Poems About Feeling Lost by Top Critiquers
#FeelingLost
Poems about feeling lost by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
29th Sep 2020 6:49pm
29th Sep 2020 6:49pm
The man I loved
#FeelingLost
627 reads
5 Comments
Zazzles
Broomie
Broomie
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 7:41pm
16th Jan 2025 7:41pm
TikTok
I am tired of the lies
and I’m tired of the greed
universal love
is all that we need
Around the world
and across the pond
friendships are growing
creating bonds
Become part of the community
please join today
I’m fighting for TikTok
because TikTok
is the way🫶🏻
and I’m tired of the greed
universal love
is all that we need
Around the world
and across the pond
friendships are growing
creating bonds
Become part of the community
please join today
I’m fighting for TikTok
because TikTok
is the way🫶🏻
#FeelingLost
139 reads
4 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
16th Apr 2022 2:22am
16th Apr 2022 2:22am
hauntingly
alone in this
world
alone between
us
alone within
ourselves
despite the
touching
despite the
feelings
despite the
love
ghost moving
from second
to second
blind
and
lost
world
alone between
us
alone within
ourselves
despite the
touching
despite the
feelings
despite the
love
ghost moving
from second
to second
blind
and
lost
#loneliness
#LifeStruggles
#FeelingLost
375 reads
3 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
24th Jul 2024 11:42pm
24th Jul 2024 11:42pm
Perfectly intact
I plead insanity.
By now I should have learned.
Happiness is not for me.
I'm here to get burned.
It's so melodic.
My heart drums a sullen beat.
A tempo so despotic.
Victory song of self defeat.
I'm Insufferable.
Thus should suffer being weak.
Designed irreparable.
Another fix is all I seek.
It's narcotic.
Now it wears my skin.
Discordant harmonic.
Bound to kill me from within.
I fill the interim.
Like a space that isn't there.
Shows my delirium.
You're not...
By now I should have learned.
Happiness is not for me.
I'm here to get burned.
It's so melodic.
My heart drums a sullen beat.
A tempo so despotic.
Victory song of self defeat.
I'm Insufferable.
Thus should suffer being weak.
Designed irreparable.
Another fix is all I seek.
It's narcotic.
Now it wears my skin.
Discordant harmonic.
Bound to kill me from within.
I fill the interim.
Like a space that isn't there.
Shows my delirium.
You're not...
#FeelingLost
274 reads
6 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
29th Sep 2023 11:18pm
29th Sep 2023 11:18pm
Dissassociation
To crawl into the rabbit hole, and wither away with wonder.
Pulling me under and in, internal inquisition.
Like curling up without a blanket.
Breathing isn't the same.
What should be common sense, I now question.
I find myself sucking all the air I allow myself.
Hypothesized, ionic, blue, electrical current.
Hypnotic engagement, layers.
Down, swirling, spinning, perception, imagination, all flowing.
I try to stop the gravity of flooding awe, but the unraveling mystery alternates my senses.
It seems as though synesthesia, the...
Pulling me under and in, internal inquisition.
Like curling up without a blanket.
Breathing isn't the same.
What should be common sense, I now question.
I find myself sucking all the air I allow myself.
Hypothesized, ionic, blue, electrical current.
Hypnotic engagement, layers.
Down, swirling, spinning, perception, imagination, all flowing.
I try to stop the gravity of flooding awe, but the unraveling mystery alternates my senses.
It seems as though synesthesia, the...
#prose
#myself
#SelfReflection
#mystery
#FeelingLost
431 reads
7 Comments
Lilliputian
Poem Published
19th Nov 2024 5:12pm
19th Nov 2024 5:12pm
Lost Souls _ with "Adagio"
sunken within the consuming mist,
eyes turning blear,
mind clouded and vision dull
of lost souls in pantomime near,
echoing a fallen tear
hanging on to a shadow's hull.
eyes turning blear,
mind clouded and vision dull
of lost souls in pantomime near,
echoing a fallen tear
hanging on to a shadow's hull.
#FeelingLost
#collaboration
174 reads
9 Comments
COOPCAT
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 12:43pm
2nd Mar 2025 12:43pm
HURTS
The day begins,
A coffee, a smile into the void.
And positive thoughts, yes.
A smell, and suddenly you get paralyzed,
You shake your head,
You want to continue but there is no turning back,
You put on music, you settle on a corner of the bed,
And you realize that remembering, it still hurts.
A coffee, a smile into the void.
And positive thoughts, yes.
A smell, and suddenly you get paralyzed,
You shake your head,
You want to continue but there is no turning back,
You put on music, you settle on a corner of the bed,
And you realize that remembering, it still hurts.
#FeelingLost
98 reads
5 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2021 11:08am
2nd Mar 2021 11:08am
Feelings lost
Feelings lost
Your hand runs across my face, I feel your tender touch, along my shoulders you're still there, is to wish for more to much
Because I know when you touch my chest, soon sensation will be gone, it left the very moment, my spinal chord went wrong
I can feel you kiss me, see the love and desire in your eyes, but no longer will I feel your hand running up my thigh
No more of your soft Velvet touch, no more simple hand resting on my knee, even though I can see your touch, that's all that's left for me
Broken from the chest...
Your hand runs across my face, I feel your tender touch, along my shoulders you're still there, is to wish for more to much
Because I know when you touch my chest, soon sensation will be gone, it left the very moment, my spinal chord went wrong
I can feel you kiss me, see the love and desire in your eyes, but no longer will I feel your hand running up my thigh
No more of your soft Velvet touch, no more simple hand resting on my knee, even though I can see your touch, that's all that's left for me
Broken from the chest...
#sadness
#FeelingLost
#emotional
586 reads
4 Comments
Mars_August
Mars August
Mars August
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 1:17am
1st Mar 2025 1:17am
Just Catching Up/Do Dead People Pray?
Mama,
It’s been a long time since I’ve written, but you are, in fact, a spectator. So you see everything, but you know me. I have to put it all down on paper, and then give it to others because some days it’s the only proof I have that I am anywhere at all.
My body is a locked jaw, grinding teeth to dust, and it’s all to keep something inside. I’m uncertain what will tumble out if I let it all go. Will it have teeth, claws, and green and yellow froth coming from its mouth? Or will it fall to the ground, its mummified parts turning to dust after eons in darkness?
...
It’s been a long time since I’ve written, but you are, in fact, a spectator. So you see everything, but you know me. I have to put it all down on paper, and then give it to others because some days it’s the only proof I have that I am anywhere at all.
My body is a locked jaw, grinding teeth to dust, and it’s all to keep something inside. I’m uncertain what will tumble out if I let it all go. Will it have teeth, claws, and green and yellow froth coming from its mouth? Or will it fall to the ground, its mummified parts turning to dust after eons in darkness?
...
#death
#FeelingLost
#gratitude
#mother
#SelfDiscovery
62 reads
6 Comments
faithmairee
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2024 10:53am
22nd Apr 2024 10:53am
The Lady Blue (Torn Between Two Lovers)
I believed Gary when he said we were through so when he showed up at a party Joe and I threw, I was shocked to see him. Not only was he there but he had come alone. I couldn't stop thinking about him and all of the good times we had shared.
Towards the end of the evening, he followed me into the kitchen as I went to get a drink of water from the faucet. I had just set the empty glass in the sink and was turning around when he cornered me in front of the refrigerator.
"You look absolutely stunning," he said pushing me gently against the refrigerator....
Towards the end of the evening, he followed me into the kitchen as I went to get a drink of water from the faucet. I had just set the empty glass in the sink and was turning around when he cornered me in front of the refrigerator.
"You look absolutely stunning," he said pushing me gently against the refrigerator....
#conflict
#FeelingLost
#lover #sex
#lover #sex
184 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Jun 2023 12:22pm
15th Jun 2023 12:22pm
What Made Holly Make That Wish
Holly went into her
room, sat on a
window sill and
watched a bird
flying free in the
air which made
her wish she
could do more
with her life.
room, sat on a
window sill and
watched a bird
flying free in the
air which made
her wish she
could do more
with her life.
#home
#birds
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#FeelingLost
239 reads
2 Comments
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