Poems About Feeling Lost by Top Critiquers
#FeelingLost
Poems about feeling lost by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
21st Aug 2020 3:06pm
21st Aug 2020 3:06pm
Swirl
A clear day,
Beautiful sky,
Except for the smog
In his mind.
A huge blurr
Of constant indecisions
Ruling his life,
Ruining his life,
Cutting him apart
As many very precise
Surgical incisions.
Beautiful sky,
Except for the smog
In his mind.
A huge blurr
Of constant indecisions
Ruling his life,
Ruining his life,
Cutting him apart
As many very precise
Surgical incisions.
#myself
#confusion
#SelfReflection #FeelingLost
#SelfReflection #FeelingLost
52 reads
0 Comments
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
31st Jul 2020 7:35pm
31st Jul 2020 7:35pm
A peek inside
#sex
#BDSM
#confessional
#FeelingLost
#StreamOfConsciousness
324 reads
19 Comments
NewBeginnings
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2020 2:44am
22nd Mar 2020 2:44am
Afflicted
Writing a rhyme, biding my time
For a day that will never come
Wasting away, I piddle and play,
And nothing ever gets done.
I sit in this room - my temple of gloom
Writing to you, these poems of sorrow
As I traverse the road to nowhere
In this city of no tomorrow.
I’m trapped in my ways, like a rat in a maze,
Struggling to find the light again.
Lost in the labyrinth of a lonely mind,
Where darkness is my only friend—
It’s time for me to close the circle,
To escape this sedentary cycle;
To...
For a day that will never come
Wasting away, I piddle and play,
And nothing ever gets done.
I sit in this room - my temple of gloom
Writing to you, these poems of sorrow
As I traverse the road to nowhere
In this city of no tomorrow.
I’m trapped in my ways, like a rat in a maze,
Struggling to find the light again.
Lost in the labyrinth of a lonely mind,
Where darkness is my only friend—
It’s time for me to close the circle,
To escape this sedentary cycle;
To...
#depression
#inspirational
#MentalHealth
#uplifting
#FeelingLost
302 reads
7 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
2nd May 2020 10:56pm
2nd May 2020 10:56pm
Wanderer
Forlorn traveler,
Where have ye been?
Lost among other peripatetics.
Seeking answers to questions
no longer remembered.
Roaming untamed landscapes of the ego.
Running from fear
undefined.
Remaining in trepidation
established.
A journey never concluded.
Where have ye been?
Lost among other peripatetics.
Seeking answers to questions
no longer remembered.
Roaming untamed landscapes of the ego.
Running from fear
undefined.
Remaining in trepidation
established.
A journey never concluded.
#confusion
#FeelingLost
#choices #SelfWorth
#choices #SelfWorth
184 reads
27 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:47am
Yesterday 10:47am
Always there
#LifeStruggles
#FeelingLost
#emotions
20 reads
4 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2019 6:05pm
2nd Sep 2019 6:05pm
are you listening?
no matter how
scary the monster
hiding inside us
no matter how
loud the thunder,
how sharp the
lightening in our
soul
no matter the
trumpets of
voices blasting
inside our head's
no matter our
wrongs, our
weaknesses ,
our fragility
at the end of
the day there
is only love
and redemption
let go
give time it's
time
the music will
play...
just listen
keep
moving
and the...
scary the monster
hiding inside us
no matter how
loud the thunder,
how sharp the
lightening in our
soul
no matter the
trumpets of
voices blasting
inside our head's
no matter our
wrongs, our
weaknesses ,
our fragility
at the end of
the day there
is only love
and redemption
let go
give time it's
time
the music will
play...
just listen
keep
moving
and the...
#confusion
#FeelingLost
223 reads
12 Comments
SweetOblivion
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2020 7:22pm
23rd Aug 2020 7:22pm
Unresponsive
#FeelingLost
#sensual
#surreal
166 reads
15 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
17th Sep 2020 1:52pm
17th Sep 2020 1:52pm
FROM THIS MOUND OF CLAY
As life sometimes chisels away at the granite stone of my outer shell, chiseling away at the very core of my being human with feelings, and emotions and thoughts. Yet even as it chisels and digs into the mere, existence of my mind and heart and soul grabbing and physically, pulling at the skeleton of my bones that once were covered by the skin of my flesh. I still try to push on even with the tears from my eyes, and the broken fragments of bits and pieces, broken like shattered glass. Leaving behind inescapable thoughts that sometimes, flows through the deepness swirling within my soul...
#faith
#rebirth
#TruthOfLife
#PowerOfWords
#FeelingLost
52 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Nov 2019 00:51am
13th Nov 2019 00:51am
Swept Off into a Dream
She swore they’d always be friends,
Then again that’s how friendships end,
He couldn’t be more than what he wanted to be,
She had his heart and held the key,
But that’s what happens when one falls for another,
When the emotions run deep one discovers,
The stars weren’t aligned,
Now they’re left far behind
And the light that once gleamed,
Got swept off into a dream.
And so they went their separate ways,
Bonded by memories of golden days,
But the feeling feels like a nostalgic ember,
It’s fantastic just to remember, ...
Then again that’s how friendships end,
He couldn’t be more than what he wanted to be,
She had his heart and held the key,
But that’s what happens when one falls for another,
When the emotions run deep one discovers,
The stars weren’t aligned,
Now they’re left far behind
And the light that once gleamed,
Got swept off into a dream.
And so they went their separate ways,
Bonded by memories of golden days,
But the feeling feels like a nostalgic ember,
It’s fantastic just to remember, ...
#UnrequitedLove
#FeelingLost
#nostalgia
200 reads
11 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
Today 6:49pm
Today 6:49pm
The man I loved
#FeelingLost
28 reads
2 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
14th Nov 2019 3:38pm
14th Nov 2019 3:38pm
[2019] Four Hundred Eighty-Six
The nightmare he wakes up into daily
seemingly has no end
beyond headbeam's paltry insight
regarding future around the bend
in dreams darkly ahead so bright
Passengers, unruly---
yelling, screaming, stomping feet
---knees grinding into kidneys
from a hidden menace in backseat
thriving on perpetuating miseries
distracting him from thoughts of
being where he wants to be:
a fabled town known as
Tranquility
Not very often
...
seemingly has no end
beyond headbeam's paltry insight
regarding future around the bend
in dreams darkly ahead so bright
Passengers, unruly---
yelling, screaming, stomping feet
---knees grinding into kidneys
from a hidden menace in backseat
thriving on perpetuating miseries
distracting him from thoughts of
being where he wants to be:
a fabled town known as
Tranquility
Not very often
...
#confusion
#despair
#FeelingLost
#FeelingTrapped
#emotional
187 reads
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2018 1:56am
3rd Jan 2018 1:56am
hurt's riddle
my hurt speaks in riddles
this way out if you want to survive
fear's doors are nailed shut
& the house is on fire
if you need to see the pharmacist
go through the tunneling maze
of self hatred
there's a drug dealer ...
this way out if you want to survive
fear's doors are nailed shut
& the house is on fire
if you need to see the pharmacist
go through the tunneling maze
of self hatred
there's a drug dealer ...
#drugs
#addiction
#myself
#confusion
#FeelingLost
725 reads
26 Comments
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