Poems About Betrayal Seeking Honest Critique
#betrayal
Poems about betrayal seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 2:51pm
12th Apr 2024 2:51pm
Chapter 9 Home
Chapter 9 Home
As the plane began its descent into Oklahoma City, Brittney felt a heavy weight settle in her chest. The city lights below twinkled below like distant stars. She knew this place well, but it felt foreign after being in Kansas City four days.
As she closed her laptop thinking of all the learning from those days, she felt a tangled web of guilt and regret.
She had always prided herself on her faith, integrity, and loyalty. She had been raised with strong moral values, waiting until marriage before sharing herself with her husband, Alex....
As the plane began its descent into Oklahoma City, Brittney felt a heavy weight settle in her chest. The city lights below twinkled below like distant stars. She knew this place well, but it felt foreign after being in Kansas City four days.
As she closed her laptop thinking of all the learning from those days, she felt a tangled web of guilt and regret.
She had always prided herself on her faith, integrity, and loyalty. She had been raised with strong moral values, waiting until marriage before sharing herself with her husband, Alex....
#regret
#marriage
#betrayal #home
#betrayal #home
77 reads
2 Comments
BatPowers
Bat Powers
Bat Powers
Poem Published
11th Apr 2024 6:16pm
11th Apr 2024 6:16pm
Black Tongue
So here is the truth while I lie to your face
i'll be right you'll be wrong no debate
focus of your fury completely misplaced
found innocent by a jury i get to create
i've got a black tongue i know how to use it
heartache and disdain will all be included
turn day into night wrong into right
the sand drops down i terrorize you daily
when i'm done you'll be trash in the alley
they'll cheer me on as i abuse you
i can be 100 people all in one
someone's everything the moon and sun
take it all away like none of it mattered ...
i'll be right you'll be wrong no debate
focus of your fury completely misplaced
found innocent by a jury i get to create
i've got a black tongue i know how to use it
heartache and disdain will all be included
turn day into night wrong into right
the sand drops down i terrorize you daily
when i'm done you'll be trash in the alley
they'll cheer me on as i abuse you
i can be 100 people all in one
someone's everything the moon and sun
take it all away like none of it mattered ...
#betrayal
#manipulation
#deception
61 reads
4 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
11th Apr 2024 4:47pm
11th Apr 2024 4:47pm
Chapter 8 Departures
Chapter 8: Departures
In the early morning hours, Brittney and David had sex again before drifting back to sleep. She’d dreamed of walking in a garden when flowery wild vines began to climb her legs. When she stopped they continued to climb and held her feet to the ground. Eventually the vines climbed up her torso and began to wrap her neck. As she began to gasp for air, she woke up.
The first light of dawn filtered through the curtains, casting a soft glow across the room, Brittney began to replay the night before in her mind. Oh God, she thought. It had been so...
In the early morning hours, Brittney and David had sex again before drifting back to sleep. She’d dreamed of walking in a garden when flowery wild vines began to climb her legs. When she stopped they continued to climb and held her feet to the ground. Eventually the vines climbed up her torso and began to wrap her neck. As she began to gasp for air, she woke up.
The first light of dawn filtered through the curtains, casting a soft glow across the room, Brittney began to replay the night before in her mind. Oh God, she thought. It had been so...
#sex
#betrayal
97 reads
1 Comment
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
9th Apr 2024 10:21pm
9th Apr 2024 10:21pm
Chapter 6: Surrender
Chapter 6: Surrender
As the door closed behind them, they were sealed in the quiet intimacy of Brittney's hotel room high over the Kansas City skyline. The climate-controlled air was cool and sizzled with energy. David gazed at Brittney with the eyes of desire as he closed the distance between them with slow, deliberate steps.
Brittney's heart pounded in her chest. The rhythm of her pulse echoed in her ears. She could feel the heat of his body radiating against hers, igniting a fire deep within her that she knew wouldn’t be extinguished.
Brittney pulled away...
As the door closed behind them, they were sealed in the quiet intimacy of Brittney's hotel room high over the Kansas City skyline. The climate-controlled air was cool and sizzled with energy. David gazed at Brittney with the eyes of desire as he closed the distance between them with slow, deliberate steps.
Brittney's heart pounded in her chest. The rhythm of her pulse echoed in her ears. She could feel the heat of his body radiating against hers, igniting a fire deep within her that she knew wouldn’t be extinguished.
Brittney pulled away...
#lust
#sex
#betrayal
107 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 10:57am
8th Apr 2024 10:57am
Betrayal
The Day I returned
Awakened
Harmony divided
In my faith
Past memories
God is who I hate
Searching the betrayal
Shadows of light
Silent Tomorrow's
Endless night's
Awakened
Harmony divided
In my faith
Past memories
God is who I hate
Searching the betrayal
Shadows of light
Silent Tomorrow's
Endless night's
#betrayal
#night
#religion
#spiritual
#rhyming
65 reads
12 Comments
I_was_rare_once
Frododile
Frododile
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 4:55am
8th Apr 2024 4:55am
#25
At a glance,
Took no chance,
Peering in,
Struggling,
It ended with:
Red eyes,
Red flags,
Red lines.
You said that you were clean,
You said that you had changed, But when the daylight came,
I found you just the same.
Now I'm at a loss for words,
Now look at where we are at.
These days you think you feel the worst, The straw that breaks your back.
You can work yourself to the bone.
True but don't hurt your own home
Lose like life might not condone.
Look at the proof all around you!
How much will it take...
Took no chance,
Peering in,
Struggling,
It ended with:
Red eyes,
Red flags,
Red lines.
You said that you were clean,
You said that you had changed, But when the daylight came,
I found you just the same.
Now I'm at a loss for words,
Now look at where we are at.
These days you think you feel the worst, The straw that breaks your back.
You can work yourself to the bone.
True but don't hurt your own home
Lose like life might not condone.
Look at the proof all around you!
How much will it take...
#breakup
#betrayal
#death #confusion
#death #confusion
49 reads
0 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 6:05am
7th Apr 2024 6:05am
Delusional
I saw another woman in my dreams the other night.
Her pain soaks through my pillow
In phantom tears I cannot feel.
If this is how the tide must turn, set me free.
The paranoia grows tiresome.
Her pain soaks through my pillow
In phantom tears I cannot feel.
If this is how the tide must turn, set me free.
The paranoia grows tiresome.
#love
#lies
#betrayal
#dreams
#sleep
76 reads
1 Comment
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 1:45am
6th Apr 2024 1:45am
Prayer of Confession
Last night, my lips spoke the
pleasing words of deceit to a
man who was not my husband.
I have strayed from the path of fidelity,
seeking sexual gratification in
the arms of a stranger.
As my bed linens hold the stains of a man's lust,
my feeble words of confession hold the stain of hypocrisy.
Surely, there can be no mercy for me.
pleasing words of deceit to a
man who was not my husband.
I have strayed from the path of fidelity,
seeking sexual gratification in
the arms of a stranger.
As my bed linens hold the stains of a man's lust,
my feeble words of confession hold the stain of hypocrisy.
Surely, there can be no mercy for me.
#sex
#betrayal
#morality #prayer
#morality #prayer
144 reads
4 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
27th Mar 2024 2:27am
27th Mar 2024 2:27am
You do not Have to worry
You do not have to worry
About me any more
You have no idea of what you're writing
When you're adding up the score
You have no idea of who I am
And care so even less
I am more than over you
And have nothing to confess
You don't own the English language
None of the words are now your own
If you treat others, as you have me
You will find youself alone
This is all the time, I'll waste on you
I'm surprised I went this far
I will not mention any names
I know, you know, just who you are
About me any more
You have no idea of what you're writing
When you're adding up the score
You have no idea of who I am
And care so even less
I am more than over you
And have nothing to confess
You don't own the English language
None of the words are now your own
If you treat others, as you have me
You will find youself alone
This is all the time, I'll waste on you
I'm surprised I went this far
I will not mention any names
I know, you know, just who you are
#anger
#conflict
#betrayal
#MovingOn
#disappointment
129 reads
0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
25th Mar 2024 2:06am
25th Mar 2024 2:06am
Numb
I believed in every word that you said.
Every syllable,
Every letter went straight to my head.
To my soul.
To my heart.
It was laced with lies.
Hidden behind sweet kisses,
Long goodbyes.
It left no visible trace.
Like strychnine on lace.
When eyes met.
(not mine)
When hands touched.
(not mine)
When lips collided.
(NOT MINE)
What could I do?
What could I say?
Could not move.
Didn’t want...
Every syllable,
Every letter went straight to my head.
To my soul.
To my heart.
It was laced with lies.
Hidden behind sweet kisses,
Long goodbyes.
It left no visible trace.
Like strychnine on lace.
When eyes met.
(not mine)
When hands touched.
(not mine)
When lips collided.
(NOT MINE)
What could I do?
What could I say?
Could not move.
Didn’t want...
#betrayal
#emotional
155 reads
7 Comments
AprylNovember
A.R.M.
A.R.M.
Poem Published
16th Mar 2024 2:48am
16th Mar 2024 2:48am
You forgot me again.
You forgot my name today.
Just like, you did before.
Now, you have nothing to say.
Not a glance, as you shut the door.
You don't remember, it seems.
The promises told over and over and over.
Repeated, until, I believed.
Convincing me, to come closer.
Your efforts payed off, willingly.
I forgot, that my love,
Makes you, forget me.
If ever, I forget again.
And send you a message, at 3am.
Push delete, go back to sleep.
You'll never deserve me, you never did.
Just like, you did before.
Now, you have nothing to say.
Not a glance, as you shut the door.
You don't remember, it seems.
The promises told over and over and over.
Repeated, until, I believed.
Convincing me, to come closer.
Your efforts payed off, willingly.
I forgot, that my love,
Makes you, forget me.
If ever, I forget again.
And send you a message, at 3am.
Push delete, go back to sleep.
You'll never deserve me, you never did.
#betrayal
#MovingOn
#disappointment #deception
#disappointment #deception
120 reads
5 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
14th Mar 2024 11:52pm
14th Mar 2024 11:52pm
WHAT'S LOVE GOT TO DO WITH IT??
It's me again the story teller✍️ I think it's time to get involved, in the dark side of what love got to do with it 🤔 For the truth of the matter is love has a lot to do with it, now let's look even deeper then deep, inside the fundamentals of relationships of the past and present 🤔 For ask thyself what you felt like when you finally thought, that you found someone, who came into your life to bring a change from the norm. FOR the right reason to give you a strong and real love built from steel and stones 🤨 Yet in the silent of the night was a stranger,...
#heartbroken
#betrayal
#disappointment
#manipulation
#deception
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3 Comments
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