Poems About Feeling Lost by Top Critiquers
#FeelingLost
Poems about feeling lost by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
7th May 2021 10:07am
7th May 2021 10:07am
Personal Viper
Today it's pleasure
Tomorrow who knows
I have you in my sights
You respond well to my jaded
Not broken
Sometimes lost
I'm your personal Viper
You know where to find me
24/7
On call
Tomorrow who knows
I have you in my sights
You respond well to my jaded
Not broken
Sometimes lost
I'm your personal Viper
You know where to find me
24/7
On call
#dark
#sex
#FeelingLost
233 reads
4 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
5th May 2021 9:00pm
5th May 2021 9:00pm
Without ropes
Cold steel
Cuts the ropes ...
Where should I go?
Cuts the ropes ...
Where should I go?
#identity
#BDSM
#FeelingLost
335 reads
31 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
29th Apr 2021 2:48am
29th Apr 2021 2:48am
The Misfit So Alone
On a sleepless night I recall on the past
Of old days when I was young in school
Of the friendships we thought would last
And how desperately I wanted to be cool
There was something about the in-crowd
And how popular so many wanted to be
And though we never really said it out loud
Some wished to be like them to a degree
It’s in our nature to be accepted
Even if we didn’t know how to speak
Deep down we want to be respected
Flaws and all makes us each unique
This is for the eccentrics and the misfits
To those...
Of old days when I was young in school
Of the friendships we thought would last
And how desperately I wanted to be cool
There was something about the in-crowd
And how popular so many wanted to be
And though we never really said it out loud
Some wished to be like them to a degree
It’s in our nature to be accepted
Even if we didn’t know how to speak
Deep down we want to be respected
Flaws and all makes us each unique
This is for the eccentrics and the misfits
To those...
#music
#memories
#misunderstood
#FeelingLost
#NaPoWriMo2021
274 reads
10 Comments
Honoria
Poem Published
25th Jul 2022 6:11am
25th Jul 2022 6:11am
Garden of Thorns
Leave”, she said.
Without malice, or contempt.
Just resignation.
Discontent had gone on
far too long to garner any other
emotion
“Just leave”, she whispered, too choked to be audible.
As she retreated to her
garden of thorns.
Without malice, or contempt.
Just resignation.
Discontent had gone on
far too long to garner any other
emotion
“Just leave”, she whispered, too choked to be audible.
As she retreated to her
garden of thorns.
#secrets
#FeelingLost
#FeelingTrapped
486 reads
58 Comments
moroccanpoet
Poem Published
18th Oct 2022 6:00pm
18th Oct 2022 6:00pm
Support a friend ( KrisX)
I heard some bad news today, something that made me sad,
Today I found out that the mother of a friend of mine is very ill. It was something she had always hidden.
I know how she feels at this moment.
When your mom is sick, and they can do nothing.
She cries until she falls asleep, and sometimes she finds herself alone, struggling with sadness and life.
I know you must be strong, and my prayers are always said,
But her question is: Does anyone really hear her when she's lying in bed?
I tell her: We are with you and we pray for your mother's wellness...
Today I found out that the mother of a friend of mine is very ill. It was something she had always hidden.
I know how she feels at this moment.
When your mom is sick, and they can do nothing.
She cries until she falls asleep, and sometimes she finds herself alone, struggling with sadness and life.
I know you must be strong, and my prayers are always said,
But her question is: Does anyone really hear her when she's lying in bed?
I tell her: We are with you and we pray for your mother's wellness...
#sadness
#FeelingLost
#weakness
101 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2018 1:56am
3rd Jan 2018 1:56am
hurt's riddle
my hurt speaks in riddles
this way out if you want to survive
fear's doors are nailed shut
& the house is on fire
if you need to see the pharmacist
go through the tunneling maze
of self hatred
there's a drug dealer ...
this way out if you want to survive
fear's doors are nailed shut
& the house is on fire
if you need to see the pharmacist
go through the tunneling maze
of self hatred
there's a drug dealer ...
#drugs
#addiction
#myself
#confusion
#FeelingLost
1003 reads
26 Comments
Billy_Snagg
Snaggy
Snaggy
Poem Published
29th Jun 2022 10:43pm
29th Jun 2022 10:43pm
The World Is Your Oyster...Card!
(Billy Snagg / Norris Niblet)
The world is his Oyster card,
Scar it in his life story Shard.
London -
Zones 1 to 6,
Making his mental hits,
Where the limitation of his mind permits.
Precious memories he tries to find,
That he’ll never donate in kind.
The world is his Oyster card,
Touching in, touching out.
A bus trip here,
A tube journey there.
Never venturing far
Into the unknown,
'Country zone'
That alien territory,
Of unfamiliar landscapes -
Strange fares.
His existence is lame,...
The world is his Oyster card,
Scar it in his life story Shard.
London -
Zones 1 to 6,
Making his mental hits,
Where the limitation of his mind permits.
Precious memories he tries to find,
That he’ll never donate in kind.
The world is his Oyster card,
Touching in, touching out.
A bus trip here,
A tube journey there.
Never venturing far
Into the unknown,
'Country zone'
That alien territory,
Of unfamiliar landscapes -
Strange fares.
His existence is lame,...
#anxiety
#confusion
#FeelingLost
#emptiness
#FeelingTrapped
267 reads
8 Comments
DevilsChild
Poem Published
11th Jan 2021 10:33am
11th Jan 2021 10:33am
The Pursuit of a Feeling
fuck this fluff shit
I'm sailing out to sea
leaving a place that used to mean
everything to me
long ago it was filled with artistry
sounds of magic bursted though the speakers
moving my body with old lovers
shaking it to the ground
we thought the fun would never stop
surely it could only get better
but we were wrong
I think the last of the sweet fruit
has been plucked
the music was stripped
cheapened and sold for nickels
best to fake a smile
you can't play realism at the clubs
no county for old men
this...
I'm sailing out to sea
leaving a place that used to mean
everything to me
long ago it was filled with artistry
sounds of magic bursted though the speakers
moving my body with old lovers
shaking it to the ground
we thought the fun would never stop
surely it could only get better
but we were wrong
I think the last of the sweet fruit
has been plucked
the music was stripped
cheapened and sold for nickels
best to fake a smile
you can't play realism at the clubs
no county for old men
this...
#music
#FeelingLost
227 reads
6 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2021 11:08am
2nd Mar 2021 11:08am
Feelings lost
Feelings lost
Your hand runs across my face, I feel your tender touch, along my shoulders you're still there, is to wish for more to much
Because I know when you touch my chest, soon sensation will be gone, it left the very moment, my spinal chord went wrong
I can feel you kiss me, see the love and desire in your eyes, but no longer will I feel your hand running up my thigh
No more of your soft Velvet touch, no more simple hand resting on my knee, even though I can see your touch, that's all that's left for me
Broken from the chest...
Your hand runs across my face, I feel your tender touch, along my shoulders you're still there, is to wish for more to much
Because I know when you touch my chest, soon sensation will be gone, it left the very moment, my spinal chord went wrong
I can feel you kiss me, see the love and desire in your eyes, but no longer will I feel your hand running up my thigh
No more of your soft Velvet touch, no more simple hand resting on my knee, even though I can see your touch, that's all that's left for me
Broken from the chest...
#sadness
#FeelingLost
#emotional
295 reads
4 Comments
robert43041
Viking
Viking
Poem Published
21st Aug 2020 3:06pm
21st Aug 2020 3:06pm
Swirl
A clear day,
Beautiful sky,
Except for the smog
In his mind.
A huge blurr
Of constant indecisions
Ruling his life,
Ruining his life,
Cutting him apart
As many very precise
Surgical incisions.
Beautiful sky,
Except for the smog
In his mind.
A huge blurr
Of constant indecisions
Ruling his life,
Ruining his life,
Cutting him apart
As many very precise
Surgical incisions.
#myself
#confusion
#SelfReflection #FeelingLost
#SelfReflection #FeelingLost
291 reads
0 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
29th Sep 2020 6:49pm
29th Sep 2020 6:49pm
The man I loved
#FeelingLost
373 reads
5 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
14th Sep 2021 3:50pm
14th Sep 2021 3:50pm
Slipstream
Weathered breeze
Across the surface
Of the night -
In star like
Distances,
Dark recesses
&
Absences -
Voided star light
&
Nullified moon light,
Tonight:
Footprints in the sand -
Womb of madness,
Antipodes of the land,
Solemn silence,
A vow of sadness -
Speaking circuitous,
Holes in the sky,
Deepened darkness,
Everything is a lie -
Roaming the outer edges
Beckoning discovery,
Slipped crypt of sages,...
Across the surface
Of the night -
In star like
Distances,
Dark recesses
&
Absences -
Voided star light
&
Nullified moon light,
Tonight:
Footprints in the sand -
Womb of madness,
Antipodes of the land,
Solemn silence,
A vow of sadness -
Speaking circuitous,
Holes in the sky,
Deepened darkness,
Everything is a lie -
Roaming the outer edges
Beckoning discovery,
Slipped crypt of sages,...
#dark
#shadows
#FeelingLost
208 reads
6 Comments
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