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Hide and Seek
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YOU,
eagerly recite
those three words
- little did I know
they would follow me like
rain,
along adventures
- slowly connecting dots
whispering a sweet invite,
making me breathless and weak
YOU,
sensually speak
those three words
- over and over again
" let’s play, Hide and Seek "
YOU,
eagerly recite
those three words
- little did I know
they would follow me like
rain,
along adventures
- slowly connecting dots
whispering a sweet invite,
making me breathless and weak
YOU,
sensually speak
those three words
- over and over again
" let’s play, Hide and Seek "
Published 1st Apr 2023
Author's Note
I think to myself- “ I have always enjoyed this game. ”
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1st Apr 2023 4:18am
1st Apr 2023 4:25am
Thank you, moroccanpoet. I appreciate your lovely comment, and for placing this on your Reading List. :)
1st Apr 2023 5:41am
👏 👏 👏 👏 hide n seek nice 👌 I enjoyed this musing great 👍 work please keep 🙏 on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
2nd Apr 2023 00:32am
Thank you Rich, for your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you.
: ) Brandy
: ) Brandy
1st Apr 2023 8:03am
2nd Apr 2023 00:39am
. . . And that is what makes it even more exciting. The anticipation. Teasing all of the senses. Thank you Solomon Song, for adding this to your reading List.
: ) Brandy
: ) Brandy
1st Apr 2023 3:09pm
2nd Apr 2023 00:41am
1st Apr 2023 6:41pm
2nd Apr 2023 00:42am
Hiding in such a way, can be very exciting ! So inviting. Thank you, SweetOblivion.
: ) Brandy
: ) Brandy
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
1st Apr 2023 10:01pm
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2nd Apr 2023 00:49am
And you understand my thoughts completely. Regarding the photo, I think it's sexy in a simple, yet playful way. Thank you, Cathedral. Moments like these should be fun.
: ) Brandy
: ) Brandy
2nd Apr 2023 00:48am
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3rd Apr 2023 8:22pm
enjoyed the write,
"hide and seek", such a seductive idea.
as is the way you present the game. thank you for sharing
"hide and seek", such a seductive idea.
as is the way you present the game. thank you for sharing
Thank you, Mystic.
Yes, my thoughts exactly. Very seductive. Suggestive as well.
Playing "hide and seek" in this way, is a lot more fun.
Your thoughts are appreciated and they bring a smile. : )
Yes, my thoughts exactly. Very seductive. Suggestive as well.
Playing "hide and seek" in this way, is a lot more fun.
Your thoughts are appreciated and they bring a smile. : )
Anonymous
5th Apr 2023 00:38am
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5th Apr 2023 2:31am
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jul 2023 7:45pm
5th Apr 2023 1:21am
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5th Apr 2023 2:25am
Thank you, Zin. I appreciate you reading this poem and leaving your thoughts.
~ Brandy
~ Brandy
8th Apr 2023 5:51am
8th Apr 2023 7:08pm
: ) A game of hide and seek is fun, when played in this way.
Thank you for your lovely comment.
Thank you for your lovely comment.
17th Apr 2023 7:08pm
18th Apr 2023 4:51am
Thank you, John.
It's a tantalizing game of 'hide and seek' 😊
Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. ❤️
Thank you for adding this to your Reading List !
It's a tantalizing game of 'hide and seek' 😊
Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. ❤️
Thank you for adding this to your Reading List !
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Jul 2023 1:45pm
20th Apr 2023 9:33pm
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21st Apr 2023 2:45am
. . . Come and play
It's time to explore, while satisfying all the senses.
Your thoughts bring a smile. : )
It's time to explore, while satisfying all the senses.
Your thoughts bring a smile. : )
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Jul 2023 1:45pm
21st Apr 2023 8:23am
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21st Apr 2023 6:02pm
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29th May 2023 6:27pm
Indeed, and playing "Hide and Seek" is very enjoyable. The adult version.
Such a lovely thing to say. Thank you, Em. Your thoughts are appreciated.
Such a lovely thing to say. Thank you, Em. Your thoughts are appreciated.
