Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TruthOfLife
truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Trome
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:54am
Yesterday 4:54am
FELLATIO FROM KRISTINA X
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
133 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
6th May 2025 11:42pm
6th May 2025 11:42pm
Thank You DUP
I never saw myself as a poet
More of a narrative writer
Rhyme ain't my dime
Yet there was a calling
Instead of running from it
I ran towards it
There are too many of you to thank personally
The end is going to be devastating on May 13th
One day past the passing of our phenomenal DUP
I will miss all of you
I did my best as your Cowboy and your Sheriff
Kept you on your toes didn't I ??
Onward we must go
I thank you Webmistress for your dedication
To my loyal readers of which there are many
Thank you...
More of a narrative writer
Rhyme ain't my dime
Yet there was a calling
Instead of running from it
I ran towards it
There are too many of you to thank personally
The end is going to be devastating on May 13th
One day past the passing of our phenomenal DUP
I will miss all of you
I did my best as your Cowboy and your Sheriff
Kept you on your toes didn't I ??
Onward we must go
I thank you Webmistress for your dedication
To my loyal readers of which there are many
Thank you...
#gratitude
#LifeAsAWriter
#SelfDiscovery
#TruthOfLife
#WritingPoetry
109 reads
38 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
2nd May 2025 4:49am
2nd May 2025 4:49am
MY LAST LICKS BEFORE THIS POETRY SITE DISAPPEARS
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
274 reads
0 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
1st May 2025 10:15am
1st May 2025 10:15am
~':: nowness. newness. nothingness... '
https://youtu.be/LoPf32nKYb8?feature=shared
let you take me in in inner
in your whirlpooling pull
a cataclysmic kissing eating spree
in a deluge of your love my soul
يا روحي,~ ya roohi
digest destroy deconstruct me
in this your calling cosmic kill
a profound grinding in
dissolution I give in
wholly… in this ...
let you take me in in inner
in your whirlpooling pull
a cataclysmic kissing eating spree
in a deluge of your love my soul
يا روحي,~ ya roohi
digest destroy deconstruct me
in this your calling cosmic kill
a profound grinding in
dissolution I give in
wholly… in this ...
#apocalypse
#love
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
111 reads
4 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
1st May 2025 7:12am
1st May 2025 7:12am
~of the origin-less eye of this (mael)storm
that
centered over these flaring up
eyes… these eyes, frisked off
its scorching memories
its staring wide identities
made to shed away
the living daylights…
its unblinking long glares
& the deafening blares
unto
undulating empty blebs
of burst & burnt out
blinding blights
sucking wholly off its
deserted deathly life
all in a split-second
of a transcendence
a...
centered over these flaring up
eyes… these eyes, frisked off
its scorching memories
its staring wide identities
made to shed away
the living daylights…
its unblinking long glares
& the deafening blares
unto
undulating empty blebs
of burst & burnt out
blinding blights
sucking wholly off its
deserted deathly life
all in a split-second
of a transcendence
a...
#love
#spiritual
#StreamOfConsciousness #TruthOfLife
#StreamOfConsciousness #TruthOfLife
105 reads
6 Comments
DCLXVI_1989
Poem Published
30th Apr 2025 5:38am
30th Apr 2025 5:38am
Borrowed Energy
To think is to cry
Like touching water for the last time
Realizing is sorrow
Only here for awhile
Only time to borrow
Consciousness is pain
Realizing the beauty of life
Each a final a breath
Thoughts of thoughts
Like touching water for the last time
Realizing is sorrow
Only here for awhile
Only time to borrow
Consciousness is pain
Realizing the beauty of life
Each a final a breath
Thoughts of thoughts
#TruthOfLife
65 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
29th Apr 2025 2:09pm
29th Apr 2025 2:09pm
Underworlds Aloft
Beware the winner and his boast
since loss is into winning baked
and either one might just be faked
into the flames of hell to roast
where profit, loss, and victory
are all reduced to elements
which the chaos further dements
back into the inventory
of subatomic mass and flux
where a future reality
swims like a fish within the sea
of random unenlightened fucks
that mold below, and up above,
chosen ingots of hate...or love.
since loss is into winning baked
and either one might just be faked
into the flames of hell to roast
where profit, loss, and victory
are all reduced to elements
which the chaos further dements
back into the inventory
of subatomic mass and flux
where a future reality
swims like a fish within the sea
of random unenlightened fucks
that mold below, and up above,
chosen ingots of hate...or love.
#TruthOfLife
156 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 9:18pm
28th Apr 2025 9:18pm
~the second homecoming (#2)(collab with Uma)
that…
powers another golden chance…
a second... a finale... homecoming
in a decelerating downfall
as a tiny pithy gravity stone...
drowning unto deep oceans
wholly absorptive of the noisy
jet of rocketing down sounds...
in a muted sagacious silence
the earthen grounds in touch now…
from where… he gazes intense
into his much bonded & beatific
constellations of her...
he searches for long... with
a paining ache towards her
earthen absence... his heaving
heart melts away to tears
of...
powers another golden chance…
a second... a finale... homecoming
in a decelerating downfall
as a tiny pithy gravity stone...
drowning unto deep oceans
wholly absorptive of the noisy
jet of rocketing down sounds...
in a muted sagacious silence
the earthen grounds in touch now…
from where… he gazes intense
into his much bonded & beatific
constellations of her...
he searches for long... with
a paining ache towards her
earthen absence... his heaving
heart melts away to tears
of...
#love
#romantic
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
140 reads
13 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 8:56pm
28th Apr 2025 8:56pm
~the second homecoming (#2) (collab with Keith, Vision_of_insanity)
that…
powers another golden chance…
a second... a finale... homecoming
in a decelerating downfall
as a tiny pithy gravity stone...
drowning unto deep oceans
wholly absorptive of the noisy
jet of rocketing down sounds...
in a muted sagacious silence
the earthen grounds in touch now…
from where… he gazes intense
into his much bonded & beatific
constellations of her...
he searches for long... with
a paining ache towards her
earthen absence... his heaving
heart melts...
powers another golden chance…
a second... a finale... homecoming
in a decelerating downfall
as a tiny pithy gravity stone...
drowning unto deep oceans
wholly absorptive of the noisy
jet of rocketing down sounds...
in a muted sagacious silence
the earthen grounds in touch now…
from where… he gazes intense
into his much bonded & beatific
constellations of her...
he searches for long... with
a paining ache towards her
earthen absence... his heaving
heart melts...
#love
#romantic
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
#spiritual #TruthOfLife
152 reads
8 Comments
beanbandit
Poem Published
28th Apr 2025 2:07am
28th Apr 2025 2:07am
Dai
I’m not asking you to read every word I’ve ever written.
I’m not asking you to carry the weight of everything I am.
I just want you to know
When I say I love you,
it’s not just something sweet I learned to say.
It’s decades of fights with myself.
It’s every mistake I made when I thought surviving was enough.
It’s every sunrise I cursed because I was still here.
It’s every poem I carved out of the dark, hoping there might be something worth finding.
You don't have to love me back.
You don't have to promise anything.
You don't even have to...
I’m not asking you to carry the weight of everything I am.
I just want you to know
When I say I love you,
it’s not just something sweet I learned to say.
It’s decades of fights with myself.
It’s every mistake I made when I thought surviving was enough.
It’s every sunrise I cursed because I was still here.
It’s every poem I carved out of the dark, hoping there might be something worth finding.
You don't have to love me back.
You don't have to promise anything.
You don't even have to...
#freedom
#love
#TruthOfLife
136 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Apr 2025 00:50am
27th Apr 2025 00:50am
Here there's beauty
Here there's beauty amongst the clouds drifting, by as puffs of cotton moving slowly, within the silent whispers of the invisible winds, with the light of the full moon, shining and peeking through the clouds. But yet here I sit high upon the peaceful mountain top. That a moment ago I climbed the stairway of stone, to touch the deepness of the clouds as though I could, reach out my waiting hands to feel the wet mist, that once was held back the rain drops of silent tears, from falling gracefully to the ground below. 👇 YET it is in the here and now I am at peace, but I am not here...
#faith
#rebirth
#redemption
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
88 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Apr 2025 8:02pm
26th Apr 2025 8:02pm
self control
drinking in the mood
sulking in the light
Moved by the sound of you breathing
deep exhale and sigh
exasperated sadness, and I fall into the depths
My own sorrow matches
your disappointment evident
My heart weeps knowing I caused it
My soul sinks, I disappoint myself
So good at letting myself down
Success scares me
The responsibility of maintaining that kind of life
makes my head spin
I'm not sure I could do it
Then there's the money
and the fear of losing it
I'm reckless, and I'm frightened I...
sulking in the light
Moved by the sound of you breathing
deep exhale and sigh
exasperated sadness, and I fall into the depths
My own sorrow matches
your disappointment evident
My heart weeps knowing I caused it
My soul sinks, I disappoint myself
So good at letting myself down
Success scares me
The responsibility of maintaining that kind of life
makes my head spin
I'm not sure I could do it
Then there's the money
and the fear of losing it
I'm reckless, and I'm frightened I...
#sadness
#TruthOfLife
83 reads
3 Comments
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