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My Memoir Grimoire
Letters steadily seep from my pen
soul kissed, finding their sacred spot
casting spells with words
soaking each page with creation
mating with paper for life
My mind, the sun
often so bright I don't
see the words as they come
they spill, blindly
determined to burn alive
At other times
my mind's shadow
howls at the moon
baring its sharp teeth
with every bitten word
scaring my fingers
Each breath, a second of time
spreading to all four corners
of my favorite pages
addicted to the hours
revisited in each timeline
My ears, they've learned to listen
to the lessons of the leaves
they tell secrets about
deals made with death
and the endurance of life
It's a solitary cult obsession
writing My Memoir Grimoire
but my eyes keep me company
never allowing me to be fooled
as to which is witch
soul kissed, finding their sacred spot
casting spells with words
soaking each page with creation
mating with paper for life
My mind, the sun
often so bright I don't
see the words as they come
they spill, blindly
determined to burn alive
At other times
my mind's shadow
howls at the moon
baring its sharp teeth
with every bitten word
scaring my fingers
Each breath, a second of time
spreading to all four corners
of my favorite pages
addicted to the hours
revisited in each timeline
My ears, they've learned to listen
to the lessons of the leaves
they tell secrets about
deals made with death
and the endurance of life
It's a solitary cult obsession
writing My Memoir Grimoire
but my eyes keep me company
never allowing me to be fooled
as to which is witch
Author's Note
Just playing:)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. My Memoir Grimoire
22nd Sep 2024 00:46am
Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
22nd Sep 2024 00:51am
Hey, what up Joe!
Thank you for that.
I wrote this last night and decided to post.
I'm an early Halloween moment right now.
Just having some fun:)
Thanks for checking it out amigo!
Thank you for that.
I wrote this last night and decided to post.
I'm an early Halloween moment right now.
Just having some fun:)
Thanks for checking it out amigo!
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10th Oct 2024 6:27pm
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16th Oct 2024 1:37am
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
22nd Sep 2024 1:05am
This is very cool. Keep your eyes open. That first Stanza opened this poem Nicely
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Hi Fia!
thank you, it was fun writing.
Eyes open always!
thanks for stopping by and taking a read.
thank you, it was fun writing.
Eyes open always!
thanks for stopping by and taking a read.
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
22nd Sep 2024 1:30am
Maybe just play but laced with stunning beauty. Great description of your writing process. One of my favorite lines is "mating with paper for life". Awesome!
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Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
24th Sep 2024 00:48am
Hey Pink:)
I'm so happy you enjoyed reading. You know it is like a glimpse into my writing process. Really thinking about it and setting time aside from my day to get it down on paper.
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)
I'm so happy you enjoyed reading. You know it is like a glimpse into my writing process. Really thinking about it and setting time aside from my day to get it down on paper.
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)
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Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
24th Sep 2024 00:49am
Now one of your fav works!! Really!!
I've got an enormous smile on my face right now.
Made my evening amigo!!
Thanks for stopping by and leaving an awesome comment!
I've got an enormous smile on my face right now.
Made my evening amigo!!
Thanks for stopping by and leaving an awesome comment!
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
22nd Sep 2024 4:57am
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24th Sep 2024 00:50am
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
22nd Sep 2024 5:12am
That is a phenomenal write, Adelphina. Brilliant wordplay. I dig this a lot. Appreciate you.
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Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
24th Sep 2024 00:52am
Hey there mister:)
I'm so happy you dug this write.
I hope you used a shovel. hahaha
That's something my dad would have said - yikes!
In all seriousness, thank you amigo:)
I'm so happy you dug this write.
I hope you used a shovel. hahaha
That's something my dad would have said - yikes!
In all seriousness, thank you amigo:)
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
22nd Sep 2024 8:45am
For "just playing" it has some amazing wording, Memoire Grimoire to start with.
What a stunning piece of ink, love this one :-)
What a stunning piece of ink, love this one :-)
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24th Sep 2024 00:57am
Hello Duende with the Killa Shades!!
Thank you for that. I love when fall gets here
so I can dabble into some darker witchy writes.
It brings back awesome memories like carving pumpkins with my boys when they were younger. Also, when they would dress up for school.
All in fun:)
Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment!
Thank you for that. I love when fall gets here
so I can dabble into some darker witchy writes.
It brings back awesome memories like carving pumpkins with my boys when they were younger. Also, when they would dress up for school.
All in fun:)
Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment!
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
22nd Sep 2024 11:03am
Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
24th Sep 2024 00:59am
Hi Pete:)
Glad you enjoyed the read. Mid-September gets me motivated
to write darker stuff: It's fun to switch stuff up.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
Glad you enjoyed the read. Mid-September gets me motivated
to write darker stuff: It's fun to switch stuff up.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
22nd Sep 2024 12:16pm
Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
24th Sep 2024 1:02am
Aww, thank you. I went to the grocery store and they
were stocking all the cool chocolate Halloween candy!
It got me all excited to write:)
Thanks for stopping by and the RL!
were stocking all the cool chocolate Halloween candy!
It got me all excited to write:)
Thanks for stopping by and the RL!
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
22nd Sep 2024 1:43pm
Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
24th Sep 2024 1:05am
Hi PS!
I was in a mood. LOL
You know your current avatar - I could have
used that hat while writing this write.
I'm so happy you enjoyed.
Thanks for stopping by and the RL
I was in a mood. LOL
You know your current avatar - I could have
used that hat while writing this write.
I'm so happy you enjoyed.
Thanks for stopping by and the RL
Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
24th Sep 2024 1:17am
I love that hat.
Maybe I'll post another picture of me in it.
Beautiful Italian wool.
Sometimes I feel like a
western cowboy rabbi in it ...
Maybe I'll post another picture of me in it.
Beautiful Italian wool.
Sometimes I feel like a
western cowboy rabbi in it ...
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24th Sep 2024 2:29am
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24th Sep 2024 2:33am
I'm about as pious as dirt but I studied acting in college as a minor so ..
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Re. My Memoir Grimoire
22nd Sep 2024 3:32pm
Oh! I LOVE that last line! Which it Witch! Excellent offering, Adelphina! I really enjoyed the self-reflection as well as the differentiation in this piece.
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Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
24th Sep 2024 1:11am
Hi A:)
The last line felt amazing!
I was like hurry, write it down before it vanishes.
It came into my mind like a tsunami. A total rush. hahaha
Usually I jot things down throughout the day and compile them together when I have enough material to work with.
That line didn't happen until I was in the writing process on my last stanza and last line. It just appeared while writing.
Thanks for the RL and commenting:)
The last line felt amazing!
I was like hurry, write it down before it vanishes.
It came into my mind like a tsunami. A total rush. hahaha
Usually I jot things down throughout the day and compile them together when I have enough material to work with.
That line didn't happen until I was in the writing process on my last stanza and last line. It just appeared while writing.
Thanks for the RL and commenting:)
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
22nd Sep 2024 3:47pm
Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
24th Sep 2024 1:16am
Hi Willow:)
All the stores here are getting the Halloween stuff out already.
I had to jump in on all that action. hahaha
My coworker actually got me salt and pepper sugar skull
shakers. She knows I'm a fan:)
Aww, I'm so happy you enjoyed
and thanks for the RL
All the stores here are getting the Halloween stuff out already.
I had to jump in on all that action. hahaha
My coworker actually got me salt and pepper sugar skull
shakers. She knows I'm a fan:)
Aww, I'm so happy you enjoyed
and thanks for the RL
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Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
24th Sep 2024 1:22am
Hi Tim:)
This is true. Last week the moon here was
enormous! It was the supermoon. It looked like I
could reach out and touch it.
Writing that last line really felt like magic. It just
appeared!
thanks for stopping by
I'm so happy you enjoyed the read amigo:)
This is true. Last week the moon here was
enormous! It was the supermoon. It looked like I
could reach out and touch it.
Writing that last line really felt like magic. It just
appeared!
thanks for stopping by
I'm so happy you enjoyed the read amigo:)
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
23rd Sep 2024 2:57am
Dear A,
Ditto my esteemed poets above. Clever and playful and artful. I’m going to write my memoir grimoire. It won’t be as sophisticated as yours. Probably won’t even get written. Never mind. I think I’ll just go shopping instead.
Fab piece. H🌷
Ditto my esteemed poets above. Clever and playful and artful. I’m going to write my memoir grimoire. It won’t be as sophisticated as yours. Probably won’t even get written. Never mind. I think I’ll just go shopping instead.
Fab piece. H🌷
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24th Sep 2024 1:26am
Hi H!
I wanna go too!! I love shopping:)
All the shops on our main street are changing up
the window displays. Lots of orange and leaves and, yes, pumpkins!! I'm in a Halloween mood early so I'm just going with the mood and see where it takes me.
Thanks for the RL and stopping by for a read:)
I wanna go too!! I love shopping:)
All the shops on our main street are changing up
the window displays. Lots of orange and leaves and, yes, pumpkins!! I'm in a Halloween mood early so I'm just going with the mood and see where it takes me.
Thanks for the RL and stopping by for a read:)
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
25th Sep 2024 2:31am
You are on a roll, my love. And this one is certainly top of your witch-wordery.
Very strong, with a definite feel of a spiritual strength. I love all the imagery that you put into this. As a few others have said, you are mastering some literary demons in here.
I love it when you post new material, even if I've had a sneak peek! Lol. (Hey I'm allowed some perks!). It just adds to my smiles that you give me, baby.
Hey, see you soon! Yay!
Very strong, with a definite feel of a spiritual strength. I love all the imagery that you put into this. As a few others have said, you are mastering some literary demons in here.
I love it when you post new material, even if I've had a sneak peek! Lol. (Hey I'm allowed some perks!). It just adds to my smiles that you give me, baby.
Hey, see you soon! Yay!
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Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
14th Oct 2024 1:24am
Hye Babe,
Yes, I wrote this with a very specific vision.
Each stanza had a topic and then it just flowed like
magic. Loved writing it. It was a great feeling:)
But you make me believe in magic so there!! haha
And I miss you:)
Sorry for the late response but I was busy
with some guy on vacation. hehehe
MWA!!
Yes, I wrote this with a very specific vision.
Each stanza had a topic and then it just flowed like
magic. Loved writing it. It was a great feeling:)
But you make me believe in magic so there!! haha
And I miss you:)
Sorry for the late response but I was busy
with some guy on vacation. hehehe
MWA!!
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
28th Sep 2024 2:34am
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14th Oct 2024 1:25am
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
26th Oct 2024 5:49am
" the lessons of the leaves" this line and that stanza was powerful. Killer closing line as well.
Amazing work.
Amazing work.
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27th Oct 2024 1:43am
Hey!
This was so fun to write. Being able to role play in
poetry is the best. Everything came together in this write like fluid.
Pulling words from here and there.
Thanks for checking out my writes and thanks for the RL too!!
This was so fun to write. Being able to role play in
poetry is the best. Everything came together in this write like fluid.
Pulling words from here and there.
Thanks for checking out my writes and thanks for the RL too!!
Re. My Memoir Grimoire
6th Dec 2024 6:15am
You wrote you were just playing, and this is definitely a fun read! Loved how it's dark but not overwhelmingly so and full of energy and pride instead of despair. Well done, as always, Adelphina, and as always, a pleasure!
Mundus
Mundus
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Re: Re. My Memoir Grimoire
13th Dec 2024 1:47am
Hey Mundus!
I was a in a Halloween mood!
Thank you so much for all of your snaps on this write! It was fun to write for sure.
It’s nice to see you on the site amigo. Thanks for checking this out
I was a in a Halloween mood!
Thank you so much for all of your snaps on this write! It was fun to write for sure.
It’s nice to see you on the site amigo. Thanks for checking this out