< like a fish in an aquarium >

I've heard that words hate it when you tap on the glass.

I love this poem.  It is this exact point/feeling that so much of my work is focused around and you've laid it out brilliantly here.  Thank you for this, today.

It just IT....you know. And I love the way angle and perspective shifts so suddenly, sharply.

words are irritable little things

aquariums tend to do that :)

i probably should change the name to:  
like shooting fish in an aquarium

it doesn't agree with the metaphor,
but i think it's funny

there is something about this poem which I liked a lot. the central image of fish in aquarium really works here. and i absolutely agree with this thought: as soon as the poem is finished, it doesn't belong to us, creators, any more; it acquires the life of its own. golden fish in a trasparent aquarium. also the form of the poem somehow brings greater effect; effect of limitation. anyway, i have really enjoyed reading it

 
"Poems, like kids, always grow beyond our control."  
- some famous writer

I love works that provide just enough structure of an idea to wrap your brain around, but is mostly open and free for your mind to chew on for quite a while. This poem is one of those.

that's my motto!

appreciate your mental   :)

Words can mean just about anything depending on the state of your sanity...

I really enjoy the insight your poems bring upon, following you is really rewarding:)

and having you read the stuff is rewarding :)