Butterfly Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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butterfly seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
20th Feb 2020 00:00am
20th Feb 2020 00:00am
EL TIEMPO ES UNA MARIPOSA MORPHO AZUL-
Lento pero
Imposiblemente eficiente,
Capaz para evadir
Tu alcance
Siempre.
Imposiblemente eficiente,
Capaz para evadir
Tu alcance
Siempre.
#butterfly
#mystery
#MovingOn
390 reads
6 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
27th Jan 2020 4:57pm
27th Jan 2020 4:57pm
future flight
fleet butterflies
soft flutter-byes
they dangle on the wind
whose vigilance
bears relevance
to fragile humankind
we congregate
to pollenate
the anthem of their wings
these democrat
sophistocats
whose dance new harvests brings
lithe metamorphs
far better off
where migrant spirits call
they, sentient
with sentiment,
drool long for summer’s ball
development
predicament
kills ways and habitats
of butterflies
whose life relies
on subtle caveats
high barriers
the...
soft flutter-byes
they dangle on the wind
whose vigilance
bears relevance
to fragile humankind
we congregate
to pollenate
the anthem of their wings
these democrat
sophistocats
whose dance new harvests brings
lithe metamorphs
far better off
where migrant spirits call
they, sentient
with sentiment,
drool long for summer’s ball
development
predicament
kills ways and habitats
of butterflies
whose life relies
on subtle caveats
high barriers
the...
#courage
#environment
#butterfly #LifeCycle
#butterfly #LifeCycle
432 reads
6 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
11th Jan 2020 11:43pm
11th Jan 2020 11:43pm
where do they go ..
why do you never see dead butterflies ..
#death
#butterfly
384 reads
4 Comments
fieryangelsouljia
M6rr6g6n
M6rr6g6n
Poem Published
8th Dec 2019 5:16pm
8th Dec 2019 5:16pm
The Girl with the Butterfly Wings
She had butterfly wings
ether-dusted, but heaven lusted
for her eyes of candy blue
The shades of woodland summers
evergreen and sleeping moss
wonders before her searching gaze
innocence portrayed in the way
the flowers swayed
She had butterfly wings
Iridescent gilded things
fluttering with her heart
above the silver moon
The lovely scents of autumn fire
embers dancing, colors playing
off her perfect, flawless skin
she wandered through the trees for hours
searching once more for something... ...
ether-dusted, but heaven lusted
for her eyes of candy blue
The shades of woodland summers
evergreen and sleeping moss
wonders before her searching gaze
innocence portrayed in the way
the flowers swayed
She had butterfly wings
Iridescent gilded things
fluttering with her heart
above the silver moon
The lovely scents of autumn fire
embers dancing, colors playing
off her perfect, flawless skin
she wandered through the trees for hours
searching once more for something... ...
#strength
#hope
#courage
#inspirational
#butterfly
663 reads
7 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
15th Oct 2019 8:28pm
15th Oct 2019 8:28pm
Bustin' Bones With (Big) Babba Jones
Buddy Bub, what the hell you doin'wit
them Bones? **
**(apologies to mr. Berryman).
wee have nothing to do
for a screw like you, and there's
barely room (for) too few of you
in the safe-deposit
box I bought for my own silly scraplets
to settle into for the time when
My Time
first runs amok before running out,
finally free of "me", (as has been
the Fate
of so many other great admirers of
the grand circuses I built in those
middle-western towns, back before
the saints were born to...
them Bones? **
**(apologies to mr. Berryman).
wee have nothing to do
for a screw like you, and there's
barely room (for) too few of you
in the safe-deposit
box I bought for my own silly scraplets
to settle into for the time when
My Time
first runs amok before running out,
finally free of "me", (as has been
the Fate
of so many other great admirers of
the grand circuses I built in those
middle-western towns, back before
the saints were born to...
#anxiety
#grief
#dark
#butterfly
#drugs
461 reads
2 Comments
Orc_Pirate_68
Poem Published
14th Oct 2019 11:48pm
14th Oct 2019 11:48pm
A Sign
A dream came to me last night,
Of a butterfly in flight,
Upon a finger, on my outstretched hand,
It did land.
It sniffed my finger with it's antenna, and then,
Almost licked my finger with it's proboscis, when,
I awoke from said dream,
Before forgetting, after wondering and beginning to understand what it might mean...
I've always known I've loved butterflies,
But now even more so, for they give me butterflies,
For they link to you,
And the reason for your career choice, so sweet and...
Of a butterfly in flight,
Upon a finger, on my outstretched hand,
It did land.
It sniffed my finger with it's antenna, and then,
Almost licked my finger with it's proboscis, when,
I awoke from said dream,
Before forgetting, after wondering and beginning to understand what it might mean...
I've always known I've loved butterflies,
But now even more so, for they give me butterflies,
For they link to you,
And the reason for your career choice, so sweet and...
#love
#hope
#butterfly #travel
#butterfly #travel
567 reads
2 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2019 4:57pm
3rd Oct 2019 4:57pm
The Little Troubles of Shark 'Infested' Waters
Photo: "Oakland, (Emeryville), 2019" by dkzkbadfotograffy
If'n I coulda been any-body, per
haps
I coulda been Me, but six+ decades
have
freight-trained by, and I don't know my ass from a
hole
in the soul. Y'gotta see the humor in such folly,
lest
ye succumb to the all-to-common Delusion of
Self.
Taken seriously, there's a goodly dose of
long
acting toxin in...
If'n I coulda been any-body, per
haps
I coulda been Me, but six+ decades
have
freight-trained by, and I don't know my ass from a
hole
in the soul. Y'gotta see the humor in such folly,
lest
ye succumb to the all-to-common Delusion of
Self.
Taken seriously, there's a goodly dose of
long
acting toxin in...
#animals
#birds
#butterfly
#fish
#historical
447 reads
6 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
30th Sep 2019 6:45pm
30th Sep 2019 6:45pm
DOG: Our God a Bit BackWard
PHOTO: "Bongo the Great" portrait by dkzk, june2019, oakland
Doggyy'boy Dan,
the dogface man.
Wonderin' which hole to dig
dig
dig on this veryfine
dog'happy day.
Some( t)rump kerplunks his lump'o
poop on the ground and the
dog'day earth is forever cast
for greater american greatness.
This writ deserves to go
...
Doggyy'boy Dan,
the dogface man.
Wonderin' which hole to dig
dig
dig on this veryfine
dog'happy day.
Some( t)rump kerplunks his lump'o
poop on the ground and the
dog'day earth is forever cast
for greater american greatness.
This writ deserves to go
...
#dogs
#animals
#birds
#butterfly
#apocalypse
496 reads
4 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
17th Sep 2019 5:24pm
17th Sep 2019 5:24pm
sometimes you have
(Rupi Kaur-inspired visual poem)
#butterfly
#nature
#metaphor #RupiKaur
#metaphor #RupiKaur
755 reads
12 Comments
case28
Poem Published
24th Aug 2019 4:14pm
24th Aug 2019 4:14pm
#precious
#women
#men
#earth #butterfly
#earth #butterfly
1185 reads
19 Comments
IntoTheVoid
Poem Published
24th Aug 2019 8:29am
24th Aug 2019 8:29am
In the dimension of the lady bug
Everything -
a world within a world.
From the vast forests of the garden grass,
to the barren stone lands of the driveway
Even down to the atoms -
orbital systems of their own,
sporadic assemblages of matter
trapped in the deep of cosmos.
Just as the dimension of the lady bug -
or the universe of the dung beetle,
a planetary system
where they are the sun around which it orbits.
But sometimes galaxies collide
and thus altercations do arise,
it can either mean destruction
or that two...
a world within a world.
From the vast forests of the garden grass,
to the barren stone lands of the driveway
Even down to the atoms -
orbital systems of their own,
sporadic assemblages of matter
trapped in the deep of cosmos.
Just as the dimension of the lady bug -
or the universe of the dung beetle,
a planetary system
where they are the sun around which it orbits.
But sometimes galaxies collide
and thus altercations do arise,
it can either mean destruction
or that two...
#dreams
#universe
#stars
#butterfly
#astronomy
364 reads
0 Comments
Falsepoet
Poem Published
8th May 2019 1:55pm
8th May 2019 1:55pm
Springtime Interlude (Slightly Erotic)
#flowers
#butterfly
#nature
483 reads
7 Comments
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