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Twilight
(inspired by Rachel's "INTERPRETATION" competition). The painting is mine.
Sketches of your radiance
at times find their way
into the corners of my pages.
Subconscious stencils of you
that form beauty without
a trace of effort.
The calligraphy of my emotions
tells of the tales
of times when thoughts of you
turned into hypnotized poetry
holding my words in a trance
penned with the ink of remembrance.
The motion picture of me
fast forwards to moments captured
like a seven second day dream.
These frozen frames in time
joined from beginning to end
are your imprint burned into
the sepia film of my soul
Sketches of your radiance
at times find their way
into the corners of my pages.
Subconscious stencils of you
that form beauty without
a trace of effort.
The calligraphy of my emotions
tells of the tales
of times when thoughts of you
turned into hypnotized poetry
holding my words in a trance
penned with the ink of remembrance.
The motion picture of me
fast forwards to moments captured
like a seven second day dream.
These frozen frames in time
joined from beginning to end
are your imprint burned into
the sepia film of my soul
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Re: Twilight
11th Sep 2012 8:52am
Re: Twilight
11th Sep 2012 12:13pm
You nailed this one Ken I like this part "These frozen frames in time
joined from beginning to end
are your imprint burned into
the sepia film of my soul" Good Luck
Red
joined from beginning to end
are your imprint burned into
the sepia film of my soul" Good Luck
Red
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re: Re: Twilight
11th Sep 2012 12:20pm
Good morning Sonya. Thank you. I didn't enter it, just inspired by the comp. A wonder filled day be yours!
Re: Twilight
11th Sep 2012 3:57pm
"are your imprint burned into
the sepia film of my soul"
The whole thing is beautifully written. This happens to be my favorite part. Your art never ceases to amaze me Ken. I have no words.
the sepia film of my soul"
The whole thing is beautifully written. This happens to be my favorite part. Your art never ceases to amaze me Ken. I have no words.
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re: Re: Twilight
12th Sep 2012 7:57am
I greatly appreciate your words and thoughts, Rachel. I loved the competition you offered as the platform to inspire this. Thank you :)
Re: Twilight
Anonymous
11th Sep 2012 5:37pm
This is so beautiful in every way
Good luck in the comp
Peace
Kitty
Good luck in the comp
Peace
Kitty
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Re: Twilight
11th Sep 2012 8:29pm
Ken. first off. that's a nice bit of art you painted . and a pretty decent looking muse :)
I like that you incorporate words related to art in this poem and also the little rhymes that pop in and out.
It's an enjoyable read from the start.
fair play Ken, nice one
I like that you incorporate words related to art in this poem and also the little rhymes that pop in and out.
It's an enjoyable read from the start.
fair play Ken, nice one
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re: Re: Twilight
12th Sep 2012 8:00am
That would be the 2nd ex, Eamon and thank you much. I do appreciate you sharing your thoughts and for venturing in to read. Much appreciated.
Re: Twilight
14th Sep 2012 5:12am
Wow. This is really great. I love your painting as well. A finely penned poem!
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re: Re: Twilight
14th Sep 2012 1:47pm
Re: Twilight
16th Sep 2012 3:57am
Don't know what i like better the painting or the verse... I cannot choose for both are a reflection of your mind... beautiful :)
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re: Re: Twilight
16th Sep 2012 6:49am
Re: Twilight
21st Sep 2012 11:22pm
This is stunning. The painting alone speaks a desperate story.. While the poem brings realization in the eyes of the beholder.. Such a sad remembrance of love. I absolutely adore the artist in you're soul.
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Re: Twilight
21st Sep 2012 11:40pm
Re: Twilight
24th Sep 2012 3:08pm
Darn this is a brilliant write
Loved this verse
"The calligraphy of my emotions
tells of the tales
of times when thoughts of you
turned into hypnotized poetry"
Actually loved it all,
A fav for sure!!!!
Best wishes
Ricecake
Loved this verse
"The calligraphy of my emotions
tells of the tales
of times when thoughts of you
turned into hypnotized poetry"
Actually loved it all,
A fav for sure!!!!
Best wishes
Ricecake
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re: Re: Twilight
26th Sep 2012 2:05pm
Re: Twilight
25th Nov 2014 6:31am
This is.. Just so beautiful. Of course it also has hints of the past but the hints towards the beautiful future are so brilliantly written. The picture only adds to the piece.
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