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I want you to get hit by a bus!
This pain i feel inside is dying to get out
All the motherfucking energy i waste is to keep it in
I cant stand your ugly fucking face
Just go die you evil bitch
You think your perfect
You think your shit dont stink
Bitch you are sorely mistaken
You are a lying backstabbing whore
Cunt just get hit by a bus
I want you to feel the pain i do
Suffer you filthy bitch
Finally feel what you have been dishing for years
You think guys like you for you
But they only like you when they're in your mouth
You can suck a dick but you could never love
You will be alone forever because thats what you deserve
I want to curb stomp the shit out of you
You deserve nothing but a shitty life
You need to realize that the world doesn't revolve around you
No one cares if you have money
I want to rip your clit off and shove it so far down your throat you choke on it
You should be used to choking though because your a nasty skank
One day you will see
Fuck you
Your no better than a $2 hooker
Oh wait..
you are one
Just fuck off you nasty bitch!
All the motherfucking energy i waste is to keep it in
I cant stand your ugly fucking face
Just go die you evil bitch
You think your perfect
You think your shit dont stink
Bitch you are sorely mistaken
You are a lying backstabbing whore
Cunt just get hit by a bus
I want you to feel the pain i do
Suffer you filthy bitch
Finally feel what you have been dishing for years
You think guys like you for you
But they only like you when they're in your mouth
You can suck a dick but you could never love
You will be alone forever because thats what you deserve
I want to curb stomp the shit out of you
You deserve nothing but a shitty life
You need to realize that the world doesn't revolve around you
No one cares if you have money
I want to rip your clit off and shove it so far down your throat you choke on it
You should be used to choking though because your a nasty skank
One day you will see
Fuck you
Your no better than a $2 hooker
Oh wait..
you are one
Just fuck off you nasty bitch!
Published 1st Mar 2013
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1st Mar 2013 6:05pm
1st Mar 2013 7:38pm
Now this was very deep, but for some reason I enjoyed it very much. Great stuff :)
1st Mar 2013 11:43pm
Damn...
not much to critique, i really liked it. only thing i would say is re read it, and maybe add some more modifier to show your actually struggling with the hate and not being hateful on purpose. little things like, "All the motherfucking energy i waste is to keep it in" add a 'Just' after is, makes it sound more as if your fighting against your self as well.
not much to critique, i really liked it. only thing i would say is re read it, and maybe add some more modifier to show your actually struggling with the hate and not being hateful on purpose. little things like, "All the motherfucking energy i waste is to keep it in" add a 'Just' after is, makes it sound more as if your fighting against your self as well.
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