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One Day
Birds swim
Fish fly
Reptiles talk
Insects cry
The sun is black
Fire is chill
Humans are mutes
Mind altering pills
Fish fly
Reptiles talk
Insects cry
The sun is black
Fire is chill
Humans are mutes
Mind altering pills
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Re. One Day
10th Apr 2024 2:32pm
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There's a free sample pill each time you open, read & comment on my poems.
Is that fair?
Is that fair?
Re. One Day
10th Apr 2024 9:32pm
Great variety today. Are you open for variety in "real life"? Hugs and love, Oral
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10th Apr 2024 9:39pm
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10th Apr 2024 9:41pm
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10th Apr 2024 9:46pm
Re. One Day
I like how you used out of place analogy to communicate the insanity of substance abuse. Almost reminds me of psychedelia or synesthesia. The expressions are solid. Some may feel like drugs are harmless if used right, but they can really damage the mind in many ways. Thanks for sharing.
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13th Apr 2024 11:13am