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EYES LIT UP
My eyes lit up with desire as sexy you answer the door wearing a beautiful black silk lace gown, with three splits. Two in front, one over each pretty thigh and one in back from the middle of your gorgeous ass to the floor. As our bodies greeted one another, I clutch the flared sides of wonderful hips to pull you close too me. Wasting no time we kiss like it's the perfect time to blend as one. With your hand I'm lead into a room full of pillows. Laid back, you spread thick pretty legs to show me that sexy cookie. Before the first lick, I see pure honey oozing sweetly. My lips press softly against your honeypot, While my tongue began its lusty exploration of your nether region. My hot, wet tongue was patiently swirling around and inside pleasuring every bit of that soft cookie. Looking down from all the moaning and shit talking our eyes met and your sexy look bore into my soul. After displaying your musical talents on me, we take another bowl of that good and sip some wine and we're kissing passionately never missing a beat. With ankles on my shoulder, I enter sexy you very slowly. Upon entry, you squirt a little being full of anticipation. Edible hips wiggle and hump up at me as I thrust down with long confident strokes. I love your trashy comments with loud moans in between. My pounding harder contorted your pretty face as orgasm number four approaches. On explosion, you came voilently wetting us both with your sexy sweet honey. As I cum, you get up to clean me up with your willing tongue, licking nutt and honey. And as we catch our breath, Your eyes lit up with desire....
Sir Lancelott
Sir Lancelott
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Re: EYES LIT UP
15th Feb 2013 2:49pm
Sir Lancelott,
Much desire and fulfilment in this piece. Our eyes give away our deepest thoughts...mmmm?!
Olga :-)
Much desire and fulfilment in this piece. Our eyes give away our deepest thoughts...mmmm?!
Olga :-)
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15th Feb 2013 3:35pm
Wow! I think have evolved to another level of sexy write with this one... or is because of Lover's day?
"sexy soft Cookie" sweet!
"sexy soft Cookie" sweet!
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15th Feb 2013 3:52pm
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WHEW! This is very, very, very erotic Lance!lol
Loved your rawness! Very imaginative ink! I could see the entire story unfold in great detail.
"Your eyes lit up with desire...."<--sexy line, my favorite line.xoxo
btw...Thank You! :)
Loved your rawness! Very imaginative ink! I could see the entire story unfold in great detail.
"Your eyes lit up with desire...."<--sexy line, my favorite line.xoxo
btw...Thank You! :)
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15th Feb 2013 3:50pm
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15th Feb 2013 3:54pm
O, My Knight,
'Tis yet another lady fair that thou hast sought, and received, pleasure from...though it dost appear that the pleasure was, indeed, mutual!
Ahhhhh.....eyes that dost lite up with desire! 'Tis often said that eyes are but windows to the soul. 'Twould seem that these eyes--both the lady's and thine own--must surely open directly into souls of purest passion!!
A cookie, my knight...that doth call forth an image of almost a sweet innocence, yet the lady fair is one who is far more experienced in the arts of pleasure, to be certain!
With thy quill, my Lancelott,thou hast, once again brought sensual, pleasurable satisfaction to parchment!!!
Enchantress
'Tis yet another lady fair that thou hast sought, and received, pleasure from...though it dost appear that the pleasure was, indeed, mutual!
Ahhhhh.....eyes that dost lite up with desire! 'Tis often said that eyes are but windows to the soul. 'Twould seem that these eyes--both the lady's and thine own--must surely open directly into souls of purest passion!!
A cookie, my knight...that doth call forth an image of almost a sweet innocence, yet the lady fair is one who is far more experienced in the arts of pleasure, to be certain!
With thy quill, my Lancelott,thou hast, once again brought sensual, pleasurable satisfaction to parchment!!!
Enchantress
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15th Feb 2013 4:17pm
Thanxx to thee thy sorceress!!
The eyes are indeed the windows!!
Sir Lancelott
The eyes are indeed the windows!!
Sir Lancelott
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15th Feb 2013 9:46pm
THE MAN speaks
such awesome lines, I was gonna copy my favorite quotes here but i'd repeat half the piece!!!
You make the pen and the sword of equal strength!!!
such awesome lines, I was gonna copy my favorite quotes here but i'd repeat half the piece!!!
You make the pen and the sword of equal strength!!!
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16th Feb 2013 3:56am
Sir Lancelott, so much passion and nastiness...mmmmmm...
"Looking down from all the moaning and shit talking our eyes met and your sexy look bore into my soul."
"And as we catch our breath, Your eyes lit up with desire...."
Mmmmmm, loving your ink.
Thank you:-)
"Looking down from all the moaning and shit talking our eyes met and your sexy look bore into my soul."
"And as we catch our breath, Your eyes lit up with desire...."
Mmmmmm, loving your ink.
Thank you:-)
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Anonymous
16th Feb 2013 7:26am
A passionate, sexy write, indeed, Lance! I like the idea of "a room full of pillows." One's comfort is very important under such conditions! :D
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Anonymous
19th Feb 2013 1:31am
WOW....the computer nearly melted
and so did I
good write and delicious read
Kitty
and so did I
good write and delicious read
Kitty
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Anonymous
19th Feb 2013 3:02am
Raw real uncut and uncensored what a great way of life and I appreciated every word of every line you shared.
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19th Feb 2013 3:20am
Wow sweets thanxx!!
Sharing with you is amazing!!
Much respect!
Sir Lancelott
Sharing with you is amazing!!
Much respect!
Sir Lancelott
Re: EYES LIT UP
19th Feb 2013 3:22am
I think if I read any more of your poems, I'm going to have to take up smoking.
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19th Feb 2013 3:32am
Thanxx sweets I'm happy you like it!!
You don't have to take up smoking, just relax and enjoy the ride sweets!!
You don't have to take up smoking, just relax and enjoy the ride sweets!!
Re: EYES LIT UP
19th Feb 2013 6:10am
Loved this read. A grew escape for the mind in an otherwise mundane life. Thanks synth
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Anonymous
24th Feb 2013 1:46am
:)Very Nice!
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