Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Line them up against the wall
Line them up against the wall
No time for a rebellion
Only the strong to conquer them all
And rule with an iron fist
But what if the weak refuse to fall
And rise up with a passion
What if they fight the tyrant's thrall
And fight for their freedom
The strong will line then up against the wall
The strong leave no room for weakness.
They conquer and oppress.
They will give them religion.
A savior with the face of their oppressors
Freedom that teaches them obedience.
They will give them peace,...
No time for a rebellion
Only the strong to conquer them all
And rule with an iron fist
But what if the weak refuse to fall
And rise up with a passion
What if they fight the tyrant's thrall
And fight for their freedom
The strong will line then up against the wall
The strong leave no room for weakness.
They conquer and oppress.
They will give them religion.
A savior with the face of their oppressors
Freedom that teaches them obedience.
They will give them peace,...
#power
#TruthOfLife
#weakness
#inequality
#oppression
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NUDE STAINED GLASS
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
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If the world gave up...
If the world gave up,
I would still be fighting.
Because I love to love.
Fuck what the world says:
"Love means only some."
"love isn't worth the hate."
I love the silver linings.
If the world gave up,
I would still be standing.
I broke the chains of shame and crying.
Or I am older now, but the world is older.
Though even elders make cracks in the pavements walked by youth.
If the world gave up,
I would be tempted.
Making the most is hard, I know.
But if the world went ghost, I would...
I would still be fighting.
Because I love to love.
Fuck what the world says:
"Love means only some."
"love isn't worth the hate."
I love the silver linings.
If the world gave up,
I would still be standing.
I broke the chains of shame and crying.
Or I am older now, but the world is older.
Though even elders make cracks in the pavements walked by youth.
If the world gave up,
I would be tempted.
Making the most is hard, I know.
But if the world went ghost, I would...
#morality
#peace
#responsibility #TruthOfLife
#responsibility #TruthOfLife
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Girl in lingerie wakes up after night of partying with me
Sorry guys
FULL VERSION
COMING SOON
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FULL VERSION
COMING SOON
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#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
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What is sin doing among you?
If you belief what is sin doing among you?
you carry cruelty within your hearts
you carry hatred in your breathe.
yet you say you belief,
what sort of belief is this?
when sin lives among you?
how many must die in the name of your god?
how many must suffer under the tyranny of the cloth?
How many cries must echo in hallowed halls?
How many prayers must falter,
how many tears must fall?
Yet you claim to believe,
What is sin doing among you?
with conviction so hollow,
When sin casts its shadow and sorrow...
you carry cruelty within your hearts
you carry hatred in your breathe.
yet you say you belief,
what sort of belief is this?
when sin lives among you?
how many must die in the name of your god?
how many must suffer under the tyranny of the cloth?
How many cries must echo in hallowed halls?
How many prayers must falter,
how many tears must fall?
Yet you claim to believe,
What is sin doing among you?
with conviction so hollow,
When sin casts its shadow and sorrow...
#despair
#faith
#morality #TruthOfLife
#morality #TruthOfLife
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4 Comments
Light at the End of the Tunnel
The day
The last unicorn returns
Phoenix rises from the ashes
And the lost boy is found
Is the day
Humankind takes the first step
Towards awakening
The last unicorn returns
Phoenix rises from the ashes
And the lost boy is found
Is the day
Humankind takes the first step
Towards awakening
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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2 Comments
Exploring
During the night
I travel my dreams
Within my dreams
I search for my soul
Whilst exploring my soul
I experience reality
From reality
To realness
Through dissecting my mind
I sense my body
Interacting with body
Brings me to life
In life we live our dreams
If we’re so lucky
Or if we so choose
By our choosing
We make conscious decisions
Within decisions
Lies a whole world
Lest we stop exploring
Lest we forget whence we came from
The who, what, when,...
I travel my dreams
Within my dreams
I search for my soul
Whilst exploring my soul
I experience reality
From reality
To realness
Through dissecting my mind
I sense my body
Interacting with body
Brings me to life
In life we live our dreams
If we’re so lucky
Or if we so choose
By our choosing
We make conscious decisions
Within decisions
Lies a whole world
Lest we stop exploring
Lest we forget whence we came from
The who, what, when,...
#dreams
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
#NaPoWriMo2024
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3 Comments
On ...Off ...Tell me Another...Cut the Crap !!
That's my new expression
Old school like me
No apologies
I'll run circles around your candy ass
Streaming replaced cable
Bigger and faster they claimed
Still clouds and freezes
Just more bullshit
On... Off I say
Freaks of nature
Guys wearing shorts in 40 degree NYC
Motorized bikes, scooters, skateboards
Riding on the sidewalks
Pedestrians be damned
Selfish isn’t a right of passage
Hold a door for your neighbor
On… Off I say
5000 channels
Ten ingredient flavored mayonnaise
QR...
Old school like me
No apologies
I'll run circles around your candy ass
Streaming replaced cable
Bigger and faster they claimed
Still clouds and freezes
Just more bullshit
On... Off I say
Freaks of nature
Guys wearing shorts in 40 degree NYC
Motorized bikes, scooters, skateboards
Riding on the sidewalks
Pedestrians be damned
Selfish isn’t a right of passage
Hold a door for your neighbor
On… Off I say
5000 channels
Ten ingredient flavored mayonnaise
QR...
#technology
#TruthOfLife
#consumerism
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
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42 Comments
Be Yourself
It’s a question that is as old as time
Do we want fit in or do we wish to stand out?
It’s that ancient dilemma that has plagued many
Conformity versus authenticity
Should we speak our truth?
Or do we silence our voice to please others?
Being true to ourselves
Should gain the respect of other people
So long as we are honest, humble and diligent
For in the genuine and sincere interaction with others
There will be a connection
A meeting of the minds if you will
That will show our uniqueness
65 Unique
93 Total
Do we want fit in or do we wish to stand out?
It’s that ancient dilemma that has plagued many
Conformity versus authenticity
Should we speak our truth?
Or do we silence our voice to please others?
Being true to ourselves
Should gain the respect of other people
So long as we are honest, humble and diligent
For in the genuine and sincere interaction with others
There will be a connection
A meeting of the minds if you will
That will show our uniqueness
65 Unique
93 Total
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#NaPoWriMo2024
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1 Comment
Calanders
What System
Is one living in
Because Calanders Run deep
Back
Into a World
Where what they knew
When you Start
To Understand
Will Make You Weep
Is one living in
Because Calanders Run deep
Back
Into a World
Where what they knew
When you Start
To Understand
Will Make You Weep
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
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0 Comments
REFLECTION (mid 1990's, Galveston Island, Texas)
look broadly at the big mirror
see the big picture reflected there
do you see and feel only darkness and fear
or do you feel and see love
joy hope beauty and wonder
looking back out at you instead
quick
look around
and behind the big mirror again
do you still see love
at some point the big mirror will break
shattering into a thousand other
individually reflective pieces
where you will still see and be left
with only yourself and the big picture
in your mind and quickened senses
and hopefully love
joy hope...
see the big picture reflected there
do you see and feel only darkness and fear
or do you feel and see love
joy hope beauty and wonder
looking back out at you instead
quick
look around
and behind the big mirror again
do you still see love
at some point the big mirror will break
shattering into a thousand other
individually reflective pieces
where you will still see and be left
with only yourself and the big picture
in your mind and quickened senses
and hopefully love
joy hope...
#spiritual
#mirror
#TruthOfLife
#SelfReflection
#SelfDiscovery
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6 word story
Forever grasping
To find love everlasting
To find love everlasting
#TruthOfLife
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1 Comment
DU Poetry : Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems