Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 11:55am
21st Dec 2024 11:55am
Riding the current
There's no night like tonight
They're all different
I went out there
I could taste the air
The power lines buzzing
I became part of the current
Like I knew exactly what was supposed to happen
So when the pig ran the stop sign and nearly ran my ass over,
my heart didn't skip once
I watch the man across the street watch me
He's plugged in too
We're both riding the current
It's not paranoia
It's just being on
Connected by the eyes
The eyes flash like knives
In the 7-11
I watch the man behind the counter ...
They're all different
I went out there
I could taste the air
The power lines buzzing
I became part of the current
Like I knew exactly what was supposed to happen
So when the pig ran the stop sign and nearly ran my ass over,
my heart didn't skip once
I watch the man across the street watch me
He's plugged in too
We're both riding the current
It's not paranoia
It's just being on
Connected by the eyes
The eyes flash like knives
In the 7-11
I watch the man behind the counter ...
#city
#LifeStruggles
#night
#ShortStory
#TruthOfLife
53 reads
6 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 11:10am
20th Dec 2024 11:10am
Smile! You're In A Box!
Am I a joke to you?
I want to see you smile,
And moan for me.
Lisa Simpson on a sax.
Paid for and taken out back.
At the club tonight.
Haven't been in a while.
Stay with me,
So I can make you smile!
Stop the jokes and moan a little more.
Sex brings the facts,
The whore does the chores.
There's no free country,
Music is just a style.
The rhythm is you.
The riddle is the box.
"A prison for you and me."
Jack and Jill on the sax.
Let me hear you sing!
I'm a creep seeking...
I want to see you smile,
And moan for me.
Lisa Simpson on a sax.
Paid for and taken out back.
At the club tonight.
Haven't been in a while.
Stay with me,
So I can make you smile!
Stop the jokes and moan a little more.
Sex brings the facts,
The whore does the chores.
There's no free country,
Music is just a style.
The rhythm is you.
The riddle is the box.
"A prison for you and me."
Jack and Jill on the sax.
Let me hear you sing!
I'm a creep seeking...
#music
#TruthOfLife
72 reads
12 Comments
drone
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 10:06am
20th Dec 2024 10:06am
Your Here
It is said
Your not Here
To Save the World
You are here
To save Your Self
And those
Who You
Care for
Your not Here
To Save the World
You are here
To save Your Self
And those
Who You
Care for
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
39 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 9:23am
20th Dec 2024 9:23am
True Colours
One can pacify
One's doubts
To the Point
Of non existence
Believing Face Value
Are the true colours
The consequences of this
Can well be
Psychological phisical pain
Or one can use
Intuition
That holds the leash
Of curiosity
That is straining
To show you
The true colours
That are shinning though
The mask
That you see
One's doubts
To the Point
Of non existence
Believing Face Value
Are the true colours
The consequences of this
Can well be
Psychological phisical pain
Or one can use
Intuition
That holds the leash
Of curiosity
That is straining
To show you
The true colours
That are shinning though
The mask
That you see
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
52 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 11:14am
19th Dec 2024 11:14am
Truth or Death?
I despise that blunt honesty shit
Honesty isn't blunt
Honesty is cool
Lies are blunt
You want to hurt someone?
Lie to them!
Then shoot them in the fucking head!
Honesty isn't blunt
Honesty is cool
Lies are blunt
You want to hurt someone?
Lie to them!
Then shoot them in the fucking head!
#betrayal
#honesty
#lies #TruthOfLife
#lies #TruthOfLife
63 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 00:58am
19th Dec 2024 00:58am
soul
discretion divine in my hallowed halls
sanctuary of heart interpretated
secreting away my soul
lest anyone see how soft I am
my heart alters according to my need
with prayers rising to heaven
grieving inward with despair
silently uttering my cares
please watch over my family
down on my knees I give thanks
grateful for fraility, grateful for sin
the knowledge recieved, is hard born
wisdom immortal, mine
sanctity of feeling within
my sacredness understood
with great care, I observe
learning...
sanctuary of heart interpretated
secreting away my soul
lest anyone see how soft I am
my heart alters according to my need
with prayers rising to heaven
grieving inward with despair
silently uttering my cares
please watch over my family
down on my knees I give thanks
grateful for fraility, grateful for sin
the knowledge recieved, is hard born
wisdom immortal, mine
sanctity of feeling within
my sacredness understood
with great care, I observe
learning...
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#wisdom
68 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 6:20pm
18th Dec 2024 6:20pm
New York City ..Wear Black
On the Q train this morning
Taking note
Everyone wearing some black
I'm in all Black
Head to toe
Pretty common
A word of warning
You should wear black
If you don't
You're seen as a tourist
Could get you mugged
Or worse
Taking note
Everyone wearing some black
I'm in all Black
Head to toe
Pretty common
A word of warning
You should wear black
If you don't
You're seen as a tourist
Could get you mugged
Or worse
#honesty
#PopCulture
#risk #TruthOfLife
#risk #TruthOfLife
100 reads
28 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 5:32am
18th Dec 2024 5:32am
My Transparent Dress
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
150 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 7:27pm
16th Dec 2024 7:27pm
All Your Life
Eyes with no vision
Ears that don't listen to a thing that's heard
Mouth that speaks in silence
Mind that's just as closed as is thoughtless
Senses given to me
Gone
Drowning in apathy
Forgotten
Blind but he can see what we won't
Deaf but he will feel more than we'll ever know
I will never hear your voice
Yet I will communicate
All your time...Less is more
All your love...Less is more
All your money...Less is more
All your hate...Less is more
All your life
Ears that don't listen to a thing that's heard
Mouth that speaks in silence
Mind that's just as closed as is thoughtless
Senses given to me
Gone
Drowning in apathy
Forgotten
Blind but he can see what we won't
Deaf but he will feel more than we'll ever know
I will never hear your voice
Yet I will communicate
All your time...Less is more
All your love...Less is more
All your money...Less is more
All your hate...Less is more
All your life
#apathy
#ignorance
#TruthOfLife
88 reads
12 Comments
drone
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 10:48am
16th Dec 2024 10:48am
Doesn't Match
It is said
When your own Personal
Self
Spirituality
Is spoon fed to you
From a child
Packaged
Done and dusted
Group hug Praze be
Your well on the way
To Confusion
IT'S harder than most roads
To Understand
Why
What you See
What you Read
What you're Preached
Doesn't match
Most of it
Doesn't Even Connect
To the Feeling
That You Now Feel
When your own Personal
Self
Spirituality
Is spoon fed to you
From a child
Packaged
Done and dusted
Group hug Praze be
Your well on the way
To Confusion
IT'S harder than most roads
To Understand
Why
What you See
What you Read
What you're Preached
Doesn't match
Most of it
Doesn't Even Connect
To the Feeling
That You Now Feel
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
38 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 10:44am
16th Dec 2024 10:44am
We is Us
I is you
And you are We
We is Us
We Stand alone
And yet Complete
Down to the Marrow
Of Our Spiritual Bones
And you are We
We is Us
We Stand alone
And yet Complete
Down to the Marrow
Of Our Spiritual Bones
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
44 reads
0 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 3:58am
16th Dec 2024 3:58am
AND HOW DOES THAT MAKE YOU FEEL
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
165 reads
2 Comments
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