Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 12:49pm
12th Apr 2024 12:49pm
Disdain for you my sweet
Wretched but beautiful
My eyes see you but I look away
Throw yourself into a den of lions
I'll bring the popcorn and goobers
Will they eat you or spit you out
Your flesh is bitter and diseased
To much negativity and malignancy
How can one walk around with such a tainted soul?
Bless yourself in my river of urine
That's what I think of you anyway
Take it, accept it
That's all your worth
Go home and drown yourself in your bottomless, endless self pity
Have a great weekend
My eyes see you but I look away
Throw yourself into a den of lions
I'll bring the popcorn and goobers
Will they eat you or spit you out
Your flesh is bitter and diseased
To much negativity and malignancy
How can one walk around with such a tainted soul?
Bless yourself in my river of urine
That's what I think of you anyway
Take it, accept it
That's all your worth
Go home and drown yourself in your bottomless, endless self pity
Have a great weekend
#hate
#SelfHarm
#fiction
#TruthOfLife
#manipulation
52 reads
13 Comments
Eerie
Poem Published
11th Apr 2024 4:28pm
11th Apr 2024 4:28pm
Journey to the Stars
There are no more holes
to bury secrets.
Standing in the chasm between
body and spirit, I am unbroken.
Taking back my time, my being,
my every last piece that once was dismantled,
walking into a new life
here, or into another dimension
replete with love:
this is the measure of life.
Emerging in starlight as
dust to earth
heat to fire
breath to air
weightless to water.
My journey to the stars
may be long…
But it is healing.
to bury secrets.
Standing in the chasm between
body and spirit, I am unbroken.
Taking back my time, my being,
my every last piece that once was dismantled,
walking into a new life
here, or into another dimension
replete with love:
this is the measure of life.
Emerging in starlight as
dust to earth
heat to fire
breath to air
weightless to water.
My journey to the stars
may be long…
But it is healing.
#death
#stars
#TruthOfLife #LifeCycle
#TruthOfLife #LifeCycle
122 reads
7 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 8:06pm
10th Apr 2024 8:06pm
Unconditonal Love
love I've found comes at an emotional cost
when your heart is open and honest it can be beautiful
no one is perfect however
and no one gets along together all of the time
storms will come and they will go
unconditional love surprises me
to be loved no matter what, a shock
earlier in life emotional price tags prove too costly, for my broken soul
be the perfect kid
or your debt is due
get out, we no longer love you
I still struggle today with insecurity
thinking you will only love me if I remain beautiful to look at ...
when your heart is open and honest it can be beautiful
no one is perfect however
and no one gets along together all of the time
storms will come and they will go
unconditional love surprises me
to be loved no matter what, a shock
earlier in life emotional price tags prove too costly, for my broken soul
be the perfect kid
or your debt is due
get out, we no longer love you
I still struggle today with insecurity
thinking you will only love me if I remain beautiful to look at ...
#love
#TruthOfLife
102 reads
6 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 4:16pm
7th Apr 2024 4:16pm
Dreaming Desert
bolting storm.
night defined
by flashes of insight.
truth seems capricious.
is it something else
to honeybee or coyote?
fulfilling, foreboding
or light in flight,
like fairies dusting blue sky.
fact becomes fiction,
fantasy masquerades
as thundering reality.
beneath gray clouds,
realities fade
silently screaming.
unbidden truths
capriciously
lying in wait.
© 2024
night defined
by flashes of insight.
truth seems capricious.
is it something else
to honeybee or coyote?
fulfilling, foreboding
or light in flight,
like fairies dusting blue sky.
fact becomes fiction,
fantasy masquerades
as thundering reality.
beneath gray clouds,
realities fade
silently screaming.
unbidden truths
capriciously
lying in wait.
© 2024
#storm
#nature
#TruthOfLife #desert
#TruthOfLife #desert
60 reads
1 Comment
Trome
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 5:22am
7th Apr 2024 5:22am
Why DID I f**k YOU
#women
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
130 reads
5 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 1:48pm
5th Apr 2024 1:48pm
Wardruna - Hertan
take me wherever you want
as long as you keep that pace
as if my heart beats
at the center of the universe
repeat the verse to me
talk equitably different to me
about everything I don't see
but that inhabits my skin
take me with you to places
that I only imagined but I know
that are out there waiting for me
free me from the limits that bind
shares my body with the energy
share my energy with life
share my life with everyone
let us all share the light of existence
as long as you keep that pace
as if my heart beats
at the center of the universe
repeat the verse to me
talk equitably different to me
about everything I don't see
but that inhabits my skin
take me with you to places
that I only imagined but I know
that are out there waiting for me
free me from the limits that bind
shares my body with the energy
share my energy with life
share my life with everyone
let us all share the light of existence
#identity
#TruthOfLife
#LifeCycle
#magic
#SelfDiscovery
49 reads
4 Comments
drone
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 11:37am
5th Apr 2024 11:37am
All Inclusive
It is often Said
Unconsciously
Psychologicaly
By the Human Minded
To the Monkey minded
IF they Burn
In the refuge
Their backs
Against
The razer wall
We All Burn
Don't you Get It
They will be
Replaced
By Us
Unconsciously
Psychologicaly
By the Human Minded
To the Monkey minded
IF they Burn
In the refuge
Their backs
Against
The razer wall
We All Burn
Don't you Get It
They will be
Replaced
By Us
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
61 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 11:27am
5th Apr 2024 11:27am
Paradigm Shift
Does one Have
A Little
Cognitive Dissonance
Where the Lens
Of Your
Struggling Perceptions
Has separated
From your eyes
As you Stumble
As you Fall
Into the dungeon
A cave with bars
Where the Shadows
Of the Collective
Welcome You
With open arms
As You cry them a river
In a Sad Belief
That Shallow
Means Deep
Not Understanding
The Consequences
Of what that Means
A Little
Cognitive Dissonance
Where the Lens
Of Your
Struggling Perceptions
Has separated
From your eyes
As you Stumble
As you Fall
Into the dungeon
A cave with bars
Where the Shadows
Of the Collective
Welcome You
With open arms
As You cry them a river
In a Sad Belief
That Shallow
Means Deep
Not Understanding
The Consequences
Of what that Means
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#philosophical
45 reads
0 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
5th Apr 2024 5:21am
5th Apr 2024 5:21am
SPREADED LIKE MAYONNAISE
I hated mayonnaise
my entire life
... until the first time
I made my own
MAYONNAISE SANDWICH
at age 19
Then it was like
the heavens open new doors
Open wide
MY LATIN EYE'S
SAW THIS FILTHY FEMALE
SPREADED LIKE MAYONNAISE
my entire life
... until the first time
I made my own
MAYONNAISE SANDWICH
at age 19
Then it was like
the heavens open new doors
Open wide
MY LATIN EYE'S
SAW THIS FILTHY FEMALE
SPREADED LIKE MAYONNAISE
#women
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
138 reads
2 Comments
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
4th Apr 2024 12:20pm
4th Apr 2024 12:20pm
MYSTERY UNDER ROCKS DEEP ERRIE ROADS
Too many deaths
It's hard now the count
It keeps growing more than sex
It's a rebel without a cause no doubt
The sad way it is, found even lost skeletons
Murders more than before, what God think's of it now?
It's hard now the count
It keeps growing more than sex
It's a rebel without a cause no doubt
The sad way it is, found even lost skeletons
Murders more than before, what God think's of it now?
#dark
#murder
#death
#TruthOfLife
#suffering
68 reads
5 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2024 4:25am
3rd Apr 2024 4:25am
POEM YOU
#women
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
145 reads
18 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2024 4:19pm
2nd Apr 2024 4:19pm
No Redemption
A lot of poets spend time and ink saying they're not poets
Well that's not me
2000 poems later I'm something
Redemption is a bear
I think about repentance
Then pour another drink
Flagrant foul, 2 shots and the ball
Well that's not me
2000 poems later I'm something
Redemption is a bear
I think about repentance
Then pour another drink
Flagrant foul, 2 shots and the ball
#LifeAsAWriter
#TruthOfLife
#redemption #StreamOfConsciousness
#redemption #StreamOfConsciousness
132 reads
43 Comments
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