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Scented Abbey
As the emeritus of nature's pines
from my mind's oasis, flowing brooks
posthumously in green from the quill
of the chapel woods scented abbey
in stillness being my midnight host
listening to the magic of whispering trees
talking to the shadow of God
braiding the grass, and ginseng for tea
from my mind's oasis, flowing brooks
posthumously in green from the quill
of the chapel woods scented abbey
in stillness being my midnight host
listening to the magic of whispering trees
talking to the shadow of God
braiding the grass, and ginseng for tea
Published 1st Apr 2023
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1st Apr 2023 4:53pm
Hi Adagio,
U cool?
This feels deeply introspective.
Cleverly using nature's beauty,metaphorically.
I particular like the line; "Braiding the grass,and Ginseng for tea."
I enjoy the,@ times,emotional journey of your pieces.
Thank U 4 sharing
Take care.
X
U cool?
This feels deeply introspective.
Cleverly using nature's beauty,metaphorically.
I particular like the line; "Braiding the grass,and Ginseng for tea."
I enjoy the,@ times,emotional journey of your pieces.
Thank U 4 sharing
Take care.
X
1st Apr 2023 5:09pm
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1st Apr 2023 8:36pm
Gorgeous write with a bit of an interesting Picasso-like abstraction to it .
1st Apr 2023 8:38pm
2nd Apr 2023 3:00pm
It sounds like the outdoor graveyard of a loved one. Also a resting place for an old mindset that once was, and now hosts new life. Very cryptic. Full of opportunity to bring personal perspective. 👏
2nd Apr 2023 3:21pm
