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All of Us
I had a dream
that in a giant game
poetry Twister
we all got
on board
at one time
and wrote
the ultimate verse wave
that stretched
from here to there
an infinite length
of peace
and as enduring
as the problem
of how
what we say
is never going
to be
the thing
we describe
and how being
just that close
is as near
to perfection
as we are ever
going to get,
in words.
runningturt87
that in a giant game
poetry Twister
we all got
on board
at one time
and wrote
the ultimate verse wave
that stretched
from here to there
an infinite length
of peace
and as enduring
as the problem
of how
what we say
is never going
to be
the thing
we describe
and how being
just that close
is as near
to perfection
as we are ever
going to get,
in words.
runningturt87
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Re: All of Us
23rd Aug 2012 4:01pm
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23rd Aug 2012 4:22pm
That's what I get for not paying attention, but I am learning to keep my ear to the ground....this was a real dream......I'm trying to remember if we were wearing anything.................
Texas is so big it is close to everywhere.
Texas is so big it is close to everywhere.
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23rd Aug 2012 5:32pm
yepper hahaha have you been going through my draws???? naughty boy, there are man/bear traps in there watchout!
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23rd Aug 2012 5:34pm
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23rd Aug 2012 5:40pm
hahaha Oh I see I gonna have to teach you a lesson about messin with big Red! Fasten your seatbelt naughty boy, it going to be a bumpy ride, yeee haaa!!!
Red
Red
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23rd Aug 2012 6:57pm
Sweets look up coquette there you will find a picture of me lol a lost art much confused and maligned. I do so enjoy being Naughty!
Red
Red
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23rd Aug 2012 7:00pm
Then I will not need a straw to lick up your lap dance.....Is that with a capital "C?"
Re: All of Us
23rd Aug 2012 11:43pm
Thats a good dream, runningturtle. I can do a reading for you on what it means...you wanna?
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24th Aug 2012 1:35am
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24th Aug 2012 2:01am
I'm so loving that idea....PM me and let's go through it....Thanks, Grace!
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25th Aug 2012 10:08am
Did it...will post, soon. I like the poem runningturtle, and a gist of what I thought is that you love a peaceful tranquil existence akin to Eden. No mean streak on you: just good, but you sometimes wish you can change things around you or be somewhere else. At times you get angry too. Is that correct...?
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I see the issue of experience as being a multi-dimensional problem that truly requires an interpenetrating multi-dimensional solution. Thus the only way to contemplate the sensorium in a way that allows for the conceptualization we have before us is if we, instead of observing space and time, we see everything as a synchronicity: I am forwarding the end of philosophy, science, math, and psychology. In a synchronicity, there is no time and space. There is no-otherness. There is therefore no one to not be at peace with since that only leaves consciousness as the only reality, thus then the end of the disparagement of the uncombined cosmic forces and their dislinked preoccupation with the ill-fated quantum mechanical view of the world. The problem of our not being able to see what we need to see is gotten around by our projecting what must be there in order for us to see it. The entire spectrum of analysis is a net of sound wave functionality, IMHO. A single vibration has intoned a non-space, and all of this is its consciousness. We are literally an eternal song of the heart of the universe in a transdimensional symphony. That being said, we are not able to use words to describe realty into being, and so we are using language to illustrate to the best of our ability what it is that we feel, somewhat like a blind man describing color. And that, my dear Grace, is sometimes frustrating, yes, in that what we want to say falls so very short of the incredible sense that we have that life is beyond words. Thanks for your reading.
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25th Aug 2012 11:53pm
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26th Aug 2012 1:28am