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Run through life's fields
be as free as the wind
feel the freedom in the air
as it flows through your hair
Run, no time to stand and stare
don't think about burdens
let it go no need to share
your life trials and tribulations
Run with full determination
stay focused with purpose
let the trophy be the ambition
just jump over every obstacles
This is the race of life
run with all that you have to give.
be as free as the wind
feel the freedom in the air
as it flows through your hair
Run, no time to stand and stare
don't think about burdens
let it go no need to share
your life trials and tribulations
Run with full determination
stay focused with purpose
let the trophy be the ambition
just jump over every obstacles
This is the race of life
run with all that you have to give.
Author's Note
Inspired by a morning jogger
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20th Feb 2024 1:21am
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20th Feb 2024 2:48am
This is more like it! Lovin' the positivity of this piece. Makes me feel like going on an early morning frosty jog and then jumping into the sea whilst dreaming of a crusty sausage roll 'n' hot coffee at the finish line... right? Nice job, Grace... great write! :-)
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20th Feb 2024 3:33am
I love that:) tea after the jog. Or a whole breakfast of bacon and eggs. Thanks for dropping by Billy. I hope you do go jogging too.
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Jogging thru the fields, breathing Nature's nectar is the best medicine nowadays, as Nature gives the first ever principles of a good healthy life and emotions..
Stay safe with sports and physical fitness
Stay safe with sports and physical fitness
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20th Feb 2024 9:49am
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20th Feb 2024 3:27pm
When I was very young my father told me that there would always be hecklers in life regardless of what you did. Their main job was to detract you from moving forward. Your choice was to stop and argue with them or keep moving ahead, leaving them behind.
This poem reminded me of that lesson. Thanks for sharing.
This poem reminded me of that lesson. Thanks for sharing.
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20th Feb 2024 3:34pm
That's so true Ahavati, there's always people or circumstances that try to divert one from the ambition or aspirations. That's the obstacle. Thank you so much for reading 🌹
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20th Feb 2024 7:04pm
Grace - I liked this. Sometimes you just gotta run for your life, so you can live it. Nice work G. Namyh
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21st Feb 2024 00:30am
Namyh, thank so much for dropping by and reading and for your kind comments!:) appreciated
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20th Feb 2024 11:26pm
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27th Feb 2024 5:53am
I've always found that fitness helps clear the mind, it's a connection between the physical and spiritual almost, finding that balance that encompasses overall health.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
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27th Feb 2024 8:38am
Its good exercise too:) I wish I could jog but I am not build that way. I take brisk walk though. Thanks for reading Wally, I appreciate you as always.