Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TruthOfLife
truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Today 8:07am
Today 8:07am
4 Walls and a door
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ Let's have a real sense of what is understanding, between two people's who came together to be, honest and truthful and blessed. TO finally meet someone, who knew what love, really feels like to the deepness of the, heart ❤️ and mind and thoughts. 🤔 Yet through the courses, we have to learn to journey and travel and walk together instead of alone, but with someone who wants the same things as you are seeking and searching for in your life and love and the world. 🌍 For...
#faith
#fate
#love
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
24 reads
0 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:45pm
Yesterday 9:45pm
ExperiMental Drug
If sex trafficking happened behind the scenes,
Infront of friends and family.
Would any of them actually try to contain,
What normal people would call insane?
Or are family and friends just stock brokers?
People who hide in grocery stores.
Betting on selling coworkers,
To benefit themselves and nothing more?
Infront of friends and family.
Would any of them actually try to contain,
What normal people would call insane?
Or are family and friends just stock brokers?
People who hide in grocery stores.
Betting on selling coworkers,
To benefit themselves and nothing more?
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
64 reads
1 Comment
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
15th Apr 2025 11:44am
15th Apr 2025 11:44am
This morning I signed onto starsrite.com before DUP ...
I wanted to see how it felt
And you know what ?
It felt good ....
And you know what ?
It felt good ....
#home
#identity
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeCycle
#TruthOfLife
98 reads
20 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
14th Apr 2025 3:09pm
14th Apr 2025 3:09pm
The People
Nothing helps more,
Than the person that was there before.
Everyone else is just making an excuse,
To get a paycheck.
No one wants that.
The more you harrass,
The less i'll relax.
The people you trust,
Are the ones pushing your luck.
And they dont give a fuck,
About you or me.
Isn't that funny?
Than the person that was there before.
Everyone else is just making an excuse,
To get a paycheck.
No one wants that.
The more you harrass,
The less i'll relax.
The people you trust,
Are the ones pushing your luck.
And they dont give a fuck,
About you or me.
Isn't that funny?
#TruthOfLife
56 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Apr 2025 00:44am
14th Apr 2025 00:44am
(The Last Upper)
Jesus had a huge supper, with large amounts of uppers
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during the last...
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during the last...
#aliens
#God
#nonfiction
#scifi
#TruthOfLife
71 reads
6 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 7:58pm
13th Apr 2025 7:58pm
I Need A Doctor
It's amazing how fast your health comes back,
When people stop trying to prevent that.
The problem is negativity.
Not drugs, or kids, or financial instability.
You wake up to people who know nothing.
Then have them force themselves on me.
But, my body is everchanging.
What used to be is no longer me.
If you think the double helix is the crime,
Then maybe you should sit back and unwind.
I'm disturbing to some as I intertwine,
I like to build things from a mine.
Let's create the new Frankenstein. ...
When people stop trying to prevent that.
The problem is negativity.
Not drugs, or kids, or financial instability.
You wake up to people who know nothing.
Then have them force themselves on me.
But, my body is everchanging.
What used to be is no longer me.
If you think the double helix is the crime,
Then maybe you should sit back and unwind.
I'm disturbing to some as I intertwine,
I like to build things from a mine.
Let's create the new Frankenstein. ...
#TruthOfLife
71 reads
14 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
11th Apr 2025 6:10pm
11th Apr 2025 6:10pm
Wake Up
Wake up; there's no warmth in the morning
Wake up; just the cold on my skin
No love; just the echoes of the silence
No hand ever reaching within
Wake up; is there anyone who's listening?
Wake up; I’ve been crying without sound
Oh love; I have begged beneath the ruins
Still no soul is ever around
Alone; alone... no one’s coming
Alone; alone... just the rain
Alone; alone.... can you hear it?
The sound of a world gone vain.
Wake up; see the riches getting richer
Wake up; while we’re sleeping in pain
No love;...
Wake up; just the cold on my skin
No love; just the echoes of the silence
No hand ever reaching within
Wake up; is there anyone who's listening?
Wake up; I’ve been crying without sound
Oh love; I have begged beneath the ruins
Still no soul is ever around
Alone; alone... no one’s coming
Alone; alone... just the rain
Alone; alone.... can you hear it?
The sound of a world gone vain.
Wake up; see the riches getting richer
Wake up; while we’re sleeping in pain
No love;...
#HumanRights
#LifeStruggles
#loneliness
#motivational
#TruthOfLife
41 reads
0 Comments
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 9:40pm
10th Apr 2025 9:40pm
Fib... onacci
Lies.
Truth.
Which one?
Does anybody know?
Is truth an absolute phenomenon,
always valid, unchanging, for all, regardless of context?
Or is it a relative, shifting complexity, dependent on one's beliefs and viewpoint?
I searched for the answer in something reliable - mathematics -
figuring that shapes and calculations are facts, and figures do not lie;
only for points of reference to change,
in such realms as imaginary numbers and non-Cartesian geometry.
What was true in three-dimensional...
Truth.
Which one?
Does anybody know?
Is truth an absolute phenomenon,
always valid, unchanging, for all, regardless of context?
Or is it a relative, shifting complexity, dependent on one's beliefs and viewpoint?
I searched for the answer in something reliable - mathematics -
figuring that shapes and calculations are facts, and figures do not lie;
only for points of reference to change,
in such realms as imaginary numbers and non-Cartesian geometry.
What was true in three-dimensional...
#lies
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
46 reads
0 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
8th Apr 2025 9:28pm
8th Apr 2025 9:28pm
~the dramance of an extraordinary night
https://youtu.be/J89EqPyZx54?feature=shared
neither dark nor light.. a hazy
shadowy silhouetted full-moon night
of a still budding nascence .. as
if a no-moon twilight zone..
descends down
in a swarming~ echoing army
of half-hollowed arrows.. almost
puncturing midway as it
touches down.. although
lopsided, in no accuracies
to her the dreamy veiled
Earth.. in an endless swirl ...
neither dark nor light.. a hazy
shadowy silhouetted full-moon night
of a still budding nascence .. as
if a no-moon twilight zone..
descends down
in a swarming~ echoing army
of half-hollowed arrows.. almost
puncturing midway as it
touches down.. although
lopsided, in no accuracies
to her the dreamy veiled
Earth.. in an endless swirl ...
#love
#lover
#night
#TruthOfLife
#WritingPoetry
62 reads
5 Comments
neves
Poem Published
8th Apr 2025 2:28pm
8th Apr 2025 2:28pm
Heavy soup
You don't realise you're starving
until your nostrils are full of tubes,
watching strangers have proper
meals, feeling your hands shake
because they want to do more,
so they keep stirring with a large
spoon as you swallow looking up
towards the ceiling and light
catches salt water diving
into a steel pot.
until your nostrils are full of tubes,
watching strangers have proper
meals, feeling your hands shake
because they want to do more,
so they keep stirring with a large
spoon as you swallow looking up
towards the ceiling and light
catches salt water diving
into a steel pot.
#TruthOfLife
#symbolism
80 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 1:19pm
4th Apr 2025 1:19pm
The truth will unfold
Undeniably, shadows consume the sky.
Inescapably the stars dim and die.
Uncharacteristically, whispers turn to screams.
Disproportionately hope fractures dreams.
Incomprehensibly, the world twists to decay.
Unexceptionally time drifts away.
Individualistically, souls stand alone.
Irresponsibly they carve from stone.
Unintentionally, paths to ruin align.
Uncompromisingly darkness claims what’s mine.
Inescapably the stars dim and die.
Uncharacteristically, whispers turn to screams.
Disproportionately hope fractures dreams.
Incomprehensibly, the world twists to decay.
Unexceptionally time drifts away.
Individualistically, souls stand alone.
Irresponsibly they carve from stone.
Unintentionally, paths to ruin align.
Uncompromisingly darkness claims what’s mine.
#honesty
#LifeStruggles
#mirror
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
68 reads
4 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 9:47pm
3rd Apr 2025 9:47pm
IP
When people hide multiple IP addresses,
And random numbers,
To send you fake text messages,
And hide online,
Behind multiple "friends"
That are all in competition.
They call themselves the government.
And expect women with kids,
To be impressed.
But really it just pisses us off.
Because my kid is not impressed,
By the way you duck your head,
When their mothers try to sever it.
Because you fucking deserve it.
And random numbers,
To send you fake text messages,
And hide online,
Behind multiple "friends"
That are all in competition.
They call themselves the government.
And expect women with kids,
To be impressed.
But really it just pisses us off.
Because my kid is not impressed,
By the way you duck your head,
When their mothers try to sever it.
Because you fucking deserve it.
#TruthOfLife
73 reads
0 Comments
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