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and i beg you
You made
me scream
until I
I begged you
for mercy
I licked my
juices from
your neck as
you groaned and
nudged my swollen pussy
and paused
I stopped you from
leaving me this time
to get a condom
and we stayed locked in that
almost-unsure-moment
until our muscles shook
A drop of sweat built
on your forehead
growing pregnant
in the moment
until it fell onto
my cheek
I shoved my hips and
pushed against you
and
I
begged
you
to
Take me like this.
please....
I wanted to feel you,
really fucking feel you,
so deep that you could
read the walls of my
soft, warm pussy like
a braille love letter
And the letter would
beg you
I'd fucking beg you
to bring life to this
barren soul,
to quicken my
susurrating heartbeat
with each thrust
until a new existence,
beyond what I’ve known
grows from my bones
in your arms
you do…
baby
you recreate me
in that visceral
moment of raw need
and I beg you not to stop
as I lose control
as you accept that I want you
(I want you)
to send your seed
your need,
your sense of self
so deep
it becomes
a part of my body
forever
I paused us long enough to
untangle my ankles from
your shoulders,
and wrapped my legs
around your waist
so you could hit that stride,
that last stretch
where you went hard
chasing your orgasm
pounding in me
like a madman
until I felt your
cock thicken
in me
and
I
begged
you
'don't
stop'
My back arched
so hard it cracked
and you filled me
with a yell that
sounded like
heaven feels
before collapsing next
to me,
dragging me over
to drape on your chest
where I felt
your racing heartbeat
and knew it matched mine
You kissed my forehead
as I murmured
love words
and drifted asleep
content
with the way
you make new life
in my soul
and i beg you now
(baby please)
to let me sleep
like this
content
with you
until the world
is a memory;
until time
resets
until the only real
truth is the way
you feel in my
mind,
body,
soul
and then
I’ll beg you...
please.
do it
again
me scream
until I
I begged you
for mercy
I licked my
juices from
your neck as
you groaned and
nudged my swollen pussy
and paused
I stopped you from
leaving me this time
to get a condom
and we stayed locked in that
almost-unsure-moment
until our muscles shook
A drop of sweat built
on your forehead
growing pregnant
in the moment
until it fell onto
my cheek
I shoved my hips and
pushed against you
and
I
begged
you
to
Take me like this.
please....
I wanted to feel you,
really fucking feel you,
so deep that you could
read the walls of my
soft, warm pussy like
a braille love letter
And the letter would
beg you
I'd fucking beg you
to bring life to this
barren soul,
to quicken my
susurrating heartbeat
with each thrust
until a new existence,
beyond what I’ve known
grows from my bones
in your arms
you do…
baby
you recreate me
in that visceral
moment of raw need
and I beg you not to stop
as I lose control
as you accept that I want you
(I want you)
to send your seed
your need,
your sense of self
so deep
it becomes
a part of my body
forever
I paused us long enough to
untangle my ankles from
your shoulders,
and wrapped my legs
around your waist
so you could hit that stride,
that last stretch
where you went hard
chasing your orgasm
pounding in me
like a madman
until I felt your
cock thicken
in me
and
I
begged
you
'don't
stop'
My back arched
so hard it cracked
and you filled me
with a yell that
sounded like
heaven feels
before collapsing next
to me,
dragging me over
to drape on your chest
where I felt
your racing heartbeat
and knew it matched mine
You kissed my forehead
as I murmured
love words
and drifted asleep
content
with the way
you make new life
in my soul
and i beg you now
(baby please)
to let me sleep
like this
content
with you
until the world
is a memory;
until time
resets
until the only real
truth is the way
you feel in my
mind,
body,
soul
and then
I’ll beg you...
please.
do it
again
Author's Note
Why isn’t raw-dog a theme?!
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Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 5:15pm
Shame on you.:) You pulled me right into the middle of this beyond words erotic adventure. NOW what shall I do?A++ work. Love and hugs, Oral
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Re: Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 5:45pm
Thank you Oral. I appreciate that. Glad to have pulled you in, man! I appreciate the review.
Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 5:17pm
Re: Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 5:46pm
What?! Me?! I'm a delicate little angel-baby!
Um. That was a lie. But hey, thank you ME, I'm glad you dug it.
Um. That was a lie. But hey, thank you ME, I'm glad you dug it.
Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 5:20pm
A very heart racing poem. Also, a pivotal moment in a relationship. There is a bond in the rawness of the act. What you wrote here is a desire theory.
"fulfillment of a desire contributes to one's happiness regardless of the amount of pleasure"
Is the feeling of being very close and vulnerable that makes you happy or the pleasure of the act.
I love poems that make me think more than what it seems on the surface. Bravo Love this
"fulfillment of a desire contributes to one's happiness regardless of the amount of pleasure"
Is the feeling of being very close and vulnerable that makes you happy or the pleasure of the act.
I love poems that make me think more than what it seems on the surface. Bravo Love this
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Re: Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 5:51pm
Thank you Fia!
Yeah, totally layers of desire. Representations of removing barriers, allowing dangerous intimacy, letting real touch real, the risk of not having any sort of protection and just giving in to it all -- on several levels beyond the tactical representations... very much levels of intimacy and desire.
To have nothing between two people. (fans self) Both figuratively and esoterically is just hot.
Thank you for your thoughtful feedback! I really dug it!
Yeah, totally layers of desire. Representations of removing barriers, allowing dangerous intimacy, letting real touch real, the risk of not having any sort of protection and just giving in to it all -- on several levels beyond the tactical representations... very much levels of intimacy and desire.
To have nothing between two people. (fans self) Both figuratively and esoterically is just hot.
Thank you for your thoughtful feedback! I really dug it!
Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 5:32pm
hello beautiful Betty this is extremely hot and felt I love reading your pussy walls like braille that is perfection 💕
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Re: Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 5:52pm
Hi darling. I love that trope, the braille stuff. The thought that words could be felt without eyes. I'm glad you loved it, lovely. I really am.
Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 6:10pm
Love when you beg
BIG BEG LIKE
You remind me of many lovers but you're literal and wet as an artform ..
BIG BEG LIKE
You remind me of many lovers but you're literal and wet as an artform ..
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Re: Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 7:39pm
Hey, thank you for that compliment. I understand, and I appreciate that.
THE FUCK! Big THE FUCK!
THE FUCK! Big THE FUCK!
Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 6:26pm
You begged and you had star crashing sex and love.
"Read the walls of my soft warm pussy like a braille love letter" -
Brilliant Betty!!! ❤️
"Read the walls of my soft warm pussy like a braille love letter" -
Brilliant Betty!!! ❤️
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Re: Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 7:40pm
Ah, is there any other type?
Thank you sweet D-bear. I adore you, and I'm glad you liked it.
Thank you sweet D-bear. I adore you, and I'm glad you liked it.
Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 7:30pm
I really would have had a proper boner from just the one reading of this, if it wasn't for the goddam catheter.
RL for future horn dogging.
RL for future horn dogging.
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Re: Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 7:42pm
I just sat here staring at this. I was seriously on the way to organize my bathroom closet and I popped on and stared at your comment because I ... don't know how to reply to a catheter boner joke.
Like.
I think you just won DUP. Maybe even the whole internet.
If there is a trophy for "Betty Slaps Her Mouth Shut" then you got it.
So... thanks?
Re: Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 7:55pm
You're welcome ❤️
Google "bladder spasms" and "ecchymosis" for an idea of where that joke is coming from, though they will not stop me from reading 🥸.
Google "bladder spasms" and "ecchymosis" for an idea of where that joke is coming from, though they will not stop me from reading 🥸.
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Re: Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 9:49pm
Oh, MS, that's a fucking bummer. Sorry to hear that.
I'm glad to see you're staying cheeky during this time of non-bonerness.
Be well my friend, I mean that.
I'm glad to see you're staying cheeky during this time of non-bonerness.
Be well my friend, I mean that.
Re: Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 10:52pm
Thanks 🙏
I'm in good hands and I see better days ahead.
Stay cool 😎
I'm in good hands and I see better days ahead.
Stay cool 😎
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Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 8:06pm
Re: Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 9:51pm
yeah.... just...
Thank you for such an amazing compliment. I'm glad to have made you feel as deeply as I feel. I adore you. Thanks again. I mean it.
Thank you for such an amazing compliment. I'm glad to have made you feel as deeply as I feel. I adore you. Thanks again. I mean it.
Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 8:25pm
Re: Re. and i beg you
30th Jul 2024 9:52pm
Re. and i beg you
31st Jul 2024 1:00am
There's something primal about this. There's the unadulterated, raw fucking intense sex...yes. But there's so much more. A declaration of anchoring, as it were. Dig in, plant yourself & let's grow together kinda feel. Wow, so much more
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Re: Re. and i beg you
31st Jul 2024 2:16am
Yes! I love that. Anchoring. Setting roots in a person.
Exactly.
Thank you my friend!
Exactly.
Thank you my friend!
Re. and i beg you
Anonymous
31st Jul 2024 1:48am
Amazing how the words in italics create their own mini message. Intentional or not...damn!
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Re: Re. and i beg you
31st Jul 2024 2:15am
Yes! Sometimes it works out cool like that, and I love that you saw it.
(I want you)
(baby please)
Thanks Con. You make my day!
(I want you)
(baby please)
Thanks Con. You make my day!
Re. and i beg you
31st Jul 2024 6:28am
Animalistic rampant romp portrayed. Echo Fianaturie8's comment also: There is a bond in the rawness of the act. Favourite verses:
as you accept that I want you
(I want you)
to send your seed
your need,
your sense of self
so deep
it becomes
a part of my body
forever
I paused us long enough to
untangle my ankles from
your shoulders,
and wrapped my legs
around your waist
so you could hit that stride,
that last stretch
where you went hard
chasing your orgasm
pounding in me
like a madman
until I felt your
cock thicken
in me
and
I
begged
you
'don't
stop'
as you accept that I want you
(I want you)
to send your seed
your need,
your sense of self
so deep
it becomes
a part of my body
forever
I paused us long enough to
untangle my ankles from
your shoulders,
and wrapped my legs
around your waist
so you could hit that stride,
that last stretch
where you went hard
chasing your orgasm
pounding in me
like a madman
until I felt your
cock thicken
in me
and
I
begged
you
'don't
stop'
1
Re. and i beg you
1st Aug 2024 4:14am
Dear B,
Nope.
Yup.
The fuck.
The depths of desire and need were fabulously depicted. Made me want more…
H🌷
Nope.
Yup.
The fuck.
The depths of desire and need were fabulously depicted. Made me want more…
H🌷
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Re. and i beg you
1st Aug 2024 5:07pm
I think it is indeed one of the best feeling to hit the walls of the warm, juicy pussy. That feeling you just recreated in my head. Heaps of praise. Know what you're writing about.
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