Butterfly Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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butterfly seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Feb 2024 00:27am
12th Feb 2024 00:27am
Butterfly
If the darkness cleaned our bodies
Only would have guided our souls too
If in death we shared in between the end
Only would have let us know
Butterflies in your tummy
Love lasts forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
Only would have guided our souls too
If in death we shared in between the end
Only would have let us know
Butterflies in your tummy
Love lasts forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
#butterfly
#nature
60 reads
6 Comments
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
10th Feb 2024 3:39pm
10th Feb 2024 3:39pm
SMALL GREEN CATERPILLAR
Oh small green caterpillar, destined to transform
With your future of vibrant wings to adorn
Feasting and growing, unaware of what's in store
The tale you weave as I sit and learn
In your cocoon, in slumber so forlorn
Fear not, for you're not on your own
I'll await the morning when you will be reborn
To witness the beauty you have grown
A splendid monarch butterfly, now free to soar
The winds pick up their melody, like a horn being blown
With your future of vibrant wings to adorn
Feasting and growing, unaware of what's in store
The tale you weave as I sit and learn
In your cocoon, in slumber so forlorn
Fear not, for you're not on your own
I'll await the morning when you will be reborn
To witness the beauty you have grown
A splendid monarch butterfly, now free to soar
The winds pick up their melody, like a horn being blown
#butterfly
#nature
112 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
8th Feb 2024 5:37am
8th Feb 2024 5:37am
Waiting on the Wings
Sometimes you have to wait for the right time
For the right place
And when the time comes \ / we know it by heart
Because it just feels right \ / it just feels great
A butterfly knows exactly toO and by natural instinct
When it’s time to transform (.) when it’s time to change
The fantastic metamorphosis(…) is an awakening
Of mind, of body, of spirit, (….) and everything within
Slowly taking shape and form \ / all the while waiting on the wings
For the right place
And when the time comes \ / we know it by heart
Because it just feels right \ / it just feels great
A butterfly knows exactly toO and by natural instinct
When it’s time to transform (.) when it’s time to change
The fantastic metamorphosis(…) is an awakening
Of mind, of body, of spirit, (….) and everything within
Slowly taking shape and form \ / all the while waiting on the wings
#butterfly
#nature
#LifeChangingMoment
91 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2024 5:35pm
2nd Feb 2024 5:35pm
weightlessness
A very common caterpillar
eating leaves non-stop.
She dreams of being a butterfly...
Could have been a butterpillar
or it could even be a caterfly...
Ends of the same Gordian knot.
eating leaves non-stop.
She dreams of being a butterfly...
Could have been a butterpillar
or it could even be a caterfly...
Ends of the same Gordian knot.
#butterfly
#rebirth
#mirror
#metaphor
#healing
59 reads
2 Comments
Cen
Rakhi Rudra
Rakhi Rudra
Poem Published
21st Dec 2023 3:05am
21st Dec 2023 3:05am
Light.
Cluckers come
Truck to trick
The haste
Not Belonging
To geralds grin
Subject to
Summer
In such hot placid. Places of
Fertile
Festival in the world morning
And noon.
A silent cry
Among the hills
Summer to crape
The wounds of birds
I feed it a feel.
Truck to trick
The haste
Not Belonging
To geralds grin
Subject to
Summer
In such hot placid. Places of
Fertile
Festival in the world morning
And noon.
A silent cry
Among the hills
Summer to crape
The wounds of birds
I feed it a feel.
#butterfly
#nature
85 reads
0 Comments
Ald
Poem Published
11th Aug 2023 6:05am
11th Aug 2023 6:05am
Yellow daffodils .
When love was
Young
We ran wild into
trees and sunlight
Glory and groom
Green and white
Violet into rains
Yellow in magpies
And mangoes and
Daffodils
We used to run
Wild in summer and
Winter
Yellow hills
With green meadows.
Young
We ran wild into
trees and sunlight
Glory and groom
Green and white
Violet into rains
Yellow in magpies
And mangoes and
Daffodils
We used to run
Wild in summer and
Winter
Yellow hills
With green meadows.
#horses
#birds
#butterfly
#fish
#bees
104 reads
0 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
25th Jun 2023 9:49pm
25th Jun 2023 9:49pm
butterfly wings
a lyric mirror 48©
not for antartica:
lithe, wind-cleaving creature
noislessly kite-dancing.
ovum into larva,
butterfly from pupa,
every rose romancing.
delicate by nature,
wings of pure gossamer.
©Copyright 2023 June 25
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
not for antartica:
lithe, wind-cleaving creature
noislessly kite-dancing.
ovum into larva,
butterfly from pupa,
every rose romancing.
delicate by nature,
wings of pure gossamer.
©Copyright 2023 June 25
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
#strength
#butterfly
#nature #LifeCycle
#nature #LifeCycle
144 reads
0 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
9th May 2023 2:55pm
9th May 2023 2:55pm
The Long Winter Ends
After the celibate winter
The hot climax of spring
Thawing out frozen hearts
Whispering birds begin to sing
The tired day succumbs
To the thick embrace of night
Black serpents in the sky
Wrap round the shivering light
Out of the sewer sludge
Clean politicians creep
Butterflies break free
From long metamorphic sleep
The hot climax of spring
Thawing out frozen hearts
Whispering birds begin to sing
The tired day succumbs
To the thick embrace of night
Black serpents in the sky
Wrap round the shivering light
Out of the sewer sludge
Clean politicians creep
Butterflies break free
From long metamorphic sleep
#winter
#spring
#butterfly
235 reads
2 Comments
ms_kitty_lagniappe
Ms K
Ms K
Poem Published
17th Mar 2023 6:16pm
17th Mar 2023 6:16pm
Whispers of History: The Beautiful Courtyards of New Orleans
In New Orleans, the courtyards sing,
A symphony of peace and beauty it brings,
A secret haven, hidden away,
Where time stands still, for just one day.
The rustle of leaves and gentle breeze,
Soothes the soul, puts the heart at ease,
The sun shines down on ancient bricks,
As history stands, a timeless mix.
The sound of fountains softly flows,
As butterflies dance, in delicate shows,
A rainbow of colors, bright and bold,
Reflecting stories, still untold.
The Spanish moss, drapes with grace,
A tapestry of green, a delicate lace, ...
A symphony of peace and beauty it brings,
A secret haven, hidden away,
Where time stands still, for just one day.
The rustle of leaves and gentle breeze,
Soothes the soul, puts the heart at ease,
The sun shines down on ancient bricks,
As history stands, a timeless mix.
The sound of fountains softly flows,
As butterflies dance, in delicate shows,
A rainbow of colors, bright and bold,
Reflecting stories, still untold.
The Spanish moss, drapes with grace,
A tapestry of green, a delicate lace, ...
#home
#trees
#butterfly #gratitude
#butterfly #gratitude
183 reads
2 Comments
JHanover
Poem Published
9th Mar 2023 5:46am
9th Mar 2023 5:46am
Wax ( Free Verse )’23
A thousand eyes peering out.
In cherry red to pale pink streaks.
Against an emerald canopy that sways randomley to and fro.
Whilst the aluminum sky screams for the sunrise.
A lime green body, tagged with random markings.
The obnoxious spray paintings are hard to read.
The body moves like a cheap, rundown roller coaster.
Only way more painfully slow, like carrying laundry.
Blinded by the reflective light on silk.
Turning into a leaf bound satelite with no good channels.
For you have way too much time on your hands.
If you sit...
In cherry red to pale pink streaks.
Against an emerald canopy that sways randomley to and fro.
Whilst the aluminum sky screams for the sunrise.
A lime green body, tagged with random markings.
The obnoxious spray paintings are hard to read.
The body moves like a cheap, rundown roller coaster.
Only way more painfully slow, like carrying laundry.
Blinded by the reflective light on silk.
Turning into a leaf bound satelite with no good channels.
For you have way too much time on your hands.
If you sit...
#butterfly
112 reads
2 Comments
alcedoathis2
Poem Published
25th Dec 2022 3:09pm
25th Dec 2022 3:09pm
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#birds
#butterfly
#nature #bees
#nature #bees
248 reads
2 Comments
A_Failed_Artist
Poem Published
4th Oct 2022 5:05pm
4th Oct 2022 5:05pm
Pirouette
Butterfly dancing
Intricately in the wind
Pirouette fiercely
Intricately in the wind
Pirouette fiercely
#butterfly
#wind
#nature
#haiku
#dance
184 reads
1 Comment
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