Captured by the judges, held their standards to the wronged bowser
I was caught quickly, trapped among the trap of their sticky chowder
I was the one laughed at inside school...
#deception
#humankind
#strength #rhyming
#strength #rhyming
72 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
17th Oct 2024 6:05am
17th Oct 2024 6:05am
Jesus Gulf Stream Jet
Jesus in a 5’5” suit
Spouts about losing wayward friends
As he lifts off in a gulf stream jet
Righteousness in the name of Jesus
Speaks in a church that is a stadium
Paid for by sweat of his audience
Stalks the stage like a demon
But lost souls aren’t what he’s looking for
Deeper within but not your heart
Picks your pocket gains your wallet
Playing on God and decency
While he makes grand larceny
Tithes to heaven have meaning
Mansion on the hill means nothing to me
Somewhere in...
Spouts about losing wayward friends
As he lifts off in a gulf stream jet
Righteousness in the name of Jesus
Speaks in a church that is a stadium
Paid for by sweat of his audience
Stalks the stage like a demon
But lost souls aren’t what he’s looking for
Deeper within but not your heart
Picks your pocket gains your wallet
Playing on God and decency
While he makes grand larceny
Tithes to heaven have meaning
Mansion on the hill means nothing to me
Somewhere in...
#deception
#greed
#pagan #religion
#pagan #religion
47 reads
0 Comments
dead_lluwi
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 4:13pm
11th Oct 2024 4:13pm
deplnt
tears falling through blood shot eyes,
wish all could go counterclockwise.
answer back to the echo of my wails,
before you know it i'll be nothing but tales.
so don't leave me rotting as im in pain,
don't test my patience when i say im insane.
begged you to trust the love we built,
coaxing you through nothing but guilt.
so here we are again, quiet whispers of i love you's,
purely empty words filled with nothing but excuse.
wish all could go counterclockwise.
answer back to the echo of my wails,
before you know it i'll be nothing but tales.
so don't leave me rotting as im in pain,
don't test my patience when i say im insane.
begged you to trust the love we built,
coaxing you through nothing but guilt.
so here we are again, quiet whispers of i love you's,
purely empty words filled with nothing but excuse.
#dark
#deception
#lies
#manipulation
#secrets
94 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 2:09am
9th Oct 2024 2:09am
Surrender Monkeys
Just give the Russians what they want
the MAGA pinheads say
as they view Europe's eastern front
in violent decay.
No doubt space lasers are involved
and control the weather
whenever hot air has revolved
when they get together.
It's a fascist on fascist fight
so Imperialist
somehow giving Putin the right
to raise the winning fist.
Except that every cooler head
amid all the alarm
will be the ones who stop the spread
of Europe from more harm.
They fret too much about the nukes ...
the MAGA pinheads say
as they view Europe's eastern front
in violent decay.
No doubt space lasers are involved
and control the weather
whenever hot air has revolved
when they get together.
It's a fascist on fascist fight
so Imperialist
somehow giving Putin the right
to raise the winning fist.
Except that every cooler head
amid all the alarm
will be the ones who stop the spread
of Europe from more harm.
They fret too much about the nukes ...
#corruption
#deception
#HumanRights
#MentalHealth
#war
128 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 2:45pm
8th Oct 2024 2:45pm
WHAT IS TRUE LOVE in
The eclipse of the moon is a eclipse of the sun, as it hides a change is gonna come as the same is true. FOR love is our happiness and support and encouragement, and respect with honesty and truth and trust. For sure we are still human beings, just looking for the betterment of our lives and life. YET with a positive level of substance in our relationship, that they are still by our side in the good times and the bad times. As in love with respect and supporting us together as one. That with a real honest commitment and consistency, and real communications between us. AS twin flames one...
#conflict
#deception
#heartbroken
#lies
#TimeHeals
87 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 4:57am
4th Oct 2024 4:57am
WHAT IS THE POINT OF IT ALL
What is the point of all of this nonsense, that we have to learn to deal with time and time again. 😞 YET things are more worser, than they ever have been, in the world of today. But yet they tell you it's gonna get better by telling us more, lies with propaganda to cover up the lies. yet nothing has really change the very Dynamics of the suffering. Which causes your misery of the deepness of your own hurt and pain. For sure we need to ask thyself is this the kind of world, 🌎 that you want your own children's to live with and be apart of there life. 🤔 For even as I sit...
#corruption
#deception
#ignorance
#politics
#power
101 reads
2 Comments
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