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Suffer with Me
I made you
Or you made me
Whatever the cause
Addiction built in
Restlessness
Shared wreckage
Dam waiting to collapse
People rage
Chamber
Rubber
Latex
Masters and servants
Vampire in training
Secretions
I'm not done with you
We just started
Bloody liaisons
Messy relationships
Black hearts 🖤🖤
Twisted
Thrill kill
Or you made me
Whatever the cause
Addiction built in
Restlessness
Shared wreckage
Dam waiting to collapse
People rage
Chamber
Rubber
Latex
Masters and servants
Vampire in training
Secretions
I'm not done with you
We just started
Bloody liaisons
Messy relationships
Black hearts 🖤🖤
Twisted
Thrill kill
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Suffer with Me
Wow! That painting, though! The movement, tension, and depth is AMAZING. Poem isn't bad either!
Like!
I was about to message you to check and see if you were kosher, being you hadn't posted in a bit. Should've known you were painting! What a fabulous result!
Like!
I was about to message you to check and see if you were kosher, being you hadn't posted in a bit. Should've known you were painting! What a fabulous result!
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Well, that is a WOW comment Ahavati !!
It came a time in my writing journey to take a little break so I retreated to my home studio
( my dining room table) and worked on some new paintings and framed a lot.
I appreciate your interest and concern and as always STAY TUNED. More to come.
Thanks so much 🙂
It came a time in my writing journey to take a little break so I retreated to my home studio
( my dining room table) and worked on some new paintings and framed a lot.
I appreciate your interest and concern and as always STAY TUNED. More to come.
Thanks so much 🙂
Re: Re. Suffer with Me
9th Mar 2024 00:33am
Re. Suffer with Me
8th Mar 2024 6:58pm
Hello Poetspeak. Your poem, combined with the painting speaks loud & clear. A dark, erotic lust that is really quite revealing. Executed so well.
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8th Mar 2024 9:14pm
Hi K.O.
Many thanks for your comment.
As always the words come to me and I dash them out before they can get away.
I actually wrote this a few weeks ago but decided to hold off on posting. I knew the moment would appear and it was indeed today ....
Appreciate your words
Many thanks for your comment.
As always the words come to me and I dash them out before they can get away.
I actually wrote this a few weeks ago but decided to hold off on posting. I knew the moment would appear and it was indeed today ....
Appreciate your words
Re. Suffer with Me
8th Mar 2024 7:04pm
Fire, tiger and ice, standing at the forefront of a great piece. Tight work dude
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8th Mar 2024 9:16pm
There's definitely all that ME.
This is a combustion write.
Fire extinguisher at the ready.
Appreciate your comment Sir !
This is a combustion write.
Fire extinguisher at the ready.
Appreciate your comment Sir !
Re. Suffer with Me
8th Mar 2024 7:17pm
Wonderful art and poetry. Both layered, violent and textured. A complete work on both fronts. I’ve missed the words and brush strokes my friend.
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There came a time recently where I had to step back and regroup. So the days ticked off and the desire to post had left me which is rare. I spent a lot of time reading others here and today it felt right to post !
I appreciate your support always Thor
Thank you !
I appreciate your support always Thor
Thank you !
Re. Suffer with Me
8th Mar 2024 7:41pm
very powerful dearest Poet and yes I will be fine as always 💕
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ylyShIQ5LR4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ylyShIQ5LR4
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8th Mar 2024 9:22pm
Suffering is part of our cloth Brenda.
We give, we take.
We bathe in glory and agony.
There's no hope and that's okay.
Poets need angst to write.
Appreciate your visit
That GUNSHIP video is phenomenal.
Love the lush agony and elevation ..
Thank you luv
❤🖤
We give, we take.
We bathe in glory and agony.
There's no hope and that's okay.
Poets need angst to write.
Appreciate your visit
That GUNSHIP video is phenomenal.
Love the lush agony and elevation ..
Thank you luv
❤🖤
Re: Re. Suffer with Me
8th Mar 2024 11:04pm
I'm happy you liked the video and you always know the truth of it...you're right of course 💕
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8th Mar 2024 11:48pm
I forwarded that video to several people.
Reminds me of a modern day B Tribe sound.
Part trance and a amazing visceral connection...
BIG LIKE
Reminds me of a modern day B Tribe sound.
Part trance and a amazing visceral connection...
BIG LIKE
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9th Mar 2024 00:18am
your so hip dearest Poet it's really great to write to...they have more videos I would recommend the song and video Ghost...I think the artist in you would appreciate it...the video was done with AI Query... generated images...
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9th Mar 2024 00:46am
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Anonymous
9th Mar 2024 00:35am
Love the use of Chamber in this. Sets a certain tone
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9th Mar 2024 00:48am
Yes
I write about the Chamber often
Everyone should spend some time there ...
Thanks BB
I write about the Chamber often
Everyone should spend some time there ...
Thanks BB
Re. Suffer with Me
9th Mar 2024 00:54am
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9th Mar 2024 1:05am
You want to be there
You need it
Chamber calling
Moody is my middle name
Answering the call...
Thx Willow ...
You need it
Chamber calling
Moody is my middle name
Answering the call...
Thx Willow ...
Re. Suffer with Me
9th Mar 2024 1:13am
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9th Mar 2024 1:43am
The Poet has returned with a vengeance ...
There will be rules and sacrifice
But for whom the bell tolls
Stay locked in ML
There will be rules and sacrifice
But for whom the bell tolls
Stay locked in ML
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9th Mar 2024 2:59am
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9th Mar 2024 2:24am
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9th Mar 2024 2:52am
Grit and grind
Mantra
Twin merchants of agony and lust
Parallel universe
So fine ….
Mantra
Twin merchants of agony and lust
Parallel universe
So fine ….
Re. Suffer with Me
9th Mar 2024 12:35pm
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9th Mar 2024 12:48pm
Yeah
A take no prisoners write
Fact is though, we are all prisoners.
That's when we go to the Chamber and work it out...
Appreciate your read and comment jigg
Stay tuned
A take no prisoners write
Fact is though, we are all prisoners.
That's when we go to the Chamber and work it out...
Appreciate your read and comment jigg
Stay tuned
Re. Suffer with Me
9th Mar 2024 8:08pm
Really loving the painting!
‘Suffer with me’ sounds mutually pleasurable.
And it’s just the beginning
‘Suffer with me’ sounds mutually pleasurable.
And it’s just the beginning
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Yes
It's a beginning and sometimes the beginning is a long process till the understanding takes hold.
Other times it's instant...
Poets understand and we speak for those who can't or won't..
Thanks on the painting NG
It was a good fit, blood, contusion and bonding 🙌
It's a beginning and sometimes the beginning is a long process till the understanding takes hold.
Other times it's instant...
Poets understand and we speak for those who can't or won't..
Thanks on the painting NG
It was a good fit, blood, contusion and bonding 🙌
Re. Suffer with Me
9th Mar 2024 10:36pm
I take a few days off and open this delicious piece of art.
I just love me some sexy people rage.
I just love me some sexy people rage.
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9th Mar 2024 10:50pm
Yeah Mary
I snuck it in after taking a month off from posting. I really needed a break. Best thing I could do....
People rage and dark tones, what could be better?
Appreciate your comment and RL
X
I snuck it in after taking a month off from posting. I really needed a break. Best thing I could do....
People rage and dark tones, what could be better?
Appreciate your comment and RL
X
Re. Suffer with Me
10th Mar 2024 8:03am
First off: what an amazing painting, love your artwork.
Secondly: I LOVE the formatting of this piece.
...This is one helluva raw and sexy write - with a great title!
Triple love for this...
Secondly: I LOVE the formatting of this piece.
...This is one helluva raw and sexy write - with a great title!
Triple love for this...
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Re: Re. Suffer with Me
Triple love, what more can I ask for ?
But..
You probably know I will ask
Yeah, I retreated from posting for a month.
That may not seem like much but I was posting every couple of days for years so ...
Painting will always be my first love.
I appreciate the love on it.
I'm a concept guy at heart. I'm always trying new ways to express myself visually. The art world is full of vipers so I keep a lot of it to myself. It's fun to merge writing and art.
I like having you back in the mix..
Thanks D
But..
You probably know I will ask
Yeah, I retreated from posting for a month.
That may not seem like much but I was posting every couple of days for years so ...
Painting will always be my first love.
I appreciate the love on it.
I'm a concept guy at heart. I'm always trying new ways to express myself visually. The art world is full of vipers so I keep a lot of it to myself. It's fun to merge writing and art.
I like having you back in the mix..
Thanks D
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10th Mar 2024 1:38pm
My pleasure Poetspeak.
The triple love is well deserved and hear you, I need to express myself, one way or the other. After the poetry muse left I went into photography.
It's indeed fun to merge writing and art. When you pair visuals with words it can enhance the piece.
It's good, no awesome, to be back in the mix.
Merge on :-)
The triple love is well deserved and hear you, I need to express myself, one way or the other. After the poetry muse left I went into photography.
It's indeed fun to merge writing and art. When you pair visuals with words it can enhance the piece.
It's good, no awesome, to be back in the mix.
Merge on :-)
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10th Mar 2024 2:02pm
Yes, I need to express too.
I'm a wordy fuck but I'd rather let my paintings speak more for me. People can see what they want in abstraction though I'm happy if they just like the art. I don't need anyone to see anything but it's okay if they do. I've always appreciated abstraction as a visceral experience getting away from reality but there really aren't any rules ...
I like your photographs
Where can I see more ?
Thank you
I'm a wordy fuck but I'd rather let my paintings speak more for me. People can see what they want in abstraction though I'm happy if they just like the art. I don't need anyone to see anything but it's okay if they do. I've always appreciated abstraction as a visceral experience getting away from reality but there really aren't any rules ...
I like your photographs
Where can I see more ?
Thank you
Re. Suffer with Me
11th Mar 2024 00:28am
Your painting; Thats a lot of smashed butterflies. Your write is the epilogue for them. See it?
Good to read something new from you. You are a required presence, Gary.
Good to read something new from you. You are a required presence, Gary.
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11th Mar 2024 2:02am
That's a pretty good size painting, I just took a partial segment. Part of my pandemic experimental works where I was working from home but had little work. Needed something to do all those hours so painted daily. This painting in particular I used no brushes, just odd shapes to make other shapes.
Yeah, I took the last month off from posting.
Needed a break but glad to be back. Always great to hear from you Mark. I was reading a lot of poets here during my sabbatical from posting. You had a few real beauties....
Hope all is well on your side.
Thanks !!!
Yeah, I took the last month off from posting.
Needed a break but glad to be back. Always great to hear from you Mark. I was reading a lot of poets here during my sabbatical from posting. You had a few real beauties....
Hope all is well on your side.
Thanks !!!
Re. Suffer with Me
11th Mar 2024 1:15am
I'm stoked to see you painting again!
It feels so restless - the art.
Almost like a bloodied sky in a way.
Super cool that you brought up vampires in training!
Nice to see ya posting!
It feels so restless - the art.
Almost like a bloodied sky in a way.
Super cool that you brought up vampires in training!
Nice to see ya posting!
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11th Mar 2024 2:07am
Yo Adel !!
So good to see you on my page. As I was telling Mark above I felt kinda burned out from posting so tooka month off. But never stopped reading ya'll.. I wrote this 2 weeks ago but waited for the moment when I felt it was ready to launch..
Vampires a curious bunch. Never gave them any thought till I started writing on DUP.
Now the urge comes often for a delicate neck....
Thx A !!
So good to see you on my page. As I was telling Mark above I felt kinda burned out from posting so tooka month off. But never stopped reading ya'll.. I wrote this 2 weeks ago but waited for the moment when I felt it was ready to launch..
Vampires a curious bunch. Never gave them any thought till I started writing on DUP.
Now the urge comes often for a delicate neck....
Thx A !!
Re. Suffer with Me
11th Mar 2024 2:01am
What a beauty. Light breaking through pain... I even see a K in there, but I'm just so inclined. 😉
Addiction and messy relationships... yeah, I'm feeling this. Nice to see you here dealing the pain & comfort again.
❤️k
Addiction and messy relationships... yeah, I'm feeling this. Nice to see you here dealing the pain & comfort again.
❤️k
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11th Mar 2024 2:15am
I think you might have inspired part of this write with a bunch of your recent experiences with the muse factors ..
Messy relationships are so necessary. Anything sanitized and orderly would be no fun at all !
Appreciate your comment RED.
Vampire's tasty delight 😊
Messy relationships are so necessary. Anything sanitized and orderly would be no fun at all !
Appreciate your comment RED.
Vampire's tasty delight 😊
Re: Re. Suffer with Me
12th Mar 2024 00:53am
Oh well how exciting to be part of the inspiration! I'm still waiting next to a messy smouldering wreckage at the moment, but hoping I can claw my way back to some nice shared suffering someday...
I'll send you my latest song. 😘
I'll send you my latest song. 😘
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12th Mar 2024 1:38am
Yeah we're unhappy when things are placid and normal and bummed out when square pegging in round holes.
Life of a muse--aholic...
Hmmm could be a poem in there for sure...
See you're inspiring again RED ❤
Life of a muse--aholic...
Hmmm could be a poem in there for sure...
See you're inspiring again RED ❤
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12th Mar 2024 1:51am
Connection Addiction
Muse-a-holic
I've always liked putting my fingers in the candle flames....
You're inspiring me right back, cowboy. The creativity well has been dry for a while, but something's on its way, I can feel it like a change in air pressure. Stay tuned.
xx❤️
Muse-a-holic
I've always liked putting my fingers in the candle flames....
You're inspiring me right back, cowboy. The creativity well has been dry for a while, but something's on its way, I can feel it like a change in air pressure. Stay tuned.
xx❤️
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Re. Suffer with Me
11th Mar 2024 10:31pm
You live for the moment and get a blessing in disguise. Keep on writing.
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11th Mar 2024 10:52pm
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12th Mar 2024 11:32pm
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13th Mar 2024 00:12am
Think I covered all the bases APPS...
Anything goes or doesn't.
Thx for your comment..
Anything goes or doesn't.
Thx for your comment..
Re. Suffer with Me
13th Mar 2024 1:51am
Not entirely sure what to make of this one, PS. On the one hand it sounds quite simple, 'suffer with me' but on the other hand, what you're suffering together seems rather complex. I mean, who would put themselves though all of this if they were not 'fucked up' in some way? No offence intended to those people, obviously. I could have said... 'complicated' people, after all. 😉
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13th Mar 2024 2:05am
Complicated or fucked up.
Whose counting ?
When you travel in my circle it's the farthest from normal. No beige people in my orbit.
But ... even I still suffer. Because control isn't easy. The women have the audacity to want more. So there's that to deal with and decide whom to consume....
Stay tuned Billy.
Thanks for your comment !
Whose counting ?
When you travel in my circle it's the farthest from normal. No beige people in my orbit.
But ... even I still suffer. Because control isn't easy. The women have the audacity to want more. So there's that to deal with and decide whom to consume....
Stay tuned Billy.
Thanks for your comment !
Re. Suffer with Me
13th Mar 2024 2:49pm
Ah, who made who; what a question that is...
But I think we make each other right?
And we are all addicted, searching.
Constantly needing... among the wreckage.
Infinite assault on the dam, trying to break me.
Rubber and latex to even the score.
Who is the Master, and who is the servant.
How often the roles blur.
Vampires, drinking blood and secretions.
In our perpetual need for more...
It seems no one is ever done with me.
So many bloody liaisons and messy relationships.
Twisted but so damn incredibly thrilling...
Consumed by dark lust and living fantasies.
And the never ending thrill of submission.
But I think we make each other right?
And we are all addicted, searching.
Constantly needing... among the wreckage.
Infinite assault on the dam, trying to break me.
Rubber and latex to even the score.
Who is the Master, and who is the servant.
How often the roles blur.
Vampires, drinking blood and secretions.
In our perpetual need for more...
It seems no one is ever done with me.
So many bloody liaisons and messy relationships.
Twisted but so damn incredibly thrilling...
Consumed by dark lust and living fantasies.
And the never ending thrill of submission.
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13th Mar 2024 4:53pm
It's understandable why nobody is ever done with you. That's because you're living in the magic kingdom of fantasy and execution.
Why would anyone want to leave that Chamber of wreckage and delight ?
There's Ying Yang throughout my poem for a reason. I can't be just one thing for myself or for anyone else. I'm concept driven.
Desire, needs, wants, art, poetry, music, the raw and the cooked.
The lines certainly blur. On any given day one of us is giving or receiving pain and frolic.
I have no rules.
Walk through the dark night to a door with a faint irradescent pink glow.
Enter after receiving the password.
Proceed to Chamber 13
Begin .....
There is no ending with you
Why would anyone want to leave that Chamber of wreckage and delight ?
There's Ying Yang throughout my poem for a reason. I can't be just one thing for myself or for anyone else. I'm concept driven.
Desire, needs, wants, art, poetry, music, the raw and the cooked.
The lines certainly blur. On any given day one of us is giving or receiving pain and frolic.
I have no rules.
Walk through the dark night to a door with a faint irradescent pink glow.
Enter after receiving the password.
Proceed to Chamber 13
Begin .....
There is no ending with you
Re. Suffer with Me
14th Mar 2024 4:21am
Dear PS,
Not sure I can add anything worthy my esteemed poets haven’t already said above. If you are inviting me to suffer with you I’m very glad of the invitation though. It sucks suffering alone. And then there’s the painting…you sure know how to suffer in style! Great write. Beautiful art. Happy you’re back. H🌷
Not sure I can add anything worthy my esteemed poets haven’t already said above. If you are inviting me to suffer with you I’m very glad of the invitation though. It sucks suffering alone. And then there’s the painting…you sure know how to suffer in style! Great write. Beautiful art. Happy you’re back. H🌷
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14th Mar 2024 10:50am
Dear H,
Yes, I am a sufferer.
I feel so damn much all the time contrary to my Poetspeak bravado ...
That painting exemplifies the explosions often going off in my head.
I guess I'm back, I never really left, just decided to take a break from posting.
I did a lot of reading and commenting on fellow poets which was fun and necessary.
Some new voices here worthy of my time and encouragement.
Stay tuned.
Might be posting a new art piece I just completed. It's a collage and my very first attempt at the way of assembly. It's hard to photograph but I might give it a whirl. I'll be doing more for sure. It's a fun way of seeing ...
Appreciate your comment H
Thank you
Xx
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Yes, I am a sufferer.
I feel so damn much all the time contrary to my Poetspeak bravado ...
That painting exemplifies the explosions often going off in my head.
I guess I'm back, I never really left, just decided to take a break from posting.
I did a lot of reading and commenting on fellow poets which was fun and necessary.
Some new voices here worthy of my time and encouragement.
Stay tuned.
Might be posting a new art piece I just completed. It's a collage and my very first attempt at the way of assembly. It's hard to photograph but I might give it a whirl. I'll be doing more for sure. It's a fun way of seeing ...
Appreciate your comment H
Thank you
Xx
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Re. Suffer with Me
17th Mar 2024 10:25pm
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17th Mar 2024 10:26pm
A different kind of write but a fun one to pen.
Glad you appreciate it Wally.
Thanks so much for the RL and comment
Glad you appreciate it Wally.
Thanks so much for the RL and comment