Poems About Feeling Lost by Top Critiquers
#FeelingLost
Poems about feeling lost by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
28th Nov 2020 12:34pm
28th Nov 2020 12:34pm
chipped.
in the wee
early hours
of mo(u)rning
that's when I noticed it,
so clear
betrayal
has broken off a chip
yet, a heart beats
-still-
while cracked
an'd missing... it's very own piece
early hours
of mo(u)rning
that's when I noticed it,
so clear
betrayal
has broken off a chip
yet, a heart beats
-still-
while cracked
an'd missing... it's very own piece
#FeelingLost
107 reads
20 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2021 8:03pm
23rd Feb 2021 8:03pm
Thoughts in an abandoned house
How much sadness in these forgotten ones
Our abandoned buildings and houses!
The windows are broken, the doors are clogged
Sad shadow of wilting ...
In old and abandoned
our houses
someone else's smell,
unusual and strange
To infinity
space scope,
crumpled lines
And the
strangeness of desires
obsession and oppression,
crushing the debris
glass and showers,
crunchy underfoot,
tearing themselves
the cobweb snares
Wonders: faces,
mourners over us,
someone's saints
on a plywood...
Our abandoned buildings and houses!
The windows are broken, the doors are clogged
Sad shadow of wilting ...
In old and abandoned
our houses
someone else's smell,
unusual and strange
To infinity
space scope,
crumpled lines
And the
strangeness of desires
obsession and oppression,
crushing the debris
glass and showers,
crunchy underfoot,
tearing themselves
the cobweb snares
Wonders: faces,
mourners over us,
someone's saints
on a plywood...
#death
#LifeStruggles
#LifeCycle
#FeelingLost
#suffering
95 reads
29 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
2nd May 2020 10:56pm
2nd May 2020 10:56pm
Wanderer
Forlorn traveler,
Where have ye been?
Lost among other peripatetics.
Seeking answers to questions
no longer remembered.
Roaming untamed landscapes of the ego.
Running from fear
undefined.
Remaining in trepidation
established.
A journey never concluded.
Where have ye been?
Lost among other peripatetics.
Seeking answers to questions
no longer remembered.
Roaming untamed landscapes of the ego.
Running from fear
undefined.
Remaining in trepidation
established.
A journey never concluded.
#confusion
#FeelingLost
#choices #SelfWorth
#choices #SelfWorth
260 reads
27 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
21st Aug 2020 3:06pm
21st Aug 2020 3:06pm
Swirl
A clear day,
Beautiful sky,
Except for the smog
In his mind.
A huge blurr
Of constant indecisions
Ruling his life,
Ruining his life,
Cutting him apart
As many very precise
Surgical incisions.
Beautiful sky,
Except for the smog
In his mind.
A huge blurr
Of constant indecisions
Ruling his life,
Ruining his life,
Cutting him apart
As many very precise
Surgical incisions.
#myself
#confusion
#SelfReflection #FeelingLost
#SelfReflection #FeelingLost
89 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Nov 2019 00:51am
13th Nov 2019 00:51am
Swept Off into a Dream
She swore they’d always be friends,
Then again that’s how friendships end,
He couldn’t be more than what he wanted to be,
She had his heart and held the key,
But that’s what happens when one falls for another,
When the emotions run deep one discovers,
The stars weren’t aligned,
Now they’re left far behind
And the light that once gleamed,
Got swept off into a dream.
And so they went their separate ways,
Bonded by memories of golden days,
But the feeling feels like a nostalgic ember,
It’s fantastic just to remember, ...
Then again that’s how friendships end,
He couldn’t be more than what he wanted to be,
She had his heart and held the key,
But that’s what happens when one falls for another,
When the emotions run deep one discovers,
The stars weren’t aligned,
Now they’re left far behind
And the light that once gleamed,
Got swept off into a dream.
And so they went their separate ways,
Bonded by memories of golden days,
But the feeling feels like a nostalgic ember,
It’s fantastic just to remember, ...
#UnrequitedLove
#FeelingLost
#nostalgia
248 reads
11 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2021 11:08am
2nd Mar 2021 11:08am
Feelings lost
Feelings lost
Your hand runs across my face, I feel your tender touch, along my shoulders you're still there, is to wish for more to much
Because I know when you touch my chest, soon sensation will be gone, it left the very moment, my spinal chord went wrong
I can feel you kiss me, see the love and desire in your eyes, but no longer will I feel your hand running up my thigh
No more of your soft Velvet touch, no more simple hand resting on my knee, even though I can see your touch, that's all that's left for me
Broken from the chest...
Your hand runs across my face, I feel your tender touch, along my shoulders you're still there, is to wish for more to much
Because I know when you touch my chest, soon sensation will be gone, it left the very moment, my spinal chord went wrong
I can feel you kiss me, see the love and desire in your eyes, but no longer will I feel your hand running up my thigh
No more of your soft Velvet touch, no more simple hand resting on my knee, even though I can see your touch, that's all that's left for me
Broken from the chest...
#sadness
#FeelingLost
#emotional
26 reads
4 Comments
Remy_L
Poem Published
4th Mar 2021 9:17pm
4th Mar 2021 9:17pm
remy's outro
giveth as much as taketh
opening eyes to darkened sky
how god shows fury
distraught something's happened
how has favor blackened
father’s gone
t h e s o n g stopped
they expected a continuance of dancing
opening eyes to darkened sky
how god shows fury
distraught something's happened
how has favor blackened
father’s gone
t h e s o n g stopped
they expected a continuance of dancing
#depression
#grief
#death
#religion
#FeelingLost
36 reads
4 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2019 6:05pm
2nd Sep 2019 6:05pm
are you listening?
no matter how
scary the monster
hiding inside us
no matter how
loud the thunder,
how sharp the
lightening in our
soul
no matter the
trumpets of
voices blasting
inside our head's
no matter our
wrongs, our
weaknesses ,
our fragility
at the end of
the day there
is only love
and redemption
let go
give time it's
time
the music will
play...
just listen
keep
moving
and the...
scary the monster
hiding inside us
no matter how
loud the thunder,
how sharp the
lightening in our
soul
no matter the
trumpets of
voices blasting
inside our head's
no matter our
wrongs, our
weaknesses ,
our fragility
at the end of
the day there
is only love
and redemption
let go
give time it's
time
the music will
play...
just listen
keep
moving
and the...
#confusion
#FeelingLost
272 reads
12 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
29th Sep 2020 6:49pm
29th Sep 2020 6:49pm
The man I loved
#FeelingLost
209 reads
5 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
27th Dec 2017 1:45am
27th Dec 2017 1:45am
'''
revelation dreams
onion layers peel down deep
empty at the core
onion layers peel down deep
empty at the core
#identity
#mirror
#myself
#SelfReflection
#FeelingLost
352 reads
2 Comments
Kinkpoet
Poem Published
25th Mar 2020 3:40pm
25th Mar 2020 3:40pm
Nature Observes
bound lost and naked
the magnificent mountain
watches silently
the magnificent mountain
watches silently
#nature
#senryu
#FeelingLost
124 reads
4 Comments
SweetOblivion
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2020 7:22pm
23rd Aug 2020 7:22pm
Unresponsive
#FeelingLost
#sensual
#surreal
245 reads
15 Comments
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