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Handle With Csre
A beautiful thing
To know you heard
My agonising heart
Take your time
For these broken pieces
Are in healing
Need the truth of your love
To give this heart it’s beat
Just be gentle
Will brave the fire again
If you take my hand
To navigate the flames
Will give you the keys
To unlock my soul
Be careful it’s a bit dusty
To know you heard
My agonising heart
Take your time
For these broken pieces
Are in healing
Need the truth of your love
To give this heart it’s beat
Just be gentle
Will brave the fire again
If you take my hand
To navigate the flames
Will give you the keys
To unlock my soul
Be careful it’s a bit dusty
Published 12th Jun 2023
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wrote this june 2020
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12th Jun 2023 9:09am
Oh, how romantic Colin. I just love when you share your tender side with us.
Putting yourself out there, asking to be handled in such a manner is so brave. I admire that in a person.
Excellent poem, my friend.
Putting yourself out there, asking to be handled in such a manner is so brave. I admire that in a person.
Excellent poem, my friend.
12th Jun 2023 10:04am
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12th Jun 2023 3:18pm
12th Jun 2023 6:07pm
Enjoyed that Colin
Was thinking travelling will willburys when I saw the title
Was thinking travelling will willburys when I saw the title
12th Jun 2023 8:10pm
You acknowledging your own fragility, and then offering it as a gift is breathtaking. There is something quiet and haunting about your piece. It’s beautiful
13th Jun 2023 12:03pm
13th Jun 2023 4:56pm
You're my bar... always.
Thank you for reaching back and putting these out here, you continue to teach me much, my dear friend.
Beautific work - 💙
x
Thank you for reaching back and putting these out here, you continue to teach me much, my dear friend.
Beautific work - 💙
x
Anonymous
14th Jun 2023 5:44am
'' Will give you the keys
To unlock my soul
Be careful it’s a bit dusty ''
Sold!!!
This entire vibe sinks into the Soul
...and that last stanza....
GOLD!!!
To unlock my soul
Be careful it’s a bit dusty ''
Sold!!!
This entire vibe sinks into the Soul
...and that last stanza....
GOLD!!!
