Poems About Feeling Lost by Top Critiquers
#FeelingLost
Poems about feeling lost by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
chipped.
in the wee
early hours
of mo(u)rning
that's when I noticed it,
so clear
betrayal
has broken off a chip
yet, a heart beats
-still-
while cracked
an'd missing... it's very own piece
early hours
of mo(u)rning
that's when I noticed it,
so clear
betrayal
has broken off a chip
yet, a heart beats
-still-
while cracked
an'd missing... it's very own piece
#FeelingLost
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Thoughts in an abandoned house
How much sadness in these forgotten ones
Our abandoned buildings and houses!
The windows are broken, the doors are clogged
Sad shadow of wilting ...
In old and abandoned
our houses
someone else's smell,
unusual and strange
To infinity
space scope,
crumpled lines
And the
strangeness of desires
obsession and oppression,
crushing the debris
glass and showers,
crunchy underfoot,
tearing themselves
the cobweb snares
Wonders: faces,
mourners over us,
someone's saints
on a plywood...
Our abandoned buildings and houses!
The windows are broken, the doors are clogged
Sad shadow of wilting ...
In old and abandoned
our houses
someone else's smell,
unusual and strange
To infinity
space scope,
crumpled lines
And the
strangeness of desires
obsession and oppression,
crushing the debris
glass and showers,
crunchy underfoot,
tearing themselves
the cobweb snares
Wonders: faces,
mourners over us,
someone's saints
on a plywood...
#death
#LifeStruggles
#LifeCycle
#FeelingLost
#suffering
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29 Comments
Wanderer
Forlorn traveler,
Where have ye been?
Lost among other peripatetics.
Seeking answers to questions
no longer remembered.
Roaming untamed landscapes of the ego.
Running from fear
undefined.
Remaining in trepidation
established.
A journey never concluded.
Where have ye been?
Lost among other peripatetics.
Seeking answers to questions
no longer remembered.
Roaming untamed landscapes of the ego.
Running from fear
undefined.
Remaining in trepidation
established.
A journey never concluded.
#confusion
#FeelingLost
#choices #SelfWorth
#choices #SelfWorth
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27 Comments
Swirl
A clear day,
Beautiful sky,
Except for the smog
In his mind.
A huge blurr
Of constant indecisions
Ruling his life,
Ruining his life,
Cutting him apart
As many very precise
Surgical incisions.
Beautiful sky,
Except for the smog
In his mind.
A huge blurr
Of constant indecisions
Ruling his life,
Ruining his life,
Cutting him apart
As many very precise
Surgical incisions.
#myself
#confusion
#SelfReflection #FeelingLost
#SelfReflection #FeelingLost
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Swept Off into a Dream
She swore they’d always be friends,
Then again that’s how friendships end,
He couldn’t be more than what he wanted to be,
She had his heart and held the key,
But that’s what happens when one falls for another,
When the emotions run deep one discovers,
The stars weren’t aligned,
Now they’re left far behind
And the light that once gleamed,
Got swept off into a dream.
And so they went their separate ways,
Bonded by memories of golden days,
But the feeling feels like a nostalgic ember,
It’s fantastic just to remember, ...
Then again that’s how friendships end,
He couldn’t be more than what he wanted to be,
She had his heart and held the key,
But that’s what happens when one falls for another,
When the emotions run deep one discovers,
The stars weren’t aligned,
Now they’re left far behind
And the light that once gleamed,
Got swept off into a dream.
And so they went their separate ways,
Bonded by memories of golden days,
But the feeling feels like a nostalgic ember,
It’s fantastic just to remember, ...
#UnrequitedLove
#FeelingLost
#nostalgia
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11 Comments
Feelings lost
Feelings lost
Your hand runs across my face, I feel your tender touch, along my shoulders you're still there, is to wish for more to much
Because I know when you touch my chest, soon sensation will be gone, it left the very moment, my spinal chord went wrong
I can feel you kiss me, see the love and desire in your eyes, but no longer will I feel your hand running up my thigh
No more of your soft Velvet touch, no more simple hand resting on my knee, even though I can see your touch, that's all that's left for me
Broken from the chest...
Your hand runs across my face, I feel your tender touch, along my shoulders you're still there, is to wish for more to much
Because I know when you touch my chest, soon sensation will be gone, it left the very moment, my spinal chord went wrong
I can feel you kiss me, see the love and desire in your eyes, but no longer will I feel your hand running up my thigh
No more of your soft Velvet touch, no more simple hand resting on my knee, even though I can see your touch, that's all that's left for me
Broken from the chest...
#sadness
#FeelingLost
#emotional
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4 Comments
remy's outro
giveth as much as taketh
opening eyes to darkened sky
how god shows fury
distraught something's happened
how has favor blackened
father’s gone
t h e s o n g stopped
they expected a continuance of dancing
opening eyes to darkened sky
how god shows fury
distraught something's happened
how has favor blackened
father’s gone
t h e s o n g stopped
they expected a continuance of dancing
#depression
#grief
#death
#religion
#FeelingLost
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4 Comments
are you listening?
no matter how
scary the monster
hiding inside us
no matter how
loud the thunder,
how sharp the
lightening in our
soul
no matter the
trumpets of
voices blasting
inside our head's
no matter our
wrongs, our
weaknesses ,
our fragility
at the end of
the day there
is only love
and redemption
let go
give time it's
time
the music will
play...
just listen
keep
moving
and the...
scary the monster
hiding inside us
no matter how
loud the thunder,
how sharp the
lightening in our
soul
no matter the
trumpets of
voices blasting
inside our head's
no matter our
wrongs, our
weaknesses ,
our fragility
at the end of
the day there
is only love
and redemption
let go
give time it's
time
the music will
play...
just listen
keep
moving
and the...
#confusion
#FeelingLost
272 reads
12 Comments
The man I loved

#FeelingLost
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5 Comments
'''
revelation dreams
onion layers peel down deep
empty at the core
onion layers peel down deep
empty at the core
#identity
#mirror
#myself
#SelfReflection
#FeelingLost
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2 Comments
Nature Observes
bound lost and naked
the magnificent mountain
watches silently
the magnificent mountain
watches silently
#nature
#senryu
#FeelingLost
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4 Comments
Unresponsive

#FeelingLost
#sensual
#surreal
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15 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Feeling Lost by Top Critiquers