Poems About Feeling Lost by Top Critiquers
#FeelingLost
Poems about feeling lost by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
highlyfunctional
Poem Published
24th Jul 2019 1:24pm
24th Jul 2019 1:24pm
Desires Unresolved
absolve me, please
for desires unresolved
evolved I may be
but not absent of need
my eyes insist upon
such curves and tone
alone, my nerves shatter
and abandon my soul
just lyrical rubbish
I like women
so little in life
holds such interest for me
as the female form
voice and manner
why do I feel so
unworthy
and yet desire your
willing submission
the adjacent illusion
hurts as it heals
it leaves me empty ...
for desires unresolved
evolved I may be
but not absent of need
my eyes insist upon
such curves and tone
alone, my nerves shatter
and abandon my soul
just lyrical rubbish
I like women
so little in life
holds such interest for me
as the female form
voice and manner
why do I feel so
unworthy
and yet desire your
willing submission
the adjacent illusion
hurts as it heals
it leaves me empty ...
#FeelingLost
159 reads
18 Comments
LostGirl18
Poem Published
15th Dec 2017 8:13am
15th Dec 2017 8:13am
Wallflower
I feel so alone.
I need people around me.
Honestly, I lie.
Suspicions arise.
"She is fucking weird," they say.
I need people around me.
Honestly, I lie.
Suspicions arise.
"She is fucking weird," they say.
#LifeStruggles
#myself
#SelfReflection
#FeelingLost
#emotional
301 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
27th Jul 2019 12:51pm
27th Jul 2019 12:51pm
LOST IN MY OWN THOUGHTS
Here within the wee hours of the morning here I sit deep within my own thoughts as they unfold from the deepness of my mind, reemerging images taken from my life but yet each image holds an different dimension taken from chapters of my life's journeys travels and walks, through what is known as space and time leaving my footprints embedded deep within the minds of every soul I have touched in life.
But yet here I sit with thoughts of love gain and love lost each seducing my soul and...
But yet here I sit with thoughts of love gain and love lost each seducing my soul and...
#LifeStruggles
#LifeAsAWriter
#misunderstood
#FeelingLost
#FeelingTrapped
117 reads
5 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
10th Nov 2018 3:09am
10th Nov 2018 3:09am
Wait For Me (I'm Falling Behind! )
Wait for me,
Please.
O, wait for me,
You're dancing too fast----
so way out of line
Spinning like a top,
I'm falling behind!
Wait for me,
You're loving too quick----
an explosive mine
After the prey,
I'm falling behind!
You're living to swift----
no time to, " be "
so outta sight,
Please wait for me!
Not resting enough----
for or five hours a day?
Whatever is, it can wait;
sleep a while and stay.
You're working too much----
'say you can't spare...
Please.
O, wait for me,
You're dancing too fast----
so way out of line
Spinning like a top,
I'm falling behind!
Wait for me,
You're loving too quick----
an explosive mine
After the prey,
I'm falling behind!
You're living to swift----
no time to, " be "
so outta sight,
Please wait for me!
Not resting enough----
for or five hours a day?
Whatever is, it can wait;
sleep a while and stay.
You're working too much----
'say you can't spare...
#sadness
#anxiety
#frustration
#FeelingLost
#emotional
101 reads
4 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2019 6:05pm
2nd Sep 2019 6:05pm
are you listening?
no matter how
scary the monster
hiding inside us
no matter how
loud the thunder,
how sharp the
lightening in our
soul
no matter the
trumpets of
voices blasting
inside our head's
no matter our
wrongs, our
weaknesses ,
our fragility
at the end of
the day there
is only love
and redemption
let go
give time it's
time
the music will
play...
just listen
keep
moving
and the...
scary the monster
hiding inside us
no matter how
loud the thunder,
how sharp the
lightening in our
soul
no matter the
trumpets of
voices blasting
inside our head's
no matter our
wrongs, our
weaknesses ,
our fragility
at the end of
the day there
is only love
and redemption
let go
give time it's
time
the music will
play...
just listen
keep
moving
and the...
#confusion
#FeelingLost
64 reads
12 Comments
PandoraUnleashed
Poem Published
18th Mar 2019 8:33am
18th Mar 2019 8:33am
Still Blank....
My mind can so hastily turn fear
& pain into
confinement like towering castles
Left with antiquated memories
I've watched
turn to dust, now nostalgic shambles
Needing a picturesque purpose:
my identity ___
long ago, seized from my chapters
Years continue to pass as I still
come up blank:
my identity & purpose was saving animals
By ~ Jim Willis
"I looked at all the caged animals. . . . . ....
& pain into
confinement like towering castles
Left with antiquated memories
I've watched
turn to dust, now nostalgic shambles
Needing a picturesque purpose:
my identity ___
long ago, seized from my chapters
Years continue to pass as I still
come up blank:
my identity & purpose was saving animals
By ~ Jim Willis
"I looked at all the caged animals. . . . . ....
#sadness
#identity
#animals #FeelingLost
#animals #FeelingLost
332 reads
33 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
27th Jul 2019 4:30pm
27th Jul 2019 4:30pm
In Gratitude
Wandering the lonely path of my thoughts
The wind feels like silk caressing my body and massaging my aching
head
As it dances and swirls my spirit lifts
Taking with it the angst and sadness
Listening carefully the trees whisper their centuries old wisdom
My path gently guides me left- opening up a quiet field of wild flowers
Their freedom- my envy
Swaying in gentle harmony their rhythm a graceful waltz
Enveloping nature’s portrait like an internal hug, conirming I am enough
I begin the way back to my reality
In...
The wind feels like silk caressing my body and massaging my aching
head
As it dances and swirls my spirit lifts
Taking with it the angst and sadness
Listening carefully the trees whisper their centuries old wisdom
My path gently guides me left- opening up a quiet field of wild flowers
Their freedom- my envy
Swaying in gentle harmony their rhythm a graceful waltz
Enveloping nature’s portrait like an internal hug, conirming I am enough
I begin the way back to my reality
In...
#FeelingLost
#acceptance
78 reads
4 Comments
LiamReeduus
LiamReedus
LiamReedus
Poem Published
9th May 2019 00:00am
9th May 2019 00:00am
Meet the real me
How many people have to die in these streets.
Rest in peace my brother, I pray you finally found peace.
It would be a lie if I didn't say I never thought of death.
There's times I feel I'm all that's left.
You've been taken in all your good, I'm left after all I've done wrong.
Life has no remorse and carries on.
I bury another brother, but I can't let them see me cry.
I know what happened, just can't get my mind to understand why.
We sat laughing talking bout things we've done.
Young Cats don't understand what it means to live under the...
Rest in peace my brother, I pray you finally found peace.
It would be a lie if I didn't say I never thought of death.
There's times I feel I'm all that's left.
You've been taken in all your good, I'm left after all I've done wrong.
Life has no remorse and carries on.
I bury another brother, but I can't let them see me cry.
I know what happened, just can't get my mind to understand why.
We sat laughing talking bout things we've done.
Young Cats don't understand what it means to live under the...
#city
#FeelingLost
#hurt
105 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2018 1:56am
3rd Jan 2018 1:56am
hurt's riddle
my hurt speaks in riddles
this way out if you want to survive
fear's doors are nailed shut
& the house is on fire
if you need to see the pharmacist
go through the tunneling maze
of self hatred
there's a drug dealer ...
this way out if you want to survive
fear's doors are nailed shut
& the house is on fire
if you need to see the pharmacist
go through the tunneling maze
of self hatred
there's a drug dealer ...
#drugs
#addiction
#myself
#confusion
#FeelingLost
608 reads
26 Comments
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
E.A.Rothwell
Poem Published
1st Jun 2018 4:43pm
1st Jun 2018 4:43pm
Another She-he-it Moment
I dropped my
Peaches
And now the
Garden
Is trying
To get me... *Jº
Peaches
And now the
Garden
Is trying
To get me... *Jº
#conflict
#confusion
#FeelingLost #FeelingTrapped
#FeelingLost #FeelingTrapped
156 reads
3 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
18th Jun 2018 7:28pm
18th Jun 2018 7:28pm
Signpost
Wandering
without direction
within a maze constantly
forming about our thought
procession
seemingly at times as if
all our efforts are in vein
routed through physicality
daily replenished anew with fresh
cells fed steady diet of blood
borne oxygen and nutrition
making the rounds
only to repetitiously arrive
at the same foregone
coagulation of conclusions
Along what should be
a path of least resistance
we become desperate for
a signpost pointed toward
that which is only...
without direction
within a maze constantly
forming about our thought
procession
seemingly at times as if
all our efforts are in vein
routed through physicality
daily replenished anew with fresh
cells fed steady diet of blood
borne oxygen and nutrition
making the rounds
only to repetitiously arrive
at the same foregone
coagulation of conclusions
Along what should be
a path of least resistance
we become desperate for
a signpost pointed toward
that which is only...
#universe
#FeelingLost
232 reads
6 Comments
FromTheAsh
Poem Published
12th Jun 2019 1:36pm
12th Jun 2019 1:36pm
weigh anchor
enveloped in mist as clarity shifts
and I’m adrift upon turbulent seas
vessel destroyed on her maiden voyage
and I'm left clinging to the debris
this smothering shroud of chaos
presses heavily down on me
suffocating
oxygen denied
I’m lost inside a foggy mind
dragging hard on oars of air
exerting all energy
and still not getting anywhere
as frothing caps break & crash
upon decks of haunted breath
choking on salted depths
this storm will take its toll
as I desperately row
and row
and row
but...
and I’m adrift upon turbulent seas
vessel destroyed on her maiden voyage
and I'm left clinging to the debris
this smothering shroud of chaos
presses heavily down on me
suffocating
oxygen denied
I’m lost inside a foggy mind
dragging hard on oars of air
exerting all energy
and still not getting anywhere
as frothing caps break & crash
upon decks of haunted breath
choking on salted depths
this storm will take its toll
as I desperately row
and row
and row
but...
#LifeStruggles
#FeelingLost
#healing #choices
#healing #choices
105 reads
3 Comments
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