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Bloody Kiss
Bite my shoulder
I want to bleed for you
French kiss
Our salvation
Blood sport
I'll be back for more
If not a vampire
I want to bleed for you
French kiss
Our salvation
Blood sport
I'll be back for more
If not a vampire
Author's Note
Blood
Painting by Poetspeak
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Bloody Kiss
7th Sep 2022 8:27pm
We like this, she needs our blood to exist and we need her love. We exist as one beast a symbiotic relationship, sworn to with bloody kisses. Tight work dude, short but opens our mind
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Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
7th Sep 2022 10:39pm
It's been on my mind for months.
Cat's out of the bag.
She's worth it, believe me
I've lived to tell so far.....
Thanks Me .....
Cat's out of the bag.
She's worth it, believe me
I've lived to tell so far.....
Thanks Me .....
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
7th Sep 2022 8:43pm
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Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
7th Sep 2022 10:41pm
I set up the scenarios
Other's follow or just absorb
Thx on the art
Blood brings many comfort....
Other's follow or just absorb
Thx on the art
Blood brings many comfort....
Re. Bloody Kiss
7th Sep 2022 10:15pm
Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
7th Sep 2022 10:43pm
You can run your hands along the face of that painting.
It's still wet
Is it paint or blood ??
Thx for your comment and RL
❤
It's still wet
Is it paint or blood ??
Thx for your comment and RL
❤
Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
7th Sep 2022 10:44pm
Re. Bloody Kiss
Anonymous
7th Sep 2022 11:42pm
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Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
7th Sep 2022 11:53pm
I'd be elated if Eternal with her
But how do I know she won't bite and run??
Begs a question.....
Thx for the comment and RL
Appreciate
But how do I know she won't bite and run??
Begs a question.....
Thx for the comment and RL
Appreciate
Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 00:03am
You are killing it with this!! hahahaha
Love all of the blood vamp red buddy.
Edgy and sexy!! Great combo:)
Love all of the blood vamp red buddy.
Edgy and sexy!! Great combo:)
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Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
You better watch out hot 🔥 sauce
You're just too cute in your avatar
Once this heathen goes all eternal, he'll be on the prowl
Bloody Tacos and bloody cosmopolitan drinks luring you to my bat cave .....
Are you in my ravishing beauty ??
RL makes it special sauce and vice twice
You're just too cute in your avatar
Once this heathen goes all eternal, he'll be on the prowl
Bloody Tacos and bloody cosmopolitan drinks luring you to my bat cave .....
Are you in my ravishing beauty ??
RL makes it special sauce and vice twice
Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 00:18am
Hahahahah.
You are crazy!!! And I love it.
Only if you have a Batwoman costume.
Then I am in.
Lots of cranberry in
my Cosmo lover boy. heheheheh
Needs be the same color as your painting!!!
You are crazy!!! And I love it.
Only if you have a Batwoman costume.
Then I am in.
Lots of cranberry in
my Cosmo lover boy. heheheheh
Needs be the same color as your painting!!!
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Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 00:54am
All will be arranged.....
Look out your window and under your bed
I'm everywhere
Bartender, make hers a double 🤪
Look out your window and under your bed
I'm everywhere
Bartender, make hers a double 🤪
Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 1:20am
Oh you so knew I would come for this one. ;)
That painting so screams Vampire to me.
I see what looks like a supernatural face on the left.
The eye is right against the border with an open mouth and teeth..
looks more like a werewolf though but that's hey they bite too.
You must have seen me say if I get really excited I bite the shoulder huh? you know you did.
Not sure about the wanting to bleed, I kind of just want to take it like a proper Vampire.
I suppose my seductive charms always makes them want to give it though.
French kissing the veins, oh yeah...
They always come back for blood sport. What could be more passionate than that.
Definitely a Vampire...
Love it.
That painting so screams Vampire to me.
I see what looks like a supernatural face on the left.
The eye is right against the border with an open mouth and teeth..
looks more like a werewolf though but that's hey they bite too.
You must have seen me say if I get really excited I bite the shoulder huh? you know you did.
Not sure about the wanting to bleed, I kind of just want to take it like a proper Vampire.
I suppose my seductive charms always makes them want to give it though.
French kissing the veins, oh yeah...
They always come back for blood sport. What could be more passionate than that.
Definitely a Vampire...
Love it.
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Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 1:35am
I pay attention
Unlike the attention deficit disorder I once had
Now I cling on to every detail of interest
Even if it costs me a pint of type Kx negative....
Go ahead bite that shoulder
Like biting the hand that feeds you
One good deed deserves another
In my valley of the damned ...
Appreciate the comment and RL
Getting dizzy
You must of made it a double
Fading
Fade to black
Unlike the attention deficit disorder I once had
Now I cling on to every detail of interest
Even if it costs me a pint of type Kx negative....
Go ahead bite that shoulder
Like biting the hand that feeds you
One good deed deserves another
In my valley of the damned ...
Appreciate the comment and RL
Getting dizzy
You must of made it a double
Fading
Fade to black
Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 1:42pm
Kx negative is some strong stuff so be careful with that.
It's definitely going to get you intoxicated. ;)
I love the Valley of the damned! That's my place apparently.
'Fade to black' always... in the darkness...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9HZ_tx8aWuA
It's definitely going to get you intoxicated. ;)
I love the Valley of the damned! That's my place apparently.
'Fade to black' always... in the darkness...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9HZ_tx8aWuA
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Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 1:46pm
Your writes inspire me
Picking up your feels
Drunk on Kx ale
Keep them coming
💌💯
Picking up your feels
Drunk on Kx ale
Keep them coming
💌💯
Re. Bloody Kiss
Anonymous
8th Sep 2022 3:14am
The art is perfect.
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Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 12:47pm
Have you been spying on me? I've been known to leave my mark.
This is a tasty write, and I could just drown in all that red...
❤️k
This is a tasty write, and I could just drown in all that red...
❤️k
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Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 1:39pm
When I chose that painting, I thought of you RED .....
I like Red beer. Smithwicks Ale. Good on draft.
Vampires and Blood do well here.
I'm getting in on the party !
Thx
❤❤💯
I like Red beer. Smithwicks Ale. Good on draft.
Vampires and Blood do well here.
I'm getting in on the party !
Thx
❤❤💯
Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
9th Sep 2022 1:39am
Oooh, I love the idea that I was thought of... 😁
Smithwicks & Guiness... just had that combo last week.
You do like to keep your finger on the pulse of what the masses want, don't you? Vampires push all the right buttons. Party on! Lots of comments for you. (You comment whore) 😉
xx
❤️k
Smithwicks & Guiness... just had that combo last week.
You do like to keep your finger on the pulse of what the masses want, don't you? Vampires push all the right buttons. Party on! Lots of comments for you. (You comment whore) 😉
xx
❤️k
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Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
9th Sep 2022 1:55am
Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 2:16pm
Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 3:56pm
Nothing like RED to bring out the fire, emotion and passion
Thanks so much for your comment and RL James
Appreciate
Thanks so much for your comment and RL James
Appreciate
Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 2:51pm
Salvation through martyrdom. I know this feeling well. Bleeding for the right person, the right cause, or just because I need to. The erotic depths here are as deep as the sea. Now for a bit of air before I'm pulled under again.
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Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 3:58pm
Yes
Your comment reads like I think
So many similarities
Your last line brings everything into view
Thanks so much for your visit APPS
Means a lot
Appreciate
Your comment reads like I think
So many similarities
Your last line brings everything into view
Thanks so much for your visit APPS
Means a lot
Appreciate
Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 4:20pm
Aah... Red... My favorite colour... Symbol of love, lust n passion....
Great painting n kick-ass ink 👌👌👌
Great painting n kick-ass ink 👌👌👌
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Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 4:23pm
Red seems mighty popular around here
I'm joining the party
I like to paint with it for emotion, lust and passion
I appreciate your comment ID
Thank you so much
❤💯
I'm joining the party
I like to paint with it for emotion, lust and passion
I appreciate your comment ID
Thank you so much
❤💯
Re. Bloody Kiss
8th Sep 2022 11:54pm
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9th Sep 2022 00:06am
Re. Bloody Kiss
13th Sep 2022 3:48pm
Dear PS,
I read a lot of anticipation in this write. Quick build up and then lengthy satisfaction. Aaahhhhh…Really dig!
H🌷
I read a lot of anticipation in this write. Quick build up and then lengthy satisfaction. Aaahhhhh…Really dig!
H🌷
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Re: Re. Bloody Kiss
13th Sep 2022 4:36pm
Dear H,
This vampire stuff grows on me
I'm around every corner
The RED controls us all
❤💕💖
This vampire stuff grows on me
I'm around every corner
The RED controls us all
❤💕💖
Re. Bloody Kiss
23rd Sep 2022 5:11pm
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23rd Sep 2022 5:13pm