Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TruthOfLife
truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Trome
Poem Published
Today 3:21am
Today 3:21am
THE NAKED TRUTH
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
64 reads
4 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 1:13pm
24th Dec 2024 1:13pm
When the bridge keeps getting burnt
One has to ask
Who the arsonist is
Who the arsonist is
#SelfReflection
#TruthOfLife
44 reads
1 Comment
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 3:40pm
23rd Dec 2024 3:40pm
~bhakti yoga in all it’s rasas.. the liberation in love
viz: bhakti
#fire
#freedom
#love
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
80 reads
6 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 11:57am
22nd Dec 2024 11:57am
Scumbags
There is no light without darkness! There is no gift without neglect. There is no happiness without sadness. There is no memory, if you don't forget.... :P i can feel it :D ;)
#TruthOfLife
61 reads
7 Comments
drone
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 9:23am
22nd Dec 2024 9:23am
Hard tech
Does one
Hate to Learn
How to use
One's own personal
Soft Technology
That much
One is willing
To Sacrifice
One's own personal
Conection
To Source
To that Spark
That defines
Who You Are
Hate to Learn
How to use
One's own personal
Soft Technology
That much
One is willing
To Sacrifice
One's own personal
Conection
To Source
To that Spark
That defines
Who You Are
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
35 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 9:08am
22nd Dec 2024 9:08am
Odds
It's well over the odds
When calculating the Costs
Of the Consequences
That will Be
Incurred
When one Decides
Not to Fight
Those Thoughts
That Claim
Their Yours
When calculating the Costs
Of the Consequences
That will Be
Incurred
When one Decides
Not to Fight
Those Thoughts
That Claim
Their Yours
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
27 reads
0 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 5:48am
22nd Dec 2024 5:48am
between ages 51 and 52,
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
99 reads
2 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 4:25am
22nd Dec 2024 4:25am
Deserted
Sonoran desert
sparse like you
unsentimental wishes
alluring invitation
cancelled party
sparse like you
unsentimental wishes
alluring invitation
cancelled party
#desert
#hope
#TruthOfLife
61 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 3:18am
22nd Dec 2024 3:18am
Spiritual Awakening
TO BE GRATEFUL AND THANKFUL AND BLESSED YET WHY is it that there is ways to go to escape, from the negativity and drama, but yet it doesn't matter what you think 🤔 and still feel. For sure we have to learn to truly navigate, through the process of the SUBCONSCIOUSNESS OF THOSE THINGS. THAT SEEMS TO JUST DRAW US IN SO many LEVELS OF CONTROL OVER US. YET I have found what I need to sustain life 🙏 for it's the truth of the nonsense that doesn't matter 😔 but yet it does sometimes. 🤨 For sure everything that we have to go through, is precious to life that sometimes...
#faith
#rebirth
#religion
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
41 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Dec 2024 11:55am
21st Dec 2024 11:55am
Riding the current
There's no night like tonight
They're all different
I went out there
I could taste the air
The power lines buzzing
I became part of the current
Like I knew exactly what was supposed to happen
So when the pig ran the stop sign and nearly ran my ass over,
my heart didn't skip once
I watch the man across the street watch me
He's plugged in too
We're both riding the current
It's not paranoia
It's just being on
Connected by the eyes
The eyes flash like knives
In the 7-11
I watch the man behind the counter ...
They're all different
I went out there
I could taste the air
The power lines buzzing
I became part of the current
Like I knew exactly what was supposed to happen
So when the pig ran the stop sign and nearly ran my ass over,
my heart didn't skip once
I watch the man across the street watch me
He's plugged in too
We're both riding the current
It's not paranoia
It's just being on
Connected by the eyes
The eyes flash like knives
In the 7-11
I watch the man behind the counter ...
#city
#LifeStruggles
#night
#ShortStory
#TruthOfLife
53 reads
6 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 11:10am
20th Dec 2024 11:10am
Smile! You're In A Box!
Am I a joke to you?
I want to see you smile,
And moan for me.
Lisa Simpson on a sax.
Paid for and taken out back.
At the club tonight.
Haven't been in a while.
Stay with me,
So I can make you smile!
Stop the jokes and moan a little more.
Sex brings the facts,
The whore does the chores.
There's no free country,
Music is just a style.
The rhythm is you.
The riddle is the box.
"A prison for you and me."
Jack and Jill on the sax.
Let me hear you sing!
I'm a creep seeking...
I want to see you smile,
And moan for me.
Lisa Simpson on a sax.
Paid for and taken out back.
At the club tonight.
Haven't been in a while.
Stay with me,
So I can make you smile!
Stop the jokes and moan a little more.
Sex brings the facts,
The whore does the chores.
There's no free country,
Music is just a style.
The rhythm is you.
The riddle is the box.
"A prison for you and me."
Jack and Jill on the sax.
Let me hear you sing!
I'm a creep seeking...
#music
#TruthOfLife
72 reads
12 Comments
drone
Poem Published
20th Dec 2024 10:06am
20th Dec 2024 10:06am
Your Here
It is said
Your not Here
To Save the World
You are here
To save Your Self
And those
Who You
Care for
Your not Here
To Save the World
You are here
To save Your Self
And those
Who You
Care for
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
37 reads
0 Comments
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