Poems About Feeling Lost by Top Critiquers
#FeelingLost
Poems about feeling lost by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
1st May 2021 4:56am
1st May 2021 4:56am
finding a way...home.
I think there's a saying
(or perhaps it's the Mandela effect)
unclear in origin yet still, I believe...
When certain things are lost,
they eventually return
from whence they came
with sheer
interconnectedness
powerful in their amplifying
enough to find a way
from
the
deepest
of
depths
feeling lovingly recaptured
possibilities in reclaiming
of a souls particular charms ...
(or perhaps it's the Mandela effect)
unclear in origin yet still, I believe...
When certain things are lost,
they eventually return
from whence they came
with sheer
interconnectedness
powerful in their amplifying
enough to find a way
from
the
deepest
of
depths
feeling lovingly recaptured
possibilities in reclaiming
of a souls particular charms ...
#love
#hope
#dark
#relationships
#FeelingLost
259 reads
34 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
21st Aug 2020 3:06pm
21st Aug 2020 3:06pm
Swirl
A clear day,
Beautiful sky,
Except for the smog
In his mind.
A huge blurr
Of constant indecisions
Ruling his life,
Ruining his life,
Cutting him apart
As many very precise
Surgical incisions.
Beautiful sky,
Except for the smog
In his mind.
A huge blurr
Of constant indecisions
Ruling his life,
Ruining his life,
Cutting him apart
As many very precise
Surgical incisions.
#myself
#confusion
#SelfReflection #FeelingLost
#SelfReflection #FeelingLost
184 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
29th Apr 2021 2:48am
29th Apr 2021 2:48am
The Misfit So Alone
On a sleepless night I recall on the past
Of old days when I was young in school
Of the friendships we thought would last
And how desperately I wanted to be cool
There was something about the in-crowd
And how popular so many wanted to be
And though we never really said it out loud
Some wished to be like them to a degree
It’s in our nature to be accepted
Even if we didn’t know how to speak
Deep down we want to be respected
Flaws and all makes us each unique
This is for the eccentrics and the misfits
To those...
Of old days when I was young in school
Of the friendships we thought would last
And how desperately I wanted to be cool
There was something about the in-crowd
And how popular so many wanted to be
And though we never really said it out loud
Some wished to be like them to a degree
It’s in our nature to be accepted
Even if we didn’t know how to speak
Deep down we want to be respected
Flaws and all makes us each unique
This is for the eccentrics and the misfits
To those...
#music
#memories
#misunderstood
#FeelingLost
#NaPoWriMo2021
169 reads
10 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
7th Nov 2021 1:55pm
7th Nov 2021 1:55pm
living the life
if you actually have
to stop and think about
how important your life is
then you have
totally missed,
the point of living
to stop and think about
how important your life is
then you have
totally missed,
the point of living
#LifeStruggles
#humankind
#FeelingLost #acceptance
#FeelingLost #acceptance
125 reads
4 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
14th Sep 2021 3:50pm
14th Sep 2021 3:50pm
Slipstream
Weathered breeze
Across the surface
Of the night -
In star like
Distances,
Dark recesses
&
Absences -
Voided star light
&
Nullified moon light,
Tonight:
Footprints in the sand -
Womb of madness,
Antipodes of the land,
Solemn silence,
A vow of sadness -
Speaking circuitous,
Holes in the sky,
Deepened darkness,
Everything is a lie -
Roaming the outer edges
Beckoning discovery,
Slipped crypt of sages,...
Across the surface
Of the night -
In star like
Distances,
Dark recesses
&
Absences -
Voided star light
&
Nullified moon light,
Tonight:
Footprints in the sand -
Womb of madness,
Antipodes of the land,
Solemn silence,
A vow of sadness -
Speaking circuitous,
Holes in the sky,
Deepened darkness,
Everything is a lie -
Roaming the outer edges
Beckoning discovery,
Slipped crypt of sages,...
#dark
#shadows
#FeelingLost
76 reads
4 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
5th May 2021 9:00pm
5th May 2021 9:00pm
Without ropes
Cold steel
Cuts the ropes ...
Where should I go?
Cuts the ropes ...
Where should I go?
#identity
#BDSM
#FeelingLost
233 reads
31 Comments
SweetOblivion
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2020 7:22pm
23rd Aug 2020 7:22pm
Unresponsive
#FeelingLost
#sensual
#surreal
439 reads
15 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2021 11:08am
2nd Mar 2021 11:08am
Feelings lost
Feelings lost
Your hand runs across my face, I feel your tender touch, along my shoulders you're still there, is to wish for more to much
Because I know when you touch my chest, soon sensation will be gone, it left the very moment, my spinal chord went wrong
I can feel you kiss me, see the love and desire in your eyes, but no longer will I feel your hand running up my thigh
No more of your soft Velvet touch, no more simple hand resting on my knee, even though I can see your touch, that's all that's left for me
Broken from the chest...
Your hand runs across my face, I feel your tender touch, along my shoulders you're still there, is to wish for more to much
Because I know when you touch my chest, soon sensation will be gone, it left the very moment, my spinal chord went wrong
I can feel you kiss me, see the love and desire in your eyes, but no longer will I feel your hand running up my thigh
No more of your soft Velvet touch, no more simple hand resting on my knee, even though I can see your touch, that's all that's left for me
Broken from the chest...
#sadness
#FeelingLost
#emotional
158 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
7th May 2021 10:07am
7th May 2021 10:07am
Personal Viper
Today it's pleasure
Tomorrow who knows
I have you in my sights
You respond well to my jaded
Not broken
Sometimes lost
I'm your personal Viper
You know where to find me
24/7
On call
Tomorrow who knows
I have you in my sights
You respond well to my jaded
Not broken
Sometimes lost
I'm your personal Viper
You know where to find me
24/7
On call
#dark
#sex
#FeelingLost
134 reads
4 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
29th Sep 2020 6:49pm
29th Sep 2020 6:49pm
The man I loved
#FeelingLost
297 reads
5 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
14th Nov 2019 3:38pm
14th Nov 2019 3:38pm
[2019] Four Hundred Eighty-Six
The nightmare he wakes up into daily
seemingly has no end
beyond headbeam's paltry insight
regarding future around the bend
in dreams darkly ahead so bright
Passengers, unruly---
yelling, screaming, stomping feet
---knees grinding into kidneys
from a hidden menace in backseat
thriving on perpetuating miseries
distracting him from thoughts of
being where he wants to be:
a fabled town known as
Tranquility
Not very often
...
seemingly has no end
beyond headbeam's paltry insight
regarding future around the bend
in dreams darkly ahead so bright
Passengers, unruly---
yelling, screaming, stomping feet
---knees grinding into kidneys
from a hidden menace in backseat
thriving on perpetuating miseries
distracting him from thoughts of
being where he wants to be:
a fabled town known as
Tranquility
Not very often
...
#confusion
#despair
#FeelingLost
#FeelingTrapped
#emotional
334 reads
nightbirdblue
Poem Published
16th Jul 2021 3:32am
16th Jul 2021 3:32am
The Lit’l Ghost
I regress
Due to stress
The Little Ghost
Floats me away
To a place
Days of past
Little Audrey
Hiding there
Next to the stairs
She’s just so scared
Of herself
Of her fam
Of secrets shared
Oh, I digress
Where’d she go
Little Lady I
Used to know
Afraid of pain
And loss
And sorrow
All she can say
Is “I dunno”
Voice of child
Hides her face
And furrows brow
How did I get here
Where is now
Time collapses
Shakes me
Breaks me ...
Due to stress
The Little Ghost
Floats me away
To a place
Days of past
Little Audrey
Hiding there
Next to the stairs
She’s just so scared
Of herself
Of her fam
Of secrets shared
Oh, I digress
Where’d she go
Little Lady I
Used to know
Afraid of pain
And loss
And sorrow
All she can say
Is “I dunno”
Voice of child
Hides her face
And furrows brow
How did I get here
Where is now
Time collapses
Shakes me
Breaks me ...
#childhood
#MentalHealth
#PTSD
#FeelingLost
#fear
139 reads
8 Comments
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