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Deception (100-word story)
Her smile shined with innocence and kindness. But in her eyes, I saw a hunger. She moved with a trusting grace across her bed, unaware of the darkness that lurked within me.
I wove a web of deceit around her novice heart. She was so easy, and her body was beautifully ripened by a life well lived.
As I planted my seed, her spirit knew my deception. With twisted satisfaction, I watched her eyes as they learned too late. After making love to her sweet spirit, I carefully put her flesh to death and preserved her in holiness for eternity.
I wove a web of deceit around her novice heart. She was so easy, and her body was beautifully ripened by a life well lived.
As I planted my seed, her spirit knew my deception. With twisted satisfaction, I watched her eyes as they learned too late. After making love to her sweet spirit, I carefully put her flesh to death and preserved her in holiness for eternity.
Published 3rd May 2024
Author's Note
A 100-word story as written by an evil man. Based loosely on a woman I once loved. Happily, she's still alive.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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3rd May 2024 2:49pm
So many murders of one partner by another that are followed by the murderer's suicide may be based on a deluded idea of taking them with them to the afterlife, although in the case of this story we are left with the an impression this man walked away from the possibly furtive killing.
3rd May 2024 8:53pm
