Poems About Betrayal Seeking Honest Critique
#betrayal
Poems about betrayal seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:31pm
Yesterday 2:31pm
I Had Been Saving Myself For Marriage
Did you hump me hard?
Sure, Linda. Just like in Spartacus: Vengeance.
As in how hard, John?
Whoa! It hurts down there?
I need to go to the bathroom.
Just to find out... right?
Right. It'll be a minute.
Hi, Matt. I think I'm in trouble.
JOHN, YOU DAMN STINKING JERK!!
Now I know that. Later.
You made blood gush out of me!
Ah, Jeeze! Sorry about that.
I had been saving myself for marriage!
Great! That Gina and her bachelorette party!
Sure, Linda. Just like in Spartacus: Vengeance.
As in how hard, John?
Whoa! It hurts down there?
I need to go to the bathroom.
Just to find out... right?
Right. It'll be a minute.
Hi, Matt. I think I'm in trouble.
JOHN, YOU DAMN STINKING JERK!!
Now I know that. Later.
You made blood gush out of me!
Ah, Jeeze! Sorry about that.
I had been saving myself for marriage!
Great! That Gina and her bachelorette party!
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:28am
Yesterday 4:28am
Something Tells Me You're Really Not Thrilled
You're such a magnificent hump.
You too, Susan. But you're getting married.
I know. To Oliver. Tomorrow.
Something tells me you're really not thrilled.
Trust me, Mike. You got that right.
You too, Susan. But you're getting married.
I know. To Oliver. Tomorrow.
Something tells me you're really not thrilled.
Trust me, Mike. You got that right.
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
70 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 1:55pm
7th Apr 2025 1:55pm
Why Didn't You Tell Me I'm Topless?!
Carol was
interviewing some folks
at a celebrity party just
before some guy came over and placed both hands on
her bare chest and she saw Jeff filming
that whole scene with no words
being said.
interviewing some folks
at a celebrity party just
before some guy came over and placed both hands on
her bare chest and she saw Jeff filming
that whole scene with no words
being said.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#technology
78 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 2:22am
5th Apr 2025 2:22am
Just Keep Going
Yes! That feels so good!
When do you want me out, Nancy?
Soon, Alex! Just keep going!
I really do hope it is soon!
One guess! My husband called minutes ago?
When do you want me out, Nancy?
Soon, Alex! Just keep going!
I really do hope it is soon!
One guess! My husband called minutes ago?
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#lover
#sex
106 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 2:07pm
4th Apr 2025 2:07pm
I Can't Stay With One Who Cheats
After she caught Sean
humping her best friend
Sylvia, Nancy came to
realize that she's better
off without him and left
Santa Monica for good.
humping her best friend
Sylvia, Nancy came to
realize that she's better
off without him and left
Santa Monica for good.
#betrayal
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#sex
52 reads
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Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 3:09pm
2nd Apr 2025 3:09pm
Picture Frames
In whispers of a twilight dim,
Her eyes trace lines of her kindest friend,
She’d often been as one with him,
Where vows were meant to never end.
But in her heart, a secret blooms,
A love that's not for those in frames.
And in the pause, her conscience looms,
A silhouette filled with guilt and shame.
His face smiles from behind the glass,
Unknowing of her silent war,
Of lustful moments that cannot last,
And a stranger pressing in for more.
But still, she stares upon the frames
His every thrust, a silent plea. ...
Her eyes trace lines of her kindest friend,
She’d often been as one with him,
Where vows were meant to never end.
But in her heart, a secret blooms,
A love that's not for those in frames.
And in the pause, her conscience looms,
A silhouette filled with guilt and shame.
His face smiles from behind the glass,
Unknowing of her silent war,
Of lustful moments that cannot last,
And a stranger pressing in for more.
But still, she stares upon the frames
His every thrust, a silent plea. ...
#betrayal
#breakup
#lust
128 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
31st Mar 2025 9:09pm
31st Mar 2025 9:09pm
A New Way Of Saying The Engagement Is Off
Grant drove to San Francisco.
He went there to visit Cousin Nicole.
But he got surprised instead.
Grant walked into Nicole's apartment.
He saw her naked with some guy.
That guy isn't her fiancé.
He was humping her hard.
That's before he spotted Grant looking shocked.
He asked Nicole "Who's that?"
She looked up at Grant.
Nicole's working at Mitchell Brothers O'Farrell theatre.
Her lover's name is Zachary.
Both he and Helena are Nicole's co-workers.
Helena ran off to Cancun with Edward.
He went there to visit Cousin Nicole.
But he got surprised instead.
Grant walked into Nicole's apartment.
He saw her naked with some guy.
That guy isn't her fiancé.
He was humping her hard.
That's before he spotted Grant looking shocked.
He asked Nicole "Who's that?"
She looked up at Grant.
Nicole's working at Mitchell Brothers O'Farrell theatre.
Her lover's name is Zachary.
Both he and Helena are Nicole's co-workers.
Helena ran off to Cancun with Edward.
#betrayal
#family
#fiction
#lover
#sex
103 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 3:27pm
30th Mar 2025 3:27pm
Why Peter And Lindsay's Wedding Is Called Off
Barbara snapped pics of Lindsay.
She unbuttoned her friend's denim jacket slightly.
Then, Lindsay's fiancé Peter appeared.
He slid off his robe.
Barbara insisted Lindsay get naked as well.
Peter told Lindsay "It's okay."
Lindsay stripped and grabbed Peter.
Barbara snapped photos of both of them.
Then, someone slammed the door.
Barbara's roommate Karen looked shocked.
She was supposed to be Lindsay's bridesmaid.
Barbara tried to explain it.
Karen was too upset by that scene.
She slammed her bedroom...
She unbuttoned her friend's denim jacket slightly.
Then, Lindsay's fiancé Peter appeared.
He slid off his robe.
Barbara insisted Lindsay get naked as well.
Peter told Lindsay "It's okay."
Lindsay stripped and grabbed Peter.
Barbara snapped photos of both of them.
Then, someone slammed the door.
Barbara's roommate Karen looked shocked.
She was supposed to be Lindsay's bridesmaid.
Barbara tried to explain it.
Karen was too upset by that scene.
She slammed her bedroom...
#art
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
104 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 7:47pm
26th Mar 2025 7:47pm
How Dare You Do It To Me... Your Own Fiancé?
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
67 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Mar 2025 1:29am
24th Mar 2025 1:29am
I Hope Your Son Doesn't Catch Us
Scott finished taking his shower.
He saw Parker's mom naked in bed.
Made Scott drop his towel.
He saw Parker's mom naked in bed.
Made Scott drop his towel.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#mother
#sex
203 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 10:30am
23rd Mar 2025 10:30am
Figured That Jerk Would Be Cheating On Me
Jennie woke to door knocking.
She saw herself naked and with Ryan.
She went to the door.
She saw his lover Courteney looking angry.
Courteney also spotted a still sleeping Ryan.
She saw herself naked and with Ryan.
She went to the door.
She saw his lover Courteney looking angry.
Courteney also spotted a still sleeping Ryan.
#anger
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
121 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 9:14pm
21st Mar 2025 9:14pm
I Said I Wanted No Nuru Massages
Say, Harry. Wanna go bowling?
No thanks, John. I'm so bummed out.
That's what Markie told me.
Did she also tell you the reason?
So? You made a mistake. Stefanie'll forgive.
No way. I oughta know.
She really caught you humping Lindsay. Right?
It really was Stefanie's idea.
But she didn't know Lindsay's working there.
I said I wanted no nuru massages.
No thanks, John. I'm so bummed out.
That's what Markie told me.
Did she also tell you the reason?
So? You made a mistake. Stefanie'll forgive.
No way. I oughta know.
She really caught you humping Lindsay. Right?
It really was Stefanie's idea.
But she didn't know Lindsay's working there.
I said I wanted no nuru massages.
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
80 reads
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