Tiny truths... in glimpses

Perfection. 💜

Thank you, lovely lady

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Tiny truths...huge revelations. Either way, the destination of pleasure knows no boundaries.


hugs,
buddhakitty

Boundless possibilities, indeed!

Thanks for reading, bk... I appreciate it, muchly.


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-B

My mind is on fire.  You need to need to be given orgasmic bliss over and over again.   Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Ohhh, Francisco... You're an amazing person who just can't enough of anything orgasmic... and who can blame you, right?!... We all should be so open and honest... hahaha...

Thank you for your comments, I bask in the strength you mentioned!

🌹B

Enjoy the wild ride of Love.

That's it... absolutely!!! 👍🏻

hello beautiful Blue this is so very powerful and genuine so much so that it hurts 💕true art...

There's always pain wherever there is growth and potential for beauty, methinks. I adore your thoughts, Brenda! They bring such warmth and understanding, especially when I've accessed from deep within, to get a little something inked onto the page.  
It does my heart wonders to see you 🦋  

Thank you so for the visit and you sharing you.  
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Dang!  What have you been doing with your time away?!  

Your consonants are hard. Your vowels are soft.  They meld together so well...

Luscious and thought provoking.  As if it could ever be less!

I have been lucky to be in good hands, that's for sure!

Thanks for the visit.... The idea that 'luscious' sprang to mind, is reward like no other! .... That's a treat and true compliment.

It's always a pleasure, Styx
I'm so delighted to see you and I absolutely love that you found a little something that spoke to you.

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x

The deeper meanings of submission are eloquently stroked with the burning coals of desire in this magnificent poem. You take penetration to another level with the hardcore fashioning buried so very deep inside. Your mastery of language is amply demonstrated with erotic genius. The emotional balance sways like a beautiful woman sashaying across the room for her master. I love love this poem for capturing the ideals of erotic speech and sinking them into my manhood with the rub of womanly art. You really know how to take me into the heart of wild abandon and keep me there long past the moans of a night.

John

My Dearest,  
To stoke the fires of imagination and palpable truth of being into emotional resonance is a hope and definitely a goal that I desire to try and keep and hopefully continue to execute with better and improved ability. Your comments leave my body flushed from head to toe in such glorious emotional transference that any writer would count themselves lucky to receive even half of what you've so generously bestowed upon me. To be bold in expressing one's self is often difficult and scary... You've reminded me that there's a warm, valid and truly consequential appreciation for taking those writing chances, which shrouds me in complete warmth and wonder.  
 
You're such a beautifully talented writer and positive force, which strengthens and imbues me with true goodness which only adds to my (or our mutual) potential for future poetic possibilities.  
 
Thank you so much for believing in me, my darling.  
My love for you is endless.  
 
I cherish you.  
🌹 💙  
-Susan

You make my palms itch. Do you know that?

The sex here was the power the narrator took for herself. Her step back into her skin.

Submission is about power. You relinquish control, which takes sublime discipline and self awareness, and through the art, you gain control. The allocation of power is the essence of the balance.

This was a siren’s song, and I’m with the leagues of those who have to strap themselves to the fucking ship mast lest they go insane.

You are beautiful.
You are powerful.
You are absolute divine in your exploration of connecting soul to words

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B

Haha.. I love learning something new.... what a delicious share... I'm all sly smiles! 😏  

Your comments are art themselves and become a pocket of sheer warmth within a sometimes cold siren sea....

Navigation of my submissive nature is an ongoing process that I take such pleasure and the right kind of pains in traversing. It's opened my eyes to my aptitude for strength, in how I choose to funnel my emotions and the dedication I have to something that drives to the very heart of what makes me, me. Understanding and accepting oneself is an ongoing struggle sometimes... finding answers to questions that I wasn't quite brave enough to ask when I was younger, is empowering, to say the least.  

Your ability to see me and my essence within this piece is deeply moving and beautifully put.  

Thank YOU, Betty...  

I am beyond grateful for your thoughtful comments.  

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x

your poems always take me on a ride through a surreal journey and end with a crystal clear thought    
   
beautiful.

Wow, Vick... That's high praise... I'm beyond thrilled that you've enjoyed this journey and others as well... It's so amazing to know that you've been traveling alongside... Thank you so much for being here... It's such an honor and a pleasure.

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xo

Wow❣Wow❣Wow❣, Lady Blue. My goal, when writing erotica, is to tap into the deepest. most. spiritual  sensations and profound ecstasy of sensual desire and sexual fulfillment. You have captured so well those exhilarating feelings with this verse. Oh to experience the total abandon described in this stanza, "Letting go even tiniest concerns    
where self consciousness dictates    
embarrassments  
I find myself,  
allowing each enjoyment heard—" And to witness and participate in this beautiful dance, "speaking with my body  
what I cannot always rightly convey    
even with the cleverest of words"
Bravissima bella poeta 🐻💞🐰

I cannot thank you enough for the incredible love felt within your truly lovely feedback. Getting the chance to have the "wows" of approval wash over me, is the exact motivation and fuel of needed in this moment, dear BB.
I miss you and your incredible thoughtful kind nature. I hope you are are hanging in there and looking forward to your new chapter.

Yes, letting go of the tiniest concerns to be so free and forgiving to one's self is paramount.... I'm thrilled and all smiles that portion spoke to you. Thank you for sharing in my writing and for being you. You're beautiful soul and overall loveliness is not taken for granted.... it's beautiful.

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I'll not lie, It's a bit challenging and quite daunting for me to reply with how I envision, to a comment so well thought out and structured. I appreciate the wonderful effort it took and I'm all about taking it all in and properly processing each and every line.  
 
Your high praise is kind and abundantly thorough. I am not the kind of writer who has ever really been taught through official means. Seeing that I only have a two year college degree, I sometimes feel lacking in poetic knowledge and proper structure. I go mostly by intense feeling, the need to purge and creative imagination. Writing for me, has always been something that I have cultivated privately and learned as I went. So the impressive nature of your feedback is a welcomed addition and very much appreciated for it's depth.  
 
My personal proclivities are often difficult to convey in a way that leaves me fully satisfied that what I've been able to convey on the page, in how I imagined it could be in my head... I feel like I'm a bit closer to that notion, after reading your takeaway.  
 
Thank you, sounds like it's not enough but it's honestly heart-felt and very very true.  
 Best,  
🌹B

A classical education has to be left at the door when reaching for creativity.

Your sensitivity for sensual language would not have been taught or learned in a college class. College would have held you back. Direct experience taught you what you needed. And we all appreciate that....because we benefit from your immediate experience.

I wish I could've had you send that as a letter to my parents back then... lol .... I thank you for that thoughtful and truly insightful reminder. It's so very true, life has taught me way more poetically than any classroom.

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x

How not to let  debauched thoughts interfere with Love. Or, how does this blend in with lofty thoughts and hight romance. I'm all kinds of confused.
Let Yin go and fuck Yang. (I said I'm confused....)                 Kisses, Robert.

Confused is something that I often am as well, dear Robert!

I think confusion is part of human nature and we're all just working our way towards being comfortable and confident with a day to day understanding, especially when it comes to love, lust and figuring out our places within that particular aspect.

Thank you for your thought provoking feedback, it's very helpful and deeply appreciated

Much love and returned hugs and kisses,
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B

I love this.

Thanks, Adagio
I appreciate you saying so.

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his deep
steady
voice
vibrates
through
her defenses

so masterful
his strength
behind words
has her
quivering
to the core

she sees
his eyes
caressing her curves
sending sparkis
flying within
her soul

he whispers
deep in her ears
good girl
you know
what i desire
from you

your not
naked
enough
or truly
vilnerable
enough

i need
both
from you
as he
kisses her
forehead

Now THAT'S purrrrr worthy.... Whew!!!
I am wonderfully flustered and beautifully lost, basking within that amazing scene you so generously left swimming along in my brain....

WOW!
You win for best comments!! 🏆

I can't convey properly how much I adore seeing you 🦋
Love this poem and you.
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I love the verbal verity Blue.  You are a favorite poet of mine, I enjoy your expression and enchanting eloquence.

LJ

Hey there, Lj
There's something about being called enchanting that just has me giddy.... Thanks for the Saturday smiles, dear lady. It's appreciated greatly.

I'm stoked that you found something enjoyable here.

Much 💙
xo

A sensual give and take… sensual words that whisper themselves to me… bravo dearest B…

... and you know how much I adore you listening...

Thank you for those lovely kind words, LilD



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xo

Wow!... It is brimming with sensuality...
"... ... what I cannot always rightly convey    ... even with the cleverest of words ..."
Because it takes  a more existential and philosophical form.


 

That's exactly correct.... Sometimes there's just an abundance of thought and emotional space .. and it all can't be fully expressed with words, alone...There's a deep(er) meaning within that need... more than mental and physical even... transcendent...  

Thank you for the kind and insightful comments, Marks.
You just get it.

I adore that.

In gratitude -  
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x

You're welcome, Bluevelvete.

"that warm debauched thoughts"
The good thing was that I just finished eating my taco (no pun intended) when I came across this piece (again, no pun intended). You keep raising :-) the poetic bar with these thought provoking tantalizing offerings.
The stanza "Recognizing the amount of tangible lust" I think also expresses a relatable frustration some of us may have with find the right words which you oddly enough expressed so rightfully.
DUP is currently having a glitch about adding RLs but this is definitely one I can come back to reading over and over again... ;-)

Walter!
Your kick ass feedback had me instantly howling with laughter and then proud, ending on being utterly grateful. I'm so ridiculously hard on myself that I can tend to lose sight that we're all human, potentially sharing similar emotional ups and downs. It does my heart wonders, to be reminded that I'm not alone within the outpouring of such personal intimacies.

Thank you for the 'RL' add... I hope the Web miss gets the glitch sorted... because if this new RL error message (where it says I must 'like' poems first?!? wtf...)that I'm now getting is the new reality on DUP, firstly ,it makes zero sense and secondly, it makes me not want to participate like I normally would.... Sheesh!
I hope it's a glitch and that's all!

Take care, my friend
I appreciate you
🌹 B

I want to shrink down    
slither deep inside    
warm myself    
until I'm dripping  
of your sweet mastery    
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dearest Velvete

i like the mirror polished portraiture of these "opening" lines
and the spiral of awakenings that follow

may the blue skies of spring be with you in all seasons

a warm smile
silent lotus

To have you spiral through my thoughts and find an opportunity to be awakened with verve and hopefully a renewed spirit leaves me with such happiness.
I love the idea of basking within the blue skies of spring whenever and wherever and take that deeply to heart.

Much love and deepest appreciation, dear silent lotus!
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xo

That is good writing...
And for me a good read.
"Smile through welcomed howls"  this one kind of stuck with me.

Thanks for reaching out and sharing your thoughts with me, Markis.

To know that I could be a welcomed invasion with my writing and potentially stick around a bit, is a real compliment and I consider a true achievement. I know I love that when it happens to me!

🌹B

You never cease to amaze.
Beautiful.
❣️🙏

and you, me.
Thank you, my dear poet

It's beyond pleasurable to see you 🦋
You were missed.
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That's my BLU

YOU ARE THE VERSION OF ADELE

TO YOUR POETRY WRITING


GOD BLESS YOU

😘 😘 😘
You're adorable, my dear.

Thank you for the high praise.

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xo

So many lines..  
but this one right here  
 
'' Divinity and destiny      
beautifully procreate—    
birth a new life ''  
 
was the nexus for me....  
 
there's so much to be woven around that  
verse alone  
 
and as for the rest of this vibe....  
a goldmine indeed..filled with so many gems

Ohhh Naaj....
I adore you journeying through all my precious jewels.... I'm so thrilled that you found a bit of sparkle ❇

Birthing a new life from the combustible factors of sex, God and all that we call free will, is definitely at stimulating and intriguing notion.... It's one not many would pick up on and it says much that you have...

Love how you see me and my writing.

What a treat.
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B

Hoi hoi
To be able to enter an adventure like this is amazing.
And to be able to bring the story to life, to write it down like this is an extra quality!
I value/envy you no end for these features!
Thank you for posting it. You’re a marvel.
Kind regards, Gus

Hoi hoi

You're a lovely sight, Gus!
Much thanks for the awesome feedback. I love that you enjoyed reading and found me up be a marvel... I don't think anyone has ever called me that before, so it feels extra cool...

I hope things are going well in your part of the world!

Warmest regards and appreciation,
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B

Are you an entre or dessert?

lol... can't I be both?....

Is it greedy to hope you never have your fill??... #Truth  


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How did I miss this kinkfest, ooooo now I like this loads, I swoop to bow before you
This is kinktastic
Love and light
Ron xx

Hahahaha .... Oooooo... I LOVE these comments. Do I know you or do I know you!!!

Thanks for being such a wonderful support, filling me with encouragement and motivation... You're amazing!

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Oh my Princess, your poetry was perfect before, BUT now it is divine from another world that only you can exist in. Where is that book the world is waiting to read from the writer, you, of erotica. Hugs and peace, your biggest fan. Oral

My Dearest, O
Having you back... it's like a dream come true! I adore your comments and missed your teases and yummy flirts.... Hopefully one day you'll hold a book within your hands with my name on it.... It still remains to be seen but thank you for inquiring.

You're a delicious joy
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Thank you for sharing your morning coffee with me, you know how much I love that!.... - xo.