Poems About Feeling Lost by Top Critiquers
#FeelingLost
Poems about feeling lost by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
1st May 2021 4:56am
1st May 2021 4:56am
finding a way...home.
I think there's a saying
(or perhaps it's the Mandela effect)
unclear in origin yet still, I believe...
When certain things are lost,
they eventually return
from whence they came
with sheer
interconnectedness
powerful in their amplifying
enough to find a way
from
the
deepest
of
depths
feeling lovingly recaptured
possibilities in reclaiming
of a souls particular charms ...
(or perhaps it's the Mandela effect)
unclear in origin yet still, I believe...
When certain things are lost,
they eventually return
from whence they came
with sheer
interconnectedness
powerful in their amplifying
enough to find a way
from
the
deepest
of
depths
feeling lovingly recaptured
possibilities in reclaiming
of a souls particular charms ...
#love
#hope
#dark
#relationships
#FeelingLost
407 reads
34 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
5th May 2021 9:00pm
5th May 2021 9:00pm
Without ropes
Cold steel
Cuts the ropes ...
Where should I go?
Cuts the ropes ...
Where should I go?
#identity
#BDSM
#FeelingLost
277 reads
31 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
29th Apr 2021 2:48am
29th Apr 2021 2:48am
The Misfit So Alone
On a sleepless night I recall on the past
Of old days when I was young in school
Of the friendships we thought would last
And how desperately I wanted to be cool
There was something about the in-crowd
And how popular so many wanted to be
And though we never really said it out loud
Some wished to be like them to a degree
It’s in our nature to be accepted
Even if we didn’t know how to speak
Deep down we want to be respected
Flaws and all makes us each unique
This is for the eccentrics and the misfits
To those...
Of old days when I was young in school
Of the friendships we thought would last
And how desperately I wanted to be cool
There was something about the in-crowd
And how popular so many wanted to be
And though we never really said it out loud
Some wished to be like them to a degree
It’s in our nature to be accepted
Even if we didn’t know how to speak
Deep down we want to be respected
Flaws and all makes us each unique
This is for the eccentrics and the misfits
To those...
#music
#memories
#misunderstood
#FeelingLost
#NaPoWriMo2021
231 reads
10 Comments
S-m-sawyer
Poem Published
23rd May 2018 9:01am
23rd May 2018 9:01am
Tired old soul
It's getting frustrating,
Trying to find inspiration,
In a world 🌎 full of discrimination.
You see, I'm an old soul,,
I've watched the years roll by,
And the world has turned cold.
I'm getting tired,
I think I'm cut from a different cloth,
Trying to fit in, but feeling lost.
Day by day i continue the fight,
I live my life in the shadows,
Dark is my light...
Trying to find inspiration,
In a world 🌎 full of discrimination.
You see, I'm an old soul,,
I've watched the years roll by,
And the world has turned cold.
I'm getting tired,
I think I'm cut from a different cloth,
Trying to fit in, but feeling lost.
Day by day i continue the fight,
I live my life in the shadows,
Dark is my light...
#loneliness
#spiritual
#FeelingLost
383 reads
3 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
7th May 2021 10:07am
7th May 2021 10:07am
Personal Viper
Today it's pleasure
Tomorrow who knows
I have you in my sights
You respond well to my jaded
Not broken
Sometimes lost
I'm your personal Viper
You know where to find me
24/7
On call
Tomorrow who knows
I have you in my sights
You respond well to my jaded
Not broken
Sometimes lost
I'm your personal Viper
You know where to find me
24/7
On call
#dark
#sex
#FeelingLost
185 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2018 1:56am
3rd Jan 2018 1:56am
hurt's riddle
my hurt speaks in riddles
this way out if you want to survive
fear's doors are nailed shut
& the house is on fire
if you need to see the pharmacist
go through the tunneling maze
of self hatred
there's a drug dealer ...
this way out if you want to survive
fear's doors are nailed shut
& the house is on fire
if you need to see the pharmacist
go through the tunneling maze
of self hatred
there's a drug dealer ...
#drugs
#addiction
#myself
#confusion
#FeelingLost
947 reads
26 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
14th Sep 2021 3:50pm
14th Sep 2021 3:50pm
Slipstream
Weathered breeze
Across the surface
Of the night -
In star like
Distances,
Dark recesses
&
Absences -
Voided star light
&
Nullified moon light,
Tonight:
Footprints in the sand -
Womb of madness,
Antipodes of the land,
Solemn silence,
A vow of sadness -
Speaking circuitous,
Holes in the sky,
Deepened darkness,
Everything is a lie -
Roaming the outer edges
Beckoning discovery,
Slipped crypt of sages,...
Across the surface
Of the night -
In star like
Distances,
Dark recesses
&
Absences -
Voided star light
&
Nullified moon light,
Tonight:
Footprints in the sand -
Womb of madness,
Antipodes of the land,
Solemn silence,
A vow of sadness -
Speaking circuitous,
Holes in the sky,
Deepened darkness,
Everything is a lie -
Roaming the outer edges
Beckoning discovery,
Slipped crypt of sages,...
#dark
#shadows
#FeelingLost
150 reads
6 Comments
paperstains
Poem Published
14th Jun 2022 10:46pm
14th Jun 2022 10:46pm
Uncertainty
When your pen
left behind lines
scribing the horizon
I knew
--- I used to
your thoughts
were finding a way
to carry me
left behind lines
scribing the horizon
I knew
--- I used to
your thoughts
were finding a way
to carry me
#love
#WritingPoetry
#FeelingLost #minimalist
#FeelingLost #minimalist
124 reads
12 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2022 3:56pm
22nd Jun 2022 3:56pm
It's All About Me
I got this jones forming
Within my life with no shame
This is indeed a new form of
Life housed with much fame
How this homegirl wanna luv
And dream with me too
And we've been together since
We were kids homies for real dude
Nobody knew she was
Not really my girl
Cause she would tell
Everyone I was her world
And now twenty years later
Here on the spot
She said let me aluv u
And this for all I got
And........I.........Agreed.........yeah
Within my life with no shame
This is indeed a new form of
Life housed with much fame
How this homegirl wanna luv
And dream with me too
And we've been together since
We were kids homies for real dude
Nobody knew she was
Not really my girl
Cause she would tell
Everyone I was her world
And now twenty years later
Here on the spot
She said let me aluv u
And this for all I got
And........I.........Agreed.........yeah
#dark
#ILoveYou
#gothic
#FallingInLove
#FeelingLost
51 reads
0 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2021 11:08am
2nd Mar 2021 11:08am
Feelings lost
Feelings lost
Your hand runs across my face, I feel your tender touch, along my shoulders you're still there, is to wish for more to much
Because I know when you touch my chest, soon sensation will be gone, it left the very moment, my spinal chord went wrong
I can feel you kiss me, see the love and desire in your eyes, but no longer will I feel your hand running up my thigh
No more of your soft Velvet touch, no more simple hand resting on my knee, even though I can see your touch, that's all that's left for me
Broken from the chest...
Your hand runs across my face, I feel your tender touch, along my shoulders you're still there, is to wish for more to much
Because I know when you touch my chest, soon sensation will be gone, it left the very moment, my spinal chord went wrong
I can feel you kiss me, see the love and desire in your eyes, but no longer will I feel your hand running up my thigh
No more of your soft Velvet touch, no more simple hand resting on my knee, even though I can see your touch, that's all that's left for me
Broken from the chest...
#sadness
#FeelingLost
#emotional
235 reads
4 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
21st Aug 2020 3:06pm
21st Aug 2020 3:06pm
Swirl
A clear day,
Beautiful sky,
Except for the smog
In his mind.
A huge blurr
Of constant indecisions
Ruling his life,
Ruining his life,
Cutting him apart
As many very precise
Surgical incisions.
Beautiful sky,
Except for the smog
In his mind.
A huge blurr
Of constant indecisions
Ruling his life,
Ruining his life,
Cutting him apart
As many very precise
Surgical incisions.
#myself
#confusion
#SelfReflection #FeelingLost
#SelfReflection #FeelingLost
237 reads
0 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
29th Sep 2020 6:49pm
29th Sep 2020 6:49pm
The man I loved
#FeelingLost
336 reads
5 Comments
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