The night is young, and so I am I

Fabulous
 That muffled desire
    fused in one go into a beautiful piece
        Fertile feelings and rhythmically balanced writing
            I loved your poem

Fabulous definitely works for me MP. You are fabulous too. ;) Always tons of desire to go into everything and oh so fertile. lol I am glad you found it rhythmically balanced. I wanted something sexy and fun without being overly graphic in the sense that it conjures all those images anyway. ;) So I hope you felt that and so happy you loved it. ;)

I wish that you and me.  You burning me up.  You we young and we got the whole night.  Keep on writing.

You know how much I love burning you up. Well I love burning everything up. lol Was it you who originally called me a little arsonist? :p I lost track of where that one originated. I have been called so many things here. Some I am sure I can't repeat but ho hum. :p Ah, being young and having the whole night; sleep is the last thing on my mind damnit! ;) But I suppose you do have to sleep sometime. :p

Super hot my erotic poetess
Loved the read, really enjoyed this piece gorgeous
Love and light
Ron x

Keeping it super hot for you Ron. ;) Erotic poetess, damn I love the sound of that but put erotic in front of anything and it just sounds so much better doesn't it. :p I love that you love it, that just makes me want to give you more. So happy you enjoyed it, you are awesome. Love and light back at ya always.

The title could be a song title and as a whole, holds the gravitas of a lyric (always a delight in my book). The night is God's dark tent and we are all merely characters in its shadowy theatre. The subtlety and allusions pierce the night and your words would caress even the most tired of minds. Enjoyed. Much.

You know that does sound like a great song doesn't it? Gravitas, what a great word, I have not seen that one in a while but you do have a way with words Rob. And I want to be a chapter in your book that delights. Well a whole volume at least damnit! lol God's dark tent... That's a title for sure. And I am so glad you came to my shadowy theatre to see my allusions dancing in your mind as they pierce the thoughts with exciting images of my lust. I am here to caress and wake up even the most tired of minds. ;)

Your aura lights up my imagination....
Nobody writes this better.

BIG RAVISHING LIKE

So much aura ready to light up your imagination. You have to have a way to find your way through the underground. So I am here to light your torch so to speak and lead you around. * cough * There are so many awesome writers here which of course is what the mirror series is about. Shining that light wherever I can. I just wish I could do it more often because there is infinite inspiration. :)

You're young but experienced.
Many more stories to tell and mirrors waiting to be written.
I've got some good ammo for you...

Experienced, oh boy! not sure if that sounds good or not but yes...
So many stories to tell that's for sure. Lived through a lot of stuff. And many mirrors indeed. Ah, good ammo - I like the sound of that... give me some good ammo... you know you want to...

Bending you over
A pounding like no other
You have needs, I have solutions !!

I adore that molon, thank you! It really helps so much to know that people appreciate the series. There are so many things lurking in my mind and it's always wonderful to be inspired. I am so happy you see it as a fascinating part of my evolution as an eroticist and hopefully the non-erotic too. ;) I love that you could see the reflection as well as the sashaying spin. I really love how you said that! Fertile fodder indeed. Thanks for your inspiring comment.

"The night is young, and so I am I" - Yeah rub it in youngstah!!

Very erotic write of being coy, while being alluring. Kittens need to frolic.

The poor guy the next day explaining to his boss why he didn't meet the deadline!! LOL

Haha, yeah I guess you are 568 years old now DaVinci. lol But you still seem pretty spry for your age. :p

So very erotic and you know just how incredibly alluring being coy is. That innocent look is super sexy isn't it? Just makes you want to do very bad things. Kittens always want to play and are so soft and cuddly.

Well he will have the best excuse ever damnit! Hopefully his boss is not a woman. lol Just saying...

Thanks Ted, that means so much to me. Everything is food for thought and inspiration right? I love that you can see the versatility. You kind of left me speechless there. I love that you can see the darkness, light, and all the shades in my writing. Dancing words are so much fun. :) Never any hallmark-isms or hackneyed verse. ;) And I really love that you thought it was very good.

Beautifully penned 💗

Hey beautiful girl. :) Really love that you could feel this one with me and through it's beautifully penned. And the heart too. ;) I am trying to get back around to reading although I will be taking a day trip all day tomorrow. But I will definitely be getting back over to your page soon to see what's new. ;) I hope you have some fun stuff planned
for the weekend.

Ooommph
So sweet 🤗
welcome darlin
I hope you get to read something good by coming to my page...☺️

There is always something good on your page olivia. ;) I hope you have a nice weekend planned. I will be taking a day trip with friends tomorrow so should be fun. :)

Awwww that's great.. enjoy 😊

Could use a little distraction or two ;)
Well played!

You always need a little distraction or two, or three Tim... lol But I am big distraction damnit! So there. Always getting well played, like the strumming of guitar to a beautiful love song or a hard 'r'ock song. lol I refrained from changing that r but you get the point, so to  speak. I know I get the point, geez just can't help it. Alright I am going to shut up now.

Love how playful this is.
Being wrapped up with someone you
adore and giving them "that" smile. LOL
Write on amiga:)

Playful is always fun isn't it? ;) Teasing, crushing someone with your legs. I mean being wrapped up with someone you adore. lol And oh yeah "that" smile. I have talked about your smile before but I won't embarrass you. lol I know that's a total surprise because I like embarrassing you. Even that word, * nevermind, innocent look * lol I held off emphasizing the good parts of the word. :p I always love seeing you and your beautiful smile Adel. ;)

Dear K,

Just the right amount of seductive word play without being too…much. It’s left to the reader to carry onward. I really like that. The mirror writes are an extremely clever exercise and your talent for doing this was already at high velocity, now it’s just galactic. Great write. H🌷

I can definitely be too much. ;) But I love seductive word play that let's the reader create their own images of where things are going. Let the mind fill in those super sexy moments that make you really feel it. I definitely love that too. The mind can really carry it forward in the best way. Really happy you find them clever and see talent in doing them. High velocity, I love that and galactic Wow! damn! Absolutely adore it and you. ;)

What could a man wish more from his young lady than this:

I so want my legs wrapped around you.
This is my gift, yours too.

The picture fits the poem well with her gift being granted.

Well hey SS, it's always great to see you especially on something sexy because I know you love sexy. ;) And what young lady wouldn't want to wrap her legs around her man and crush the will. lol Okay, maybe that doesn't sound good, but it's good damnit! It's the best. lol But absolutely should be a gift for both, both should want it in a relationship and if not there is definitely a problem because what could be more exciting and beautiful. I am pretty particular on pics although impatient with finding them but that one really matched my thoughts best. :)

Much better than the original. This would've been excellent as a stand alone.piece. Brava! 🌼

Shut up! yours is wonderful and this would not exist without it so there. lol I really loved the inspiration. It was uplifting and playful so really made me smile and incited the thoughts of... um stuff lol... I really appreciate all the inspiration here so I am trying to share that in different ways. :) Stand alone, yeah yeah whatever. :p

🤗😘

Sounds like 7:15 PM, with all evening to go.....at it.

What could be better than going at it all night. :p No need for sleep I can just take all your essence. lol That's the key to staying young forever. Well maybe not for you but for me damnit! :p 7:15pm, that's a good time to get away from the day and dive head first into the night if you ask me. ;) And what better way to start the night, and end it too.

So very distracting. lol But you always want more right? :p

Soft, subtle, and alluring. That's me! ;) Okay maybe not so subtle...

Always building passion until it explodes. * nevermind, innocent look *
I love teasing the senses and sending the mind into overdrive. You know that.

Like a cake or hell, so many layers. Setting hearts and desires on fire. What can I say, I like setting stuff on fire damnit!

'So freaking cute' awwwww.... that's sweet.

You should want that right now. (and always) ;p

And I am just using my fingers to spin your mind, round and round watching the blur because it's so fun.

So much trouble.

That's it.  You're just cruel.  Lol.  
You write these hooks and get a hundred men on your line, then you run off for a daycation and leave everyone dangling!   Cruelty!

This is a super cool write (mirror one, I read) and I like how you bring so much light to another, with your own brightness.  You have a real knack for it!
Awesome words Miss K, from your awesome mind!  

But but... Okay, so very cruel. lol
I just thought I would throw my hook out there and see what I could catch damnit! But I never leave anyone just dangling. lol At least now until I am done with them. * cough * Is that cruel? :p Don't answer that...

Look into the super cool mirror of my mind. I have such sights to show you. ;) Okay, many of those you shouldn't see. lol Get me into real trouble. But bringing light to another is exactly what I want to do so I am really glad you see that and mentioned it. That makes me really happy, and that you think I have a real knack for it too. I have so many awesome words for you... and I love your awesome mind too. Really digging the pirate look, it suites you Styx. I am going to go back to being cruel now. lol You know you love it...

...and so am I (young most of the time) dammit!

Haha, I know you are Billy because I know everything! :p I hope young Billy is getting into some trouble this weekend. :p You know, that's what you are supposed to do when you are young. Or that's what I tell myself anyway. lol And there is so much you can do with a young body in the night right? ;) And the daytime too.

beautifull poem ill follow

Well hey there sublime... I am really happy you thought it was beautiful. And I really appreciate the follow. I hope you will find many more things that you like and a lot of inspiration as well. ;) Welcome to DUP. I am not all that good at rhyming but I do like rhymes a lot. ;)

cool im trying to make a poem of only rhymes see if i can finish it and post it soon

My
One and only
Kristina X
God bless you

You know it Trome. Definitely the one and only. ;) Always so happy to see you especially on one like this that I know you would appreciate. :p The night is always young with Latin kisses and love to fill it right? ;) Really glad to see the new erotic poetry too. God bless you also T. I love that.

Pretty awesome passionate and sensual write. Nothing like a declaration of love and lust between two to make the bonds even stronger when the night is young.
Excellent spill Kristina.

Passionate and sensual always my dear Wally. ;) When the night is always young you know you are alive. A servant to passion and sensual experiences that we need so much. And those bonds get stronger and stronger, just crushing you in the embrace and making you feel everything. When the night is young, the possibilities are endless. And you should always take advantage of that pushing the limits. ;) I love excellent, thanks so much Wally. You are awesome!

Enticing, tempting and inviting. You clearly have a deep appreciation for sex and you express it very well.

R♡

Hi Regina, it's really nice to meet you. I am so happy I could invite, tempt and entice you to visit me and that you enjoyed this one. Oh yes! I have a very deep appreciation for sex and I love that you could feel it. Thank you so much for stopping by and welcome to DUP. 💖