Poems About Deception Seeking Honest Critique
#deception
Poems about deception seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The Siren
Recently, I encountered a woman,
Alluring as can be.
Modeling her features,
She appears to be a celebrity,
As polished skin is not just granted to anyone.
Her coal highlights formed to a helix,
Carve out prominent features,
Including her round, aloe eyes.
The unexpected candy glaze dripped from her lips,
Intoxication of wine clouding all judgment,
With milky teeth curving into a smirk.
God, was she charming,
Poise surrounding her figure,
Confidence sweating in her presence.
Adored by all who glanced,
Doors...
Alluring as can be.
Modeling her features,
She appears to be a celebrity,
As polished skin is not just granted to anyone.
Her coal highlights formed to a helix,
Carve out prominent features,
Including her round, aloe eyes.
The unexpected candy glaze dripped from her lips,
Intoxication of wine clouding all judgment,
With milky teeth curving into a smirk.
God, was she charming,
Poise surrounding her figure,
Confidence sweating in her presence.
Adored by all who glanced,
Doors...
#beauty
#deception
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#27
I slaughtered and buried my enemies,
And my friends I kept in the fridge.
Their pictures hang on the tapestries,
And their memories sound like the kids
Outside the home of depravity
The house where I used to live
Everyone alive has capacity,
But not everyone caves in.
Still we all want to be happy
And yet we love mortal sin
Pulled on blue gloves for examining
This heart that I am stuck with
I
Keep a graveyard out in the back, sneak the brave-hearts into a trap, weave my ramparts throughout the past.
Hey look, Making excuses...
And my friends I kept in the fridge.
Their pictures hang on the tapestries,
And their memories sound like the kids
Outside the home of depravity
The house where I used to live
Everyone alive has capacity,
But not everyone caves in.
Still we all want to be happy
And yet we love mortal sin
Pulled on blue gloves for examining
This heart that I am stuck with
I
Keep a graveyard out in the back, sneak the brave-hearts into a trap, weave my ramparts throughout the past.
Hey look, Making excuses...
#SelfReflection
#PTSD
#DomesticViolence #deception
#DomesticViolence #deception
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Vote Blue
Trump's speeches are half Hitler and the other half Mussolini
his mind is as soft as over cooked linguine
His brain is working at less than 2/3rds
and at every campaign stop he slurs his words
He espouses conspiracy theories about things that are untoward
this poor man belongs on a psych ward
DJT is mentally ill
and can't afford to pay his 464 million dollar bill
The MSM is dodging this issue still
and unbiased journalism is now a lost skill
Four more years of Trump and American Democracy is through ...
his mind is as soft as over cooked linguine
His brain is working at less than 2/3rds
and at every campaign stop he slurs his words
He espouses conspiracy theories about things that are untoward
this poor man belongs on a psych ward
DJT is mentally ill
and can't afford to pay his 464 million dollar bill
The MSM is dodging this issue still
and unbiased journalism is now a lost skill
Four more years of Trump and American Democracy is through ...
#politics
#racism
#freedom
#HumanRights
#deception
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You forgot me again.
You forgot my name today.
Just like, you did before.
Now, you have nothing to say.
Not a glance, as you shut the door.
You don't remember, it seems.
The promises told over and over and over.
Repeated, until, I believed.
Convincing me, to come closer.
Your efforts payed off, willingly.
I forgot, that my love,
Makes you, forget me.
If ever, I forget again.
And send you a message, at 3am.
Push delete, go back to sleep.
You'll never deserve me, you never did.
Just like, you did before.
Now, you have nothing to say.
Not a glance, as you shut the door.
You don't remember, it seems.
The promises told over and over and over.
Repeated, until, I believed.
Convincing me, to come closer.
Your efforts payed off, willingly.
I forgot, that my love,
Makes you, forget me.
If ever, I forget again.
And send you a message, at 3am.
Push delete, go back to sleep.
You'll never deserve me, you never did.
#betrayal
#MovingOn
#disappointment #deception
#disappointment #deception
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WHAT'S LOVE GOT TO DO WITH IT??
It's me again the story teller✍️ I think it's time to get involved, in the dark side of what love got to do with it 🤔 For the truth of the matter is love has a lot to do with it, now let's look even deeper then deep, inside the fundamentals of relationships of the past and present 🤔 For ask thyself what you felt like when you finally thought, that you found someone, who came into your life to bring a change from the norm. FOR the right reason to give you a strong and real love built from steel and stones 🤨 Yet in the silent of the night was a stranger,...
#heartbroken
#betrayal
#disappointment
#manipulation
#deception
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The Calamity of Misfortune
The longest year,
sheds new light,
into the shade
onward into battle
the demigods inherit,
the new night,
into the light
forsake the liberation
promising to all
an ambush of deceit
sheds new light,
into the shade
onward into battle
the demigods inherit,
the new night,
into the light
forsake the liberation
promising to all
an ambush of deceit
#lies
#betrayal
#war
#manipulation
#deception
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Lies
Little
Initial
Emissions of
Secrets
Initial
Emissions of
Secrets
#deception
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Colloquial Truths
How refreshing would it be if we heard a politician say:
I don't believe in God and I don't believe in the protection and welfare of our citizens, their health & their safety
I plan on placing my friends in executive positions
I will pocket what funds I can get away with, but see that the rest is spent on my election
You will have no voice in my decisions any more then you ever had
You will have to accept my judgement, which you will have no choice
If I succeed in fooling the public, the public will have themselves to blame...
I don't believe in God and I don't believe in the protection and welfare of our citizens, their health & their safety
I plan on placing my friends in executive positions
I will pocket what funds I can get away with, but see that the rest is spent on my election
You will have no voice in my decisions any more then you ever had
You will have to accept my judgement, which you will have no choice
If I succeed in fooling the public, the public will have themselves to blame...
#lies
#corruption
#greed
#manipulation
#deception
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6 Comments
Hypocrites
You say that what LGBTQ people do with their lives is not anybody’s business.
I say you are dishonest persons, and it is clear that you are hypocrites.
We all have the right to express our views publicly about any subject matter.
The matter concerning the activities of LGBTQ people is no exception.
Please let me refresh your minds about some things that you normally do.
You speak against thieves even when they do not steal your possessions.
You speak against rapists even when they do not sexually assault you.
You speak against kidnappers when they do...
I say you are dishonest persons, and it is clear that you are hypocrites.
We all have the right to express our views publicly about any subject matter.
The matter concerning the activities of LGBTQ people is no exception.
Please let me refresh your minds about some things that you normally do.
You speak against thieves even when they do not steal your possessions.
You speak against rapists even when they do not sexually assault you.
You speak against kidnappers when they do...
#LGBT
#hypocrisy
#morality #deception
#morality #deception
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Pretty lies and convienent truths
Born into a realm where facades gleam and half-truths soothe,
Before 'mother' found form on my tongue, from her bosom I was removed.
At the tender age of eight, braided yarn in hand,
I unearthed secrets in those threads, a world unplanned.
By nine, my discoveries brought labels, harsh and cold,
Branded 'broken', a narrative unfairly told.
At eleven, within actual school walls I was set,
Solitude my prior tutor, with beasts and boughs my only bet.
Clueless in the art of mingling, a misfit in their space, ...
Before 'mother' found form on my tongue, from her bosom I was removed.
At the tender age of eight, braided yarn in hand,
I unearthed secrets in those threads, a world unplanned.
By nine, my discoveries brought labels, harsh and cold,
Branded 'broken', a narrative unfairly told.
At eleven, within actual school walls I was set,
Solitude my prior tutor, with beasts and boughs my only bet.
Clueless in the art of mingling, a misfit in their space, ...
#anger
#lies
#betrayal
#manipulation
#deception
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JUST THINK
I don't want you to think like me, I just want you to think and open your own eyes 👀 and see what's happening before your own eyes. How they the powers that be are going at TRUMP, like a Black man yet they are treating Biden like a white man. NO I'M NOT PREJUDICES NOR AM I A RACIST. FOR I GROW UP IN A MILITARY ENVIRONMENT. BECAUSE OF MY UPBRINGING WITH MY GRANDMOTHER AND GRANDFATHER. Who was in WW2 at a young age so don't get it twisted, I don't want you think like me I just want you to think. 🤔 To see what is happening in today's world 🌎 of society, amongst the...
#politics
#dialogue
#CallToAction
#StreamOfConsciousness
#deception
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Real Freedom of Expression
You say we have freedom of expression, but this is only when you like what we say.
When you disagree with our opinions, you label us as bigots and extremists.
Diabolical leaders of the world, your laws are full of human excrement and urine.
You make laws against what you call hate speech, yet you sanction wars and bloodshed?
Teaching people to fight and kill one another in the name of patriotism is hatred.
When someone speaks the truth and exposes your evil deeds, you say it is hate speech.
Hypocrites and liars, you support free speech only when it is...
When you disagree with our opinions, you label us as bigots and extremists.
Diabolical leaders of the world, your laws are full of human excrement and urine.
You make laws against what you call hate speech, yet you sanction wars and bloodshed?
Teaching people to fight and kill one another in the name of patriotism is hatred.
When someone speaks the truth and exposes your evil deeds, you say it is hate speech.
Hypocrites and liars, you support free speech only when it is...
#hate
#lies
#war
#freedom
#deception
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DU Poetry : Poems About Deception Seeking Honest Critique