Conquistadora

The 2 of you sure do light up the halls of the Underground with hope. I read your poetry, the both of you, & it fills me with peace. Big smiles here

It's time in our lives for peace.  
I'm working on a pretty brutal short story, so this write keeps me happy and focused on what's good. Ya know?  
And thank you, Willow. I realize many of my writes are repetitive in theme, etc .  Yet it's the prevalent mood I'm always in!  

You always give me the mushy heart feelings whenever I read your love poetry.
You are such an amazing person and writer. You are the living
embodiment of literature.  What a blessing to be the subject matter.
The title is fabulous too!

How did I get so lucky:)

Ready?
Thank you for taking the chance, and believing. It took a lot of guts and faith.
Thank you for trusting me. For trusting in something so far out of reach, seemingly.
You are incredible.  
It's nice to have you to focus on. It's the whole point of me keeping a good heart, and faith, all this time.
We are our own reward.  

Oh fuck, that’s … Styx, I’m literally I tears. I could not be happier for you. To have existed through the thorny mazes of life, you deserve this beautiful bed of roses.

Shine bright my brother. Now that your soul has its mate, shine until heaven cries in anguished admiration.

This was fucking beautiful.

So are the two of you.

Well shoot, you write a pretty beautiful comment, young lady!
The VA doctor told me today that besides my wear and tear, I'm pretty damn healthy somehow.
I never planned on being healthy! I've made some bad choices....  lol.
So now its time for the payoff. To live happily ever after and throw in some spicy stuff here and there to give my heart a work out, etc etc.  
She brings the spice!  

Thanks you. I like it when you punch me on the shoulder and say good job. Lol.

Have fun in N.O.
Of course, it doesn't ever mean no there. So be careful also!  Lol.

So beautiful. The line about the first thing you ever learned to say was goodbye is memorable.
I just did a quick read, but I will feast on this amazing work in earnest when I'm not half asleep.

Sleep well!
And thank you.
Yeah, that part about goodbye could have steered this write in a dark direction. But, fuck the past.
Now and the future is where I'm looking.

(Good song!)

Thanks amigo.
Looks only get people so far. It's the energy and personality that will carry us through.
I feed off that enthusiasm like liquor.

Great metaphor. I love watching fireflies which I don't get here often unless it rains a lot. Very beautiful

It seems like fireflies are getting scarce all over actually.  Probably mankind's fault.

Thanks for the note, too. It's very appreciated. I do try to make my writes worthwhile.

Dear S,

That’s really lovely. Reflecting on the evolution of where we started to where we are now and appreciating the gifts that were/are given is so prevalent in the poem. It’s joy to read and know how it all started. 😊
H🌷

Thank you, H.
Who knew!  I tell Del that I'm the stem and she's the flower. Because I'm tall and thin and she's pretty!  Lol.
Honestly it's the energy she brings. It awakened my tired ass.
My writes basically lay it bare.  Well, metaphorically of course.
And thank you for noting the progress. We are doing pretty dang good!

Now this is poetry!!! 😊 Weaved with gentle,
beautifully flowing words. Of your journey through
light and dark, back to love.
I really liked - scars are flesh ribbons from all the second
place finishes.
The peaceful ebb & flow of your thoughts is exquisite ✨

Thanks Debbie
It's easy when I have such a great focus point.
The biggest thing her and I have in common is that we see the positives to come. Because they do. Our attitudes create our future a great deal.

Absolutely, I agree.
So happy you found that person.

I love fireflies, or lighting bugs here in North Carolina! I saw the first few dance a couple of night ago and I smiled at the magic of it all.

This is a beautifully metaphoric testament to love from a realistic place of experienced maturity. And you are right in that many chase those who light up life, hoping to capture something from someone else that they could easily have themselves if they tried.

Here's a little music for you and Adelphina's dance: https://youtu.be/k72jGJTC_3o?si=18Z7zBb4OHvCfcS9

Hey there!
When I was a kid, I thought lightning bugs and fireflies were two different types. Because some have a more yellow light and some are more slightly greenish.
It made sense back then anyway. Lol.
I also called them lantern bugs too. Because so many ended up in jars.  
 Your synopsis is a really good point, btw. You nailed it.  I appreciate the insight.

Really beautiful writing. Now that is a love poem 🌹

Thank you!  It is love and appreciation, too.
The world is turning so bitter and callous. It's easy to get dejected and give up hoping for much.
Yet, it's also a big world. There's always a chance out there. We have to be brave enough to try.

The thing I love about your writing is the float.
Words stand up on their own and convey feeling without even trying.  Even with heavier themes than love you manage to grace us with your style.  And you very much have a style.  Like you tell me what you see in my paintings, I very much feel a man with so many stories to tell and hoping you have the time to tell many …. You’ve got a man’s look of blueprints and personal construction.  A romantic, a sage, a storyteller.  I could go on and on.  Your love story with Adel is cotton candy, cold beers and a shot of whiskey for you and tequila for her.  No hangovers, just hang in there’s…

Congrats on this write

BIG .. you know what  !!!’   LIKE

Damn I owe you money for that pitch!  
Thank you Gary. I just write whatever the daydreams and moods aim me towards.

Oh, Del may want to stick to wine. Don't ask!  We like wine around the house. Lol.

I really appreciate your solid words. It lets me know that I'm doing okay at this stuff.

Damn, I want to just put away my pen forever, this is so good...
(Don't worry, I won't. The world needs all the poets it can get.)
I love the idea of being a firefly - that resonates with me. I can only shine for so long, and always wishing those moments could last...

Anyway, your love story gives me such beautiful hope. Thanks for sharing this with us.
❤️k

Hell no you ain't stopping!  You're a mainstay that keeps me staying!  
I feed the site because of what I get out of it. Really. I want paid in words from others. I get motivated more than people realize, by what I read. It helps steer the moods and ideas.

And my dear, hope is always free and can never be taken away.

Thanks for the nod. Now go write!  Lol.

So fitting. Fireflies are the epitome of romance & rarity. To find your firefly in a world full of crazy lights...that's special!

Good point, about what lights to follow.
Fireflies represent childhood, too. When things were somewhat blissful maybe.
I try really hard not to lose focus of what's good out in the world. And if by chance something good comes to me, I cherish it. It's rare.

Thanks for the comment. You are so right about the romance aspect. Unscathed.

A masterpiece. Leaves me wondering if the original intent was to be so autobiographical? it seems as if you ignored inhibitions to give us a beautiful heart song. I hate to signal out any one part but the most enjoyable lines:

"Maybe I was more, after all,  
than a torn apart lightning bug.  
I always wanted to be a falcon,  
even wounded would be okay.  
Calling from a branch,  
while my wings healed."
 

Thank you so much for that.
My writing is mostly a secret in my real life. But the older I'm getting, and mellowed,  I'm way more open about it. It shocks a few people! Lol.
I dunno, I just write what hits me. Basically it writes itself and I just tap the keys.  But it seems to work okay for me.  So far!

Mine is mostly a secret as well in my real life. Not sure if anyone would be able handle it. LOL  the reals, the highs, the lows, the way my mind thinks....There is one though......hes been by my side for 25 years and counting.....he gets me. <3  Great write by the way. Its fabulous. And so are you 2. :)

Thank you for that.
For ages, I basically wrote in secret. Even when in the Army, as a biker, etc etc.  It was my wish list in a way. But also felt vulnerable to anyone reading it. And we can't have that!  Lol.
The internet changed that. Really.  It gave me a secret space to grow from. Yet allowing others to see what I could do, away from "rough" environments, ya know?  
It keeps me focused on what actually matters.  My peace of mind. Serenity.

I get it. <3

Amazing, the things you can imagine. Love the comparison with the firefly. Terrific handling of the analogy.

Much appreciated, Alviola. Sometimes the imagery in my head just builds it all, and I just copy it down. Sometimes I look back and say "I wrote that?". It's like being possessed. Really.

This was just beautifully done. I really dig your ability to tell a story. May you both be blessed with many years together. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.

DL

Hey I'm sorry somehow I overlooked this comment.  
Thank you sir, belatedly. I truly appreciate your encouraging words.