Poems About Feeling Lost by Top Critiquers

Wait for me,
Please.
O, wait for me,
You're dancing too fast----
so way out of line
Spinning like a top,
I'm falling behind!

Wait for me,
You're loving too quick----
an explosive mine
After the prey,
I'm falling behind!

You're living to swift----
no time to, " be "
so outta sight,
Please wait for me!

Not resting enough----
for or five hours a day?
Whatever is, it can wait;
sleep a while and stay.

You're working too much----
'say you can't spare...

Buried and still breathing inside this sand dune..
Show me the new things that you know under this shining sun..
We are sighting this moon at noon..  
So, tell me all the new things which you know under a shining sun..  
 
 
Inside this grave me and all these creatures lying you all know this Canned Sardines..        
Inside here, right here am their Prison Warden..        
Relentlessly praying and sobbing at the same time to one day touch the door steps of Eden's Garden..        
        
While this got written I don't actually...

fuck this fluff shit
I'm sailing out to sea
leaving a place that used to mean
everything to me
long ago it was filled with artistry
sounds of magic bursted though the speakers
moving my body with old lovers
shaking it to the ground
we thought the fun would never stop
surely it could only get better
but we were wrong
I think the last of the sweet fruit
has been plucked
the music was stripped
cheapened and sold for nickels
best to fake a smile
you can't play realism at the clubs
no county for old men
this...

Holly went into her
room, sat on a
window sill and
watched a bird
flying free in the
air which made
her wish she
could do more
with her life.