Forgive Me

Let me know if this works…

Deal !

All you ladies out there forgive this man.  He will give the ride of your life towards orgasmic bliss.  Keep on writing.

Yes
Double orgasms guaranteed or your money back...

Dear PS,

LOL!  Love the blanket apology.  If this comes with a money back guarantee I’m all in.
BIG LIKE!

H 🌷

Dear H,

I'm apologizing now, who cares what I did or said ?  I'm all purpose in a jar.
No retreat, no surrender ...

BIG LIKE THE BIG LIKE 👍

Well said PS...

I, for one, could use something like this...

(Frankly, I am shocked different people
are still my friends...

Scorpios are pretty cool people...)

Scorpios Rock
We care but don't care, apologize first and then do what you want.
Attitude Mister

Stick with me C

Yeah, me too. Every day needs to be Yom Kippur.
Nice capture of one of the myriad challenges of being human.

Fasting and atonement for our guilty ways ...
I gave up the first some time ago when I couldn't buy into the symbolism.  Guilt a out tribe knows is built in so I needed words to explain ....
Great comment !!

Thx

Forgiveness is the path to redemption. Cleansing from past hurts can be difficult and painful, but the reward is worth it.
I truly hope your poem helps you achieve what you desire.
Rock on, Gary.

Most of the time I'm trying to forgive myself ...
But it was a spur of the moment write that has some meaning to me and others as well so mission accomplished !!

Thx Mary

I'll rock till I drop

Ya.  And there's the bit about twisting your tongue 7 times before opening your mouth.  But I forget about that one too.............

Oh the things I’ve said in the interest of truth …
It’s good to have a a coverage line ready to go …

Immediately reminded me of Kate Bush's song "This Woman's Work", and the feelings of regret in it.  Great job!


https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=_NRdA0ST4Zg&pp=ygUbdGhpcyB3b21hbidzIHdvcmsga2F0ZSBidXNo

I see what you mean
Definitely similarities
I've always loved her voice and delivery

Many thanks Lisa !!

...what about the things you didn't say?
Just kidding, I think you've covered all the bases here. You're forgiven.
❤️k

I try to cover all the bases, when I don't I call in my wing girl ... You ❤

I got your back 👍😎

BIG appreciation RED !
❤

I find the words stick a bit more when accompanied by either dinner, flowers, a gem, cash, wrapped gift or all ot the above!  🤣💰

You are probably right, I'll remember that next time I'm in the dog house..

I think many of us have been in this position.
The emotions are crystal clear.
Major league like.


hugs,
buddhakitty.

Always have an apology ready and then go wild in the streets.....

Thx ❤

There’s something admirable about the tenacity of this, but it mostly reminded me of how we need to separate the artist from the artistry. Not enough people say what they mean, and mean what they say. How bloody n i c e we’ve all become.

Really liked the message of this.

-M

I think one of the things people like most about my writing is my “direct” approach.  Living in New York City my entire adult life has sharpened my skills in saying exactly what I mean.  I try to couch it politely but if you offend me I’m going to tell you exactly what I feel.  Then run if someone pulls out a gun …. This was one of those poems that just appeared and wrote itself.  

I truly appreciate your visit and comment Missy

Thank you

Us men can be stubborn, so it's best to apologize up front.
Honesty is the best policy.
BL

Yes, good to admit it and move on to other chaos  !

Thx W