Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TruthOfLife
truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
xthan
Poem Published
Today 2:02pm
Today 2:02pm
And the answer is, no.
I am actually so tired.
Of being asked to come out.
Being asked if i've eaten today.
When my next relief shift is.
Have I jot working dates down
on a calendar. Do I want to do this.
Do I want to do that. What am I up to.
Being called up asking where I am.
People forgetting I said I won't be
home. Calling in a panic when I
explained the aforementioned
in a text message hours ago.
People constantly baying
for undivided attention.
sorry I don't wanna
hear it right now.
An...
Of being asked to come out.
Being asked if i've eaten today.
When my next relief shift is.
Have I jot working dates down
on a calendar. Do I want to do this.
Do I want to do that. What am I up to.
Being called up asking where I am.
People forgetting I said I won't be
home. Calling in a panic when I
explained the aforementioned
in a text message hours ago.
People constantly baying
for undivided attention.
sorry I don't wanna
hear it right now.
An...
#TruthOfLife
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Today 12:49pm
Today 12:49pm
When we are shifting energy
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ what do you believe within your own thoughts and insight and imagination. For do you wish to make your life better than it's ever been, for do you have the ability and power to eliminate the negativity, and replace it with positivity. For sure we all have the ability to manifest that which we pray for in our lives and dreams. For do you believe in your dreams with a want and need, to sustain your own wishes for do you have the perseverance, to meet the challenges that will elevate you to your true spiritual potential. For do you...
#faith
#fate
#rebirth
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
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drone
Poem Published
Today 10:10am
Today 10:10am
Scab Lands
Are We not
NO more Superior
Arrogant
Then Those of Old
Relaying
On Their Own
Technology
Their Superiority
Most arrogant
In the extreme
Only weathering
The waves and the heat
Of greed and decit
While their people
Feld
To High Ground Back to the Caves
To Start
All Over Again
Hundreds of Years
Of Pain
For Many
For They Psychologicaly Believed
What they were Told
Are WE
Not the Same
Different Variations
But the Same...
NO more Superior
Arrogant
Then Those of Old
Relaying
On Their Own
Technology
Their Superiority
Most arrogant
In the extreme
Only weathering
The waves and the heat
Of greed and decit
While their people
Feld
To High Ground Back to the Caves
To Start
All Over Again
Hundreds of Years
Of Pain
For Many
For They Psychologicaly Believed
What they were Told
Are WE
Not the Same
Different Variations
But the Same...
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
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drone
Poem Published
Today 9:34am
Today 9:34am
Light
Even those of us
With a Dim
Light of Knowledge
Still Shine
In The Dark
With a Dim
Light of Knowledge
Still Shine
In The Dark
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
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Mercurial
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:02pm
Yesterday 1:02pm
Lamentations
It was morning when I fell upon a rock,
I found myself torn, almost split in half.
Training every day to be highly skilled,
Unaware that I left the house's bolts for someone else with the spanner.
They say, "Travel to see the world, for it's not a circle,"
But roam too much, and you might turn into a fool.
My folks say being consistent is the key,
Yet even standing up comes with its own fee.
Those in the game think they're showing us the light,
But they're the very source of all the chaos we fight.
"Do this, do...
I found myself torn, almost split in half.
Training every day to be highly skilled,
Unaware that I left the house's bolts for someone else with the spanner.
They say, "Travel to see the world, for it's not a circle,"
But roam too much, and you might turn into a fool.
My folks say being consistent is the key,
Yet even standing up comes with its own fee.
Those in the game think they're showing us the light,
But they're the very source of all the chaos we fight.
"Do this, do...
#freedom
#identity
#morality #TruthOfLife
#morality #TruthOfLife
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NP_NP
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 7:22pm
21st Jan 2025 7:22pm
Alter Ego
The night feels electric when
you live in the fast lane,
Fast life, faster money,
no brakes, no shame.
We both stare into the witch’s
cauldron, Whispering "fuck it,"
and leap in without hesitation.
I tried to walk the straight path,
to live my life right,
Said my prayers each night,
seeking peace in the fight.
"You used to be ruthless,
you took what you wanted,
A boot to their necks, your
power undaunted. I thought
I buried you deep, thought
you’d die, But you keep
coming...
you live in the fast lane,
Fast life, faster money,
no brakes, no shame.
We both stare into the witch’s
cauldron, Whispering "fuck it,"
and leap in without hesitation.
I tried to walk the straight path,
to live my life right,
Said my prayers each night,
seeking peace in the fight.
"You used to be ruthless,
you took what you wanted,
A boot to their necks, your
power undaunted. I thought
I buried you deep, thought
you’d die, But you keep
coming...
#identity
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeChangingMoment
#SelfReflection
#TruthOfLife
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drone
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 10:23am
21st Jan 2025 10:23am
Masquerade
Does not One
Find it
Strange
That the Many
Still Fail to Understand
The Modern upgraded
Version
Of the Meaning
Protecting People
And Our Land
In times past
IT was all the rage
And now the Many
SIT their Minds
To Watch the stage
To watch the Assigned Masks
That Are Paid
Find it
Strange
That the Many
Still Fail to Understand
The Modern upgraded
Version
Of the Meaning
Protecting People
And Our Land
In times past
IT was all the rage
And now the Many
SIT their Minds
To Watch the stage
To watch the Assigned Masks
That Are Paid
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
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drone
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 9:40am
21st Jan 2025 9:40am
Not A. Good idea
It is not
A good idea
To try
To Even Begin
To Half Understand
Our psychology
Of The Long List
Of Different Names
For
The Lizard Minded
For If You Do
Your World
Your Perceptions
Your Life
You
Will Change
A good idea
To try
To Even Begin
To Half Understand
Our psychology
Of The Long List
Of Different Names
For
The Lizard Minded
For If You Do
Your World
Your Perceptions
Your Life
You
Will Change
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
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ChaosScripted
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 3:02am
21st Jan 2025 3:02am
Prophetic Vision: 2:20 am, January 21, 2024
This is the vision that came to me from the Lord, my Father Above:
Eyes like nebulas, bright and aflame looking back at me amid a mist of darkness and white bright light beyond. All at once I’m taken up high. Looking down upon what appeared as a misshapen and segmented boulder. I look closer and it’s two swollen sections resembling two basins. At the top separating the two basins is a bright burning eye resembling the nebulae that was looking at me just a moment ago. Directly above the fiery eye is what appears to be a broken stick dotted with a stone or jewel of bright yellow. The left...
Eyes like nebulas, bright and aflame looking back at me amid a mist of darkness and white bright light beyond. All at once I’m taken up high. Looking down upon what appeared as a misshapen and segmented boulder. I look closer and it’s two swollen sections resembling two basins. At the top separating the two basins is a bright burning eye resembling the nebulae that was looking at me just a moment ago. Directly above the fiery eye is what appears to be a broken stick dotted with a stone or jewel of bright yellow. The left...
#faith
#rebirth
#sacrifice
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 12:43pm
20th Jan 2025 12:43pm
Be aware, look out!
A job worth doing is a job worth doing well, so they say
Efficiency and frugality are virtues at any age
You work hard for the boss
You play ball for the coach
Pull for the team
Be true to your school
Keep your eyes and ears open and your mouth shut
Look out for number one
Be strong
Strive for perfection in everything you do
People who do what they are told can be the most terrifying
Be one step ahead of your "friends" and surroundings
Look out!
Efficiency and frugality are virtues at any age
You work hard for the boss
You play ball for the coach
Pull for the team
Be true to your school
Keep your eyes and ears open and your mouth shut
Look out for number one
Be strong
Strive for perfection in everything you do
People who do what they are told can be the most terrifying
Be one step ahead of your "friends" and surroundings
Look out!
#betrayal
#lies
#philosophical #TruthOfLife
#philosophical #TruthOfLife
54 reads
16 Comments
drone
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 8:21am
20th Jan 2025 8:21am
What's Going On
Man
I don't understand
Anything anymore
The world's gone crazy
Of course you don't
What
You calling me Stupid
ER no
But let me ask you
A question
Have you even tried
To Understand
What the hell
Is going on
Within
Yourself
No
Then Your Stupid
Coz if You don't even half understand
What going on
Inside your self
How the hell
Are you going to Understand
What's going on
Out There
I don't understand
Anything anymore
The world's gone crazy
Of course you don't
What
You calling me Stupid
ER no
But let me ask you
A question
Have you even tried
To Understand
What the hell
Is going on
Within
Yourself
No
Then Your Stupid
Coz if You don't even half understand
What going on
Inside your self
How the hell
Are you going to Understand
What's going on
Out There
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
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drone
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 7:47am
20th Jan 2025 7:47am
Growing Pains
Some people Say
Unconsciously
To them self's
I can only Grow
In My
Self imposed
Invironment
In My
Wilfully Compressed
Perceptions
In the Scrub lands
Of My
Self Deceit
Its the Only way I know
Of Avoiding
The Price
The Psychological Pain
Of My Potential Growth
Of Leaving
All that I'm use to
All that I've Ever known
Behind
Unconsciously
To them self's
I can only Grow
In My
Self imposed
Invironment
In My
Wilfully Compressed
Perceptions
In the Scrub lands
Of My
Self Deceit
Its the Only way I know
Of Avoiding
The Price
The Psychological Pain
Of My Potential Growth
Of Leaving
All that I'm use to
All that I've Ever known
Behind
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
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