World of Filth

I like how you address the theme of this piece through its unraveling.  The rhymes add a nice aesthetic.  Certainly, that is something that needs to be addressed - how we pollute and rape the earth.  I like the spirited expression of this poem as a whole.  Just goes to show how rotten and messed up human nature is.  We're handing down corporate evil through generations, until there can no longer be a generation, which has only been for a few generations!  It's exponentially expedient to change.  Anyway, good job.  Thanks for sharing this.

Appreciate the feedback my friend.

Clear-cut poem; nice. At least since the beginning of the Industrial Revolution, poets and true scientists and others have been pointing out the dangers of pollution of varying types - toxicity in every sphere conceivable. The current declining birthrate means global population will start to decline 2050 - other bioweapons launched upon the general public notwithstanding. Follow the money + Problem-Reaction-Solution tells most of the story why. But there will be a remant who survive the evil of our psychotic overlords.
The mechanics of rising to revolt seem to boil down to mass non-compliance; I can't think of any other way.

Hello Josh,

Thank you so much for the kind remarks and comments. Appreciate it.

Hear, hear, two much truth could run some back into the shadows. That avatar of yours has some really questionable characters on it. Tight

Thank you my friend. Appreciate the comments. Yes my avatar is being well received or hated among fellow members.