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Before a stitch of clothing
is removed
before a bead of sweat
falls from our skin
before passion
entangles our bodies
let my eyes
penetrate yours
as deeply
as slowly
as i can
the eyes
are the wick
that start the flame
is removed
before a bead of sweat
falls from our skin
before passion
entangles our bodies
let my eyes
penetrate yours
as deeply
as slowly
as i can
the eyes
are the wick
that start the flame
Published 29th Apr 2024
| Edited 8th May 2024
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29th Apr 2024 7:23pm
29th Apr 2024 7:23pm
I am intact to the my core you mixed the races and stole me away I'm hidden and guarded more than you think.
29th Apr 2024 7:24pm
29th Apr 2024 7:43pm
my chosen name is crimsin I'm all natural magic woman...I have memories of you all some repressed some resurfacing you are fierce you are gentle these are tortured as you yourself have been do you research and talk to me I am listening waiting to hear your heartbeat to see if you still live among the shatter verses.
29th Apr 2024 8:03pm
I believe I was tortured many times in my life but I feel a bit more freedom and happiness these days. Thanks crimson.
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30th Apr 2024 2:43am
I think Dimpy knows for sure now, lol! Yes, it starts with the eyes then leads to the kiss. And I think we all know where it generally goes next! Nice write, Dragonblood! 😊
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