Poems About Feeling Lost by Top Critiquers
#FeelingLost
Poems about feeling lost by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Stoney223
Poem Published
Yesterday 8:15pm
Yesterday 8:15pm
LOST TORTURE SOUL
As my mind drifts off into the mere depth of my thoughts sending subliminal messages to my brain, penetrating through walls of steel and stones sending shivers through my bones even making the blood in my veins run ice cold.
But if that wasnt enough my heart has no feelings nor reasons for the sense of emotions, for they have faded to black the very mere core of what is darkness with no light only to be filled with emptiness, and disturbing...
But if that wasnt enough my heart has no feelings nor reasons for the sense of emotions, for they have faded to black the very mere core of what is darkness with no light only to be filled with emptiness, and disturbing...
#sadness
#heartbroken
#FeelingLost
#disappointment
#emptiness
24 reads
0 Comments
PandoraUnleashed
Poem Published
18th Mar 2019 8:33am
18th Mar 2019 8:33am
Still Blank....
My mind can so hastily turn fear
& pain into
confinement like towering castles
Left with antiquated memories
I've watched
turn to dust, now nostalgic shambles
Needing a picturesque purpose:
my identity ___
long ago, seized from my chapters
Years continue to pass as I still
come up blank:
my identity & purpose was saving animals
By ~ Jim Willis
"I looked at all the caged animals. . . . . ....
& pain into
confinement like towering castles
Left with antiquated memories
I've watched
turn to dust, now nostalgic shambles
Needing a picturesque purpose:
my identity ___
long ago, seized from my chapters
Years continue to pass as I still
come up blank:
my identity & purpose was saving animals
By ~ Jim Willis
"I looked at all the caged animals. . . . . ....
#sadness
#identity
#animals #FeelingLost
#animals #FeelingLost
378 reads
33 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2019 6:05pm
2nd Sep 2019 6:05pm
are you listening?
no matter how
scary the monster
hiding inside us
no matter how
loud the thunder,
how sharp the
lightening in our
soul
no matter the
trumpets of
voices blasting
inside our head's
no matter our
wrongs, our
weaknesses ,
our fragility
at the end of
the day there
is only love
and redemption
let go
give time it's
time
the music will
play...
just listen
keep
moving
and the...
scary the monster
hiding inside us
no matter how
loud the thunder,
how sharp the
lightening in our
soul
no matter the
trumpets of
voices blasting
inside our head's
no matter our
wrongs, our
weaknesses ,
our fragility
at the end of
the day there
is only love
and redemption
let go
give time it's
time
the music will
play...
just listen
keep
moving
and the...
#confusion
#FeelingLost
115 reads
12 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
14th Nov 2019 3:38pm
14th Nov 2019 3:38pm
Four Hundred Eighty-Six
The nightmare he wakes up into daily
seemingly has no end
beyond headbeam's paltry insight
regarding future around the bend
in dreams darkly ahead so bright
Passengers are unruly -
yelling, screaming, stomping feet -
knees grinding into kidneys
from a hidden menace in backseat
thriving on perpetuating miseries
distracting him from thoughts of
being where he wants to be:
a fabled town known as
Tranquility
Not very often
but every so often
...
seemingly has no end
beyond headbeam's paltry insight
regarding future around the bend
in dreams darkly ahead so bright
Passengers are unruly -
yelling, screaming, stomping feet -
knees grinding into kidneys
from a hidden menace in backseat
thriving on perpetuating miseries
distracting him from thoughts of
being where he wants to be:
a fabled town known as
Tranquility
Not very often
but every so often
...
#confusion
#despair
#FeelingLost
#FeelingTrapped
#emotional
45 reads
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2018 1:56am
3rd Jan 2018 1:56am
hurt's riddle
my hurt speaks in riddles
this way out if you want to survive
fear's doors are nailed shut
& the house is on fire
if you need to see the pharmacist
go through the tunneling maze
of self hatred
there's a drug dealer ...
this way out if you want to survive
fear's doors are nailed shut
& the house is on fire
if you need to see the pharmacist
go through the tunneling maze
of self hatred
there's a drug dealer ...
#drugs
#addiction
#myself
#confusion
#FeelingLost
631 reads
26 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2019 7:04pm
3rd Oct 2019 7:04pm
Human Condition
Photographs depicting morbid and gut-wrenching visuals. People everywhere crying in fear, pain, grief.
By my shameful self absorption-
I am become fantastically blind..
Immersed in my own silly twiddle twaddle...
The evening newscast heralds the day’s mass shooting. Current European genocides. Latest mental/physical/sexual atrocities inflicted and the subjugation of one human by another.
I am become profoundly deaf.
Overwhelmed from voice, text, email messages by...
By my shameful self absorption-
I am become fantastically blind..
Immersed in my own silly twiddle twaddle...
The evening newscast heralds the day’s mass shooting. Current European genocides. Latest mental/physical/sexual atrocities inflicted and the subjugation of one human by another.
I am become profoundly deaf.
Overwhelmed from voice, text, email messages by...
#SelfReflection
#FeelingLost
125 reads
24 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
10th Nov 2018 3:09am
10th Nov 2018 3:09am
Wait For Me (I'm Falling Behind! )
Wait for me,
Please.
O, wait for me,
You're dancing too fast----
so way out of line
Spinning like a top,
I'm falling behind!
Wait for me,
You're loving too quick----
an explosive mine
After the prey,
I'm falling behind!
You're living to swift----
no time to, " be "
so outta sight,
Please wait for me!
Not resting enough----
for or five hours a day?
Whatever is, it can wait;
sleep a while and stay.
You're working too much----
'say you can't spare...
Please.
O, wait for me,
You're dancing too fast----
so way out of line
Spinning like a top,
I'm falling behind!
Wait for me,
You're loving too quick----
an explosive mine
After the prey,
I'm falling behind!
You're living to swift----
no time to, " be "
so outta sight,
Please wait for me!
Not resting enough----
for or five hours a day?
Whatever is, it can wait;
sleep a while and stay.
You're working too much----
'say you can't spare...
#sadness
#anxiety
#frustration
#FeelingLost
#emotional
109 reads
4 Comments
Razzerleaf
Poem Published
5th Nov 2019 1:04pm
5th Nov 2019 1:04pm
In the Willows
I can still run
I know what's around each corner,
no need for hesitation,
but if I stay too long
I might never go back.
Granddad couldn't remember
how to go from hospital to house,
such vulnerability,
place names he lost
to scrabble, turned over blanks,
always starting a new game.
His Captains map
washed away in a blood clot.
So, I keep my hood up
never make eye contact,
long term memory
more precious than short.
I have my map
it's crumpled,
stained with an old tea bag
for...
I know what's around each corner,
no need for hesitation,
but if I stay too long
I might never go back.
Granddad couldn't remember
how to go from hospital to house,
such vulnerability,
place names he lost
to scrabble, turned over blanks,
always starting a new game.
His Captains map
washed away in a blood clot.
So, I keep my hood up
never make eye contact,
long term memory
more precious than short.
I have my map
it's crumpled,
stained with an old tea bag
for...
#home
#FeelingLost
41 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Nov 2019 00:51am
13th Nov 2019 00:51am
Swept Off into a Dream
She swore they’d always be friends,
Then again that’s how friendships end,
He couldn’t be more than what he wanted to be,
She had his heart and held the key,
But that’s what happens when one falls for another,
When the emotions run deep one discovers,
The stars weren’t aligned,
Now they’re left far behind
And the light that once gleamed,
Got swept off into a dream.
And so they went their separate ways,
Bonded by memories of golden days,
But the feeling feels like a nostalgic ember,
It’s fantastic just to remember, ...
Then again that’s how friendships end,
He couldn’t be more than what he wanted to be,
She had his heart and held the key,
But that’s what happens when one falls for another,
When the emotions run deep one discovers,
The stars weren’t aligned,
Now they’re left far behind
And the light that once gleamed,
Got swept off into a dream.
And so they went their separate ways,
Bonded by memories of golden days,
But the feeling feels like a nostalgic ember,
It’s fantastic just to remember, ...
#UnrequitedLove
#FeelingLost
#nostalgia
56 reads
11 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
29th Sep 2019 00:08am
29th Sep 2019 00:08am
Thinking of you ( in dedication to all that have lost a loved one)
#death
#FeelingLost
181 reads
4 Comments
SweetOblivion
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2018 5:04pm
22nd Sep 2018 5:04pm
The Gathered Cloud
#FeelingLost
#ForbiddenLove
#temptation
303 reads
18 Comments
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
jade tiger
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2018 6:55am
2nd Nov 2018 6:55am
Up For Air
( a Quatern )
While I am coming up for air,
I find I forgot how to breathe.
At times the old school words are where
You once never meant them to be.
I reminisce those heady days,
While I am coming up for air.
The ones, as I made up new ways
To show you there was one who dares.
A rainbow from a ladder bears,
Let go the past, start to believe.
While I am coming up for air
Into a world we can conceive.
It didn’t seem so many years,
All I could give, you weren’t...
While I am coming up for air,
I find I forgot how to breathe.
At times the old school words are where
You once never meant them to be.
I reminisce those heady days,
While I am coming up for air.
The ones, as I made up new ways
To show you there was one who dares.
A rainbow from a ladder bears,
Let go the past, start to believe.
While I am coming up for air
Into a world we can conceive.
It didn’t seem so many years,
All I could give, you weren’t...
#hope
#rainbow
#lover
#FallingInLove
#FeelingLost
223 reads
8 Comments
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