Butterfly Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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butterfly seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 8:45pm
7th Dec 2024 8:45pm
From a different perspective
Question about what you think and believe that what you see 👁️👁️ For have you ever seen through the eyes of nature, as it sometimes is a reflection of life, told from a different perspective of a mother and child 🙏 For sure there are some similarity that really reflects, the deepness of the moments of birth, from a WOLF mother's eyes watching over her young child, supporting them and to teach them how to survive 😔 in life. But yet it's here in the nature zone, in the mountains and tree's in the forest life is very different. HERE from the outside...
#animals
#birds
#butterfly
#fish
#motherhood
47 reads
0 Comments
CircleDanceSquared
AlyssaJane96
AlyssaJane96
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 7:36pm
21st Nov 2024 7:36pm
Flying high on powdered wings
Sing me songs of broken things
Broken bones and broken hearts
I pray we never fall apart
A trap, a cage, a prison cell
Drag me through the gates of hell
But nothing could hold me back for long
I fell in love with your broken songs
Sing me songs of broken things
Broken bones and broken hearts
I pray we never fall apart
A trap, a cage, a prison cell
Drag me through the gates of hell
But nothing could hold me back for long
I fell in love with your broken songs
#butterfly
#love
76 reads
3 Comments
James_A_Knight
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 9:07pm
14th Nov 2024 9:07pm
Mothballs
Cocooned between the rainbow twilight
And the rising moon
The metamorphosis failed
No butterflies emerged
A moth instead
Beautiful in its way
Lover of the dark
Slave to the flame
Death mask upon its wings
The horror
The corporate mothballs
Dropped in the night
They prayed to Uranus
To Gaia
To Cronus
To Zeus
And the rising moon
The metamorphosis failed
No butterflies emerged
A moth instead
Beautiful in its way
Lover of the dark
Slave to the flame
Death mask upon its wings
The horror
The corporate mothballs
Dropped in the night
They prayed to Uranus
To Gaia
To Cronus
To Zeus
#butterfly
92 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
1st Aug 2024 1:40pm
1st Aug 2024 1:40pm
Mind Obesity
In the labyrinth of his mind he wandered.
A man with thoughts as heavy as lead.
His brain, swollen with ideas and musings
became an obese repository of dreams.
Each thought a bloated morsel.
Lodged in the crevices of his consciousness.
He carried them like stones in his pockets.
Their weight pulling him deeper into solitude.
But one day, a butterfly fluttered by.
Its delicate wings a whisper of grace.
It danced upon his mental clutter.
A reminder of weightlessness and flight.
The man watched entranced. ...
A man with thoughts as heavy as lead.
His brain, swollen with ideas and musings
became an obese repository of dreams.
Each thought a bloated morsel.
Lodged in the crevices of his consciousness.
He carried them like stones in his pockets.
Their weight pulling him deeper into solitude.
But one day, a butterfly fluttered by.
Its delicate wings a whisper of grace.
It danced upon his mental clutter.
A reminder of weightlessness and flight.
The man watched entranced. ...
#butterfly
#fate
#meditation
#mirror
#WritingPoetry
97 reads
4 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
31st Jul 2024 5:13pm
31st Jul 2024 5:13pm
Magic in the Water
Magic in the Water
An old Friend's Poem," one of her best "
Crystaline water
cleanse my cluttered mind
weaving your coarse
leave the chaos behind
Riparian retreat
where willows embrace
finger leaf trails
shows a rippling trace
In mirrored depths
your secrets abide
the predators hunt
the hunted, hide
Amorphous shadows
'neath diaphonous stream
caught for a moment
by incandescent sunbeam
Prowling predator
a solitary pike
in the...
An old Friend's Poem," one of her best "
Crystaline water
cleanse my cluttered mind
weaving your coarse
leave the chaos behind
Riparian retreat
where willows embrace
finger leaf trails
shows a rippling trace
In mirrored depths
your secrets abide
the predators hunt
the hunted, hide
Amorphous shadows
'neath diaphonous stream
caught for a moment
by incandescent sunbeam
Prowling predator
a solitary pike
in the...
#butterfly
#fish
#mountains
#nature
#water
109 reads
2 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
11th Jul 2024 7:02pm
11th Jul 2024 7:02pm
Butterflies with hand grenades
#butterfly
#lover
#passion
#relationships
#romantic
277 reads
18 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
7th Jul 2024 8:43pm
7th Jul 2024 8:43pm
Not sailing on the ocean
Not feeling pretty safe at all
Elaborate
Labor hate
Abort later
What's up?
Butterflies
Butter flies
Flies will fly
Around you.
Cocoa puff
Swimming
Into vodka
What's up?
Cow milk
Top hats
No taps
What's up?
No half full
Any glasses
No empty
Small cups
What's up?
Not ever
Full jugs
Bottoms up...
Elaborate
Labor hate
Abort later
What's up?
Butterflies
Butter flies
Flies will fly
Around you.
Cocoa puff
Swimming
Into vodka
What's up?
Cow milk
Top hats
No taps
What's up?
No half full
Any glasses
No empty
Small cups
What's up?
Not ever
Full jugs
Bottoms up...
#alcohol
#butterfly
#ForbiddenLove
#mirror
#SelfDiscovery
139 reads
2 Comments
congress
Poem Published
4th Jul 2024 11:19am
4th Jul 2024 11:19am
True Love: She keeps bleeding love and I care
She will not stop to stop bleeding love
Just a blink of an eye to truly fall for her
Tight knot of love our fountain of wealth
My soul is blown I knew love is in the air
Gut is real and fear decided to be not fair
Blood rushes and the man in me has left
Should I rush for such a deal or stop there
Soul's tight links simply good for my health
Time flies when we deal with our love pact
Found love before the creepy jealous death
In her dimples lies the marks from her birth
She dug her soul to secure love at...
Just a blink of an eye to truly fall for her
Tight knot of love our fountain of wealth
My soul is blown I knew love is in the air
Gut is real and fear decided to be not fair
Blood rushes and the man in me has left
Should I rush for such a deal or stop there
Soul's tight links simply good for my health
Time flies when we deal with our love pact
Found love before the creepy jealous death
In her dimples lies the marks from her birth
She dug her soul to secure love at...
#butterfly
#kindness
#love
133 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
27th May 2024 7:39pm
27th May 2024 7:39pm
blow me away
you are such a crazy butterfly
flying around and around all the flowers...
nectar on your lips.
nectar in your pores.
nectar in everything in you.
open wings,
windows side by side,
light curtains.
nectar on the windows,
in your wings,
uncovered.
you are a butterfly and I...
I'm flying around you...
flowers that wait, crazy!
flying around and around all the flowers...
nectar on your lips.
nectar in your pores.
nectar in everything in you.
open wings,
windows side by side,
light curtains.
nectar on the windows,
in your wings,
uncovered.
you are a butterfly and I...
I'm flying around you...
flowers that wait, crazy!
#butterfly
#passion
#rain
#storm
#wind
129 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Feb 2024 00:27am
12th Feb 2024 00:27am
Butterfly
If the darkness cleaned our bodies
Only would have guided our souls too
If in death we shared in between the end
Only would have let us know
Butterflies in your tummy
Love lasts forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
If the dreams that filled us with hope
Only would have outlasted us
If the air that we suffocated with
Only hadn't let us go
...
Only would have guided our souls too
If in death we shared in between the end
Only would have let us know
Butterflies in your tummy
Love lasts forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
I have always known
That death lasts forever
Butterflies fly free
Fly free forever
If the dreams that filled us with hope
Only would have outlasted us
If the air that we suffocated with
Only hadn't let us go
...
#butterfly
#nature
143 reads
8 Comments
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
10th Feb 2024 3:39pm
10th Feb 2024 3:39pm
SMALL GREEN CATERPILLAR
Oh small green caterpillar, destined to transform
With your future of vibrant wings to adorn
Feasting and growing, unaware of what's in store
The tale you weave as I sit and learn
In your cocoon, in slumber so forlorn
Fear not, for you're not on your own
I'll await the morning when you will be reborn
To witness the beauty you have grown
A splendid monarch butterfly, now free to soar
The winds pick up their melody, like a horn being blown
With your future of vibrant wings to adorn
Feasting and growing, unaware of what's in store
The tale you weave as I sit and learn
In your cocoon, in slumber so forlorn
Fear not, for you're not on your own
I'll await the morning when you will be reborn
To witness the beauty you have grown
A splendid monarch butterfly, now free to soar
The winds pick up their melody, like a horn being blown
#butterfly
#nature
276 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
8th Feb 2024 5:37am
8th Feb 2024 5:37am
Waiting on the Wings
Sometimes you have to wait for the right time
For the right place
And when the time comes \ / we know it by heart
Because it just feels right \ / it just feels great
A butterfly knows exactly toO and by natural instinct
When it’s time to transform (.) when it’s time to change
The fantastic metamorphosis(…) is an awakening
Of mind, of body, of spirit, (….) and everything within
Slowly taking shape and form \ / all the while waiting on the wings
For the right place
And when the time comes \ / we know it by heart
Because it just feels right \ / it just feels great
A butterfly knows exactly toO and by natural instinct
When it’s time to transform (.) when it’s time to change
The fantastic metamorphosis(…) is an awakening
Of mind, of body, of spirit, (….) and everything within
Slowly taking shape and form \ / all the while waiting on the wings
#butterfly
#nature
#LifeChangingMoment
150 reads
4 Comments
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