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The rain and reign of terror!
The year ends on saddest notes
of crying, dying babies in Palestine
and obstructed efforts
to throw them a lifeline
They ought to have long halted this ethnic cleansing
of the indigenous inhabitants
Stop the cruel bombardment
of their poor apartments
I'm not just griping for nothing,
the scenario is too bloodied
and gripping for sure,
Doctors go wiping off blood
as babies are rushed
dripping with gore
to hospitals tripping
with casualties galore
All humane hearts with any humanity
crushed and shaken to the core
Too appalling and harrowing
as brutal bullies
go carpet bombing them,
razing all to the floor
For all peaceful tender hearts
all this an eyesore.
Condemn them with solemn hearts
for this malicious apartheid,
for this atrocious genocide
It's been going on since ages
filling history's pages
It's no fair war that wages
Babies and women weild no military weapons
Stop them massacring the wearers of baby bibs in cribs
or moms and matrons in aprons .
Hey Mr. Biden, bid them lay arms down in armistice
A call for ceasefire is the needed advice
Our minds by now filled to the brim
with images too horrible and grim
It's not just a conflict when pain is inflicted
far more on innocent already afflicted !
Poor folks running helter skelter
for there really is no safe shelter.
Palestinians have become the bullies' bulls eye
who for their own land are made to die!
Israel acts so brutally, it wants to push and shove,
bomb civilians from above
and expects the Palestinians
to react with love and be the peaceful dove??
Failure to protect Palestinian human rights and delaying ceasefire, a major fiasco
by the international organisation UNESCO
which claims to be a protector of human rights
Who but tyrants destroy humble homesteads with warheads?
Poor Palestinians stumble and tumble over their dead.
We mourn and cry the deaths of civilians and soo many Muslims and non Muslims have expressed solidarity with the suppressed, oppressed and repressed Palestinians.
Hey, worldly super powers
End war and their diaspora
End the massacre
End the occupation
That's my heart bleeding
in poetic anaphora
Gaza's gazelles had been nice to the refugee crocodiles
and then those ingrates showed them only vile wiles,
God's eyes and the global gaze is on Gaza now,
in the smoky haze,
as tyrants set homes ablaze
and erase lives and ways.
Palestinians don't deserve extermination
but rather emancipation!
So respect their existence
or expect resistance!
Author's Note
(Israeli prime minister said they are raining hellfire on Palestinians. But we as muslims know that killers of innocent civilians will burn in a much larger doomsday hellfire for a much longer time. . [26/10, 12:31] ....:
Palestinian death toll estimated at over 20000 civilians killed now!)
Date: 12/28/2023 11:57:00 (A credible, just and trustworthy hero, Miko Peled as a son of the Israeli general himself who deflected from the brutal regime condemned the zionist regime. What more proof against israeli terrorism than testimony of its own zionist son??. I posted this on another international American poetry sites with videos showing clearly so it had more footage, here YouTube videos don't show up all clearly
Palestinian death toll estimated at over 20000 civilians killed now!)
Date: 12/28/2023 11:57:00 (A credible, just and trustworthy hero, Miko Peled as a son of the Israeli general himself who deflected from the brutal regime condemned the zionist regime. What more proof against israeli terrorism than testimony of its own zionist son??. I posted this on another international American poetry sites with videos showing clearly so it had more footage, here YouTube videos don't show up all clearly
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Re. The rain and reign of terror!
18th Jan 2024 5:31pm
The US's last efforts in the Middle East cost twenty years or about, multiple lives, and more than two trillion dollars. This thing that is happening now is going to cost so much more, it will force everyone to choose sides. There are allies that will no longer be allies soon, this this is being kept out of the media but it's escalating. Tight write dude
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Re: Re. The rain and reign of terror!
18th Jan 2024 5:44pm
You are meaning the last bombing that U.S did of Iraq for oil on the pretext of weapons of mass destruction that U.S officials and pres Trump said they knew weren't in Iraq right.
And now its just U.S and its allies interfering with all those trying to resist Israel and defend Palestine so i do wish that U.S and israel lose their allies to the point it causes ceasefire for all involved.
Peaceful ways ought to overtake Israel's greed for more land, they are only killing for land and resources.
Thanks soo much for your informative input, i hope more side with justice and fairness.
And now its just U.S and its allies interfering with all those trying to resist Israel and defend Palestine so i do wish that U.S and israel lose their allies to the point it causes ceasefire for all involved.
Peaceful ways ought to overtake Israel's greed for more land, they are only killing for land and resources.
Thanks soo much for your informative input, i hope more side with justice and fairness.
Re. The rain and reign of terror!
18th Jan 2024 6:20pm
Preventing basics of water and medicine takes cruelty to a new level, causing immense and unnecessary suffering of the Palestinians - and brave journalists and aid workers.
The Zionists are showing their true colours - and they're not pretty.
However, they can only do it because America and the West support them with weapons supplies.
I like your last stanza - it sums it up well.
The Zionists are showing their true colours - and they're not pretty.
However, they can only do it because America and the West support them with weapons supplies.
I like your last stanza - it sums it up well.
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Re: Re. The rain and reign of terror!
18th Jan 2024 6:37pm
Hello again dear poet Josh, indeed if you could watch the live graphic videos of children babies crying their heart out from both emotional trauma and physical pain you will reaffirm your concerns and humanitarian thoughts of how a human can allow this to happen to fellow humans . Indeed the super powers fund this genocide instead of enforcing a ceasefire, for their selfish material interests.
Thanks soo much for your honest humanitarian compassionate comment. Im so glad you're of the many Americans and Jewish rabbis who condemn the genocide for what it is.
And you're so knowledgeable to realise that they are all semites with semitic blood.
They welcomed the jews who since then look for excuses to annihilate them instead.
Thanks soo much for your honest humanitarian compassionate comment. Im so glad you're of the many Americans and Jewish rabbis who condemn the genocide for what it is.
And you're so knowledgeable to realise that they are all semites with semitic blood.
They welcomed the jews who since then look for excuses to annihilate them instead.
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My wife was brought up in Palestine in the 1950s/60s (her parents ran a church-funded school for Palestinian orphans in the West Bank) and there was a refugee camp just down the road. Of course these camps were established from 1948 onwards, when they had to flee - so 75 years of oppression and disenfanchisement.
And yes, originally, after the horrors of WW2, the Palestinians, a very hospitable people, welcomed the Jews. Little did they know how their kindness was about to be flipped and turned on them.
And yes, originally, after the horrors of WW2, the Palestinians, a very hospitable people, welcomed the Jews. Little did they know how their kindness was about to be flipped and turned on them.
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Re: Re. The rain and reign of terror!
19th Jan 2024 4:41am
Great to know, wow your wifey lived in Palestine so she must know things better firsthand .
Keep on having your heart of gold for humanity.
Keep on having your heart of gold for humanity.
Re. The rain and reign of terror!
18th Jan 2024 9:40pm
Re: Re. The rain and reign of terror!
19th Jan 2024 4:43am
You must be those with a good kind heart to be troubled by this. Others in media are mocking their misery and plight so heartlessly.
Thanks soo much for comment,
Thanks soo much for comment,
Re. The rain and reign of terror!
19th Jan 2024 5:37am
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19th Jan 2024 5:45am
Re. The rain and reign of terror!
19th Jan 2024 6:17am
i just don't understand why people of different religions can't seem to get along. i have no bad thoughts about what people want to worship. some, i have doubts but i am not hating anyone over their religious choices.
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Re: Re. The rain and reign of terror!
19th Jan 2024 7:17am
Oh dear dear this has nothing to do with religion though the zionists sometimes wrongly refer to bible to justify this, but this is actually got more to do with israelis just doing a genocide and apartheid since ages just and solely for usurping land and resources.
And then we do wonder why U.S is supporting israel so much, is it because of Islamophobia or material interests?
Thanks so much for your comment,
And then we do wonder why U.S is supporting israel so much, is it because of Islamophobia or material interests?
Thanks so much for your comment,
Re. The rain and reign of terror!
19th Jan 2024 9:48am
Very dear Zaynab,
In the absence of love, cruelty is the only substitute.
In the absence of love, cruelty is the only substitute.
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Re: Re. The rain and reign of terror!
19th Jan 2024 10:41am
Yeah, the Palestinians loved the jews and that's why they welcomed them. But zionists believe in heavyhanded usurpation not love so they took to cruelty.
Thanks so much for your nice thoughts of love.
Thanks so much for your nice thoughts of love.
Re. The rain and reign of terror!
19th Jan 2024 11:05am
Why is it, I keep hearing the hard liners on both sides want to wipe each other off the face of the earth & not entertain the idea of a 'two state solution'? The ideals of land occupation are tied up in religious scripture as well as greed, I am sure. I do not pretend to be an expert on middle eastern affairs but I pick up bits & pieces on the news. It's nearly always the case, sadly, that just one or two people in high places can influence an army! This October 2023 conflict has gone far too far in terms of its death toll & I knew this very early on. Seems nothing can stop it either, politically or morally. It's very frightening & a massive stain on humanity for sure. We, as the most superior & 'intelligent' beings on this planet still have learned absolutely NOTHING about humanity!
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Re: Re. The rain and reign of terror!
19th Jan 2024 5:32pm
Ah dear poet Bill you see the Palestinians only make empty threats of revenge in frustration but you can see the facts in the numbers , over 20000 Palestinians killed for real after Israel always saying it will exterminate them. A far fewer number of occupiers is ever killed by hamas, and that too mostly military. Even on oct 7 more were killed by israeli crossfire.
Palestinians have been begging for a two state solution but why would israel agree when it can use weapons of mass destruction instead and ethnic cleanse them?
War for Land occupation is not mentioned in bible for jews and not in Quran too.
Indeed humanity is failing Palestinians and they suffer tyrannical horrors that even other zionists and jewish rabbis are condemning it.
Thanks soo much for your comment trying to make sense of this atrocity . This genocide is senseless barabaric killings yes.
Palestinians have been begging for a two state solution but why would israel agree when it can use weapons of mass destruction instead and ethnic cleanse them?
War for Land occupation is not mentioned in bible for jews and not in Quran too.
Indeed humanity is failing Palestinians and they suffer tyrannical horrors that even other zionists and jewish rabbis are condemning it.
Thanks soo much for your comment trying to make sense of this atrocity . This genocide is senseless barabaric killings yes.
Re. The rain and reign of terror!
19th Jan 2024 12:18pm
Peace we want we don't get, War we get we don't want. Keep on fighting for peace. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. The rain and reign of terror!
19th Jan 2024 5:33pm
Palestinians just want to live and their land back but they are being killed for it brutally. Thanks for your comment.
Re. The rain and reign of terror!
19th Jan 2024 9:52pm
At times evil just peaks its ugly head not caring whom it hurts and in the end we as a human race will have lost a little piece of ourselves.
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Re: Re. The rain and reign of terror!
20th Jan 2024 9:34am
Well said dear, warm thanks for thoughtful comment calling out the evil.
Re. The rain and reign of terror!
2nd Feb 2024 00:42am
A lot of have sympathy for the Palestinians, most of the world does. It's hard to be believe that the once oppressed are now the oppressors. After watching many interviews done by journalist I'm often baffled at the hatred these groups have each other. These lands have been under constant struggle for centuries and it feels like these last few months are leading to some major.
I pray that there is empathy all around but I have a feeling this will not end well.
Nicely penned.
I pray that there is empathy all around but I have a feeling this will not end well.
Nicely penned.
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Re: Re. The rain and reign of terror!
11th Aug 2024 5:36pm
Trust me dear the Palestinians resentment and resistance against those doing cold blooded genocide and apartheid of their people is justified.
Warm thanks for your feeling and sympathetic comment for human rights.
Warm thanks for your feeling and sympathetic comment for human rights.
Re. The rain and reign of terror!
The difficult history is really not that difficult. This is a biblical ethnic cleansing and I am disappointed by our country's politicians especially the president and vice president in their complicity of this genocide of the Palestinian people.
Fantastic job expressing the horror 🫶🏿
This THO!
"Who but tyrants destroy humble homesteads with warheads?
Poor Palestinians stumble and tumble over their dead."
Fantastic job expressing the horror 🫶🏿
This THO!
"Who but tyrants destroy humble homesteads with warheads?
Poor Palestinians stumble and tumble over their dead."
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Re: Re. The rain and reign of terror!
11th Aug 2024 5:39pm
Yeah biblical is the cover while it is more a materialistic cold blooded genocide for Palestinians land and resources ahh.
Im glad you condemn those complicit. Thanks soo much for humanity thoughts like yours.
Im glad you condemn those complicit. Thanks soo much for humanity thoughts like yours.