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ON VALENTINES DAY
On valentines day the sweet and sexy way you smile at me made me throb with naughty anticipation. I adore the beauitful way you devine sweetness fills my head with possibilities, before the hug, kisses and tongues said their hellos. As you pull me close pressing your hot body too mine, I knew what sexy you had in mind. Our clothes disappeared like they were on fire. Honeypot like lava. My hard-bone pointed at gorgeous you like I was snitching. Pretty eyes widened, delighted by the length and thickness. With your soft hands you stroke me slow and deliberate. After eating sexy you in that chair you love to cuddle up and read in, you boldly push me back to sit on the bed. Swaying steps too me, I kiss, lick and suck the most beautiful breasts and pebble hard nipples until you climax again from your two fingers and skillful breast play. After a tongue kissing moment to recovery, sexy you straddle me knees on each side. We both moan as you lower your wet and hot juicy honeypot onto my wanting and awaiting shaft. With a hand gripping each perfect cheek, you lovingly rise and fall the length of black love. As ass wiggled with uncontrolled urgency, we continue to kiss with much passion. Cumming times two a storm of pure bliss showered over us. Being swept into orgasm, I dig deep and hold tight as we explode one last time. And the sweet, sexy way you smiled at me, beautiful you made me throb some more, on Valentines day...
Sir Lancelott
HAPPY VALENTINES DAY
Sir Lancelott
HAPPY VALENTINES DAY
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12th Feb 2013 4:24pm
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12th Feb 2013 9:30pm
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12th Feb 2013 9:31pm
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12th Feb 2013 5:12pm
Hearing Anita Baker's, "You Give Good Love"....makes me want to shout out, "You Give Good Valentine" lol....
I slowly took in your words, as they slowly took me there!
Naughty and NICE! xo
I slowly took in your words, as they slowly took me there!
Naughty and NICE! xo
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12th Feb 2013 9:34pm
Thanxxx sweets, I adore you RAIN!!!
I'm still caught in the Drizzle, Drizzle... lol
I'm still caught in the Drizzle, Drizzle... lol
Re: ON VALENTINES DAY
12th Feb 2013 6:38pm
Perfect composition for hearts day. My minor quibble is maybe in the middle the pronoun "you" was used too much.
Fine composition.
Fine composition.
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12th Feb 2013 9:28pm
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12th Feb 2013 9:37pm
No problem---doesn't take away from the richness of the write and I am probably the only one views it like that.
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12th Feb 2013 8:18pm
A wonderfully erotic way to get it bumpin...I mean jumpin for V day!
you give good pen Sexy Writer!
you give good pen Sexy Writer!
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12th Feb 2013 9:29pm
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12th Feb 2013 10:07pm
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13th Feb 2013 2:43am
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13th Feb 2013 1:26am
well..room temp. had reached its boiling point luv..;)
perfect treat for the occasion... :)
luv it..
perfect treat for the occasion... :)
luv it..
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13th Feb 2013 2:44am
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13th Feb 2013 1:32am
O, my Knight...
If thou couldst but know how thy words hast set my heart to pounding!!
Thou hast ignited passion's fire deep within thy Sorceress...the fire is raging uncontrolled!! I shall need no heat in the east wing of the royal castle this nite. (LOL!!)
"before the hugs, kisses, and tongues
said their hellos"...sooo artfully, sensually clever, Lancelott, indeed!
My twenty-first century, senous knight, with this piece, thou art truly a master with thy quill and parchment...a special verse for a rather special day.
Enchantress
If thou couldst but know how thy words hast set my heart to pounding!!
Thou hast ignited passion's fire deep within thy Sorceress...the fire is raging uncontrolled!! I shall need no heat in the east wing of the royal castle this nite. (LOL!!)
"before the hugs, kisses, and tongues
said their hellos"...sooo artfully, sensually clever, Lancelott, indeed!
My twenty-first century, senous knight, with this piece, thou art truly a master with thy quill and parchment...a special verse for a rather special day.
Enchantress
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13th Feb 2013 2:42am
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13th Feb 2013 4:07am
Mmmmmm...
This is really sexy pen Sir Lancelott. Such sweet passion and desire, mmmmmm...
My favorite lines:
As ass wiggled with uncontrolled urgency, we continue to kiss with much passion.
This is really sexy pen Sir Lancelott. Such sweet passion and desire, mmmmmm...
My favorite lines:
As ass wiggled with uncontrolled urgency, we continue to kiss with much passion.
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13th Feb 2013 5:36am
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13th Feb 2013 5:30am
AYE PAPI!!!!! Perhaps, you should consider putting your voice to this, some beautiful tunes to honor it & I'll probably have my way with ME! ;) Loved this piece.
Go forth! Xo
Go forth! Xo
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13th Feb 2013 5:38am
Actually I have thought about that..Maybe worth looking into...
Thanxx sooo much sweets!!
Thanxx sooo much sweets!!
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13th Feb 2013 5:49pm
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13th Feb 2013 5:54pm
Thanxxx sweets I appreciate you!!
You give great pen also!!
Happy Valentines Day
You give great pen also!!
Happy Valentines Day
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Anonymous
13th Feb 2013 8:42pm
Yeah, can count on you to bring heat, hey....
:-)
Swell effort, again!
Pen on, poet.
Cheers
Tidespotter
:-)
Swell effort, again!
Pen on, poet.
Cheers
Tidespotter
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14th Feb 2013 1:09am
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Anonymous
14th Feb 2013 6:13am
A fiery write, indeed, Lance! In particular, I like the leadup: "Our clothes disappeared like they were on fire." Very expressive piece! :)
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14th Feb 2013 6:38am
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14th Feb 2013 4:57pm
and on this day of hearts...the extension of physical, mental, and soulful bliss truly elicite the meaning of Happy Valentine's day!!
Yeah--like this one quite a bit Mr Casasnova with the words I tell ya!!!!!
Yeah--like this one quite a bit Mr Casasnova with the words I tell ya!!!!!
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15th Feb 2013 5:21am
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19th Feb 2013 4:10am
I'm thinking I got ripped off. All I got on Valentines Day was flowers! ;)
Hot penning Sir!
Hot penning Sir!
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6th Feb 2014 10:16am
Fav lines
. Honeypot like lava. My hard-bone pointed at gorgeous you like I was snitching. Pretty eyes widened, delighted by the length and thickness. With your soft hands you stroke me slow and deliberate. After eating sexy you in that chair you love to cuddle up and read in, you boldly push me back to sit on the bed.
Wow you did that ? Love it muaahhhh.
. Honeypot like lava. My hard-bone pointed at gorgeous you like I was snitching. Pretty eyes widened, delighted by the length and thickness. With your soft hands you stroke me slow and deliberate. After eating sexy you in that chair you love to cuddle up and read in, you boldly push me back to sit on the bed.
Wow you did that ? Love it muaahhhh.
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6th Feb 2014 10:38am
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11th Feb 2014 12:04pm
'''''Honey pot like lava
my hard-bone pointed
at gorgeous you,
like I was snitching
Pretty eyes widened,
delighted by the length and thickness…..
with your soft hands you stroke me
slow and deliberate…
after eating sexy you
in that chair
you love to cuddle up and reach in,
you boldly push me back
to sit on the bed.....''''''
Anyone
seeing the length and breadth
will jump their beaus
for you
Happy Valentine for you
in 2014 too
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16th Feb 2014 00:27am