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One Moment in Time
Dreamy sleepy eyes
Looking through a fringe
Of long sooty eyelashes
A look that kisses
A touch, a tender caress
Tucking his long hair
Behind his ears
Angelic Smile
A moment in time
Caught after passion
Through the long night
Gone like yesterday’s dawn
I recall so well
That moment in time
Though I can’t remember
His name.
Looking through a fringe
Of long sooty eyelashes
A look that kisses
A touch, a tender caress
Tucking his long hair
Behind his ears
Angelic Smile
A moment in time
Caught after passion
Through the long night
Gone like yesterday’s dawn
I recall so well
That moment in time
Though I can’t remember
His name.
Published 23rd Mar 2013
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23rd Mar 2013 2:50am
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23rd Mar 2013 5:17am
23rd Mar 2013 6:18am
A very romantic poem, Grace! I'm a sucker for a good romantic poem, and lately with my newfound happiness in life I've become even more of a romantic than ever. *Giggle* Yeah, a single lovely moment in time can live forever, my friend! Sometimes, the moment outlives one's memory of names... but the beauty of such a time endures unto eternity, if we allow it to. :)
23rd Mar 2013 2:26pm
I know what you mean, dear Jessica, remembering something beautiful, though a word or a certain scents...its always like that. thanks for reading and commenting....
23rd Mar 2013 11:40am
23rd Mar 2013 2:27pm
One wonderful moment can be a memory of a life time, Magdalena...thanks for always being supportive.
Beautiful makes me sigh..I am transported by your poem to this moment in your life..thank you..peace Crim
23rd Mar 2013 8:47pm
Thank you so much for dropping by, reading and commenting on my simple poem. You are so kind.
24th Mar 2013 5:05pm
Nice one Grace,the most interesting part of the story is that you don't even remember his name...
24th Mar 2013 11:23pm
That one moment of loveliness is nameless. It's like looking at a burst of sunrays through your hair. Thanks for reading and commenting dustyjjewels.
Anonymous
25th Mar 2013 9:46am
Both ways enjoyed...nice write grace
strider
strider
25th Mar 2013 12:35pm
25th Mar 2013 4:14pm
The quirky thing about opposite sex relationships is sometimes after deciding to stay clear of romance, that almost sister-brother like bond becomes more valuable and enduring then the short warmth of romantic intrigue.
25th Mar 2013 8:30pm
You are so right, Jazzman. Platonic friendships are more enduring than romantic involvements. Thanks for reading the humble poem and leaving your comments.
Yes "a moment in time" that leaves an indelible mark never to be forgotten, beautiful piece sweet Grace.
Red
Red
25th Mar 2013 8:31pm
