Poems About Betrayal Seeking Honest Critique
#betrayal
Poems about betrayal seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 11:35am
8th Dec 2024 11:35am
With Hopes Of Giving His Wife A Surprise Christmas Present
Eddie finally came home from his
business trip with hopes of giving
his wife a surprise Christmas
present. But instead, he
was surprised to see
her naked on
their bed with
three hot
studs.
business trip with hopes of giving
his wife a surprise Christmas
present. But instead, he
was surprised to see
her naked on
their bed with
three hot
studs.
#betrayal
#Christmas
#fiction
#home
#sex
152 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 2:18am
6th Dec 2024 2:18am
Poison Blood
Says they’re poisoning our blood
While he poisons American me and our history
Selling lies and gold sneakers
Says you’re not one of US
When he came from land of immigrants
Father Fred born of a German barber
Land of the free what does that mean to me
They turn around and tell you when and what
You can do with your female body
Talk about freedom but all they do is close you in
If you think forward not in the past
You’re too woke you communist
Wallowing...
While he poisons American me and our history
Selling lies and gold sneakers
Says you’re not one of US
When he came from land of immigrants
Father Fred born of a German barber
Land of the free what does that mean to me
They turn around and tell you when and what
You can do with your female body
Talk about freedom but all they do is close you in
If you think forward not in the past
You’re too woke you communist
Wallowing...
#anger
#apathy
#betrayal
#conflict
#deception
75 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 7:14pm
4th Dec 2024 7:14pm
Mental Difficulties
Our existence is vain
This world has taken us
The seconds tick away
Time eats away our souls
We fall through its existence
Clawing away
At any memory left behind
It all becomes so repetitive
The cold stares eat away at your skin
Their lies they consume
They filled your brain with shit
Churn and turn they wash away your very existence
They filled your brain with shit
And gossip eat away at our conscious
Nothing here is ours, unique is just a fabrication
You Are a Cold Hard Copy
The next one...
This world has taken us
The seconds tick away
Time eats away our souls
We fall through its existence
Clawing away
At any memory left behind
It all becomes so repetitive
The cold stares eat away at your skin
Their lies they consume
They filled your brain with shit
Churn and turn they wash away your very existence
They filled your brain with shit
And gossip eat away at our conscious
Nothing here is ours, unique is just a fabrication
You Are a Cold Hard Copy
The next one...
#betrayal
#CallToAction
#deception
#lies
#manipulation
105 reads
10 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 2:46pm
2nd Dec 2024 2:46pm
Is She Doing It To Make Me Jealous Or What?
Wayne was sitting in
a dive having some coffee
and reading some Bradbury.
That's before he looked
across the street and saw his
wife kissing some other guy.
a dive having some coffee
and reading some Bradbury.
That's before he looked
across the street and saw his
wife kissing some other guy.
#betrayal
#coffee
#fiction
#lover
#wife
91 reads
4 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 8:40am
29th Nov 2024 8:40am
Capstone
I destroy all around me.
I seek and always find.
I'm not always who I used to be.
I like to wander through my mind
The ends are always beginnings.
The day of death; I celebrate .
I'm betting on the winnings.
It was foretold straight from the gate .
I'm missing like the capstone.
Yet, a pyre in the midst.
An ancient echoing microphone.
A collection of all my wits.
The tourists all around me,
They question as I amuse.
I mock them as I folly.
I like to torture and abuse.
I destroy them with...
I seek and always find.
I'm not always who I used to be.
I like to wander through my mind
The ends are always beginnings.
The day of death; I celebrate .
I'm betting on the winnings.
It was foretold straight from the gate .
I'm missing like the capstone.
Yet, a pyre in the midst.
An ancient echoing microphone.
A collection of all my wits.
The tourists all around me,
They question as I amuse.
I mock them as I folly.
I like to torture and abuse.
I destroy them with...
#betrayal
#prison
#utopia
110 reads
12 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 2:47am
28th Nov 2024 2:47am
How Dare You, You Cheating Jerk?!
Blair entered and found Kristy.
Her maid of honor's naked in bed.
That's before her fiancé entered.
Her maid of honor's naked in bed.
That's before her fiancé entered.
#betrayal
#fiction
#lover
#marriage
#sex
77 reads
0 Comments
ChaosScripted
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 7:29pm
25th Nov 2024 7:29pm
“Winter Weddings”
Turned my back;
Promises betrayed.
Vows broken.
Wishing I had stayed.
Decisions made in desperation,
Too late to turn around.
Running from my past,
A path of destruction found.
Blinded by pain.
Stupid became self-destructive:
Searching for death
Proved productive.
Clean is the razors cut;
Clean is the deadly dope.
Consumed in anguish
Killing myself to cope.
The hour soon to strike,
Fate deeply rooted.
Embrace the path,
Every step sure-footed.
Heart in His hands
Saved by His Grace. ...
Promises betrayed.
Vows broken.
Wishing I had stayed.
Decisions made in desperation,
Too late to turn around.
Running from my past,
A path of destruction found.
Blinded by pain.
Stupid became self-destructive:
Searching for death
Proved productive.
Clean is the razors cut;
Clean is the deadly dope.
Consumed in anguish
Killing myself to cope.
The hour soon to strike,
Fate deeply rooted.
Embrace the path,
Every step sure-footed.
Heart in His hands
Saved by His Grace. ...
#betrayal
#conflict
#regret
#sadness
#TimeHeals
111 reads
0 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 9:03am
23rd Nov 2024 9:03am
Have You Seen My Wife ? - a true story
Have you seen my wife?
the creaking floors, the hollow walls,
the garden where he planted beer cans
that bloom without joy.
She was the spark in his life once,
or so he thought
a face a caramel tart,
a voice like honey,
a promise dressed in silk.
But promises break,
don’t they?
Their house became a carnival,
not of laughter but of strangers.
Friends from overseas filled the guest rooms,
toasting her beauty,
praising the home he built.
Their cheers drowned the whispers
he refused...
the creaking floors, the hollow walls,
the garden where he planted beer cans
that bloom without joy.
She was the spark in his life once,
or so he thought
a face a caramel tart,
a voice like honey,
a promise dressed in silk.
But promises break,
don’t they?
Their house became a carnival,
not of laughter but of strangers.
Friends from overseas filled the guest rooms,
toasting her beauty,
praising the home he built.
Their cheers drowned the whispers
he refused...
#betrayal
#death
#deception
#lies
#TruthOfLife
63 reads
1 Comment
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 12:10pm
22nd Nov 2024 12:10pm
Bathroom Church
The reason I don’t go to church, because it’s full of shit
Honestly, a real man can recognize a sucka-ass pimp,
“Twisting the message of the Bible into his own word play
Seasoning the congregation for Hell every motherfuckin Sunday,
“Bible study Wednesday, fish fry Friday
Don’t come knocking on my door to preach that shit no day,
“I might be watching my Hellraiser marathon or trying to fuck
I will answer the door asshole naked and ask ‘what’s up?’
“Straight from the visual they will know shit ain’t right
And it...
Honestly, a real man can recognize a sucka-ass pimp,
“Twisting the message of the Bible into his own word play
Seasoning the congregation for Hell every motherfuckin Sunday,
“Bible study Wednesday, fish fry Friday
Don’t come knocking on my door to preach that shit no day,
“I might be watching my Hellraiser marathon or trying to fuck
I will answer the door asshole naked and ask ‘what’s up?’
“Straight from the visual they will know shit ain’t right
And it...
#betrayal
#religion
126 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 7:39pm
21st Nov 2024 7:39pm
Why Do We Have To Carry On
makin time
shoot the lights
people you believe in
make you say
call it a day
everybody leaving
everybody leaving
why do we have to carry on
always singing the same old song
tellin lies
shut your eyes
makin more excuses
telling the world
act like the fool
people are abusive
people are abusive
why do we have to carry on
always singing the same old song
lookin for
an open door
ever take your chances
take your pick
makes you sick
seeking new advances ...
shoot the lights
people you believe in
make you say
call it a day
everybody leaving
everybody leaving
why do we have to carry on
always singing the same old song
tellin lies
shut your eyes
makin more excuses
telling the world
act like the fool
people are abusive
people are abusive
why do we have to carry on
always singing the same old song
lookin for
an open door
ever take your chances
take your pick
makes you sick
seeking new advances ...
#betrayal
#honesty
#lies #lyrics
#lies #lyrics
89 reads
2 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 8:31pm
15th Nov 2024 8:31pm
Unlocking 2 Get In (Character Personality Collaboration)
#betrayal
#sex
158 reads
9 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 10:43am
15th Nov 2024 10:43am
Is Ignorance Always So Bliss? (collab w/ DamianDeadLove)
Slithering on their bellies out in old L.A.
Superficial elite’s invade artificial minds
Wilting souls exposed in shades of grey
Contractual red tape is the tie that binds
Throw a few crumpled bills in their face
They eat the bait right off the hook
Executives laugh, as these soulless souls try and compromise
They beg, as their lives are ruined
Heavy scrutiny under a public spotlight
Another fallen angel drowning in disgrace
The hunter is now hunted in such delight
When death arrives wearing a familiar face
Listen to...
Superficial elite’s invade artificial minds
Wilting souls exposed in shades of grey
Contractual red tape is the tie that binds
Throw a few crumpled bills in their face
They eat the bait right off the hook
Executives laugh, as these soulless souls try and compromise
They beg, as their lives are ruined
Heavy scrutiny under a public spotlight
Another fallen angel drowning in disgrace
The hunter is now hunted in such delight
When death arrives wearing a familiar face
Listen to...
#betrayal
#greed
#ignorance
#lies
#manipulation
93 reads
8 Comments
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