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Hush
It’s in the silent
Moments
As you gaze
Steadily
Into my eyes
While the
Sheer force
Of your
Blunt undertones
Splits my
Quaking hunger
That I
Lose myself
And we become
One
Moments
As you gaze
Steadily
Into my eyes
While the
Sheer force
Of your
Blunt undertones
Splits my
Quaking hunger
That I
Lose myself
And we become
One
Published 17th Feb 2024
| Edited 21st Feb 2024
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18th Feb 2024 6:00am
A smooth silent coming together you describe, as the title hints. The taking in by the eyes presages the taking in by the body.
Like the line arrangement, so often used by Shadow Starzzz. Do I discern an inspiration of style there?
Like the line arrangement, so often used by Shadow Starzzz. Do I discern an inspiration of style there?
Thank you, Sir Solomon
A talented poetess, Shadow Starzzz. Thank you for the add to your RL.
A talented poetess, Shadow Starzzz. Thank you for the add to your RL.
18th Feb 2024 4:42pm
Those are the most potent moments. And definitely the most uniting. Beautifully written!
19th Feb 2024 12:56pm
19th Feb 2024 3:04pm
There it is...the sultry steamy you bring to the screen so well. Strong sense of connection in this one!
19th Feb 2024 4:39pm
