Poems About Betrayal Seeking Honest Critique
#betrayal
Poems about betrayal seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 2:48pm
23rd Dec 2024 2:48pm
To Get Back At That Husband Of Mine
#betrayal
#corruption
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
96 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 8:37pm
22nd Dec 2024 8:37pm
Not His Daughter Anymore
#betrayal
#daughter
#fiction
#home
#sex
38 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 11:14am
19th Dec 2024 11:14am
Truth or Death?
I despise that blunt honesty shit
Honesty isn't blunt
Honesty is cool
Lies are blunt
You want to hurt someone?
Lie to them!
Then shoot them in the fucking head!
Honesty isn't blunt
Honesty is cool
Lies are blunt
You want to hurt someone?
Lie to them!
Then shoot them in the fucking head!
#betrayal
#honesty
#lies #TruthOfLife
#lies #TruthOfLife
60 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 2:07pm
18th Dec 2024 2:07pm
You're Not Going To Believe What I Saw In Seth's Room
Felicity walked into Seth's
bedroom and caught him and his date
Gloria naked with Mark's
wife Diana before
she went to get the
others to show
them what was
going
on.
bedroom and caught him and his date
Gloria naked with Mark's
wife Diana before
she went to get the
others to show
them what was
going
on.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#threesome
103 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 3:32am
17th Dec 2024 3:32am
Linda Went To John's Apartment
Linda went to John's apartment.
He was naked on the kitchen floor.
He was also humping Barbara.
He was naked on the kitchen floor.
He was also humping Barbara.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
120 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 11:45am
16th Dec 2024 11:45am
Could You Please Knock Before Coming In Here?
"Could you please knock before coming in here?" was
what Jane said to her daughter Rachel who caught her
naked and letting some guy hump her in the
master bedroom before going to tell her dad.
David barged in on his wife and her lover
and ordered her to get dressed and out of his house
because he had enough of her cheating on
him with other guys even in front of Rachel.
what Jane said to her daughter Rachel who caught her
naked and letting some guy hump her in the
master bedroom before going to tell her dad.
David barged in on his wife and her lover
and ordered her to get dressed and out of his house
because he had enough of her cheating on
him with other guys even in front of Rachel.
#betrayal
#family
#fiction
#home
#sex
56 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 2:24am
16th Dec 2024 2:24am
You're Supposed To Be Mine! Not Theirs!
Kate peeked into Adam's bedroom.
She saw him naked with two chicks.
Afterwards, she kicked him out.
She saw him naked with two chicks.
Afterwards, she kicked him out.
#betrayal
#fiction
#home
#sex
#threesome
63 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 11:32am
11th Dec 2024 11:32am
Went To Your Place And Caught You
At
first, I
figured that
you really
did not mean to let
me get left behind. But
that was before I found out
that you moved yourself to Boston.
I went to your place and caught you in
the shower doing it with a couple!
first, I
figured that
you really
did not mean to let
me get left behind. But
that was before I found out
that you moved yourself to Boston.
I went to your place and caught you in
the shower doing it with a couple!
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#lover
#threesome
77 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 10:52am
11th Dec 2024 10:52am
A Wake Up Call For You
Here's something all of you don't know
I've suffered for all your sins
I may jump through this computer
This is where the fun begins
I may hit you hard
Just turn the other cheek
Are you the righteous one?
I bet most of you are weak
Your optimistic dreams leave you in the dust
The god you pray to is beginning to rust
Your body has expired, dig yourself a grave
Points of light, quickly fade
Just a reminder, you won't be saved
You think your free, but your chained like a slave
Happy Holidays!
I've suffered for all your sins
I may jump through this computer
This is where the fun begins
I may hit you hard
Just turn the other cheek
Are you the righteous one?
I bet most of you are weak
Your optimistic dreams leave you in the dust
The god you pray to is beginning to rust
Your body has expired, dig yourself a grave
Points of light, quickly fade
Just a reminder, you won't be saved
You think your free, but your chained like a slave
Happy Holidays!
#betrayal
#FeelingTrapped
#motivational
#weakness
#zombies
62 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 10:45am
11th Dec 2024 10:45am
False Friends
False pictures around my face
False hands around my place
Can't breathe behind this haze
No, this isn't some temporary phase
Enemy or friend
To fall or to stand
Can you tell me when does it end?
Your smiling means to hate
Same words from the same tape
Lying and fake
It's plain to see, but hard to take
Going over the thin ice
Before you speak think twice
You rape my mind with lies
Read the novel, Lord of the Flies
It's kicking me in my head
It's driving me fuckin' mad
I can't believe...
False hands around my place
Can't breathe behind this haze
No, this isn't some temporary phase
Enemy or friend
To fall or to stand
Can you tell me when does it end?
Your smiling means to hate
Same words from the same tape
Lying and fake
It's plain to see, but hard to take
Going over the thin ice
Before you speak think twice
You rape my mind with lies
Read the novel, Lord of the Flies
It's kicking me in my head
It's driving me fuckin' mad
I can't believe...
#anger
#betrayal
#friendship #lies
#friendship #lies
88 reads
14 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 1:21pm
10th Dec 2024 1:21pm
Date With a Philosopher
If you’ve seen the present, you’ve seen all things, from time immemorial into all of eternity. For everything that happens is related and the same.” Marcus Aurelius
The woman, who could pass for a fashion model, closes the book gently, her finger holding her place, and looks out the window at the city skyline. The night is still, but her mind is anything but. She begins to think, her voice taking on a reflective tone.
What we do this day... it's what humans have always done. No need to get into emotional distress about what is happening in any given moment.
...
The woman, who could pass for a fashion model, closes the book gently, her finger holding her place, and looks out the window at the city skyline. The night is still, but her mind is anything but. She begins to think, her voice taking on a reflective tone.
What we do this day... it's what humans have always done. No need to get into emotional distress about what is happening in any given moment.
...
#betrayal
#marriage
#philosophical #temptation
#philosophical #temptation
114 reads
1 Comment
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 9:23am
10th Dec 2024 9:23am
A Night Out: Do You Trust Him?
#betrayal
#dark
#death #sex
#death #sex
50 reads
0 Comments
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