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Surrender

Alas, alas.

Desensitized emotion,
Dazed thoughts.
You can retract your wails, now.
You can cease with your criticism.
No whispering for comfort,
I won’t even peep a complaint.
You can quell your infuriation,
As I glaze an unbiased mind.
Everything you ever wanted, right..?
Well, why do you gaze at me slow,
Like an antique ring in a case,
A longing undeserving of me?

Regardless, it’s fine……
As puppets don’t flee,
And Knick-knacks won’t vanish,
And I have no where to go.

You won.
Written by Aquatic-Vehicle (Lexiloo)
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