Break me...

Very hot sweetie
Love and light
Ron xx

I love that you found it very hot Ron! And you know I love to give up control and allow all those deepest fantasies to play out; now that gets me really excited. ;) So much love and light back at ya for the new year!! X

Author's Note sums up this dramatic testimony.  Forged steel binding her wrists producing that scary smile. BDSM claims the soul. What starts out perhaps as morbid curiosity moves to a thunderous beat of owned and operated.
I'm watching you closely Kx.  
Amazing language, dark passion and hold.

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So much dramatic testimony to be given. :p Well nothing like some forged steel or hard wood to bring out that scary smile. haha... Oh yes! it does seem to lay claim to the body and soul doesn't it. My morbid curiosity always gets the best of me. There is definitely no owner's manual for operating me. But I love it when someone tries to write one. Watching huh? uh oh... I hope you like what you see. :p
Definitely a bundle of dark passion...

Love the BIG LIKE. ;) X

Happy New Year to you my friend 😁

You always know how to keep it steamy.

Hey DC, So good to see you in the New Year. I hope you are off to a great start. I really love it when it gets all steamy. Oh yeah! That's what I live for. ;) X

An exciting array of wordplay and heavy undertones. Perfect vocabulary choices woven together to tell a hot passionate story. Loved it.

Hey Thor! wordplay can be so much fun but other types of play are even more exciting. ;) Living out all those heavy undertones. I love that you could follow along with me in this hot passionate story. So happy you loved it! What better way to ring in the new year than being bound and... * nevermind, innocent look * X

You had me at the first line, girl. This is hot.
I hope the new year is good to you.

Hey Mary! It's so good to see you back. Rough handling is exactly what we need sometimes isn't it? ;) Nothing gets the blood pumping like living out someone else's fantasies especially when they are yours too, right... X

I hope you have had a great start to the new year; always wishing the very best for you. :)

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XO

Short and oh so sweet Oral! ;) I love it when you say YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Because I know you really felt it and I love it so much when someone feels it. ;) X

Pure fire at its best.  You need to be given pleasure all over your sexy naked body.  😉  Keep on writing my beautiful smart strong sexy woman.

You know I love playing with fire! Pure fire is the best and I am really glad you could feel the heat Francisco. I always need to give and be given pleasure all over my body. That's definitely something I live for. ;) And thank you for the wonderful compliment; I love being referred to that way. X

Your poem is intense and evokes strong emotions through its vivid imagery and passionate language. The use of metaphors and sensory descriptions adds depth to the overall theme of breaking boundaries and surrendering to desire.

The poem begins with a plea to be broken, highlighting a fascination with rough cruelty and the pain it brings. The reference to "ringing, hoarse sounds of passionate kisses" suggests a tumultuous and intense relationship. The imagery of struggle and submission further emphasizes the power dynamics at play.

The poem explores the theme of dominance and submission, with references to marks, blood, and the sounds of torn coverings. It portrays a scene of intense physicality and desire, with increasing body movements and sultry hearts beating in rhythm. The use of contrasting elements, like the rustle of whispers and the distorted lips, adds a sense of tension and sensuality.

Towards the end, the poem takes a darker turn as it mentions an executioner's groan and the merging of the victim and the blade. This abrupt shift in tone introduces a sense of danger and unpredictability. The poem concludes with a metaphorical breaking, rejecting shaky boundaries and embracing naked eroticism with fiery love eruptions, symbolizing a plunge into an unknown and passionate abyss.

Overall, your poem effectively captures raw emotions and explores themes of power, desire, and surrender. The vivid imagery and passionate language create a provocative and intense atmosphere throughout the poem.

I love that it evoked strong emotions and you could really immerse yourself in the imagery and language of it. Breaking boundaries and surrendering to desire is definitely overall theme. I love to push boundaries and feel the amazing intensity of doing so.

That fascination with 'rougher handling' and pain comes from a culmination of my experiences in life. It would be easy to think that those experiences would drive me away from such things instead but our desires can often be complicated. Tumultuous and intense relationships can be addictive despite potentially very damaging. Dominance, struggle, and submission... so many power dynamics at play...

I am very familiar with the many aspects of dominance and submission, including intense physicality and desire. Often resulting in physical and mental marks, as well extreme tension and sensuality.

Often as we surrender to certain things perhaps the intensity can lead us very forcefully into the dark. And perhaps we become much more comfortable in the dark in many ways. Danger and unpredictability driven by lust and excitement as we plunge into the abyss deeper.

I like your final description and really appreciate you taking the time to provide your analysis and thoughts! X

Dear K,

Happy New Year and what a way to kick it off with this poem of steamy delight. As per you have a poem within a poem using your bolded lines there’s another sensual write within. Love it.
H🌷

Hey Honoria, I am so happy to see you in the New Year! I hope you have had a wonderful start to the new year and a great holiday season as well. I cannot believe it's 2024... just crazy. I am so happy that you saw this as a steamy delight. ;) I love pulling you in, especially in that way. :p I also love how you are able to follow my crazy impatient formatting to see what I was trying to do in creating another aspect to the poem with bold or italic elements. X

I can't think of a better place for you than the abyss.  No Hallmark cards for that location.  You're pretty on the outside but only we of the Underground know of your broken sacraments.  And we'll keep it that way.  We hide you.  You're safe in our blood stained hands. Yes, even the barbarians have your back.  An intelligent brutal write.
Perfect to start a new year of bludgeoned truths with consequences...

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I suppose I do belong in the abyss since it seems I am always being pulled there in one way or another. :p Definitely no hallmark cards... Ah yes! Definitely on the outside with many broken sacraments. Hiding me is interesting though. Blood stained hands are always very busy aren't they? Barbarians always seem to have my back. lol So glad you saw the intellectual aspects, along with bludgeoned truths and consequences P2S. And so happy that Push Likes. ;) X

Ohh yea!
The words just perfectly captures the the emotion.  

Very strong write!!

<3

I love getting an Ohh yea! ;) That makes me feel good. So nice to meet you ChocoLaaTTe... And now I definitely want a Latte with Chocolate. And I am so happy you could feel the intense emotion and feelings I wanted to convey. Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts with me. X <3

I'm digging the shadow of struggle. I could see it
vividly in my mind. What and intense read - like all of your writings.
Happy to see ya posting!
Happy belated New Year:)

Oh yes! Always engaged in the shadow of struggle it seems. I am glad I could pull you into these vivid images with me. ;) I am a bundle of intensity... I know certain experiences have only served to increase that. Thank you so much for saying you are happy to see me posting, that makes me feel good. :) I hope you had an absolutely amazing holiday season and new year. Wishing you the very best always!

Way to start the year Kristina.

Rough, torrid and completely deep in the torrents of lust.
Great write.

Hey Wally! I am so happy that you thought it was a good way to start the year... ;) Nothing wrong with getting a rough and dirty start to the new year is there? Torrid and completely deep in the torrents of lust is where I always need to be. I hope you have had a great start to the year. :) Sorry for the late reply... My new year has been crazy... X

Like the wild mustang, she must be broken. In the process the cowboy can only hold on for the ride, going where the bronc takes him. He feels it in his bones and muscles afterwords, not to mention the thrill in his mind. She, the mustang, enjoys the cowboys attempt to break her, his strength and perseverance to “ride” her until she takes him where they both want to go.  
 
Yet, the author is concerned as after each "ride" she becomes more accustomed to the thrill; requiring the next session with the “Cowboy” to be rougher and more intense to feel, at minimum, the same released hidden passion; but she wants more. However, in this case “more” is not infinite – as injury or possible demise is the limit. Understanding the limits gives her anxiety. Like seeking “euphoria” by taking narcotics she is becoming addicted, but she also knows addiction will likely lead to despair. She must have her needs taken care of….!!  
 
As usual, you bare it open for all to see your passion and sexuality. Another refreshing write by you. No deception, true expose'! Well done.

So true! she must be broken... and it's the best ride of your life right? You definitely have to hold on tight. And yes he will feel it everywhere afterwards but especially unable to get the thrill out of his mind. ;) Oh definitely! she enjoys the attempts to break her. She needs it... Perhaps showing him things he didn't know he needed too.

As always, you are very perceptive DaVinci. Definitely need more and more thrills. ;) And sometimes the intensity can be scary for others... but yeah she needs more sometimes. But as you said there ultimately is a limit. Sex is definitely an addiction; can't think of a better way to seek Euphoria. Fortunately the cowboy does get addicted too. ;)

Oh yes! I have so much passion and sexuality. I guess it is scary sometimes. ;) So happy you found it a refreshing write and understood it so well. True expose' indeed. I hope you are having a really amazing start to the year. Sorry for the delay in responding, mine has been insanely busy so far. X

This is really good. Great poetry.

Hey there Vision of insanity... I love that name by the way. I often feel like a vision of insanity myself. ;) I am really happy you thought my writing is really good. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me and a happy belated new year. I hope it's treating you well so far. X

i love your poem, bt can we discuss it couz im in a lack for word? 8you can choose one of my poems and we ca trade insight to eachothers work if it falls in  your commfort zone

Well hey sublime. I am really happy that you loved it. We can discuss it more if you like. ;) Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me, I really appreciate it so much. It's been a really crazy year for me so far so I haven't been on much but I will try to read something of yours soon. I hope you have had a wonderful start to the year. X

Hahaha, why break free? Why not enjoy the darkness that is within self as much as that which is within others?  We can let our only pleasure be within the pleasure of another. At times our expense is solely our expense and our pain is not for the hangman our the spectators. We want to enjoy Charon's boat ride for ourself, thinking of the furies warming up their whips. Tight piece Lady  

So true, I don't want to break free but it's fun trying sometimes. Maybe get some much deserved punishment for it too. I do find myself most at home in the darkness but I was pushed there early in my life. And I definitely take intense pleasure in being the pleasure for another and making those fantasies come true. Ah, the pain - that is extensive subject... I often feel like my pain is for the spectator. I love the Charon and furies analogy; so true. You know how much I love getting a tight from you ME. ;) Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. I always love them. X

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 excellent 👌 work 👌 as always Kristina 👍 your brilliant musing is very much appreciated my love 💓!!

Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok and happy new year 🎉✨ peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖

Hello my dear REMARKABLE, I am so happy you appreciate my musings and thank you so much for telling me so. I love that! I will try to keep on writing. I know I haven't been doing much around here this year due to everything I have had going on but anyway... Miss you guys... I hope you have had a great start to the year. It's so incredible that it's February... geez... <3 X

Hey dear one, the steel isn't made that can hold your desire and the desire you bring forth in others. each poem when spoken out loud becomes an incantation of lust, binding the soul in dreams of pain. As always, a spectacular write, imbued with the sirens power to lure men to their doom and so set them free.  

Hello my dear Shaman, it's definitely true that my desires cannot be restrained and I love bringing forth the desire in others. After all I get the most intense pleasure from giving it. Incantations of lust and dreams of pain always... As always, I love what you said and that you see it as a spectacular write. Not much luring needed, they always seek it out. ;) I feel so bad for not being around this year, it's been quite a crazy one so far...

I just made this up but it feels true: You can either be the poem or write poetry but you can't do both. I have always thought of you as a living poem and feel your writing is so powerful b/c of the vibrating truth of the words. There's an old adage: Poets lie to tell the truth but politicians tell the truth to lie. .... Except you're different, using the poetry of your spirit and the truth of your existence to write, entertain, and illuminate for others that they might seek and find the truth of their own existence. So, I wish peace, joy, love, sex, and pain but not necessarily in that order.  

I love being the poem for you... And that you find such truth in my writing. Ah yes! all of those things... and certainly not in that order... wink... ;)