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Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
We’ve gotten too close
Intellectually
Now I’m having problems asking for the dirty stuff
You know the stuff you want to give me but …
You don’t, won’t, can’t, stress out about etc.
Problem is
All my lust is tied up in your sexually intellectual dirty mind
What’s a rogue to do ?
Intellectually
Now I’m having problems asking for the dirty stuff
You know the stuff you want to give me but …
You don’t, won’t, can’t, stress out about etc.
Problem is
All my lust is tied up in your sexually intellectual dirty mind
What’s a rogue to do ?
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
24th Mar 2024 6:28pm
I don't like games get old I guess you have to find a new player. my life has been treated as a game. my heart has never been up for debate...
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24th Mar 2024 7:52pm
Noted
I never give up, sometimes I look at things with a different point of view
Stay tuned Brenda
I never give up, sometimes I look at things with a different point of view
Stay tuned Brenda
Re. Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
24th Mar 2024 6:43pm
Quite the dilemma.
If it was me I’d tie them up and take my chances, but my aggression can be a tad off putting, so yeah…
If it was me I’d tie them up and take my chances, but my aggression can be a tad off putting, so yeah…
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24th Mar 2024 7:53pm
Re. Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
25th Mar 2024 00:35am
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25th Mar 2024 00:42am
It reminds me in part of a nipple and areola, I'm drawn to my own creation in a dreamy way ...
Thx Willow
Thx Willow
Re. Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
25th Mar 2024 1:13am
The crossroads where intellectual and sexual meet is where women like to be choked and men like to hear, Yes, Sir.
Win-Win.
Xx
Win-Win.
Xx
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25th Mar 2024 1:49am
Re. Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
25th Mar 2024 2:21pm
I love that painting! Ethereal! Conveys the poem perfectly - shadows in the reason that make perfect sense.
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Re: Re. Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
25th Mar 2024 2:40pm
I’m gratified that you like that painting A !!
It’s one of my personal favorites as well.
I looked through my many paintings and images and this one jumped out at me.
Scorpio mind
Great mind 👏
Thanks !!
It’s one of my personal favorites as well.
I looked through my many paintings and images and this one jumped out at me.
Scorpio mind
Great mind 👏
Thanks !!
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25th Mar 2024 3:01pm
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25th Mar 2024 3:10pm
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25th Mar 2024 6:03pm
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25th Mar 2024 3:46pm
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25th Mar 2024 4:01pm
Re. Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
25th Mar 2024 10:17pm
Give her an orgasm of the mind then you melt her heart and fuck her pussy until orgasmic bliss over and over again.
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25th Mar 2024 10:25pm
Re. Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
29th Mar 2024 1:56am
Nipple, flower petals, bruises... good visual for your conundrum. How do you execute your usual power dynamics when you start to actually care?
Big like
❤️k
Big like
❤️k
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29th Mar 2024 2:16am
I always care but forces beyond me get in the way so I write dirty poems and hope nobody takes my redemption bullshit seriously because all I want is skin pix to get off to .... I started masturbating at 11 and nothing actually compares except 🙃 uh, no ....
Re: Re. Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
29th Mar 2024 2:27am
Well, you're lucky there's no shortage of skin pix in the world, then!
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29th Mar 2024 3:00am
Re. Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
4th May 2024 4:50am
The brain is first erogenous zone stimulated. Take that away and what do we have?
Interesting piece, the dirty stuff always makes for more naughty and fun pieces.
Amazing painting.
BL
Interesting piece, the dirty stuff always makes for more naughty and fun pieces.
Amazing painting.
BL
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4th May 2024 11:06am
Lust is God given.
Almost religious
I pray for heat
My desire is unparalleled....
Thanks Wally
Almost religious
I pray for heat
My desire is unparalleled....
Thanks Wally
Re. Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
4th May 2024 7:28pm
That's a beautiful abstract boob!! Also, I LOVE those first 3 lines.. digging the poem.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Brainy Problematic Dystopian Carnal Desire
4th May 2024 7:31pm
Yeah
I discovered the boob likeness later on when I photographed it. Jumped out at me.
Appreciate your fig dig and like
Makes me happy LJ
Thx
I discovered the boob likeness later on when I photographed it. Jumped out at me.
Appreciate your fig dig and like
Makes me happy LJ
Thx
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4th May 2024 7:40pm
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4th May 2024 7:42pm
Not sure what happened except the original painting is much lighter than this but it worked so I used it. Camera phones, you know how it goes !!